高考英語作文校公開課省公開課一等獎全國示范課微課金獎?wù)n件

TheBeautyof

Writing

高三（三）班.3.211/73Whyiswritingsotough?InputOutput2/73高考作文高分卷特點(diǎn)

外在美：第一印象很主要！書寫清楚，字母勻稱，詞、行間距適當(dāng)，卷面整齊。結(jié)構(gòu)美：有合理段落層次，多為3段式，條理清楚；每段有每段主題。3/73詞匯美：詞匯反應(yīng)你知識貯存量多少，也是衡量英語水平一個主要標(biāo)志。like→befondof,beaddictedto/help→dosbafavor

句式美：利用得當(dāng)高級句式結(jié)構(gòu)能夠給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章所以而生輝。銜接美：使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對寫一篇有“英語味”文章很主要，能使文章上下銜接自然、條理清楚。4/73

你校英語社團(tuán)部要組織一次英語賽，就“是否應(yīng)該縮短中學(xué)生在校時間為8小時”這一論題進(jìn)行辯論，請你作為正方代表，寫一份講話稿，內(nèi)容關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)以下：1.確保充分睡眠2.提升學(xué)習(xí)效率3.增加自主學(xué)習(xí)時間注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右2.能夠適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫3.辯論稿開頭已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。Asaseniorhighstudent,Istronglyrecommendthat5/73語法篇6/73這第一句寫…7/73

IstronglyrecommendthatThisisrightweasaseniorhighstudent….8/73

Istronglyrecommendthatshouldshortenschooltimeintoeighthours.9/73你再看這開頭……10/73

Istronglyrecommendthatthetimestudentsdevotedtostudyinginschoolshouldbereducedtoeighthoursaday.Themainreasonsaccountingforitareasfollows.11/73這動詞錯…12/73Shortstudent’stimeinschoolcanhaveagoodeffectonstudy,itcanimportantforstudent’sstudyxiaolu,andincreasestudent’sowntime.13/73原來改書面表示就是改錯……14/73

Inmyopinion,wemusthaveenoughtimetostudy,butwealsoshouldkeepenoughtimetorelaxandsleep,eitherofthemareimportant.Becauseofwehavetimetorelax,wecanstudyenergetic.Reducestudytimealsocanimprovethequalityofourschoollife.

15/73這詞匯…16/7317/73你再看這詞匯…18/7319/73觀賞一下這篇文章句式結(jié)構(gòu)…20/73

Ifequalamountofworkhavetobeaccomplishedwithadeclinedschooltime,studyefficientlyisexpectedtobeenhanced.Moreover,extra-curriculartimewillmakeupmoreofthestudents’schedule.Thatistosay,chancesarewecanmakeabetteruseofourtime.21/73卷面篇22/73養(yǎng)眼…23/7324/7325/7326/7327/7328/7329/7330/73當(dāng)批到下午兩點(diǎn)看到了它們…31/73太擠了32/73太亂了33/73太空了34/73太潦草了35/73太花了36/73太沒譜了37/73老師最恨作文…38/73大鍋，標(biāo)點(diǎn)呢？段呢？39/73姐，你長發(fā)及腰字體難掩你每句都錯事實(shí)啊！40/73神，你別抄閱讀了解行不？俺們也會看試卷！41/73老師最喜歡作文…42/73Greatmindsthinkalike!43/73一點(diǎn)提醒…44/73好練字45/73筆46/73筆47/73過長48/73答題不可越界49/73作文五檔：（從教師閱卷印象角度劃分）漂漂亮亮（21—25分）有模有樣（16—20分）馬馬虎虎（11—15分）稀里糊涂（6—10分）一塌糊涂（0—5分）50/73ThreeRules:1.Youlearntowritebywriting.2.Thereisnogoodwriting;onlygoodrewriting.3.Whenindout,refertoRuleNo.1and2.51/73FiveSteps:Analyzethewritingtask.Organizeit.Draft.Revise.Edit.52/73

53/73高考英語寫作中怎樣使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)54/731.適當(dāng)語態(tài)2.使用不定式3.使用過去分詞4.使用V.+ing形式5.使用名詞性從句6.使用定語從句7.使用虛擬語氣 8.使用倒裝句,感嘆句

怎樣利用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：55/73怎樣利用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：1.主動轉(zhuǎn)被動

Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(普通)

thattheconferencebeputoff.(高級)Theadvisorisexpectedtowork

4hoursaweek.

Weexpecttheadvisortowork4hoursaweek.Itissuggested56/732.使用不定式3.使用過去分詞InordertoearnmoneybymyselfandbroadenmyhorizonsShewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.(普通)

,she

walkedoutoftheroom

.

(高級)

，Iintendtolookforapart-timejobasasalesman.（為了獨(dú)立盈利和拓寬視野）Followedbymanystudents57/734.使用v-ing形式2）,I’llvisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation.（天氣允許話）1）Nowourschoolhasthreeteachers.Theyteach48pupils.(普通)NowourSchoolhasthreeteachers，Weatherpermittingteaching

48pupils.

伴隨狀語58/73Whatisthemostimportantisthat5.使用名詞性從句2.

IcanhelpchildrenimprovetheirEnglish.(最為主要是)1.Iamsorry.Ididn’treplywithoutdelay.

IamsorrythatIdidn’treplywithoutdelay.59/736.使用定語從句1）Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(普通)Thegirl

washighly

spokenof.(高級)2)maybeIwillworkasavolunteerforaschoolasateachingassistant__________.(這將豐富我生活)whichisabletoenrichmylife.whichwillmakemylifecolorful.whosecompositionwaswellwrittenenrichingmylife．60/737.使用虛擬語氣我相信假如你是我，你也會做出一樣選擇。

Ibelievethatifyouwereme,youwouldmakethesamechoice.

61/738.使用倒裝句、感嘆句

earnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.(我不但能獨(dú)立盈利)1.IwouldreadandreplyyouremailassoonasIreceivedit.(我多么希望)2.notonly…

butalso…引發(fā)倒裝HowIwish

NotonlycanI62/73高考英語寫作中要學(xué)會使用恰當(dāng)關(guān)聯(lián)詞63/73III.慣用連接詞1.

表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容

另外，還有：what’smore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系

不過，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;

onthecontrary.64/733.表示因果關(guān)系

因為，所以，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示條件關(guān)系

假如，只要:

if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:

unless

不然:

orelse65/73

5.表示時間關(guān)系當(dāng)…時候:

when;while

在…之后:

after

在…之前:

before

直到:

until

直到…才…:

not……until……

一…就…:

assoonas

以后，然后:

later;

afterwards

很快:

soon

最近:

lately;

recently

自從…:since

從那時起:

fromthenon66/736.表示特定次序關(guān)系

首先:firstly

最主要:

aboveall

其次:

secondly

然后:

then;next

最終:

finally;intheend7.換一個方法表述

換句話說:

inotherwords;thatistosay;

67/738.進(jìn)行舉例說明

比如，比如:

forinstance;forexample;like;suchasthatistosay,namely,actually,andsoon,believeitornot,totellyouthetruth,forthisreason

9.用于陳說事實(shí)

實(shí)際上:

infact;actually;asam