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聲聲內(nèi)容涉及他人知識產(chǎn)權，請勿用作商業(yè)用途Task1評分標上上我的課你需要什一個筆詞匯積練習本/睡醒再小作小作1.柱狀圖2.表格3.餅圖Pie4.線段圖LineGraph曲線圖Curve5.流程圖6.地圖題寫寫作格基基本語2.破除簡單句（3法3.標點符其其他注意事1.2.Criteria評分標準詳細解Criteria評分標準詳細解CoherenceandLexicalGrammaticalRangeandWhichWhichNowadays,Severallanguagesdieout.thinkthissituationisright.Intheworld,alreadyhavetomuchlanguagesminimum100languagesincludesmallcountry.Butweknowjustsomelanguages,kindofEnglish,FrenchJapanese,Chinies.TheTherangeofvocabularyislimitedrepetitive,andinappropriatewordchoices.Therearesomeattemptstoproducecomplexsentencesandsomegrammaticalstructuresareproducedaccurately,butfrequenterrorsandomissionsinbasicsentenceformationandinpunctuationmakethewritingdifficulttounderstand.4ThetechnologyhasprovidedthemobilityfasterwhichhelppeopletotalkorThetechnologyhasprovidedthemobilityfasterwhichhelppeopletotalkortointeractatanytimeanywhereinthePeoplecancontacktheirfriendorrelativesanytimetheywant.Ithasbecomesoeasierandferiendlytobeintouchwithyourferiends,relativesevenwiththeunknownpeople.AArangeofvocabularythatisrelevanttotopicisused,includingsomepreciseandnaturalexpressions.Therearequitealotofmistakesinwordform,wordchoiceorspelling,butthesedonotusuallyreduceunderstandingAvarietyofsentencetypesisused,butnotalwaysaccurately.Errorsingrammarandpunctuationaredistractingattimes,butonlyrarelycauseproblemsforthereader.5.5分IfIfpeopleknewtheywouldbeableconvincethecourtorthejuryofareasonforhavingcommittingthecrimetheyareaccusedof,penaldecisionswouldbelargelyarbitrary.Thiswouldresultintocriminalsgettingawaywiththeircrimesandintoahighlevelofinjusticecausedbythesubjectiveapproachofdifferentananexcellentrangeofvocabularyisusedasophisticatedlevelofcontrolandonlyrareslips.Therangeofstructuresisalsowideandmostsentencesareaccurateandprecise,buttherearesomeerrorsandomissions.These,however,areonlyminoranddonotaffectcommunication.7.5補充詞匯1-重補充詞匯1-重要crucial:topicsofcrucialimportance至關cardinal:RespectforlifeisaprincipleofEnglishlaw.尊重生命是英國critical:Yourdecisioniscriticaltoourfuture.你的決定對我們的將來至關重要essential:Experienceisessentialfor對于這個工作，經(jīng)驗是非常重vital:Thepoliceplayvital:Thepoliceplayavitalroleinour警察在我們的社會中起著極其重要的作用major:Therewerecallsformajorchangesthewelfaresystem.有人要求對福利制度進行重meaningful:ameaningfuldiscussion/experience重要的關系╱討論╱經(jīng)primary:Goodhealthcareisof良好的醫(yī)療保健是重中之重小作文小作文的結首首段描寫技原則（劍方黃金句型(4個ThegraphbelowshowsthequantitiesofgoodsThegraphbelowshowsthequantitiesofgoodstransportedintheUKbetween1974and2002byfourdifferentmodesofThegraphillustratesthequantitiesofgoodstransportedintheUnitedKingdombyfourdifferentmodesoftransportbetweenthetimeperiodof1974and2002.C8T4T1anbyC8T4T1anbyaachievedaBandscore.Hereisthe?Thisanswercoversalltherelevantinformationinthetask,andclearlyhighlightsthemaintrendsandcomparisons.Theonlythingthatwouldimprovethisanswerisanintroductiontothetopicthatisnotsocloselycopiedfromtheprompt.TheThegraphandtablebelowgiveinformationaboutwateruseworldwideandwaterconsumptionintwodifferentcountries.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.（考官范文Thegraphshowshowtheamountofwaterusedworldwidechangedbetween1900and2000.ThetableillustratesthedifferencesinagriculturalconsumptioninsomeareasoftheworldbycontrastingtheamountofirrigatedlandinBrazil(26,500km2)withthatintheD.R.C.(100km2).（老師范文Thegraphshowschangesinwaterusagearoundtheworldbythreefieldsinoveracentury,since1900.Toillustratethewaterconsumptionforagriculturaluse,thetablecomparesBrazilandtheD.R.C.intermsoftheirtheamountofirrigatedland.AssignmentAssignment劍91.線圖的特2.如何總結線3.如何篩選數(shù)4.如何對比數(shù)5.如何描寫數(shù)例例題詳Cambridge5TESTThegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountries.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.((參考Thelinegraphcomparesthepercentagesofpeopleaged65ormoreinthreecountriesoveraperiodof100years.總總先后總總結中2.日本最快變篩篩選數(shù)始末數(shù)轉折點數(shù)據(jù)（拐點焦點數(shù)據(jù)（有難度對對對比中對比中美國初始，對比瑞典，日本初始（分組日本的拐點2030末點日本，對比美國瑞典（分組描描寫數(shù)1.(動態(tài)詞匯，對比詞2.上升上升下increase(v.&rise(v.&n.)(p.p.p.grow(v.)(p.climbjump(v.&soarrocketsurge(v.*(ofprices,profits)n.(in&of))decrease(v.&fall(v.&n.)(p.drop(v.&n.)(-pp-dip(v.&n.)(-pp-decline(v.&beplunge*(v.valueor保持不保持不Remain/keepstay(擬人，慎用steadystable/thee.g.：Inflationhasreachedaleveloff（經(jīng)過急劇的漲落后）Housepricesnowseemtobelevellingoffafterthesteeprisesofthelastfewyears.?even'out（在多變之后）變平坦，穩(wěn)定下：Housepriceskeeprisingandfallingbuttheyshouldeventuallyevenout.房價一直時漲時落，但最終應該表表示波goupanddown6Itwentupanddownwidelyoverthenexttwofluctuate(widely7分(wide)fluctuationHerwagesfluctuatebetween￡150and￡200aweek到到達最大/小beatitshighest/lowestlevel5peak(toreachthehighestpointorvalue)6(v.&Unemploymentpeakedat17%.的最高Itreachedapeakof25%in介介at…of/in副詞副詞修副副詞修副詞修副詞修平滑大大moreorbelow/almost/量量thenumberof可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)alarge/smalltheamountofalarge/small~可以和volume換)thequantityof+可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)/不可數(shù)名詞abigcopiousgreathugelargevastconsiderablesignificantsubstantialsufficient~thefigure/thefigure?OursalesnumberswerebetterthisyearthanlastOursalesfigureswerebetterthisyearthanlastlength/distance/size/rate/變化數(shù)據(jù)句變化變化數(shù)據(jù)句變化主體+2.Therebe時間/國+變化名詞4.experienceshow名詞5.(本質是6.with7.(補充說明總總結中2.日本最快變ItisclearthattheproportionofelderlypeopleItisclearthattheproportionofelderlypeopleincreasesineachcountrybetween1940and2040.Japanisexpectedtoseethemostdramaticchangesinitselderly對比中對比中美國初始，對比瑞典，日本初始（分組日本的拐點2030末點日本，對比美國瑞典（分組InIn1940,around9%ofAmericanswereaged65orover,comparedtoabout7%ofSwedishpeopleand5%ofJapanesepeople.TheproportionsofelderlypeopleintheUSAandSwedenrosegraduallyoverthenext50years,reachingjustunder15%in1990.Bycontrast,thefigureforJapandroppedafter1940andremainedbelow5%beforeitgrewslightlyinInspiteofsomefluctuationintheexpectedpercentages,Inspiteofsomefluctuationintheexpectedpercentages,theproportionofolderpeoplewillprobablycontinuetoincreaseinthenexttwodecadesinthethreecountries.AsuddenincreaseinthepercentageofelderlypeopleispredictedforJapan,withajumpofover15%injust10yearsfrom2030to2040.In2040,itisthoughtthataround27%oftheJapanesepopulationwillbe65yearsoldormore,whilethefiguresforSwedenandtheUSAwillbeslightlylower,atabout25%and23%考考官范文—參ThegraphshowstheincreaseintheageingpopulationinJapan,SwedenandtheUSA.Itindicatesthatthepercentageofelderlypeopleinallthreecountriesisexpectedtoincreasetoalmost25%oftherespectivepopulationsbytheyear餅餅1.餅圖的類型（變化/對比.31.3Cambridge9TESTThechartsbelowgiveinformationontheagesofthepopulationsofYemenandItalyin2000andprojectionsfor2050.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.TheThepiechartscompareagegroupsinYemenandItalyintheyears2000and2050.TheThepiechartscomparetheofpeoplefallingintothreedistinctagegroupsinYemenandItalyintwodifferentyears.Overall,Overall,ItalyhasalargerofelderlypeoplethanYemeninbothyearsandthepopulationofItalyisestimatedtoagemorerapidlythanthatofYemenoverthefifty-yeartime.InIn2000,aroundhalfofthepeopleYemenwerechildrenaged14orunder,whereasthefigureforItalystoodatonly14.3%andmostofItalianpopulation(61.6%)werebetween15and59yearsold.Elderlypeople(aged60andover)accountedfor24.1%oftheItalianpopulation,comparedtojust3.6%ofthepopulationinYemen.InIntheyear2050,itispredicted42.3%oftheItalianpeoplewillbeseniorcitizensandonly11.5%ofthenation’spopulationwillbeyoungerthan15.AdifferentpatternwillbeseeninYemen,whereelderlypeoplewillprobablystillrepresentthesmallestproportion(5.7%),andthepercentageofchildrenunder15islikelytodropto餅餅圖的相關詞餅圖的核心詞匯——“makeWomenmakeup56%ofthestudentaccountAlthoughasignificantnumberofpeople(32%)gaveother’reasonsordidnotgiveareasonwhytheyemigrated,thisaccountedforonly17%withregardstoimmigration.Femaleworkersconstitute86%ofthelabourRepresent(notusedintheprogressivetenses不用于進行時)tobesth等于；相當于；意味著)Thiscontractrepresents20%ofthecompany'sannualrevenue.NuclearNuclearcouldrepresent50%ofUK'sgenerationcapacityin2050:official=Nucleargenerationcouldconstituteupto50%oftheUK'selectricitygeneratingcapacityin2050.Comprise(tohaveaspartsormembers,ortobethosepartsormembers)Italianstudentscomprise60%ofthe百分比百分比的英thegreat/overwhelming/vastmajorityof?Thegreatmajorityofchildrenareperfectlyalarge/solid/substantialmajority7分Asubstantialmajorityoftheworkerswerefavouroftheaanarrow/slim/tinyHewonbyanarrowatwo-thirdsAtwo-thirdsmajorityofvotesisneededtochangetheconstitutiontheremainingpartoftheremainingpartof?Theremainingpartofthepopulationpeoplewhoneversmokedtherest(noun)(of?I'llkeepathirdofthemoneyandtherestfor1.5句式1.5句式和語[實際意義of范圍6%ofsingleagedpeoplewerelivingin(2(2的百分比/be/standatThepercentage/percentageofpeoplewhosingleagedpeopleisThefigureforItalyis(3)(3)makeupaccountfor/constitute百分比of范圍Singleagedpeoplemakeup6%ofindigentInIn1999,35%ofBritishpeoplewentabroadfortheirholidays,whileonly28%ofAustraliansspenttheirholidaysinadifferentcountry.ThefigurefortheUSAstoodat31%.6%6%ofsingleagedpeoplewerelivinginpoverty,comparedtoonly4%ofagedcouples.Thelevelofpovertyamongsingleagedpeoplestoodat6%,whereasthefigureforagedcoupleswasonly4%柱狀柱狀柱狀圖的柱狀圖的3.3.例題詳Cambridge6TESTThechartsbelowgiveinformationaboutUSAmarriageanddivorceratesbetween1970and2000,andthemaritalstatusofadultAmericansintwooftheyears.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.TheThefirstbarchartchangesinthenumberofmarriagesanddivorcesintheUSA,andthesecondchartshowsfiguresforthemaritalstatusofAmericanadultsin1970and2000.ItItisclearthattherewasafallthenumberofmarriagesintheUSAbetween1970and2000.ThemajorityofadultAmericansweremarriedinbothyears,buttheproportionofsingleadultswashigherin2000.InIn1970,therewere2.5marriagesintheUSAand1milliondivorces.Thenumberofmarriagesremainedstablein1980,butfellto2millionintheyear2000.Incontrast,thenumberofdivorcespeakedin1980,atnearly1.5milliondivorces,beforefallingbackto1millionattheendoftheperiod.AroundAround70%ofAmericanweremarriedin1970,butthisfiguredroppedtojustunder60%in2000.Atthesametime,theproportionofunmarriedpeopleanddivorceesrosebyabout10%intotal.TheproportionofwidowedAmericanswasslightlylowerin2000.4.14.1對比較ontheotheronthe"comparedto"comparedtocomparedwithand"incomparisonwith"表示對比.For?PricesintheUKarehighcomparedtowithincomparisonwith(pricesin)CanadaandAustralia.Comparedto/with/incomparisonwith(pricesin)CanadaandAustralia,pricesintheUKare放在句首，要加?對比數(shù)字和改變時，也可以用對比數(shù)字和改變時，也可以用"while"orWhilethenumberofpeoplewhotravelledbytrainincreasedgradually,thenumberofbuspassengersfellsteadily.放在句首，連詞，接獨立的句子！In1970,around5millionUKcommuterstravelledbycaronadailybasiswhilethebusandtrainwereusedbyabout4millionand2millionpeoplerespectively.放在句末描寫數(shù)描寫數(shù)括括號做補充Studentsagedover49overwhelminglystudyforinterest(70%)ratherthanforprofessionalreasons(lessthan20%).分詞分詞短語（注意邏輯主語一致Therewasalsoasignificantriseintheuseofmobilestoplaygamesandtorecordvideo,withfiguresreaching41%and35%respectivelyin2010.表示伴表示伴隨說PetrolpriceswereparticularlyhighinJanuarywithalitrecosting￡1.30.[解釋說明]Peopleindevelopingnationsattendedschoolforanaverageofaround3years,withonlyaslightincreaseinyearsofschoolingfrom1980to1990.[附加補充TheLondonundergroundistheoldestsystem,havingopenedin1863Itisalsothelargestsystem,with394kilometresofroute.[解釋說明]表1表12表格的特表格的審3例題3例題詳CAMBRIDGE6TESTLocalLongdistanceLocalLongdistanceAll3.23.2CAMBRIDGE5TESTThetablebelowgivesinformationabouttheundergroundrailwaysystemsinsixcities.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakeccmparisonswhererelevant.ofrouteperyear(inofrouteperyear(inLosTheThetablecomparesthesixintermsoftheirage,sizeandthenumberofpeoplewhousethemeachItisclearthatthethreeoldestundergroundsystemsarelargerandservesignificantlymorepassengersthanthenewersystems.TheLondonundergroundistheoldestsystem,TheLondonundergroundistheoldestsystem,havingopenedin1863.Itisalsothelargestsystem,with394kilometresofroute.Thesecondlargestsystem,inParis,isonlyabouthalfthesizeoftheLondonunderground,with199kilometresofroute.However,itservesmorepeopleperyear.Whileonlythirdintermsofsize,theTokyosystemiseasilythemostused,with1927millionpassengersperyear.OfthethreeOfthethreenewernetworks,theWashingtonDCundergroundisthemostextensive,with126kilometresofroute,comparedtoonly11kilometresand28kilometresfortheKyotoandLosAngelessystems.TheLosAngelesnetworkisthenewest,havingopenedin2001,whiletheKyotonetworkisthesmallestandservesonly45millionpassengersperyear.TheThefirstdiagramshowsthattherearefourmainstagesinthelifeofthesilkworm.Firstofall,eggsareproducedbythemothandittakestendaysforeacheggtobecomeasilkwormlarvathatfeedsonmulberryleaves.Thisstagelastsforuptosixweeksuntilthelarvaproducesacocoonofsilkthreadarounditself.Afteraperiodofaboutthreeweeks,theadultmothseventuallyemergefromthesecocoonsandthelifecyclebeginsagain.TheThecocoonsaretherawusedfortheproductionofsilkcloth.Onceselected,theyareboiledinwaterandthethreadscanbeseparatedintheunwindingstage.Eachthreadisbetween300and900metreslong,whichmeanstheycanbetwistedtogether,dyedandthenusedtoproduceclothintheweavingstage.Overall,Overall,thediagramsshowthecocoonstageofthesilkwormcanbeusedtoproducesilkcloththroughaverysimpleprocess.流程圖流程圖的相關詞3表示順First,second,then,Atthefirst/second/laststageoftheBefore,after,later,地地地圖的地圖的CambridgeCambridge9TESTThetwomapsbelowshowanisland,beforeandaftertheconstructionofsometouristfacilities.TheThediagramsillustratechangestoasmallislandwhichhasbeendevelopedforOverview:概述Overview:概述有幾處變化和主要變Itisclearthattheislandhasconsiderablywiththeintroductionoftourism,andsixnewfeaturescanbeseenintheseconddiagram.Themaindevelopmentsarethattheislandisaccessibleandvisitorshavesomewhereto3.3.細Lookingatthemapsinmoredetail,canseethatsmallhutshavebeenbuilttoaccommodatevisitorstotheisland.Theotherphysicalstructuresthathavebeenaddedareareceptionbuilding,inthemiddleoftheisland,andarestauranttothenorthofthereception.Beforethesedevelopments,theislandwascompletelybareapartfromafewtrees.AsAswellasthebuildingsabove,thenewfacilitiesontheislandincludeapieronmiddleofthesoutherncoast,whereboatscandock.Thereisalsoashortroadlinkingthepierwiththereceptionandrestaurant,andfootpathsconnectthehuts.Finally,thereisadesignatedswimmingareafortouristsoffabeachonthewesterntipoftheisland.方方位詞位于Ais/lies/islocated/issituatedin/ontotheeast/west/south/northofB對面AisontheoppositesideofB/AisoppositeTask2評分標Task2題Task2段落布Task2Task2評分標CoherenceandTaskTaskResponse回答情fullyaddressesallpartsofthepresentsafullydevelopedpositioninanswertothequestionwithrelevant,fullyextendedandwellsupportedideas9分標?addressesall?addressesallpartsofthetaskalthoughsomepartsmaybemorefullycoveredthanotherspresentsarelevantpositionalthoughtheconclusionsmaybecomeunclearorpresentsrelevantmainideasbutsomemaybeinadequatelydeveloped/??6addressesaddressesthetaskonlypartially;theformatmaybeinappropriateinplacesexpressesapositionbutdevelopmentisnotalwaysclearandtheremaybenoconclusionsdrawnpresentssomemainideasbutarelimitedandnotsufficientlydeveloped;theremaybeirrelevant5分標CoherenceCoherenceand連貫與銜usescohesioninsuchawaythatattractsnoSkilfullymanagespresentsinformationwithsomepresentsinformationwithsomeorganisationbuttheremaybeala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nally,childrenhavebegunstudyingforeignlanguagesatsecondaryschool,butintroducingthemearlierisrecommendedbysomeeducationalists.Thispolicyhasbeenadoptedbysomeeducationalauthoritiesorindividualschools,withbothpositiveandnegativeoutcome.AdvantageAdvantageTheobviousargumentinitsfavouristhatyoungchildrenpickuplanguagesmuchmoreeasilythanteenagers.Theirbrainsarestillprogrammedtoacquiretheirmothertongue,whichfacilitateslearninganotherlanguage,andunlikeadolescents,theyarenotinhibitedbyself-consciousness.AdvantageAdvantageThegreaterflexibilityoftheprimarytimetableallowsformorefrequent,shortersessionsandforaplay-centredapproach,thusmaintaininglearners’enthusiasmandprogress.Theircommandofthelanguageinlaterlifewillbenefitfromthisearlyexposure,whilelearningotherlanguagessubsequentlywillbeeasierforthem.Theymayalsogainabetterunderstandingofothercultures.DisadvantageDisadvantage+Thereare,however,somedisadvantages.Primaryschoolteachersaregeneralists,andmaynothavethenecessarylanguageskillsthemselves.Ifspecialistshavetobebroughtintodeliverthesesessions,theflexibilityreferredtoaboveisdiminished.Ifprimarylanguageteachingisnotstandardised,secondaryschoolscouldbefacedwithagreatvarietyoflevelsindifferentlanguageswithintheirintake,resultinginaclassroomexperiencewhichundoestheearliergains.Thereisnoadvantageifenthusiasticprimarypupilsbecomedemotivatedassoonastheychangeschools.However,theseissuescanbeaddressedstrategicallywithinthepolicyadopted.ConclusionConclusion（PersonalAnythingwhichencourageslanguagelearningbenefitssocietyculturallyandeconomically,andearlyexposuretolanguagelearningcontributestothis.Youngchildren’sinnateabilitiesshouldbeharnessedtomakethesebenefitsmoreachievable.DISs+CambridgeCambridge4TESTInmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehaviour.WhatdoyouthinkarethecausesofWhatsolutionscanyouPoorPoorstudentbehaviourseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadproblemandIthinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsibleforthis.CauseCauseInmanycountries,thebirthrateisdecreasingsothatfamiliesaresmallerwithfewerchildren.Thesechildrenareoftenspoilt,notintermsofloveandattentionbecauseworkingparentsdonothavethetimeforthis,butinmorematerialways.Theyareallowedtohavewhatevertheywant,regardlessofprice,andtobehaveastheyplease.Thismeansthatthechildrengrowupwithoutconsiderationforothersandwithoutanyunderstandingofwheretheirstandardoflivingcomesfrom.WhentheygettoschoolagetheyhavenotlearntanyWhentheygettoschoolagetheyhavenotlearntanyselfcontrolordiscipline.Theyhavelessrespectfortheirteachersandrefusetoobeyschoolrulesinthewaythattheirparentsdid.Teacherscontinuallycomplainaboutthisproblemandmeasuresshouldbetakentocombatthesituation.Teacherscontinuallycomplainaboutthisproblemandmeasuresshouldbetakentocombatthesituation.ButIthinkthesolutiontotheproblemlieswiththefamilies,whoneedtobemoreawareofthefutureconsequencesofspoilingtheirchildren.Iftheycouldraisethemtobeconsiderateofothersandtobesocial,responsibleindividuals,thewholecommunitywouldbenefit.PerhapsPerhapsparentingclassesareneededtohelpthemtodothis,andhighqualitynurseryschoolscouldbeestablishedthatwouldsupportfamiliesmoreintermsofraisingthenextgeneration.Thegovernmentshouldfundthiskindofparentalsupport,becausethisisnolongeraproblemforindividualfamilies,butforsocietyasawhole.意見意見介紹段（不給觀點論結尾（得出讓步觀點介紹段（亮明觀點原因原因原因討論介紹討論介紹段（不給觀點介紹段（不給觀點一方觀另一方觀（結論一方觀（+反駁另一方觀結尾（得出讓步觀點因果因果措介因措（結論首首段技改寫題+陳述觀Paraphrase直接說問描述背+陳述觀歷史法、具體法、大環(huán)境的案案例分ProblemStudiessuggestthatnowadayschildrenspendmoretimeonwatchingTVthantheydidinthepastandspendlessindoingactiveorcreativethingsasaresult.Whydoyouthinkthisisacase?Whatmeasurescanbedonetodowithit?改改題Manypeoplecomplainthatchildrenwasteagreatproportionoftheirliveswatchingtelevisioninsteadofengaginginactivitiessuchassports,artsorcreativeworks.ReasonsbehindthegrowingbodyofTVgenerationarevarious,butactionshavetobetakentocurbthesituation.背背Itishardtoimagineahouseholdwithouttelevision.However,asmanypeoplehavepointedout,childrenbecamethevictimsofthisentertainmentbyspendingconsiderableamountoftimeonit.Thisphenomenonhascausedbemultiplereasons,andpromptactionsarecalledfortostopthedamagetotheyoungergeneration.現(xiàn)現(xiàn)Televisionhasbecomesomuchapartofourlivesthatmanyofusdonotevenrealizehowmanyhoursweactuallyspendonit.Infact,childrenaremorevulnerabletoaddictiontoTV,whichcausesconcernsfromparentsandeducators.Wehavetoidentifythecausesandtakeactions.原原1.絕不能抄原介紹話題介紹話題的套句Thereisnodoubtthat句子--------Researchh