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完成作文Wherewouldyouliketogoonweekends?BeforewritingCentralStreetHeilongjiangProvinceLibraryQiulinCompanySunIslandthemostfamousbusinessstreetthebestlibrarythemostpopularshoppingmallthemostbeautifulpark3aReadthearticleaboutGreenwoodPark.Answerthefollowingquestions.讀短文，回答問題Whatcanthewriterdointhepark?BeforewritingReadandthink

GreenwoodParkisthebestplacetogotoonweekends.IalwaysfinishmybreakfastthefastestonSaturdaysbecauseIwanttogettoGreenwoodParkbefore10:00a.m.tomeetmyfriends.Theparkisthemostcrowdedplaceonweekendsbecausealmosteveryonegoestheretoseethestreetperformers.Somepeoplethinktheyareboring,butIthinktheyarethemostcreativepeople.However,theplacewhereyoucanenjoyyourtimethemostquietlyisatoneofthesmallcoffeeshopsnearthepark.Youcanreadorrelaxthere.ThereissomethingforeveryoneatGreenwoodPark.3aReadthearticleaboutGreenwoodPark.Answerthefollowingquestions.讀短文，回答問題Whatcanthewriterdointhepark?BeforewritingMeetfriends.Seethestreetperformers.Readorrelaxinoneofthesmallcoffeeshopsnearthepark.3aReadthefirstandthelastsentencesofthearticle,thinkoverwhat'sthefunctionofthem?讀一讀文章的首句和結(jié)尾句，想一想首尾句的作用是什么？BeforewritingGreenwoodParkis_______placetogotoonweekends.Ialwaysfinishmybreakfast___________onSaturdaysbecauseIwanttogettoGreenwoodParkbefore10:00a.m.tomeetmyfriends.Theparkis_____________placeonweekendsbecausealmosteveryonegoestheretoseethestreetperformers.Somepeoplethinktheyareboring,butIthinktheyarethemostcreativepeople.However,theplacewhereyoucanenjoyyourtimethemostquietlyisatoneofthesmallcoffeeshopsnearthepark.Youcanreadorrelaxthere.ThereissomethingforeveryoneatGreenwoodPark.thebest(the)fastestthemostcrowded總起句:點(diǎn)明描述對象Beforewriting:分析結(jié)構(gòu)正文：描述所見所做的活動總結(jié)句：概括描述對象的特點(diǎn)3bMindmap:ThinkaboutsomeofthebestplacesinHarbin.（小組討論，選擇一項，完成思維導(dǎo)圖）BestplacesinmyHarbinWhy?BestbusinessstreetCentralstreetBecauseBestshopNew100ShoppingMallBestParkSunIslandBestschoolNo.3SeniorHighSchoolthemostfamousbusinessstreetthemostcreativebuildingsthebiggestbookstoreCentralbookstorethemostcomfortablecinemathemostdeliciousModernIcelollyModerncolddrinks

themostpopularwesternfoodrestaurantCentralShoppingMallthebestshoppingmallCentralStreetEuropeanbuildingsthebiggestbookstorethemostcomfortablecinemaThemostfamouscolddrinksthemostpopularwesternfoodrestaurantthebestshoppingmallEnjoyandlearnknowledgeofwesternculture

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WatchmoviesEatthemostdeliciousModernIcelollyHavearealwesterndinnerGoshoppingNo.3SeniorHighSchoolfacilities（設(shè)施）courses(課程）teachersstudentsactivitiesplaygroundclassroomlibrarygymNo.3SeniorHighSchoolNew100ShoppingMalldepartmentstorefoodstreetWhatcanyouseeWhatcanyoudocinema

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松鼠島CreativeWritingTime請你根據(jù)已完成的思維導(dǎo)圖,選擇其中一項，寫一篇短文介紹一個最好的地方。BestplacesinmyHarbinWhy?bestmiddleschoolNo.3SeniorHighSchoolBecauseBestshopNew100ShoppingMallBestParkSunIslandBestbusinessstreetCentralstreet讀一讀下面這些開頭句和結(jié)尾句，希望對你的作文有幫助和啟迪。1.Ifyouwanttoenjoyyourselfatweekends,GreenwoodParkisyourbestchoice.

2.GreenwoodParkisoneofthemostfamousplacesofinterestinourcity.3.GreenwoodParkisafantasticplaceforyoutospendweekends.4.WelcometoGreenwoodPark---awonderfulplacetorelaxyourself.5.GreenwoodParkisreallyworth(值得)visiting.6.GreenwoodParkissobeautifulthatitattracts(吸引)alargenumberofvisitorstocometoenjoyitsbeauty.7.EveryonewillhaveagoodtimeatGreenwoodPark.讀一讀下面這些開頭句和結(jié)尾句，希望對你的作文有幫助和啟迪。wonderfultidycomfortableinterestingcleanenjoyablefantasticbeautifulprettypopularfamouscreativefreshbestcrowdedoneofthe…WordsyoucanusetodescribeCreativeWritingTime請你根據(jù)已完成的思維導(dǎo)圖,選擇其中一項，寫一篇短文介紹一個最好的地方。BestplacesinmyHarbinWhy?bestmiddleschoolNo.3SeniorHighSchoolBecauseBestshopNew100ShoppingMallBestParkSunIslandBestbusinessstreetCentralstreetShowtime

寫作提升Howtoimproveyourcomposition?Readthetwopassages,andcomparewhichisbetter.AcompositionfromTomNo.3SeniorHighSchoolisthebestschoolinHarbin.Thecoursesareinteresting.Therearemanyforeignteachers.Therearemanycolorfulactivitiesinthisschool.Thisisthebestplacetostudy.問題：機(jī)械的翻譯，無關(guān)聯(lián)詞無過渡句。句式單一，對信息沒有適度添加細(xì)節(jié)。AcompositionfromSam

No.3SeniorHighschoolisawonderfulplacetostartyourdream.Theenvironmentofthisschooliscleanandtidy,andallthestudentsstudyinghereareactiveandenergy.

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foreignteacherswhowillbringoutthebestinyou.What’smore,everyoneofyouhasachancetotakepartinthecolorfulandmeaningfulactivities.Youcannotonlygainalot,buthavefunbyattendingtheactivities.Whata

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