2022屆北京市海淀高考?jí)狠S卷英語(yǔ)試卷含解析

2021-2022高考英語(yǔ)模擬試卷

注意事項(xiàng)

1.考生要認(rèn)真填寫考場(chǎng)號(hào)和座位序號(hào)。

2.試題所有答案必須填涂或書寫在答題卡上，在試卷上作答無(wú)效。第一部分必須用2B鉛筆作答；第二部分必須用黑

色字跡的簽字筆作答。

3.考試結(jié)束后，考生須將試卷和答題卡放在桌面上，待監(jiān)考員收回。

第一部分（共20小題，每小題1.5分，滿分30分）

1.TheBrownsheldtheycalled“familyday”onceeachyear.

A.thatB.whatC.whichD.when

2.--Butforyourtimelywarning,weintogreattrouble.

??一Well,youknowwe'refriends.

A.wouldgetB.musthavegotC.wouldhavegotD.can9thavegot

3.Inrecentyears,ChineseartshavewontheofalotofpeopleoutsideChina.

A.reputationB.enjoyment

C.appreciationD.entertainment

4.—Whataboutthetwoofusgoingdowntown?

-,Ihatespendingtimehangingaround.

A.ThatsuitsmefineB.Whynot

C.ItdependsontheweatherD.Well,thafsthelastthingIwilldo

5.Studentsarealwaysinterestedinfindingouttheycangowithanewteacher.

A.howfarB.howsoonC.howoftenD.howlong

6.—Startingaconversationisagoodwaytokilltimeonthetrain.

_,Ialsoliketotalkwithstrangers.

A.ThatistrueB.Itsoundslikefun

C.Idon9tthinksoD.Youarekidding

7.Afterhavingsomealcohol,driverstendtospeedwhenpassingstreetswithlesspeople.

A.pullupB.putupC.riseupD.pickup

8.IwillbesurprisedifyoucangetCalvin,whoisaclose-fistedman,thesedonationdrawticketsfromyou.

A.buyB.buying

C.buysD.tobuy

9.Thereisnoreasontobedisappointed.,thiscouldberatheramusing.

A.AboveallB.Asaresult

C.ApartfromthatD.Asamatteroffact

10.—Shegotherfirstsciencefictionpublished.Itturnedouttobe?

—Whenwasthat?

—Itwasin2009shewasstillincollege.

A.success;thatB.asuccess;when

C.success;whenD.asuccess;that

11.makesmestressedistheentranceexaminationiscomingnearerandnearer.

A.It;whatB.What;thatC.What;whatD.That;that

12.Theyoungviolinistisveryexcitedbecausetheconcertgivenbyhimhasneverbeen.

A.successfulB.moresuccessful

C.mostsuccessfulD.themostsuccessful

13.—Shallwegototheseveno'clockperformanceortheeight?

—suitsyoufine.

A.WhateverB.WhicheverC.WheneverD.Wherever

14.iswillingtovolunteerinthe2022BeijingWinterOlympicsiswelcometojoinus.

A.WhateverB.Whoever

C.WheneverD.Wherever

15.—Youseemtobefamiliarwiththiscity.

—1hereforthreeyears.It'ssogreattobeback.

A.livedB.hadlived

C.havelivedD.live

16.Thelittlegirlaforeignlanguagefairlyquickly.

A.pickedupB.gotupC.steppedupD.madeup

17.—DidMaxgototheconcertwithhisfamilyyesterday?

—Thereportscheduledtobehandedintomorrow,heit.

A.couldn,thaveattendedB.needn^haveattended

C.wouldn'tattendD.shouldn'tattend

18.Ibelievedhimtobehonestbuthisactionsshowedthathehad,

A.thetopdogB.thefeetofclay

C.hiscupofteaD.theappleofhiseye

19.themselvesinthecommunityservices,studentscangainexperienceforgrowth.

A.InvolvedB.Toinvolve

C.HavingbeeninvolvedD.Involving

20.AlthoughMailerwasnotaloneinwelcomingthefloweringofcreativity,theauthoritieshatedit,didmany

passengers.

A.whichB.asC.thatD.so

第二部分閱讀理解（滿分40分）閱讀下列短文，從每題所給的A、B、C、D四個(gè)選項(xiàng)中，選出最佳選項(xiàng)。

21.（6分）Inmanyfieldsyoungstersarechangingtheworld.Listedbelowareseveralinfluentialyoungpeople.

MuzoonAlmellehan,3

Millionsofchildrenliveinrefuge?camps（難民營(yíng)），wherefewpaveaccesstoschool.Almellehanexperiencedthese

conditionsHrsthandafterfleeingSyria.Fightingtochangethat,shetravelstheworldtotellpeopleaboutthe

significanceofeducationAlmellehan,UNICEF's（UnitedNationsInternationalChildren'sEmergencyFund）

youngest-evergoodwillambassadornow,planstoreturntoherhomelandSyriafinally.

AulfiCravalho,17

TheHawaiinativevoicedtheheroineinDisney火hitmovieMoana.NowAuli9iistakingonanewrole.She'llstaron

NBC'sRise,adramaaboutahighschooltheaterdepartment9thatliftsthespiritsofastrugglingsteeltownin

Pennsylvania.Basedonatruestory,theshowhasstrengthenedherbeliefthatyoungpeoplecanbringaboutreal

change.

MoziahBridges,16

At1,Moziahlaunched,hisownhandmadebow-tiebusinessfromhisgrandmother^kitchentable.NowMo'sBows

isworthabout$1.5million.Morerecently,MoziahsignedalicensingdealwiththeNBAthatletshimsellbowties

featuringteamlogos.ButMoziahhasevengranderambitions.Heplanstoexpandglobally.Hecreditshissuccesstohis

naturalsenseofstyle.

MikailaUlmer,13

Mikailausedtohatebees.Shewasstung（董）twice.Butafterlearninghoneybeesarecriticaltotheecosystemand

dyingout,shedevelopedafascinationwiththem.Shewasdeterminedtohelp.Usinghergreat-grandmother^recipe,

Mikailamadeamixture,sweetenedwithlocalhoney.Shesolditatcommunitybusinessfairs,donating2%ofherprofits

tohoneybee-advocategroups.MikailaalsorunsanonprofitgroupcalledtheHealthyHiveFoundation,whosegoalisto

raiseawarenessaboutthehardshipofthehoneybee.

1、WhatdidAuli'iCravalholearnfromthedramaRise?

A.Youngpeopleindeedhavetheabilitytomakeadifference.

B.Highschooltheaterdepartmentcanhelpthesteeltown.

C.ShecanvoiceanykindofNBCdramainthefuture.

D.Shehastheabilitytotakeupactingasherlifelongprofession.

2、Mikailabegantodobusinesswiththepurposeof?

A.makingmoneytohelppeopleinneed

B.rescuingtheendangeredbutbeneficialhoneybees

C.puttinghergreat-grandmother^recipetogooduse

D.developingatraditionaltechniqueforproducinghoney

3、Whatdothefouryoungpeoplehaveincommon?

A.Theyarecommerciallysuccessful.

B.They'releadingawealthyandfulllife.

C.They'vegainedwiderecognitionnow.

D.Theyhavenointerestinacademicsubjects.

22.（8分）MydaughterKellyisacautiousperson.Sheneedstowarmupsituations,andishesitanttotrynewthings.

Whenwithclosefriends,shebecomesaleaderwholaughsloudlyandchants."Girlsrule,boysdrool.^^Butwhenthat

comfortzoneisnotaroundher,sheisshyandnervous.

Thishasbeenchallengingformeattimes."Shy”isnotawordthatIthinkhaseverbeenusedtodescribeme.But

thishasbeenyearoffirstsformygirlthathasfilledherwithanewsenseofconfidence.Thisyearshemovedtolaplane

inswimmingwhereshewaspreparingforaswimteam.Thisyearshelearnedtorideabikewithouttrainingwheels.

Andthisyearshecompletedherfirstkids9triathlon（三項(xiàng)全能）.

OnSaturday,withathunderstormcomingsoonandmyson'sbirthdaypartylaterintheday,weallwentoutinthe

darkofthemorningforKellytoparticipateinherfirsttriathlon.Wepracticedtransitionsfromswimtobiketorun

withher,wegotalltheequipmentshe9dneed,andwekepttalkingabouttherace.Butaswewaitedthetwohoursfor

theolderkidstofinishbeforeherturn,sheheldmylegalittleharderandtoldmeshelovedmeafewtoomanytimes.

Shewasnervousbuttryingtokeepittogether

Andthenitwasherturn.Fromthesecondshejumpedintothewater,myheartsoared.Mydaughtertransformed

intothemostconfidenthumanbeingIhadeverseen.Shedominatedthatswim,crushedthatbikerideandrantothe

finishwiththebiggestsmileonherface.

IcanhonestlysaythatIneverfeltsoproudofsomeoneinmyentirelife.Itwasn'tbecauseshedidasportor

anythinglikethat.ItwasbecauseshewasafraidofsomethingandconqueredthatfearwithconfidenceandafireI

hadn'tseenbefore.

AlldayIwouldfindmyselfjustlookingoveratherandsmiling.ShemightbewearingthefinalistmedalbutIfelt

likeIwonthatday.Iwonthechancetoseemygirlshine.

Shineon,sweetbaby.

1、Kellyisnervouswhen.

A.boysarearoundher

B.shechangesintoaleader

C.sheisawayfromhermom

D.situationsarenewtoher

2^WecanlearnfromParagraph3that.

A.theracebeganintheearlymorning

B.Kellywaseagerforherturnintherace

C.thewholefamilygaveKellysupport

D.herbrother'sbirthdaypartywasdelayed.

3、IntheendingparagraphstheauthorwfeltlikeIwonthatday”becauseKelly.

A.Tookpartinthesport

B?Expressedlovetoher

C.Wonthegoldmedal

D.Changedcompletely

4、WhatkindofpersondoyouthinkKellyis?

A.Timidanddetermined

B.Cuteandconfident

C.Fearfulandenergetic

D.Sociableandbrave

23.（8分）AnincreasingnumberofolderU.Scitizensaretravelingabroad.TheU.S.DepartmentofStateswants

youtobepreparedsothatyouenjoyyourtrip.Pleaseconsiderthefollowingtipsasyoutravel.

TravelDepartments

Applyforapassportatleastthreemonthsbeforeyoutravel.Somecountriesrequirethatpassportsbevalidforsix

monthsafteryourtripendsandsomeforeigncountriesrequirethattravelersobtainavisa.

StayConnected

AsecurewaytomaintainyouremergencycontactinformationistoenrollwithourSmartTravelerEnrollment

Program.YourinformationisstoredsecurelyandenablestheDepartmentofState,U?S.embassytocontactyou,your

family,oryourfriendsinanemergencyaccordingtoyourwishes.

HealthInformation

HealthcaretopsthelistofconcernsformanyolderU.S.citizenswhoarethinkingabouttravelingabroad.Consult

withyourphysicianpriortoyourtraveloverseastoidentifyyourhealthcareneedsatyourdestination.Researchthe

environmentalconditionsatyouroverseasdestinationthatmaycontributetoyowspecifichealthconcerns,particularly

ifyouaresensitivetoattitude,airpollutionorotherconditions.

MedicalInsuranceMedicare

Medicine,theU.S.governmenthealthplanforpeopleaged65yearsorolder,doesNOTcoverhealthcareoverseas.

Wehighlyrecommendthatyouobtainhealthinsurance.Manycompaniesoffershort-termhealthandemergency

servicessuchasmedicalevacuations（疏散）.

TravelSmart

Packlightlyandlearnwhatclothingwouldbeappropriateforyourdestination.Beawarethatsuddenchangesin

dietandclimatecanhaveserioushealthconsequencesfortheunpreparedtraveler;nomatteryourage.

1、Whatisthemainideaofthepassage?

A.Theeldershouldconsidermovebeforetrawling.

B?TheU.S.citizensenjoytravellingaroundtheworld.

C.Neverleaveyourolderparentstravel.

D.Makepreparationsfortheolderpeopleinneed.

2、An70-year-oldAmericanhopestotraveltoChinahewill.

A.askhischildtokeepturncompany.

B.havehisinformationstoredinChineseembassy.

C.needtohavegainedhispassportbefore.

D.managetoobtainavisafromtheUSembassy.

3、BeforetheolderU.S.citizenstravelabroad.

A.theymustreachaboutsomeforeigncountries.

B.theyshouldapplyformedicalcaresabroad.

C.theymustfindaplaceinapeacefulcountry.

D.theyshouldconsulttheirdoctorsforadvice.

4、Theauthorrecommendedhealthinsuranceinthat.

A.peopleaged65yearsandolderareignoredintheUSA.

B.theolderpeoplecanbenefitfromitwhenabroad.

C.healthinsuranceisonlyeffectivewithinafewdays.

D.healthinsuranceismainlymeantforemergencyservices.

24.（8分）Iremembermychildhoodsummersfondly,asmanyofusdo.ThosegoldendaysinwhichIwouldleave

thehouseafterastillsleepy,leisurelybreakfastandcomehomeonlyforlunchinthemiddleofadayspententirely

outdoors.Wedidnotliveintownand,thus,playmateswerelimitedtosiblings（兄弟姐妹）andthecousinswholived

downtheroad.

Ourbackyardbecametheplaygroundinwhichourimaginationswouldrunwild—turningthosefewacresinto

magicalforests,thecreek（小溪）intoaviolentriverandourtrustydog,Rex,intothemanyrolesofhorse,monsterand

anyothercreaturethatwechildrendidnotwanttoplay.Bytheendofthethreemonthsofsummerbreakwewere

sunburnedfromourhoursinthesun,fullofthememoriesofathousandmagicalmomentsandbondedtooursiblingsin

awaythatwinter'sforcedhibernation（冬眠）neverseemedtoconnectus.

Today,IliveonthesameacreagethatIdidasachild.Mychildrenhavetheblessingofhavingthesamegrassy

patchestoscratchtheirbarefeetastheyrunthroughit,thesamecreektostomp（跺腳）through,andnotthesame

dog—buttheirveryownenergeticpuptoimagineawaythedayswith.

However,thisisnotthesameworldasitwastwenty,thirtyyearsago.Therearescreenseverywhereinthehouseto

demandattention—televisionswithhundredsofchannels,computerswithaccesstoathousandentertainingsites,

tabletsstockedwithapps.Thereisalsonolongertheexpectationofastretchofanunscheduledthreemonths.Their

schoolfriendstellcompetitivestoriesofcarefullyplannedvacations,spendingtimetravelingtoallofthelocal

attractions—variousparks,thezoo,thesciencecenter,allofthefestivalswhichcomebreezingthroughtown.Onthe

veryfirstdayofschooltheywillbeaskedtolisttheirfavoriteactivitiesofthesummerandnolongeraretheselistsfilled

withthingslikefindingwoodtomakeabridgeoveracreekoradayspentinimaginativeplaywiththeirsiblings.The

listsarenowfulloftrips,overscheduleddaysand“camps”thatnolongerofferastayinnature.

Ourchildrenhavebecomeusedtobeingentertainedeveryminute.Inourhouse,wehavelimitsonelectronicsand

kickthekidsoutsideonaniceday.Evenaswetryasparentstosetlimitsandgetourchildrenoutinnature,thenewcry

ofchildhoodseemstobe"I'mbored,“whichisnotreallyjustmeaningT'mbored,”“but"Pleasefindsomethingto

entertainme,asInolongercanentertainmyselfevenforashortperiodoftime.”O(jiān)urchildrennolongerknowhowto

sitinsilence,entertainthemselveswhileevenwaitingforafewminutesandhavelosttheaweofnatureastheyhave

becomeaddictedtoscreentime.

Wehavemadeachoiceinthishouseholdtodowhatisnolongerexpectedofchildreninmanyhouseholds—wewill

ensurethattherearedaysof“boredom."Werefusetospendourdaysschedulingourchildren'severyhour.Therewill

bemanydayswithnoplansatall,whentheywillbesentoutsidewithonlythegrassandthetreesandtheirown

imaginationstoentertainthem.

Thescreenswillbeturnedoffandourchildrenwillfindthattimesofquietcanbejustasorevenmoreentertaining.

Theywillbondwiththeirbrotherandsister,makingmemoriesthattheywillreplayintheirmindswellintoadulthood.

Eventhoughsunscreenwillbereligiouslyapplied,theywillleavesummerwithsunburnedandscratchescomingfrom

climbingtrees,stompingthroughcreeksandchasingthedoginthefield.

ThissummerIwillbegivingmychildrenthegreatestgiftofall—boredom.Forinsideboredomisthegiftofgetting

toknowyourownmind,offindingcomfortandjoyinnatureandintherealizationthatthegreatestgiftsareexperience,

notthings.

1、Fromthefirsttwoparagraphswecanknowthattheauthor.

A.participatedinmanyorganizedactivities

B.enjoyedanunscheduledvacation

C.exploredmagicalforestsandaviolentriver

D.realizedthestrengthofpatience

2、Theauthorthinkstoday'schildren'sactivitiesare.

A.lessmeaningful

B?lessaccessible

C.morerelatedtonature

D.moreinlinewiththenatureofplay

3、Whatistherealreasonforchildren'sfeelingofboredom?

A.Childrenareaddictedtoscreentime.

B.Childrenarelimitedtousingelectronics.

C.Childrenhavenopatiencewitheverything.

D.Childrenlacktheexperienceofexploringentertainment.

4、Whatistheauthor'sattitudetowardshischildren'schildhood?

A.Sympathetic.

B.Envious.

C.Unsatisfactory.

D.Indifferent.

5、Whatisheauthor'spurposetoensurechildrenthedaysof“boredom”？

A.Tokeepchildrenawayfromelectronics.

B.Toencouragechildrentoclimbtreesandstompthroughcreeks.

C.Tosetasidemoretimetoimprovetheiracademicperformance.

D.Toprovidechildrenwiththeopportunitytoseekhappinessinnature.

6、Whatmightbethebesttitleofthepassage?

A.Thegiftofboredom

B?Thememoryofchildhood

C.Theattractionofnature

Theexperienceoftwogenerations

25.（10分）Compassion（同情）isadesirewithinustohelpothers.Witheffort,wecantranslatecompassioninto

action.Anexperiencelastweekendshowedmethisistrue.Iworkpart-timeinasupermarketacrossfromabuildingfor

theelderly.Theseoldpeopleareourmaincustomers,andit'snothardtolosepatienceovertheirslowness.Butlast

Sunday,oneagedgentlemanappearedtoteachmeavaluablelesson.Thisuntidymanwalkeduptomyregister（收款機(jī)）

withaboxofbiscuits.Hesaidhewasoutofcash,hadjustmovedintohisroom,andhadnothinginhiscupboards.He

askedifwecouldlethimhavethefoodontrust.Hepromisedtorepaymethenextday.

Icouldn*thelpstaringathim.Iwonderedwhatkindofpersonhehadbeentenortwentyyearsbefore,andwhathe

wouldbelikeiffortunehadgonehisvvay.Ihadahurtinmyheartforthiskindofhumansoul,allaloneintheworld.I

toldhimthatIwassorry,butstorerulesdidn'tallowmetodoso.Ifeltstupidandunkindsayingthis,butIvaluedmy

job.

Justthen,anotherman,standingbehindthefirst,spokeup.Ifanything,helookedmorepitiable."ChargeittomeJ

wasallhesaid.

WhatIhadbeenfeelingwaspity.Pityissoftandsafeandeasy.Compassion,ontheotherhand,iscaringinaction.I

thankedthesecondmanbuttoldhimthatwasnotallowedeither.ThenIreachedintomypocketandpaidforthe

biscuitsmyself.Ireachedintomypocketbecausethesetwomenhadreachedintomyheartandtaughtmecompassion.

1、Theagedgentlemanwhowantedtobuythebiscuits?

A.promisedtoobeythestorerules

B.forgottotakehiscreditcardwithhim

C.hopedtohavethefoodfirstandpaylater

D.couldnotaffordanythingmoreexpensive

2、Whichofthefollowingbestdescribestheoldgentleman?

A.Kindandlucky.

B.Poorandlonely.

C.Friendlyandhelpful.

D.Hurtanddisappointed.

3、Whydidtheauthorrefusetheoldgentleman'srequestfirst?

A.Hewantedtokeephispresentjob.

B.Hefeltnopityfortheoldgentleman.

C.Heconsideredtheoldmandishonest.

D.Heexpectedsomeoneelsetopayfortheoldman.

4、Whatlessondidtheauthorlearnfromthisexperience?

Wealthismostimportantinolderage.

B.Helpingothersiseasiersaidthandone.

C.Pityisbettergainedthroughpractice.

D.Obeyingtherulesmeansmorethancompassion.

第三部分語(yǔ)言知識(shí)運(yùn)用（共兩節(jié)）第一節(jié)（每小題1.5分，滿分30分）閱讀下面短文，從短文后各題所給的A、B、

C和D四個(gè)選項(xiàng)中，選出可以填入空白處的最佳選項(xiàng).

26.（30分）MybrotherhaddistrustedmydrivingskillsincethedayIsmashedhiscaragainsta

woodenpoleatthegarageofoursmallcompound.HYouaretoo!”hesaidsharply.Icouldoffer

no2atthemoment,althoughanyexpertcouldhavemadethesamesillymistake-trustme.Atfirst,

Iwasquite3inmyselfforhavingdamagedthenewcar,Ifoundmyselfbuildingastoryinmyhead:

it'sso4"Whycouldithavebeenmeinthis5

ThenIdugalittle6torealizewhyIwasfeelingsoupset.IrealizedIwasmakingsomething7

intoabigdeal.Iwasmerelybuildingastorythatmadeno8tomeat.1wastoo9tothecurrent

situation,Ijusttaughtmyself,Imayaswell10thisandmoveon!"

11lookingatwhereyouareandstartlookingatwhatyoucan.Wearesuretobe12when

wequarrelwithourselves；itiscivilwar.

Yourfuturedependsonmanythings,but13onyou.Youmaysucceedif14elsebelieves

inyou,butyouwillneversucceedifyoudon'tbelievein15Afocusonthepastcausesustomiss

opportunitiesinthe16

Don'tspendhalfyour17tellingwhatyouaregoingtodoandtheotherhalfexplainingwhyyou_

18doit.Forgiveyourselfforpast19andhurts.Reachouttothewonderfulthingsthatlie20

ofyou.Amanisnotwhathe'scalled;amaniswhatherespondsto.

1、A.absent-mindedB.seC.fierceD.ridiculous

2、A.assistanceB.excuseC.adviceD.compensation

3、A.confusedB.amazedC.annoyedD.difference

4、A.unusualB.unclearC.unfairD.uncertain

5、A.messB?adventureC.trapD.conflict

6、A.fasterB.deeperC,.harderD.further

7、A.abnormalB.bitterC.challengingD.unimportant

8、A.replyB.senseC.apologyD.difference

9、A.accustomedB.exposedC.attachedD.limited

10、A.acceptB.maintainC.checkD.improve

11、A.KeepB.PractiseC.EnjoyD.Stop

12、A.fightersB.judgesC.losersD.observers

13、A.currentlyB.mostlyC.graduallyD.actually

14、A.somebodyB.everybodyC.anybodyD.nobody

15、A.yourselfB.othersC.luckD.education

16、A.darkB.courseC.presentD.competitio

17、A.fortuneB.energyC.minuteD.penny

18、A.didn'tB.shouldn'tC.eventuallyD.frequently

19、A.experiencesB.memoriesC.failuresD.difficulties

20、A.insteadB.outC.rightD.ahead

第二節(jié)(每小題L5分，滿分15分)閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入1個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。

27.(15分)Mymomwasanurseandoftentookmealongtovisitthe1,(family)shewascaringfor,includingone

whohadaseriesofstrokes(中風(fēng))andwasbedridden.OneafternoonMomtoldmethatweneededtovisitthewoman

2,(give)hermedications,andthatwewouldstopatastore32_theway.Ithoughtwewouldstopatadrugstore,butwe

pulleduptoashoppingmall.

Mymom4^(head)totheperfume(香水)counterandboughtthemostexpensivebottletheyoffered.Shealso

boughtabeautifulnightdress.WhenIaskedherwhotheywerefor;shesaidtheywereforherpatient.She51_(far)

explainedalthoughthiswomanwasoldandbedridden,shewasstillalady,and6?olddeservedtobetreatedwith

respectandgrace.When71_(care)forsomeone,weshouldlookpastthedisabilityortheillnessandlookintothesoul

ofthehuman,sowecanconnectthemwithsympathy.Isoonrealizedthatmymom'sgreatest8r(strong)wastakingcare

ofthosewhocannotadvocatefor9^(they)andneedtrustworthycareproviders.Thafs10.Iwantedtobecomea

doctor.

第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)）第一節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)（滿分10分）

28.（10分）假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤,

每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許