讀后續(xù)寫題型概述第二節(jié)解題策略與方法課件高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫的解題策略與方法讀后續(xù)寫題型概述01寫作思路Contents02“五點(diǎn)爆破”法03“五四三”法則04“七三四”法則三、“五四三”法則三、“五四三”法則【例題講解】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Eightyearslater,hebecameanofficerinthearmy.

Onedayhewasinvitedbytheheadmasterofhisoldhighschool.

三、“五四三”法則（一）五R解讀故事1.Readforcharacters2.ReadforconflictsAdam,headmaster,Adam’smotherAdamhadadesireforthelittlecup,buthefailed.三、“五四三”法則（一）五R解讀故事3.ReadforplotsSatquietlyinhislastannualfunction.Triedhardandparticipatedinallactivitieswithoutwinning.Triedthetoughestbutsafestbet—“theStudentwithHighestAttendance”.Fatedidnotfavorhim—hewasabsentfortwodaystotakecareofhismother.三、“五四三”法則（一）五R解讀故事4.Readforemotionalchanges5.ReadforthethemeconfidentdesperatelywantedaprizerestlesswithanxietyandexpectationwassuretowintriedhardtoforgetthefailurebuthisdreamwasaliveHowtodealwithfailuresandsetbacks三、“五四三”法則（二）四句定框架1.先寫最后一句，即主題句2.再寫銜接句，即第一段的最后一句3.根據(jù)每段的段首句寫角色的情感Hebecameoneofthefamousofficersinhisarmy,andhiscolleaguesandsuperiorswereproudofhim.根據(jù)第一段的段首句寫：Itwasveryhardforhimtotrain,buthenevergaveup.根據(jù)第二段的段首句寫：Hefeltexcitedandmoved.三、“五四三”法則（二）四句定框架4.補(bǔ)充完整每段的中間部分第一段：Healwayshadadreamthathewantedtobeanexcellentofficerwithaprecioustrophy.Itwasobviousthathecameacrossmanyfailures,however,heknewthatexperienceisimportantandfailurebreedssuccess.三、“五四三”法則（三）三大原則1.Action—Response原則一個(gè)角色的所言、所行、所感、所想會(huì)引起其他角色的一系列反應(yīng)。每段最好有1至2句對(duì)話，但是不一定兩個(gè)人都要說(shuō)話，無(wú)聲的動(dòng)作也是一種反應(yīng)。2.Conflict—Solution原則一般而言第二段會(huì)有問(wèn)題的解決方法，但本文和其他高考的讀后續(xù)寫文章出題不一樣，因?yàn)榻鉀Q方法在所給文章中就已經(jīng)有了。同時(shí)思考：能否在第一段出現(xiàn)一個(gè)問(wèn)題，然后把它解決了或者沒(méi)有解決。一方面是增加看點(diǎn)，另一方面也是給第二段作鋪墊。3.Negative—Positive原則寫作中一定要體現(xiàn)情感的變化，但無(wú)論前面是怎樣的變化，最終都應(yīng)該是積極的。【優(yōu)秀范文】Eightyearslater,hebecameanofficerinthearmy.

Itwasveryhardforhimtotrain,buthenevergaveup.Healwayshadthedreamthathewantedtobeanexcellentofficer,holdingthepreciouscup,gettingtheapplausefromtheaudiences.Itwasobviousthathecameacrossmanyfailures,however,heknewthatexperienceisimportantandfailurebreedssuccess.Stepbystep,hegotthehighpraiseandattentionofhiscolleaguesandsuperiors.Hebecameoneofthefamousofficersinhisarmy,andhiscolleaguesandsuperiorswereproudofhim.三、“五四三”法則閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。三、“五四三”法則注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Mattneverplayedbecausehedidn’tthinkhewasgoodenough.

GrandfatherknewthisandwantedtohelpMatt.

三、“五四三”法則【參考范文】Mattneverplayedbecausehedidn’tthinkhewasgoodenough.Hewasafraidofmakingamistake.Hewasoldenoughandbigenoughbuthewastooafraidtotry.Hethoughthewouldneverbeabletohittheball.Thenhewouldleteveryonedown,andtheywouldlaughathim.Andifhehittheball,hewouldbetooslowtoruntofirstbase,orhemightmisstheballwhenitwasthrowntohim.GrandfatherknewthisandwantedtohelpMatt.Holdingaball,GrandfatherstrolledovertoMattandyelled,“Hey,Matt.”Mattjumpedupwithgreatsurprise.“Grandpa!”heshouted.“Iwanttoplaybaseball.Willyoudomeafavortoplaywithme?”Grandfatherasked.Matthesitated,headdown.“Sorry,Ican’t.Iplay…”“Comeon,boy!Let’shav