2024年2月江西省重點中學協(xié)作體高三第一次聯考試卷讀后續(xù)寫燈船祈福講義高三英語二輪復習

閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Themomentthebellrang,Lekgrabbedhisschoolbagandracedtowardshisdestination.Whenatlasthepushedopenthedoorofhisparents'restaurant,hecouldhardlycatchhisbreath.Heranintothekitchenandreachedforapileofbananaleavesonthecounter.Ifhehurried,hemighthavetimetomakehiskrathong(水燈)beforethecelebrationstarted.TonightwasLoyKrathong(水燈節(jié)),theFestivaloftheFloatingLanterns.Inhistown,peoplewouldsendoutlightedcandlesintinyboatsalongriversandcanalssothatthepastyear'sproblemscouldsailawaywiththemandbereplacedwithwishesforthenewyear.Ashewrappedthebananaleavesaroundabamboobasetoformhisboat,Lekthoughtabouthissister,Katia.Shewastoosicktofloatakrathongontherivertonight.PerhapsawishonLoyKrathongwouldtakeawayherillness.Maybethenshewouldbeabletolaughthewaysheusedto.Hetucked(塞)fourredflowersinsidethebananaleavesandpokedthreesticksofincensebetweentheirblossoms.Inthemiddle,heplacedatall,whitecandle.Thisweek,Lekhadpracticedlaunchingakrathongthewayhisbrother,Freddid.Fredwasexperiencedinlaunchingkrathongsandoftenlaunchedkrathongsintotheriverforeachoftheircustomers.Lekhadbalancedstonesontheflatpieceofmetalatthebottomofalongpoleandloweredthemintotheriveruntiltheirparentshadscoldedhimforstandingtooclosetothewater'sedge.Whennightfell,LekandFredmadetheirwayoutsidethroughthecrowdstandingunderthefullmoon.Fredstoodonthejetty(突堤),loweringakrathongintothewaterwithhispole.Thecandlelightdancedontheblackriverastheboatslowlyfollowedthecurrent.AlonglineofpeoplewaitedbehindFred.ItwouldtakeforeverbeforehecouldhelpLek!Lektookmatchesandlitthecandleonhistinyboat.Heloweredhiskrathongtowardthewater.stretchingtoreachitssurface.注意:1，續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedgeandthekrathongdroppedfromhishandintothedarkwater.Paragraph2:FredwalkedtowardsweepingLekwithakrathonginhishand.讀后續(xù)寫是小男孩在水燈節(jié)為自己妹妹放水燈祝福，結果失手燈掉下去了，后來兄弟一起放水燈為妹妹祝福。參考范文一有點理解錯誤，第一段直接弟弟掉河里了然后被救了起來，但是大冬天沒有換衣服邏輯不太通。官方范文和參考范文二符合審題思路，第一段寫弟弟把燈船掉到河里后茫然失措，難受的心理。其中穿插對妹妹的擔心，環(huán)境描寫可以寫蠟燭熄滅，周圍人的熱鬧襯托弟弟無助的心情。第二段寫哥哥安慰弟弟，然后一起放燈船。一些可借鑒語言點：表示弟弟的傷心1.Desperate/hopeless/helpless/sad/depressed

失望，傷心2.One’sheartsank

心猛的一沉3.

Disappointmentwashedoverhim,minglingwithworryforhissister'shealth.

失望籠罩他，夾雜著對妹妹身體的擔心4.

Hestoodfrozenforamoment,feelingaknotoffrustrationtighteninginhischest.

他僵直的站著，感覺心中沮喪越來越緊5.

Lek'sthroatstiffened,tearsfloodinghiseyes.

他的喉嚨變得僵硬，眼淚流下來哥哥的安慰1.Listeningcarefully,FredgentlyplacedhisownkrathongonthegroundandwrappedLekinhisarms.

認真的聽著，哥哥把燈船放下，把弟弟抱在懷里。2.WhatFredsaidwasagreatforttoLek,whonowsmiledfromeartoear.哥哥說的話對弟弟來說是很大的安慰，弟弟現在笑的像花一樣。Abalm,

藥膏，

WhatFredsaidwasagreatfort/relief/balmtoLek,whonowstoppedcryingandbegantosmile.

里面有主語從句和定語從句，看起來很舒服。環(huán)境描寫1.Thefullmoonshonebrightlyinthesky,whilelights,laughter,andprayersfilledtheair.Numerousdotsoflightdriftedaway,dancingalongthewaves,ashopesforthefulfillmentofallwishesandthehappinessandhealthofeveryoneechoedaround.

滿月明亮地掛在天空中，而燈光、笑聲和祈禱聲充斥著空氣。無數點點光芒飄蕩在波浪中，帶著所有愿望的實現和每個人的幸福與健康的祝福。參考范文一，Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedge,andthekrathongslippedfromhishandintothedarkwater.

"No!"Hecriedoutloudly;hecouldn'tbeartoseetheboattipoverandsink.Withouthesitation,hereachedforthekrathong,tryingtograbit.Unfortunately,heslipped,losthisbalance,andplungeddirectlyintotheriver."Splash!"Theicywaterimmediatelyengulfedhim,andcrieseruptedfromthecrowd,"Help!Achildhasfallenintotheriver!"Despitefeelingcoldandscared,Lekflappedhisarmsandsearchedforhiskrathong.ItwashiswishforKatie,whoneededtheblessing.Fortunately,itwasnearby,andhesooncaughtitagaininhishands.Shortlyafter,alifeboatarrived,rescuedhim,andreturnedhimtosafety.Applauseresounded,andpeoplecheered.FredwalkedtowardtheweepingLek,holdingakrathonginhishand.Uponseeingit,Fredshoutedangrilyandloudly,"Whatwereyouthinking?Younearlygotyourselfkilled!"LekliftedhisheadandtearfullyexplainedhowhewantedtoblessKatie.FredfellsilentandthenembracedLek,saying,"Let'ssetthekrathongafloat."Thistime,Lekstoodcarefullyonthejetty,withFred'sassistance,andgentlylowereditintothewater.Thekrathongdriftedawayintothedistance.LekandFredwatchedtheboatdisappear,offeringtheirbestwishesfortheirsisters.Thefullmoonshonebrightlyinthesky,whilelights,laughter,andprayersfilledtheair.Numerousdotsoflightdriftedaway,dancingalongthewaves,ashopesforthefulfillmentofallwishesandthehappinessandhealthofeveryoneechoedaround.突然間，他感覺自己的身體在邊緣搖晃，燈船從他手中滑落到黑暗的水中。“不！”他大聲喊道，他不能忍受船翻倒和沉沒。毫不猶豫地，他伸手去抓燈船，試圖撈起它。不幸的是，他滑倒了，失去了平衡，直接跌入河中?！皳渫ǎ　北涞乃⒓磳⑺蜎]，人群中響起了呼救聲，“救命！有個孩子掉進河里了！”盡管感到寒冷和恐懼，萊克揮動著雙臂，尋找著他的燈船。那是他為凱蒂許下的愿望，她需要這份祝福。幸運的是，它就在附近，他很快又抓住了它。不久之后，一艘救生艇趕來，將他救起，安全地放回了原處。掌聲響起，人們歡呼。弗雷德手持一只燈船走向哭泣的萊克?？吹竭@一幕，弗雷德憤怒而大聲地喊道，“你在想什么？你差點喪命！”萊克抬起頭，淚流滿面地解釋了他想給凱蒂祝福的想法。弗雷德沉默了一會兒，然后擁抱了萊克，說：“讓我們讓燈船漂流吧。”這一次，萊克小心翼翼地站在碼頭上，在弗雷德的幫助下，將它輕輕放入水中。燈船飄向遠方。萊克和弗雷德注視著船漸行漸遠，為自己的姐妹送上最美好的祝福。滿月明亮地掛在天空中，而燈光、笑聲和祈禱聲充斥著空氣。無數點點光芒飄蕩在波浪中，帶著所有愿望的實現和每個人的幸福與健康的祝福。參考范文二，Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedge,andthekrathongslippedfromhishandintothedarkwater.

Lek'sheartsankashewatchedhiscarefullycraftedkrathongswirlingandbeingswallowedbythewater,itscandleflickeringandthendyingout.Disappointmentwashedoverhim,minglingwithworryforhissister'shealth.Hestoodfrozenforamoment,feelingaknotoffrustrationtighteninginhischest.Glancingaround,hefelthelplessasthecrowdlaughedheartily,theirhopefulfacesilluminatedbytheglowofcountlesslanterns.Hestaredatwherethekrathonghaddisappeareduntilthesoftsoundoffootstepsapproachedfrombehind.Turning,hesawhisbrotherFred,concernetchedonhisfaceashetookinLek'screstfallenexpression.FredwalkedtowardtheweepingLekwithakrathonginhishand.

Seeinghim,Lekcouldn’tconcealhissadnessandpouredoutthestoryoftheboatslippingandsinking.Listeningcarefully,FredgentlyplacedhisownkrathongonthegroundandwrappedLekinhisarms."It'sokay.Accidentshappen.Let’slaunchthiskrathong.”WhatFredsaidwasagreatforttoLek,whonowsmiledfromeartoear.Thistime,withFred’sguidance,Lekcarefullylowered