應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信的思考講義-高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信的思考眾所周知，應(yīng)用文寫作中建議信是高中生要面對(duì)的常見題型。那么，我們應(yīng)該從哪些方面來輔導(dǎo)學(xué)生寫出一篇較完美的建議信呢？接下來，我要從三個(gè)方面闡述這個(gè)話題。01建議信的框架最簡(jiǎn)明的框架就是課上老師經(jīng)常解釋的BBE，即Beginning、Body和Ending。但是，關(guān)于建議信的框架我們還可以有更為詳細(xì)的框架體現(xiàn)【ISOS】：1Identifytheproblem.2Showempathy.3Offersuggestionsandexplainthereasons.4Shareyourbeliefthatthesuggestionswillbeeffective.具體來說，就是在寫作操練時(shí)，應(yīng)當(dāng)向?qū)W生解釋建議信的框架不僅可以是常見的三段式，在此三段式中我們要注意每個(gè)段落所對(duì)應(yīng)的框架。02建議信的內(nèi)容建議信中的建議內(nèi)容應(yīng)當(dāng)注意遵循三原則：1Specific（具體的）2Convincing（具有說服力的）3Relevant（具有相關(guān)性的）舉個(gè)例子：假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter初來乍到，總感覺很難適應(yīng)環(huán)境，寫信向你尋求建議。那么對(duì)比下下面三條建議：A.It'sagoodideatoknowtheenvironment.（不具體）B.It'sagoodideatoreadmoreChinesebookswheneveryouareintrouble.（無相關(guān)性）C.It'sagoodideatotakepartinsomepartiesoractivities,whereyoucanhaveyourlifeenriched.想必對(duì)上面三條建議的比較，我們可以準(zhǔn)確地感知C這條建議符合了三原則，是切實(shí)有效的建議。03建議的對(duì)象即讀者意識(shí)第三個(gè)需要注意培養(yǎng)學(xué)生寫作過程當(dāng)中的讀者意識(shí)。這是比較容易忽視的一個(gè)問題，尤其對(duì)于中等水平的學(xué)生來說，應(yīng)用文就是背模板、套模板，很難產(chǎn)生讀者意識(shí)。而對(duì)于優(yōu)等生來說，注意讀者意識(shí)的培養(yǎng)可以為應(yīng)用文寫作分?jǐn)?shù)更上一個(gè)檔次。那么什么是讀者意識(shí)呢？讀者意識(shí)，即目標(biāo)讀者是誰，我應(yīng)當(dāng)采取什么語氣、用什么內(nèi)容來表達(dá)我的交際需求。舉個(gè)例子：以“假設(shè)你是李華，最近學(xué)校將舉行一場(chǎng)關(guān)于“如何節(jié)能減排”的演講比賽活動(dòng)，你作為參與者”為題目背景，你分別向你的學(xué)校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)、你的好朋友（學(xué)生會(huì)主席）提供組織比賽的（建議）。那么，面對(duì)不一樣的建議對(duì)象，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)使用不同的語言來組織建議信的行文，這便是讀者意識(shí)?！鹃_頭】1.I’msorrytohearthatyou.....（問題）.However,.....ifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipsforyou.（適合安慰性的建議信）2.You’veaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto.....andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions(adjconstructive的修飾是亮眼)here.3.Iamwritingtobringtoyourattentionanissueregarding（引起關(guān)于對(duì)什么的關(guān)注）the....providedatthe.....【主體段】1.Asa/an……(根據(jù)實(shí)際填入)enthusiastic,youshoulddefinitely（亮眼副詞）…….地點(diǎn)holdsthegreatestcollectionof……,whichyoucanneveraffordtomiss（亮眼非限制性定語從句使用，neveraffordtodo）.2.Givenyourkeeninterestin（亮眼過去分詞使用）……,Iremendyou…….Youcanimmerse(亮眼詞匯)yourselfinourprofoundhistoryandsplendidculture(亮眼兩個(gè)形容詞的修飾).Moreover,……,whichwillattract/benefityouwithits…….3.As...isbasicallyintendedfor(亮眼as非限制性定語從句的使用，basically,beintendedfor亮眼詞匯)...,Ithinkitwouldbeabetteridea/abetterchoiceto(would情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的使用非常原味)……sothattheywillmake……moreattractiveandappealing（AandB同類修飾詞表達(dá)的亮眼）.4.Inmyopinion,itwouldbehelpful/beneficial/wiseifyoucould....（怎樣做）.Besides/Inaddition/What’smore/Moreover/Furthermore/Lastbutnotleast,whynot....（第二個(gè)建議）/Besides,moreactivitiesshouldbeincluded（亮眼無靈主語使用）sothatwecanhavemorechancestopracticeourEnglish.5.Aneffectivesuggestionisthatyoushould（表語從句的使用）……6.Therefore,Iwouldliketosuggestafewimprovements.Tobeginwith,itwouldbebeneficialif...couldofferawiderrangeof...tocatertodifferentpreferences.Thiscouldincludeintroducingmorediverse...orevenincorporating....Additionally,Isuggesthavingasysteminplacewhere...canprovidefeedbackandsuggestspecific...theywouldliketoseeonthe...(提建議的觀點(diǎn)）7.Aimedatcultivatingstudents’interestinEnglishlearning,yourEnglishCornerundoubtedlyoffersusstudentsagreatplatformtoenhanceourEnglishproficiency.However,I’vefoundstudentslackingenthusiasmtogetinvolvedlately.IthinkitwouldbeagoodideatoshowcasetheuniquecharmofEnglishCornerbyaddingmoreinteractiveactivitieslikeEnglishDramaPerformance.Additionally,whynotundertakeasurveytoknowaboutwhatreallyinterestsstudents？8.Careerplanninghelpsstudentsunderstandtheirinterestsandstrengthsbetter,whichcanguidethemtowardsafulfillingfuture.Italsoenablesthemtomakeinformeddecisionsontheiracademicpathandpotentialcareeroptions.Therefore,Istronglysuggestincorporatingitintopulsorycourses.Thiscouldbedonethroughworkshops,seminars,andguestspeakers,offeringstudentsvaluableinformationandguidancethroughouttheiracademicjourney.【結(jié)尾】1.Iwillbemorethanthrilled(亮眼morethan+情緒類形容詞)ifyoufindmyadvicewillbeofsomehelpforyou.I'meagertoseeyousoonin…..Wishyouinadvanceapleasanttripto…….2.Ihopethesepracticalsuggestionsmentionedabovewillmakeadifferencetoyou.3.Isincerelyhopeyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoconsideration/attentionandyourpromptattentiontomysuggestion(s)wouldbehighlyappreciated.（亮眼恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用無零主語）4.Wewouldbemorethangratefulifyoucouldhelpus