2023屆九年級英語名校真題分類-書面表達（深圳專用）

初中試卷初中試卷2023屆廣東省深圳市九年級英語名校真題分類匯編專題06書面表達10篇1．（2022·廣東·南山實驗教育麒麟中學(xué)二模）最近全國不少地區(qū)疫情嚴(yán)重，當(dāng)?shù)卣珜?dǎo)全民每日核酸，大家積極抗疫。但社會上還存在對防疫志愿者態(tài)度惡劣的現(xiàn)象，如果你就讀的學(xué)校學(xué)生會打算面向全校同學(xué)寫一封倡議書，呼吁大家尊重他們。請你根據(jù)以下要點幫助學(xué)生會完成這封倡議書內(nèi)容。要點如下：原因：1.防疫志愿者放棄休息時間；2.不顧危險、不求回報；建議：1.做核酸時主動出示健康碼；……要求：1.詞數(shù)80個左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容必須包括要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文完整、語言流暢；3.可自由發(fā)揮一到兩點自己的建議。參考詞匯：anucleicacidtest（核酸檢測），healthcode（健康碼）Dearfriends,Dearfriends,We'rewritingthislettertocalloneveryonetoshowrespecttothehealthvolunteers.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudentUnion【答案】例文Dearfriends,I’mwritingthislettertocalloneveryonetoshowrespecttothehealthvolunteers.Becausetheygiveuptheirresttimetohelpus.Andtheykeeporderregardlessofdanger.Besides,theyaskfornothing,justhopingtocontrolthespreadofthevirus.???????????????????????????????????SoIhopeeveryonecanrespectthem.?First,weshouldfollowtheordersofvolunteers,notcomplainaboutthetroublecausedbythevirus.Second,weshouldwearmasksnotonlytoprotectourselvesbutalsotokeepvolunteersawayfromdanger.Third,taketheinitiativetoshowthehealthcodewhenmakingnucleicacid.Last,weshouldn’tgotocrowdedplacesbutstayindoorsasmuchaspossible.????????????????????????????????????????Ireallyhopethatthehealthvolunteerscanberespectedbyus.???TheStudentUnion【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求針對防疫期間，人們對防疫志愿者的態(tài)度惡劣這一現(xiàn)象寫一封倡議書，呼吁大家尊重他們；要求包含所有提示內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱口吻來行文。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：闡述尊重防疫志愿者的原因；第二段：提出如何尊重他們的建議；第三段：再次呼吁大家尊重防疫志愿者。保證語句通順，條理清晰。無單詞和語法錯誤。2．（2022·廣東·深圳市寶安中學(xué)（集團）三模）教育部近日印發(fā)通知，要求控制中小學(xué)生書面作業(yè)總量，合理布置不同類型的作業(yè)。為此，某英文雜志社正在開展以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請寫一篇征文，講述自身經(jīng)歷，提出合理建議。要點：做過的最有創(chuàng)意的英語作業(yè)內(nèi)容：收獲：給外國人寫一封信介紹春節(jié)1.提高寫作技巧；2.宣揚中國文化更多有創(chuàng)意的英語作業(yè)建議內(nèi)容：理由：1.畫思維導(dǎo)圖1.更好地理解學(xué)習(xí)的內(nèi)容；2.有助于記憶2.至少補充一點……要求：1.字?jǐn)?shù)在80詞左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.必須包含以上全部要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名。4.表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范DoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.DoingcreativehomeworkmakesusmoreinterestedinEnglish.Onceourteacheraskedustowritealettertoaforeigner.WeweretoldtointroducetheSpringFestivalintheletter.ItnotonlyhelpedmeimprovemywrittenskillsbutalsoprovidedagoodchancetospreadChinesetraditionalculture.Inmyopinion,it’salsoagoodchoicetodrawmindmaps.Ithelpsustohaveabetterunderstandingofthelessons.Besides,wecanlearntosingEnglishsongs,sincemostofuslovesinging.Inthisway,ourEnglishaswellashobbiesdevelop.Ihopewe’llhavemorecreativeEnglishhomeworkinthefuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)所給的參考信息以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”為題寫一篇征文，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文寫自身經(jīng)歷時用一般過去時，提建議時可采用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要以第一、三人稱交替使用。文章開頭已給出，第一段點題；第二段描述自己做過的最有創(chuàng)意的英語作業(yè)；第三段提出更多有創(chuàng)意的英語作業(yè)建議；第四段表達希望。寫作中可使用亮點詞匯和句型為文章增添色彩。注意保證上下文語句通順，條理清晰，文中無單詞和語法上的錯誤。3．（2022·廣東·南山實驗教育麒麟中學(xué)三模）2022年4月21日，教育部召開發(fā)布會，介紹了義務(wù)教育課程方案和課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)修訂情況。新課標(biāo)出臺的目的在于從小培養(yǎng)孩子對生命的感知和關(guān)愛，增強責(zé)任心以及提升初中學(xué)生的公共服務(wù)意識。其中，學(xué)生需要學(xué)會整理收納、烹飪及制作傳統(tǒng)手工，積極參與公益勞動與志愿服務(wù)。作為一名中學(xué)生，你如何看待新課標(biāo)對勞技課程要求的必要性？內(nèi)容：1.勞技課新課標(biāo)出臺的目的；2.勞技課新課標(biāo)包含的內(nèi)容；3.你的觀點。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容包括要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文完整、語言流暢。參考詞匯：sense（感知）,awareness（意識）On21stApril,MinistryofEducationissuedNewCurriculumStandard.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：On21stApril,MinistryofEducationissuedNewCurriculumStandard.Itisaimedtocultivatechildrentosensethelifeandnature,careaboutothers,strengthentheirresponsibilitiesandraisetheirawarenessofpublicservice.Studentsneedtolearntocleanandorganize,cookandmaketraditionalhandicraft.Moreover,theyareaskedtotakeactivepartinmodernservicelaborandvolunteering.Studentsareexpectedtoacquirebasicworkingcapabilitiesforlivelihoodandindividualdevelopment.AsfarasI’mconcerned,theselifeskillsareimportantandshouldbetaughttochildren.Itisessentialforstudentstoformtherightviewoftheworld,lifeandvalues.【詳解】1.題干解讀：在寫作時應(yīng)緊接開頭繼續(xù)寫作，根據(jù)題目要求講述勞技課新課標(biāo)出臺的目的以及具體的內(nèi)容，并發(fā)表自己的觀點。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一、三人稱為主，寫作時要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作；可以圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，要敘述完整，條理清晰。4．（2021·廣東深圳·九年級期中）為了使孩子身心健康、順利成長，每個家庭都會有這樣或那樣的家庭規(guī)則。請根據(jù)下表的提示和要求，適當(dāng)延展發(fā)揮，以MyFamilyRules為題，寫一篇字?jǐn)?shù)為80詞左右的作文。我的家規(guī)1.每天按時完成作業(yè)并復(fù)習(xí)功課；2.工作日不能看電視或玩手機游戲；3.家庭成員均需分擔(dān)一定的家務(wù)活；……我的感受……MyFamilyRules_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyFamilyRulesTherearemanyrulesinmyhome.Ihavetofollowthem.Firstly,Imustfinishmyhomeworkintimeandreviewmylessonseveryday.Secondly,IcannotplaycomputergamesorwatchTVonweekdays.Thirdly,Ihavetodosomehousework,suchasmakingthebedandtidyingmybedroomandsoon.Fourthly,ImuststayathomeandImustwashmyhandsoftennow.IfIdon’tfollowoneofthem,myparentswillbeangrywithme.Ithinktheserulesarestrictbutuseful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)提示材料介紹自己的家規(guī)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出主題。第二步，根據(jù)提示材料分別介紹自己的家規(guī)。第三步，表達自己對家規(guī)的感受。[亮點詞匯]①intime及時②suchas例如③beangrywithsb對某人生氣[高分句型]①IfIdon’tfollowoneofthem,myparentswillbeangrywithme（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句）②Ithinktheserulesarestrictbutuseful（that引導(dǎo)賓語從句，that已省略）5．（2021·廣東·深圳市羅湖區(qū)翠園初級中學(xué)九年級期中）課外閱讀很重要，但許多中學(xué)生并不重視。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容要點寫一篇短文，對這一現(xiàn)狀進行分析并提出要求。80-100單詞左右。內(nèi)容包括：1.不重視課外閱讀的原因：a.作業(yè)太多b.沒有讀書習(xí)慣c.時間花在電視或者網(wǎng)絡(luò)2.課外閱讀的好處：a.更多地了解世界b.學(xué)會如何思考c.讓生活更加豐富多彩3.提出自己的建議(至少兩條)可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Atpresent,onlyafewstudentsdosomereadingafterclass.Therearesomereasons.Firstofall,quitealotofstudentshavetoomuchhomeworktodo,andothershaven’tformedahabitofreading.TheywouldratherspendtheirtimeonTVorontheinternet.Someevenplaycomputergamesfortoolong.However,readinghasmanyadvantages.Throughreading,wecanlearnmoreabouttheworld.Besides,itcanhelpusthinkbetter.What’smore,readingcanmakeourlifemorecolorful.Herearemysuggestions.Foronething,teachersmustgiveuslesshomeworksothatwecanhavemoretimetoread.Foranother,it’sagoodideatoformreadingclubsandlearnfromeachother.【詳解】題干解讀：根據(jù)題目要求分析“不重視課外閱讀”這一現(xiàn)狀；要求包含所有內(nèi)容提示。寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文時態(tài)宜用一般現(xiàn)在時，第三人稱和第一人稱交替使用。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：闡述不重視課外閱讀的原因；第二段：闡述課外閱讀的好處；第三段：闡述自己的建議。6．（2021·廣東·深圳市福田區(qū)實驗教育集團僑香學(xué)校九年級期中）據(jù)聯(lián)合國《2020年全國糧食危機報告》中數(shù)據(jù)顯示,全世界每天有8.21億人在挨餓，受疫情影響，2021年糧食危機問題更槽糕！而聯(lián)合國另一份報道顯示每年大約有三分之一的食物被浪費掉。節(jié)約糧食是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，即使如今人們生活富足，我們也應(yīng)當(dāng)提倡節(jié)儉，避免浪費食物。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“拒絕食物浪費”主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請以“Don’twastewhat’sonyourplate”為題，用英語寫一份倡議書，談?wù)劄槭裁匆?jié)約食物，以及大家可以怎么做。寫作要點：1.吃飯時，不點過量的食物，讓“餐飲不浪費”成為習(xí)慣。2.盡量“光盤”，吃不掉的打包帶回家。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Don’twastewhat’sonyourplateTodayabout821millionpeoplearoundtheworldgohungryeveryday.Thefoodcrisisin2021willbeevenworseduetotheimpactofCOVID-19.SavingfoodisatraditionalvirtueoftheChinesenation.Eventhoughpeoplearelivingarichlifetoday,weshouldalsoadvocatefrugalityandavoidwastingfood.Whatshouldwedotosavefood?Herearesomesuggestions.Firstly,don’tordermorethanwhatyouwanttoeatinarestaurant.Makeitahabitnottowastefood.Secondly,ifyoucan’teatallthefoodyouhaveordered,taketherestofithome.

Ibelieveifeveryonetriestheirbest,moreandmorefoodcanbesaved.Let’sgetstarted!【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求以“Don’twastewhat’sonyourplate”為題寫倡議書，談?wù)劄槭裁匆?jié)約食物及大家可以怎樣做。要包含所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第三人稱和第二人稱為主，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時。文章可分為三段式：第一段介紹為什么要節(jié)約食物；第二段給出節(jié)約食物的建議；第三段發(fā)出倡議。要做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。7．（2022·廣東·深圳實驗學(xué)校三模）中國航天日（SpaceDayofChina），為紀(jì)念中國航天事業(yè)取得的成就、向宇航員致敬，學(xué)校英語社團組織大家用英文寫信給他們，請根據(jù)以下提示，完成書信。90詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。1.為他們對太空事業(yè)做出的貢獻感到驕傲；2.詢問太空站（spacestation）上生活和工作的情況（至少兩點）；3.對天宮課堂（TiangongClass）非常期待，希望學(xué)習(xí)到更多的航天知識；4.表達關(guān)心，祝愿他們順利返航（returntoEarth）、安全著陸（landv.）。Dearastronauts,Iamwritingtoyouwithgreatexcitement._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【答案】范文：Dearastronauts,Iamwritingtoyouwithgreatexcitement.IamproudofyourremarkableaccomplishmentsmadeinChina’sspaceexpeditions.WithmycuriosityaboutyourlifeandworkinTiangongspacestation,Iamwritingtoenquireaboutyourcurrentsituation.Haveyouadaptedtotheweightlessenvironment?Ifyoumissyourfamily,isitpossibleforyoutomakevideocallsonaregularbasis.Additionally,Iamlookingforwardto“TiangongClass”.Ihopewecanlearnalotabouttheknowledgeofspacebyit.Wishyouasuccessfulmissionandacomfortablejourney!WeallhopeyouwillreturntoEarthsmoothlyandlandsafeandsound.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求給宇航員們寫一封信；要求包含所有提示內(nèi)容。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，穿插使用其他時態(tài)；采用第一人稱和第二人稱口吻；可采用2段落格式，第一段：闡述對宇航員的尊敬、對太空生活的好奇以及對天宮課堂的期待；第二段：表達關(guān)心和祝愿。8．（2021·廣東·深圳實驗學(xué)校九年級期中）假如你是某中學(xué)生英語報刊的知心欄目負(fù)責(zé)人Sam，你收到一名學(xué)生Lily的來信，請你根據(jù)信件內(nèi)容及所給提示，給出建議。DearSam,Iamagrade9student.Ioftenstayuplatetocompletemyhomework.Inthisway,Ifeeltiredduringthedaytimeandfallasleepinclass.Asaresult,Ican’tgetgoodscoresandIdon’thavemypersonaltimetorelaxmyself.Thismakesmefeelstressedandunhappy.WhatshouldIdo?Yours,Lily內(nèi)容提示：（1）不要熬夜，熬夜對身體健康不好；（2）合理安排時間，盡可能在學(xué)校多完成作業(yè)；（3）周末適當(dāng)放松，通過運動鍛煉緩解壓力；（4）……（提出一個你的建議）要求：（1）表達清楚，語句通順；（2）要點必須包括上文所有信息并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（3）詞數(shù)：80詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearLily,Whatyousaidiscommonamongsomemiddleschoolstudents.Herearemysuggestionsforyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyoucangetoutofyourproblemssoon.Yours,Sam【答案】例文：DearLily,Whatyousaidiscommonamongsomemiddleschoolstudents.Herearemysuggestionsforyou.Ithinkyoushouldchangeyourwaysofstudy.Don’tstayuplate.Stayinguplateisbadforyourhealthandwillleadtomemoryloss.Youshouldarrangeyourtimereasonablyandfinishyourhomeworkatschoolasmuchaspossible.Tokeephealthy,youshouldgotobedearly.Toomuchpressureisnotgoodforyourhealthandschoolwork.Youshoulddosomethingtoloweryourpressure.Forexample,youcantakemoreexercise.Youcanlistentomusic.Hopeyoucangetoutofyourproblems.Yours,Sam【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：提示內(nèi)容已給出，要求我們作為某中學(xué)生英語報刊的知心欄目負(fù)責(zé)人Sam，給學(xué)生Lily寫封回信。[寫作步驟]第一步，開頭已給出，表明Lily的問題是很普遍的，然后給出建議；第二步，具體描述各個建議；第三步，總結(jié)，表達美好祝愿。[亮點詞匯]①stayup熬夜②bebadfor對……有害③asmuchaspossible盡可能④listentomusic聽音樂⑤getoutof擺脫[高分句型]①Ithinkyoushouldchangehiswaysofstudy.（“Ithink”后是賓語從句）②Stayinguplateisbadforyourhealthandwillleadtomemoryloss.（動名詞短語作主語）9．（2022·廣東·深圳市南山外國語學(xué)校（集團）高新中學(xué)二模）假如你是李華，是你們班的英語課代表，你們班許多同學(xué)在學(xué)習(xí)英語方面遇到了困難，向你求助，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文演講稿，給他們提供一些好的建議。1.多閱讀，培養(yǎng)良好語感；2.看英文影片，了解西方文化；3.堅持寫英文日記，提高寫作技巧；4.補充1—2點。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；4.條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范。Goodmorning,everyone,TodayIwanttotalkabouthowtolearnEnglishwell._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Goodmorning,everyone,

TodayIwanttotalkabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.

Firstofall,weshouldreadmoreEnglisheveryday,inordertodevelopagoodsenseoflanguage.Second,wecanwatchmoreEnglishmovies,sothatwecanunderstandthewesternculture.Third,weshouldkeepanEnglishdiaryeverydaytoimproveourwritingskills.Fourthly,weshouldlistentotapesoftentoimproveourlistening.Finally,trytospeakmoreEnglishwhenyouarefree.

Aslongasyousticktothesepoints,youwillcertainlyimproveyourEnglish.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇演講稿。根據(jù)要點提示，給班級里在學(xué)習(xí)英語方面遇到了困難的同學(xué)一些好的建議。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；人稱采用第一人稱為主。文章可分為三段，第一段文章已給出，點明目的；第二段介紹具體的建議；第三段表示只要大家堅持英語就會提高。行文確保無單詞語法錯誤，語句通順。10．（2022·廣東·南山實驗教育麒麟中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測）為了激勵學(xué)生持續(xù)關(guān)注環(huán)保問題，積極維護健康生存環(huán)境，指導(dǎo)更多同學(xué)減少碳足跡，我校舉辦英語演講比賽，請你寫演講稿，題目為“Actnowtoreduceourcarbonfootprints”。內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹減少碳足跡的重要性；2.介紹如何才能減少碳足跡做環(huán)保好學(xué)生，完成下面表格三方面內(nèi)容，并闡明你的做法；3.號召大家團結(jié)合作，身體力行，為環(huán)保做出自己應(yīng)有的貢獻。食物購物家