04 知識與技能、技巧與方法 中考英語滿分作文賞析

04知識與技能、技巧與方法NO.1（2022·廣西·中考真題）在豐富多彩的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活中，你一定積累了很多學(xué)習(xí)方法和經(jīng)驗(yàn)吧！現(xiàn)?？⑽膶谝浴癓earningtolearn”為主題征稿。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.一個(gè)科目名稱；2.此科目的學(xué)習(xí)方法（至少兩個(gè)）；3.此科目的學(xué)習(xí)感受或期望。寫作要求：1.將標(biāo)題和首句補(bǔ)充完整；2.包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得透露個(gè)人信息；4.詞數(shù)80左右。Methodsoflearning________Herearemymethodsoflearning________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】MethodsoflearningEnglishHerearemymethodsoflearningEnglish.First,IusuallywatchEnglishmoviesandlistentoEnglishsongs.Ithinkit’sarelaxingwaytolearnthecorrectpronunciationandproperexpressions.Second,readingpassagesonthesametopichelpsalotinlearningnewwords.Inthisway,thenewwordscanberepeatedandIcanunderstandtheirmeaningsbetter.What’smore,it’sagoodhabittokeepadiaryinEnglish.ThathelpsmethinkinEnglishandimprovemywritingskillsaswell.Englishisabridgewhichconnectstheworldandus.It’sinterestingtolearnit.IhopeIcanmakegreaterprogressinthefuture.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)”為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱和第一人稱為主。分為兩段式：第一段先介紹自己學(xué)習(xí)英語的方法；第二段表達(dá)學(xué)習(xí)英語的感受或期望。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤。NO.2（2022·廣西賀州·中考真題）假如你是李華，在過去的三年，英語老師教會了你很多英語知識和技能，開拓了你的視野。你感激英語老師的付出，決定將來繼續(xù)學(xué)好并用好英語。請你結(jié)合以下提示和要求，用英語寫一篇短文。提示：你的英語老師1.外貌

2.性格……你學(xué)會了1.唱英文歌，欣賞英文電影

2.用英語講小故事

3.用英語進(jìn)行簡單交流……感恩和決心1.感恩老師的教導(dǎo)

2.繼續(xù)努力學(xué)習(xí)英語

3.用英語向世界講述中國故事……要求：1.文章必須包括所給提示內(nèi)容，可展開思路，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息；3.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。I’mLiHua.MyEnglishteacheris__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】I’mLiHua.MyEnglishteacherisMs.Zhang.Sheisatallandoutgoingladywhoisverypatientwithallofus.Ms.ZhanghastaughtmeEnglishfor3years.Ilikeherinterestingclasses.LearningEnglishhelpsmebecomemoreopen-minded.NowIcantalkwithothersinEnglishfluentlyandreadsomeEnglishbooks.IcanalsotellsomestoriesinEnglish.Besides,enjoyingEnglishsongsandmovieshasbecomeoneofmyhobbies.Ms.Zhangisanexcellentteacher,towhomIwanttosaythanks.IdecidetolearnmoreEnglishinthefuture,andtrymybesttotellthestoryofChinainEnglishtotheworld.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，介紹下你的英語老師，描述你所學(xué)會的東西，以及感激英語老師的付出，決定將來繼續(xù)學(xué)好并用好英語。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。敘述時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用短語句型或從句，使文章出彩有亮點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)確保語句通順，無單詞語法錯誤。NO.3（2022·河南·中考真題）閱讀是英語學(xué)習(xí)的重要途徑。請你結(jié)合下面圖示信息，以“HowreadingimprovesmyEnglish”為題，根據(jù)寫作要求，用英語寫一篇短文，向?qū)W校?？挠⒄Z專欄投稿。寫作要求：1)文中須包含上圖提示的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2)文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3)詞數(shù)100左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：improve提高HowreadingimprovesmyEnglishReadingplaysanimportantroleinmyEnglishlearning._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】HowreadingimprovesmyEnglishReadingplaysanimportantroleinmyEnglishlearning.Firstly,IfindthatmyspokenEnglishhasgreatlyimprovedthroughreading.ItgivesmeconfidencewhenItalkinEnglish.Secondly,readinghelpsmakewritingeasierforme.WhenIdoEnglishreading,itremindsmehowwordsarespelledcorrectly.SoImakefewerandfewermistakesinmyEnglishwriting.Thirdly,readingdevelopsmythinkingability.WhatI’vereadmakesmeopen-mindedandenablesmetothinkmore.What’smore,readinghelpsmedevelopagoodhabitoflearningEnglish.Inaword,readingbringsmenotonlymuchjoybutalsogreatinterestinEnglishlearning.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“HowreadingimprovesmyEnglish”為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容介紹自己是如何提高英語的，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱來介紹，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段從口語、寫作和思維能力等方面介紹自己是如何提高英語的；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。NO.4（2022·云南·中考真題）ILearnedHowto________提示：人生是一個(gè)不斷學(xué)習(xí)、進(jìn)步的過程。通過學(xué)習(xí)，你掌握了某種技能，明白了某些道理……請以“ILearnedHowto________”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，敘述你的一次學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕母惺?。要求?.請先將題目補(bǔ)全后，再作答；2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；3.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；4.請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】ILearnedHowtoLearnEnglishWellAtthebeginningofmiddleschool,IalwaysgotbadgradesinEnglish.Iwasveryupsetanddidn’tknowhowtolearnitwell.Oneday,myEnglishteachertalkedtomeandunderstoodmyproblem.Shegavemesomeadvicelikespeakingmore.Fromthatday,ImadeanEnglishstudyplan.First,IlistenedtoEnglishsongsorwatchedEnglishmovies.Second,Ilistenedtoteacherinclasscarefullyandtooknotes.Thirdly,ItookpartintheEnglishcorner.IcommunicatedwithothersasmuchaspossibleinEnglish.Finally,IhavegreatprogressinEnglish.Fromthisexperience,Iknowthatwhenyoufacesomedifficulties,don’tgiveupeasily.Youshouldfindsomewaystodealwiththem.Youwillsuccessoneday.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我學(xué)會了如何學(xué)好英語”為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段介紹自己在學(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)歷；最后一段介紹自己從這次經(jīng)歷得到了什么感悟。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤。NO.5（2022·四川南充·中考真題）假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Tracy的學(xué)校即將開設(shè)特色選修課程，她正在考慮是否選修漢語，來信詢問你的建議。請你根據(jù)所給提示給她寫封回信。要點(diǎn)：（1）給出你的建議；（2）談?wù)剬W(xué)習(xí)漢語的重要性；（3）結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，介紹至少2種學(xué)習(xí)漢語的方法。要求：1.必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4.詞數(shù)100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。DearTracy,I’msogladtohearfromyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【滿分作文賞析】DearTracy,I’msogladtohearfromyou.KnowingyouhaveaninterestinChinese,IsuggestyouchoosetheChinesecourse.WiththedevelopmentofChina,Chineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.LearningChineseisnotonlyawaytocommunicate,butalsoachancetoadmireChineseculture.AsaChinese,IhavebeenlearningChineseformanyyears.Ihavemuchexperiencetosharewithyou.Inmyopinion,therearemanywaystolearnChinese.It’susefultoreadChinesebooksandlistentoChinesesongs.What’smore,youaresupposedtojoinaChineseclubtopracticeyourspokenChinese.Learningisalifelongjourney.Keeppracticingeveryday,thenitwillbringsomethingnew.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。針對Tracy是否選修漢語給出建議，談?wù)剬W(xué)習(xí)漢語的重要性并給出學(xué)習(xí)漢語的方法。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一和第二人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。作文可分為三段，第一段給出建議，是否應(yīng)該選修漢語以及學(xué)習(xí)漢語的重要性；第二段結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，介紹學(xué)習(xí)漢語的方法；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。NO.6（2022·浙江嘉興·中考真題）假如你是李華，為營造更好的校園英語氛圍，你班決定以學(xué)校花園為載體，開展“CreateOurOutdoorClassroom”項(xiàng)目式學(xué)習(xí)（COOCProject），經(jīng)過分組討論，你們形成了PlanA與PlanB兩個(gè)實(shí)施方案（見下表）。請你選擇其中一個(gè)方案，用英語寫一篇短文，代表小組在英語拓展課上就你們所選方案的內(nèi)容和優(yōu)勢進(jìn)行回報(bào)。注意：(1)短文必須包含表中你所選方案的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息。(3)詞數(shù)：80~100。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dearclassmates,I’mveryproudtoshareourplanwithyoutoday.Theplanwechooseis________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【滿分作文賞析】PlanADearclassmates,I’mveryproudtoshareourplanwithyoutoday.TheplanwechooseisnamingtheplantsinEnglish.Therearemainlytwosteps.We’llfirstdoasurveytofindinformationabouttheplants.WecansurftheInternet,oraskourteachersforhelpifwemeetwithdifficulties.Thesecondstepistodesignnamecards.We’lldescribeeachkindofplantsinEnglish.Tomakethecardslookprettier,aphotooftheplantwillbeincludedineachcard.WebelievethisplanwillmakeourschoolgardenabetterplacetolearnaboutnatureandimproveourEnglish.Ican’twaittoseeitcomeintopractice.That’sall.Thankyou!PlanBDearclassmates,I’mveryproudtoshareourplanwithyoutoday.TheplanwechooseiscreatinganEnglishcorner.Thefirstthingwe’lldoistochooseanareaforit.Asyouseeinthemap,thegrasslandmakesagoodchoice.We’lldecorateitwithseveraltablesandchairs,sothatwecanhavecomfortabletalks.AshelfofEnglishbooksandmagazineswillalsobeputthere.Thenwe’regoingtomakesomerules.Forexample,weneedtotakecareofthings,andofcourse,speakEnglishonly.I’msurethiscornerwillbecomeapopularplaceforustoimproveourspokenEnglish,andmakemorefriendsaswell.That’sall.Thankyou!

【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“CreateOurOutdoorClassroom”為主題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容，選擇一個(gè)方案進(jìn)行介紹。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：以PlanA為例，寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱來介紹，時(shí)態(tài)綜合使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。作文可分為四段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹具體要怎么做；第三段介紹該計(jì)劃預(yù)期的成果；第四段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。NO.7（2022·北京·中考真題）某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“提升效率”為主題的征文活動。假定你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀阍趯W(xué)習(xí)或生活中是如何提升效率的，取得了什么效果。提示詞語：plan,task,attention,makeuseof,progress提示問題：·Howdoyouincreaseyourefficiency(效率)?·Whathaveyouachieved?Highefficiencyisimportantforabusystudent.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】Highefficiencyisimportantforabusystudent.Itisnecessaryforeveryonetolearnhowtoincreaseefficiency.IhavetriedmanywaystoincreasemyefficiencysinceIwasamiddleschoolstudent.Beforethebeginningofaday,IalwaysthinkaboutmygoalsandmakealistofthingsIneedtodo.Then,Iorganizemyto-dolisttomakeaneffectiveplanfortheday.Ialwaysspendtimedoingimportanttasksfirstandmakegooduseoftherestofthetime.Bymanagingmytimewell,Ihavemadeprogress.Iusuallyfinishmyhomeworkontimeandstillhavetimetorelaxmyself.Highefficiencyandtimemanagementhavehelpedmebesuccessfulinvariousareasofmylife.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“提升效率”為主題，結(jié)合提示問題進(jìn)行寫作，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱來介紹，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹自己是如何提高效率的以及取得了什么成就；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。NO.8（2022·湖北鄂州·中考真題）《義務(wù)教育英語課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》（2011年版）要求初中畢業(yè)生英語課外閱讀量應(yīng)累計(jì)達(dá)到15萬詞以上。請你就“HowtoReadWidely”（如何廣泛閱讀）為題，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.Whyisreadingwidelyusefultoyou?2.Howdoyouusuallyread?3.What’syouradvice?寫作要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和師生姓名。2.文章必須包括所有寫作要點(diǎn)。3.詞數(shù)80左右。（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）HowtoReadWidelyIt’susefulfor