讀后續(xù)寫+自由墜落體驗驚險刺激的跳傘運動+講義 高三英語二輪復習

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。IrecentlywentSKYDIVING!It'ssomethingI'vebeentalkingaboutdoingsincelastyear,buttobehonest,itwasplannedsuperlastminute.

…likewithinamatterofafewweeks.ItallstartedwhenIranintoafriendofminewalkinghomefromalocalfestivalearlierthissummer.Westartedchattingaboutwhatwe'dbothbeenuptothissummerandsomehowgotonthesubjectofbothbeinginterestedingoingskydivingsomeday.Myfriend,Denny,saidhe'dbeonboardifIreallywantedtoscheduleajumpandIwassoexcitedtofinallyhavesomeonetogowith!Laterthatnight,wetextedbackandforthanddecidedonourjumpdateafewweeksinthefuture.WhentheverySundaycame,wewerebothFULLofexcitementforourfirstskydivingexperience.HehadbeenbungeejumpingbeforeandI'ddonemyfairshareofzip-lining,butneitherofusfiguredthateitherofthoseofexperienceswouldprepareusforwhatwehadinstore.Thedrivetheredidn'thappenwithoutaslightdelay.Assoonaswegotoffthethrough-wayontotheexittowardsthesmalltownwheretheskydivingfacilitywas,Denny'scarstartedtomakeastrangenoise,forcingustopulloveronabusyinterstate(州際公路).Only20minutesawayfromWNYSkydiving(theplacewhereweweregoing),wediscoveredwehadaflattyre(輪胎).Atthatpoint,Ifeltprettydefeated.Ourscheduledtimewas4pm—thelastappointmenttimeoftheday—soIfiguredtheywouldn'tbeabletowaitforordelaytheoperationsforussincewewereracingagainstthelight.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。0.確定人稱：第一人稱1.

梳理原文情節(jié)

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人物：I/

Denny；修車人員；Skydiving工作人員？2.

構思情節(jié)P1:WecalledAmericanAutomobileAssociation(AAA)andhopedforthebest.Thekeytocontinuingthisparagraphliesinhighlightingtheemotionalcontrast-1.Lookingforwardtowhetherthecarrepairwillgosmoothly;2.Lookingforwardtowhetherthebungeejumpingbasewillbedelayed,combinedwiththesecondprompt,wecanclearlyunderstandthatalltheconcernsinthisparagraphhavebeensatisfactorilyresolved.①

銜接1：告知問題+地點，等待救援②

電話WNY

Skydiving

我們會遲到，行程是否可以延遲

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同意③

15分鐘之后，修車人員到了

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很快修好④

感謝

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飛往WNY

Skydiving

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緊張/興奮⑤

銜接2：4點半終于雖遲但到

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沖到receptionP2:Wewereinformedwewerethefinaljumpofthenight…the“sunsetjump”.ThekeytocontinuingthisparagraphliesinhowtouseSunsetJump.Inaturallycombinethethemeof"peopleandsociety"withthethemeof"peopleandnature"inbungeejumping,sothatthecontentandthemecanbeenrichedinthesecondparagraph.①

銜接3：我們的反應：雖然期待很久但是非常緊張②

等待過程接受訓練【細節(jié)回應】之前的經(jīng)歷讓培訓更加簡單高效③

終于輪到，instructors

和我準備skydiving④

接下去的幾十分鐘，追著落日余暉，緊接著是黑色天空美麗到死⑤

結尾：盡管很多小插曲，我和Denny的第一次skydiving

成功【下水作文1】P1:WecalledAmericanAutomobileAssociation(AAA)andhopedforthebest.Afterinformingthemofourissueandlocation,weanxiouslyawaitedrescue.

Whilewaiting,wecalledWNYSkydivingtoexplainoursituationandinquirewhethertheycoulddelayourjump.Thankfully,theyagreedtoaccommodateus.

Aboutfifteenminuteslater,theAAAmechanicarrivedandquicklygottowork,fixingthetireinnotime.

Afterrepeatedlyexpressingourgratitudeforthetimelyrescue,wehastilygotbackontheroad,andzoomedtowardsWNYSkydiving,amixofnervesandexcitementswirlingwithinusalongtheway.

By4:30PM,wefinallyarrived,

though

late,andrushedintothereceptiontocheckin.P2:Wewereinformedwewerethefinaljumpofthenight…the“sunsetjump”.Despiteourlong-awaitedanticipation,wecouldn'tshakeoffthenervousness

ofourfirst

skydiving

experience.Asweawaitedourturn,weunderwentasmoothandefficienttrainingprocess,greatlyfacilitatedbyourpreviousadventureswithbungeejumpingandzip-lining.

Whenitwasfinallyourturn,ourinstructorshelpedmegetreadyfortheskydivingleap.

Withinthenextfewminutes,weweresoaringthroughthesky,chasingtheremnantsofthesunsetbeforedivingintothebeautifuldarknessofthenightsky.

Despitetheunexpectedhitchesalongtheway,DennyandIsuccessfullycompletedourfirstskydivingadventure,anexperiencethatwasasthrillingasitwasunforgettable.【下水作文2】Para1:WecalledAmericanAutomobileAssociation(AAA)andhopedforthebest.

Aswewaitedonthesideoftheroad,thesunbeganitsslowdescent,castingagoldenglowoverthefields.Timewasslippingaway;sowasourhope.DennyandIlookedateachother,amixoffrustrationandanxietyevidentonourfaces.Butjustwhenwewereabouttogiveup,inthedistancewesawtheAAAtruckapproaching.Relieffloodedthroughusasthemechanicquicklychangedthetireandgotusbackontheroad.Another15minutesflewbywhenwefinallyarrivedatthejumpsite.

(96words)Para2:wewereinformedwewerethefinaljumpofthenight…thesunsetjump.Gonewasthefranticworryofthehighwaybreakdown,replacedbyrenewedanticipation.Gearedupandheartspounding,weboardedthesmallplane,thegroundshrinkingbelowasweclimbedtowardstheembraceofthesettingsun.Aswedivedoffboardandsoaredthroughthesky,thewindrushedpastourbodies,takingalltheworriesanddoubts,leavingonlypureexhilarationandjoy.Bathedinawarmglow,DannyandIscreamedatthetopourlungs.Inthatfleetingmoment,Isawinhisfieryeyes,adventuresforalifetime.

(93words)【參考范文】WecalledAmericanAutomobileAssociation(AAA)andhopedforthebest.AAAtoldusamechanicwouldbeoutinaboutanhourtofixthetyre.Afraidofourticketsbeingcanceled,wealsocalledWNYSkydivingandletthemknowourdifficulty.Luckily,theywereSUPERaccommodatingandsaidwecouldstillcomedespitethedelay.Thankfully,themechanicshowedupabout15minuteslater,wayaheadofschedule,andwewereonoutway10minuteslater.WearrivedatWNYSkydivingartheverymomentbeforethescheduledtime.Wewereinformedwewerethefinaljumpofthenight…the“sunsetjump.Iwasneverreallyscaredduringthewholeafternoon,butWhentheytoldusitwasourturn,myheartdefinitelystartedtobeatalittlefaster.Knowingmyinstructorhadover1500jumpsunderhisbeltmademefeelincrediblysafethroughouttheexperience.Andnowtoanswerthequestion…“WouldIjumpagain?”Yes.Tomorrow,ifIcould.Infact,Iplantogobackinafewweeksformysecondjump.Overwhelmedbywildjoy,Ishoutedoutloud,“Imadeit!”高