科技改變生活 熱點(diǎn)02 -中考英語高分作文（浙江專用版）

備戰(zhàn)2023年中考英語高分作文熱點(diǎn)02科技改變生活一、話題作文1．科技改變生活，發(fā)明無處不在，如computers，cars，smartphones，e-books，robots，Internet…請結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀囊豁?xiàng)發(fā)明對(duì)你的影響最大以及它是如何改變你的生活的。要求:1.詞數(shù)80—100（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Technologychangesourlifeandinventionsarearoundus.Inmydailylife,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】

Technologychangesourlifeandinventionsarearoundus.Inmydailylife,thecomputerhasbecomeanimportantpart.Anditchangedmealot.Withthehelpofthecomputer,Icansearchforsomeusefulinformationandreaddifferentkindsofbooks.Byreceivingandsendingemails,Icancommunicatewithmyfriendsfreely.IfIhavesomeproblemswithmystudy,IcandiscussthemwithmyclassmatesontheInternet.IfIfeelstressedfromtimetotime,Icanlistentomusiconlinetorelaxmyself.Icanalsobuyallkindsofthingsonline.

ButifImeetsomedifficultproblemsinmyhomework,IoftenlookforanswersontheInternet.Thismakesmelazyandtoomuchcomputerworkisbadformyeyes.SoIthinkeveryoneshouldusethecomputerwisely.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：從題干所給的科技中選擇一種，談?wù)勥@個(gè)發(fā)明對(duì)自己的影響以及是如何改變自己的生活的。[寫作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明主題，是哪一個(gè)發(fā)明改變了自己；第二步，介紹這項(xiàng)發(fā)明是如何改變自己的生活的；第三步，介紹自己的感受總結(jié)全文。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①withthehelpof在……的幫助下②searchfor尋找③fromtimetotime不時(shí)[高分句型]①IfIhavesomeproblemswithmystudy,IcandiscussthemwithmyclassmatesontheInternet.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）②SoIthinkeveryoneshouldusethecomputerwisely.（省略that的賓語從句）2．你校課堂上引進(jìn)了新科技，可以把老師的語音識(shí)別成文字，還可以生成這節(jié)課的二維碼，學(xué)生隨時(shí)可以觀看這節(jié)課。請你根據(jù)以下提示，以ANewChangeinClass為題，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.Doyouagreewiththenewchangeinclass?Why?2.Whatdoyourparentsthinkofthenewchange?Why?3.Whatdoyouhopetoachieveinyourstudywiththehelpofthenewtechnology?注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；2.詞數(shù)100左右。短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。ANewChangeinClassAnewtechnologyisintroducedintoclassinmyschool.Teachers’voicescanbeturnedintowords.What’smore,aQRcode（二維碼）willbecreatedafterclassforstudentstoreviewthewholelessonanytime.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】ANewChangeinClassAnewtechnologyisintroducedintoclassinmyschool.Teachers’voicescanbeturnedintowords.What’smore,aQRcode（二維碼）willbecreatedafterclassforstudentstoreviewthewholelessonanytime.Iamstronglyforthenewchangeinclass.Itbringsalotofadvantagestoourstudents.First,studentswhoareabsentfromschoolbecauseofillnesscanstudythelessonintimesothattheywon’tfallbehindothers.Second,becauseoftheCOVID-19,wemaynotgotoschool.Withthehelpofit,wecanlearnfromtheInternetwithoutworryingaboutthestudy.Last,itcanmakestudentsinterestedintheclasswiththehelpoftechnologyandscience.Asforourparents,theyseemtonotagreewiththechange.Becausetheythinkmoststudentscannotlistencarefully,whichleadstofailureinexams.Theyalsothinkthatwatchingcomputerscreenstoomuchcanbeharmfultooureyes.IhopeIcanreviewwhatteacherstaughtinclasstoachievemoreknowledgewiththehelpofthenewtechnology.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求以ANewChangeinClass為題，寫一篇英語短文；要求包含所有提示內(nèi)容。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；采用第一人稱和第三人稱口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：描述自己的觀點(diǎn)以及原因；第二段：描述父母的觀點(diǎn)以及原因；第三段：描述自己的希望。確保語句通順，無單詞語法錯(cuò)誤。二、材料作文3．假如你發(fā)明的“飛行單車”在學(xué)?？萍脊?jié)中獲獎(jiǎng)，被推薦參加一個(gè)國際青少年科技展覽。請用英語介紹你的發(fā)明,內(nèi)容包括下圖中1-4項(xiàng).注意：（1）參考詞匯：輪子wheel太陽能solarpower（2）詞數(shù)80左右（文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。（3）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Myinventionisaflyingbike...._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Myinventionisaflyingbike．Itisfast，convenientandgreen!Theflyingbikehastwowheelsandtwowings．Ithasatopspeedof300km/h.Youcangotofartherplacesinashortertime．Itcanrunonlandandflyintheair．Ifyoushout"fly"thebikewillturnintoaplanein30seconds．Thenyoucanflyintheair．Youwillbeasfreeasabird．Itcantakephotos，too．Insteadofpetrol，thebikeusessolarpower，soitwillnotpollutetheair．Iwilladdaseatbehinditsothatitcancarrytwopersons.Myinventionwillhelppeopleliveabetterlifeinthefuture．【詳解】題目解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介紹一項(xiàng)發(fā)明，題目中給出外觀、用途、特點(diǎn)，需要作者展開想象，寫出一兩點(diǎn)改進(jìn)計(jì)劃。寫作指導(dǎo)：本文是一篇說明文，人稱主要是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意主謂一致，介紹內(nèi)容清晰，有條理。4．世界上有很多不同種類的發(fā)明。這些發(fā)明改變了我們的生活。請根據(jù)下列表格所提供的信息，描述數(shù)碼相機(jī)的發(fā)明，并簡單介紹它的使用。要求：80詞左右。InventionTimeWhoUsersDigitalcamera1975StevenSasson;AmericaTakephotosclearly,makevideos____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Therearemanydifferentkindsofinventionsintheworld.Allofthemareveryusefulandhavechangedourlives.Thedigitalcameraisoneofthemostusefulinventions.ItwasinventedbyStevenSassonwhowasfromAmericain1975.It’sverypopularwithbothyoungpeopleandoldpeople,becausepeoplecanuseiteasilyandconveniently.Andpeoplecantakephotosmoreclearlythanothercameras.Wecanalsousedigitalcamerastomakevideos.Howusefultheyare!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇說明文。文章要描述數(shù)碼相機(jī)的發(fā)明，并簡單介紹它的使用。寫作時(shí)要包括：發(fā)明時(shí)間；發(fā)明者；數(shù)碼相機(jī)可以帶給使用者的功能等這幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)，缺一不可。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，并以“數(shù)碼相機(jī)”為主語進(jìn)行論述；寫作時(shí)注意圍繞主題，思路清晰，語言流暢，表達(dá)完整。5．本屆冬奧會(huì)是科技的盛會(huì)，各種高科技頻繁亮相，無論是智慧餐廳還是“獵豹”攝像機(jī)，讓外國媒體大呼驚艷。不僅如此，科技給我們的生活也帶來了巨變。假如你是九年級(jí)一班學(xué)生王華，學(xué)校正在舉辦科技節(jié)，你應(yīng)邀參加以“科技改變生活”為主題的演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹身邊的科技及其優(yōu)點(diǎn)。要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.句子及篇章準(zhǔn)確、連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)：80~100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校及其它任何個(gè)人相關(guān)信息。Hello,everyone!IamWangHuainClassOne,Grade9.It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyhasbroughtgreatchangestoourlife.Smartphones,robots,high-speedtrainsandelectriccarsarefourgreatinventions.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Chinaistakingtheleadinsomeways.I’mreallyproudofmycountry.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【參考范文】Hello,everyone!IamWangHuainClassOne,Grade9.It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyhasbroughtgreatchangestoourlife.Smartphones,robots,high-speedtrainsandelectriccarsarefourgreatinventions.Thesmartphonebringsbothconvenienceandpleasuretoourlife.Wecanshoponline,watchmovies,andhavevideochatsthroughit.Asfortherobot,itcanhelpuswithhousework,helpourchildrenwiththeirhomeworkandsoon.Itsavesusalotoftimeandenergy.Thehigh-speedtrainhasgreatlyimprovedourtravelspeed.Ittravelsathighspeed.It’sveryfastandcomfortable.Theelectriccarhasalsochangedourlife.Itcannotonlysaveenergybutalsoprotecttheenvironmenttoagreatextent.Itisconvenientandgreen.Chinaistakingtheleadinsomeways.I’mreallyproudofmycountry.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)所給思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，以“科技改變生活”為主題，寫一篇作文介紹身邊的科技及其優(yōu)點(diǎn)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。寫作時(shí)思維導(dǎo)圖的提示全部要涵蓋在內(nèi)，可以從四個(gè)方面介紹身邊的科技：智能手機(jī)、機(jī)器人、電動(dòng)汽車以及高鐵。針對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，行文確保語句通順，無單詞語法錯(cuò)誤。三、電子郵件6．人工智能（AI）的迅速崛起無疑是新世紀(jì)以來最為重要的科技事件，而我們的生活也將因?yàn)槿斯ぶ悄艿某墒鞈?yīng)用迎來巨大改變。假如是李華，你校將于周六上午十點(diǎn)使用視頻會(huì)議舉辦一場介紹人工智能的線上講座。你打算邀請你校英國留學(xué)生Tom一起參加。請用英語給Tom寫一封郵件，邀請他參加線上講座（onlinelecture），向他說明舉辦講座活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、目的以及講座的內(nèi)容。提示詞語：helpful,convenient,introduce,examples,apply(應(yīng)用)...to...,questions提示問題：●Whattimewilltheonlinelecturestart?●Whywilltheschoolholdthisactivity?●Whatwillthespeakertalkabout?DearTom,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoattendanonlinelectureaboutAItechnology.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyouwillbethereontimeandenjoyit.Ifthereisanythingmorethatyouwanttoknow,pleasetellme.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearTom,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoattendanonlinelectureaboutAItechnology.Itwillstartat10o’clockonSaturdaymorning.Duringthelecture,thespeakerwillintroducewhatAIis.Then,hewilltellushowtouseitinourdailylifesinceitishelpfulandconvenient.Toattendtheonlinelecture,youneedtogetyourcomputeroryourphoneready.Andpleasemakesureyoucangetonline.Itisagoodideatoprepareanotebookbecauseyouwillneedtotakedownsomeexamplesandanswersomequestions.WecanapplyAItoourdailylife.Hopeyouwillbethereontimeandenjoyit.Ifthereisanythingmorethatyouwanttoknow,pleasetellme.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇郵件作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，給Tom寫一封郵件，邀請他參加線上講座。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第二、第三人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文要分別介紹講座活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、目的以及講座的內(nèi)容。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。四、看圖作文7．機(jī)器人Sophia的問世，引起了大家極大的興趣。如果將來你有一個(gè)機(jī)器人，你想用它來干什么呢？為此，你們班在英語活動(dòng)課上進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論，請根據(jù)下面的圖表，用英語寫一篇短文，總結(jié)討論的情況，并談?wù)勀阕约旱南敕ā?.要點(diǎn)：2.要求：(1)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名等；(2)語言要通順，表達(dá)要正確；(3)要求包含所有要點(diǎn)提示，為了行文需要，可適當(dāng)增加要點(diǎn)；(4）詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)英語單詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3.參考詞匯：聊天娛樂chatandplaySophia,arobotwoman,hascomeintotheworld.ItcausedaheateddiscussioninourEnglishclass.Ifwehavearobot,whatshallweaskittodo?Herearetheresults.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________