初中九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)課件中考英語(yǔ)寫作My school life

CompositionMySchoolLife

中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（13-15分）要點(diǎn)全：行文連貫，語(yǔ)言流暢，基本無誤（詞匯拼寫錯(cuò)誤2個(gè)以內(nèi)或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤1個(gè)）；第四檔（10-12分）要點(diǎn)全：語(yǔ)言可讀性強(qiáng)，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤少（詞匯拼寫錯(cuò)誤4個(gè)以內(nèi)或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤2個(gè)以內(nèi)）；第三檔（7-9分）要點(diǎn)全：語(yǔ)言可讀性較強(qiáng)，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多（與要點(diǎn)提示內(nèi)容相關(guān)，詞匯錯(cuò)誤6個(gè)以內(nèi)或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤3個(gè)以內(nèi)）第二檔（4-6分）要點(diǎn)不全，語(yǔ)言可讀性較差（與要點(diǎn)提示內(nèi)容相關(guān)的句子形式，有3-4個(gè)基本完整的句子，其余句子表達(dá)式問題嚴(yán)重）；第一檔（0-3分）要點(diǎn)不全，語(yǔ)言無可讀性（與要點(diǎn)提示內(nèi)容相關(guān)的詞匯，有個(gè)別支離破碎的句子形式，均不完整成句）。A:Whatdoyouusuallydoatschool/afterclass?B:Ialways…Iusually…Isometimes…Ihardlyever…Inever…A:Whatdoyouthinkofyourschoollife?Let’stalkaboutyourschoollife.B:It’sbusy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantasticboring/terrible/so-so…Myschoollife

MynameisBeth．IstudyinNo.1MiddleSchool.Myschoolisverybigandbeautiful.Iwanttosaysomethingaboutmyschoollife.Myschoollifeisbusybutpleasant.

Wehavesixclasseseveryday.Ilikealltheclasses，becausemyteacherscanmaketheclasseslivelyandinteresting.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglish,soIjoinEnglishclubeveryweek．IcanspeakEnglishwithmanyotherstudentsthere．It'sveryinterestingandexciting.Ithinkit'shelpfulformetolearnEnglishwell.AndmyEnglishteacher,Ms.Zhang,isverykindandpatient.Sheislikeoursister.Sheoftenhelpsuswithstudyandencouragesustoworkhard.Weallloveherverymuch.Afterclass,Ialwaysplaychessanddiscussmathproblemswithmyclassmates．Theyareoutgoingandclever.What’smore?Ioftentakepartinallkindsofactivities,becauseIwanttoimprovemyabilities.

Inaword，Ilovemyschool．Ilovemylessons，myfriendsandmyteachers．Ifindmyschoollifeismoreandmoremeaningfulandcolorful．五步法：五美四連三列二構(gòu)一審書面表達(dá)Stepbystep1.審2.構(gòu)3.列4.連5.美文體_____時(shí)態(tài)_____人稱_____連字成句，連句成段在有把握的情況下，變換句型，靈活使用長(zhǎng)短句和復(fù)合句，升華中心思想，使文增色。把握文章框架結(jié)構(gòu)，必要時(shí)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)列出要點(diǎn)一.ReadtheTitle(審題）文體_____時(shí)態(tài)_____人稱_____記敘文一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)第一人稱（I/We）二.Structure（結(jié)構(gòu)）開頭中間結(jié)尾MySchoolLife（怎么樣..（

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連：連字成句，連句成段MySchoolLife

第二段Body(正文)StudyClassmatesActivitiesTeachers第一段Beginning:interesting/enjoyable

colourful&meaningfulbusybutpleasant

havealotoffun

Ending結(jié)尾：情感升華：期待，熱愛，收獲

Ibelieve/lhope+從句How/What+感嘆句臨考如何提高寫作能力：１．適當(dāng)加