專四Note-writing-評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

Notewriting便條寫作項目簡介學(xué)生在10分鐘之內(nèi)完成大約50-60詞的便條寫作，要求做到格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，語言得體。與作文寫作有所不同：便條項目側(cè)重于語言的實用性和功能性，檢查學(xué)生日常運用語言的實際能力。而大作文檢驗考生的正規(guī)寫作能力，強調(diào)內(nèi)容完整，條理清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，語法正確，語言通順恰當(dāng)。Notewriting評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2006年真題WriteonAnswerSheetThreeanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Youhavegottoknowthatyourclassmate,Michael,isorganizingaweekendexcursionfortheclass.Andyouarethinkingofjoiningthetrip.Writehimanoteexpressingyourinterestintheexcursionandaskingforinformationontwodetailsrelatedtotheexcursion.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.（2006年評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下）/p-74053758312.html（2006便條參考范文）April23rd,2006DearMichael,Iheardyou’vegotagoodideaofaweekendexcursionfortheclass.Idefinitelywanttojoinyou,especiallyafterhavingbeenuptomyneckinmytermpaperforweeks.Haveyoucomeupwithwhenandwherewegoandhow?Ihavegreatexpectationsforit.Pleaseletmeknowmoredetailsassoonaspossible.Yours,Linda（2009年評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)大致如下）格式日期（1分）April21st,2011/April21稱呼(1分)DearMike,/Mike,正文署名（1分）Yours,Lily(根據(jù)題目要求寫，題目沒有要求則任意選用一個英文名；若用XXX或者漢字扣0.5分)正確位置在便條正文下面空一到兩行右側(cè)。正文內(nèi)容與語言語言表達較差（包括語法和拼寫錯誤），扣0.5-1.5分，拼寫錯誤超過3個要扣1分。語言沒有嚴(yán)重錯誤，格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，語言得體，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求(<80,>40),可給5分；便條總字?jǐn)?shù)要求約50-60字；一般不到40或者超過80扣1分。常見問題缺少日期Yours寫成yours署名和結(jié)束語寫在同一行署名用XXX或者中文署名后加句號字?jǐn)?shù)太多或者太少內(nèi)容不完整語言文體不得當(dāng)（formalstyle/informalstyle）例題例一：April2nd,2011DearProfessorWilliam,Wewouldliketoextendtoyouaninvitationtodeliveraspeechon20thcenturyAmericanliteratureattheannualconferencetobeheldinYangziUniversityat9a.m.onApril15thRespectfullyyours,ForeignLanguagesSchoolofYangzi例二：April27，2012Mary,IfyoumeetaghostorawitchonthewayhereonMayLaborDay,don’tscream!They’lljustbeguestsontheirwaytoourmasquerade.I’dlikeyouandyourboyfriendGeorgetocome.Youcanwearwhateveryoulike,orevengetmasked.Comeatnine.There’llbedancinguntileleven,andabuffetsupperafterward.Ihopeyoubothcanmakeit.Yours,Anna例三：YourfriendhasjustwonthefirstprizeintheProvincialEnglishSpeechContest.Writeanoteofcongratulations.明確假設(shè)的寫作人與接收人之間的關(guān)系，確定用何種語體。towhom確定便條的功能，即表明寫便條的原因。why將提示中提到的場景轉(zhuǎn)換成自己的語言，自然融進便條內(nèi)容中去。what便條一：EvenasIheardapieceofexcitingnewsthatyouhasjustwonthefirstprizeintheProvincialEnglishSpeechContest.,Iwasveryexcited.Congratulations!Now,Iamveryhappyforyoursuccess.Actually,youaregoodexampletoyourgoodfriends.Atlast,Iwanttosayagain:“Congratulations!”便條二：Dearfriends,CongratulatingyouonwinningthefirstprizeintheProvincialEnglishSpeechContest.Hearingthenews,weareallveryhappyandproudofyou.IthinkitshouldowetoyourdiligenceandIhopeyouwillworkharderandharderandmakemuchmoreprogressonyourEnglish.Yours,sincerely,LiuRong便條三：Wed.,May15thDearLiuYing,IamverygladtohearthatyouhavejustwonthefirstprizeintheProvincialEnglishSpeechContest.Pleaseletmecongratulateyouonthisbighonor.Iknowthisresultsfromyourhardwork.Imustlearnfromyou.AndIhopeyoucancontinuemakingprogress.Yourssincerely,LuPingNancy練習(xí)：WriteonAnswerSheetTwoanoteof50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:YouarePeter/Mary.Youhadapartyatyourhomerecentlybutunintentionallyneglectedtoinviteaclosefriendofyours—Victoria.Writeheranoteapologizingforthisandexplaininghowthemistakecameabout.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriacy.Tips:可以從四個方面檢查便條寫作：格式內(nèi)容<一封理想的TEM4便條應(yīng)包括以下三點：(1)寫便條的原因；(2)要告訴的事情；(3)有關(guān)的希望、建議或要求等。>語言字?jǐn)?shù)格式結(jié)尾套語為寫便條人對收便條人的謙稱或客套以示禮貌，措辭的變化按照不同的關(guān)系而定。現(xiàn)分述①致不熟悉的人，宜用較莊重的套語，如Yourssincerely，Sincerelyyours，或Sincerely等。②對上級、長者，除了可用上述較莊重的套語，也可用Yoursrespectfully或Respectfullyyours。③對一般朋友或熟人可用①中提到的較莊重的套語，也可用Yours等較為隨便的套語。④對密友則采用較隨便的套語為宜。例如，Yours，Love，Withlove，Bestwishes，Bestregards等等。⑤對親屬可用下列任何一種：Lov