Unit9寫作能力提升練課件人教版英語八年級下冊

UNIT9

寫作能力提升練UNIT

9Haveyoueverbeentoamuseum？

你到過什么地方？你對它有什么深刻的印象？請用英語寫一篇短文來介紹你游歷過的城市或風(fēng)景名勝。

要求：詞數(shù)80左右。

［謀篇布局］理清文章要素，構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。［遣詞造句］就結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點(diǎn)和詞語完成句子。1.哈爾濱位于中國黑龍江省的南部。它是一座歷史悠久的美麗城市。Harbinis

inthesouthofHeilongjiangProvince，China

?.It’sabeautifulcity

withalonghistory

?.inthesouthofHeilongjiangProvince，Chinawithalonghistory2.這里冬天的天氣非常寒冷，但是夏天并不熱。Theweatherhereis

verycoldinwinter

?，butit’s

nothotinsummer?.verycoldinwinternothotinsummer3.太陽島是夏天避暑的好地方。松花江是游泳或劃船的好地方。TheSunIslandisagreatplace

togetawayfromtheheat

?insummer.TheSonghuaRiverisagreatplace

togoswimmingorboating?.togetawayfromthegoswimmingorboatingheatto［巧妙銜接］介紹一個地方時，通常從概況(包括位置、面積、人口、歷史和天氣等)、景點(diǎn)、美食等幾個方面進(jìn)行介紹，通過語意相關(guān)聯(lián)的方式來實(shí)現(xiàn)全文連貫。［連句成篇］HaveyoueverbeentoHarbin？Letmeintroduceittoyou.HarbinisinthesouthofHeilongjiangProvince，China.It’sabeautifulcitywithalonghistory.Theweatherhereisverycoldinwinter，butit’snothotinsummer.Therearemanyplacesofinterest.TheSunIslandisagreatplacetogetawayfromtheheatinsummer.

Harbinisagoodplaceforatrip.I’msureyouwillfallinlovewithit.

假如你是李華，上周和父母第一次去西湖度假。請根據(jù)表格中的信息，向你在美國的筆友安迪(Andy)介紹一下西湖這個有趣的地方。TimelastweekPlacetheWestLakeActivitiesgosightseeingtakearideontheboatclimbthemountainComments(評價)beautiful，cleanandquiet

要求：1.恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用現(xiàn)在完成時；2.80詞左右(格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。DearAndy，

Haveyoueverbeentoanyinterestingplaces？Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyholiday.IwenttotheWestLakeinZhejiangProvincewithmyparentslastweek.Itisanexcellentplacetotakeaholiday.Wewentsightseeing，tookarideontheboatandclimbedthemountain

Haveyoueverbeentoanyinterestingplaces？Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyholiday.IwenttotheWestLakeinZhejiangProvincewithmyparentslastweek.Itisanexcellentplacetotakeaholiday.Wewentsightseeing，tookarideontheboatandclimbedthemountain.

Haveyoueverbeentoanyinterestingplaces？Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyholiday.IwenttotheWestLakeinWereallyhadagreattimethere.Itisabeautiful，cleanandquietplace.Haveyoueverbeenthere？Ifyouhaven’t，youshouldgo.

?Yours，LiHua一、話題分析本單元以“有趣的地方(Funplaces)”為話題,講述“你曾經(jīng)去過的地方”,體裁多為記敘文或說明文。二、素材積累(一)“談?wù)撊ミ^的地方”類作文常用詞匯:visit//allkindsof//suchas//haveagreattime//gosomewheredifferent//arelaxingandpeacefulplace//anenjoyabletrip//allyearround(二)“談?wù)撊ミ^的地方”類作文常用句型:開頭句1.I’vebeentoanamusementparkinLondon.2.ThebestplaceIhaveeverbeentoisSanya.中間句1.IvisitedtheplacesofinterestinBeijingandlearnedaboutthetraditionalculture.2.ThescenerywassointerestingthatIlostmyselfinit.結(jié)尾句1.Ifyougothere,I’msureyouwillhaveawonderfultime.2.Whatanexcitingtripwehad!(三)名言警句1.Onseeingmuchmore.行路多者見識多。2.Thejourneynotthearrivalmatters.重要的不是目的地,而是旅途中的風(fēng)景。(四)句子升格1.Xi’anhasconvenienttransport.(升格為復(fù)合句)→OnegreatthingaboutXi’anisthatithasconvenienttransport.2.Pleasevisitit.Iamsureyoucanhaveawonderfultime.(升格為復(fù)合句)→Ifyouvisitit,I’msureyoucanhaveawonderfultime.三、寫作任務(wù)假如你是李華,上周你和父母一起去西安旅行。請你根據(jù)下面的表格提示寫一篇英語短文,向大家介紹一下西安這座城市。要求不少于80詞。LocationinthecenterofShaanxiProvinceSizemorethan10,000squarekilometersHistorymorethan3,000yearsPlacesofinteresttheTerracottaArmy,theBellTower...Foodnoodles,dumplings...【寫作方法及寫作模板】“一引二介三概”法介紹去過的好地方引入話題IwenttoXi’anwithmyparentslastweek.It’sreallyabeautifulcity.地方介紹Location:Itliesin...Size:Ithasanareaof...History:Xi’anisacitywithahistoryof...Placesofinterest:Therearemany...Food:Haveachancetotrythedelicious...綜述Ifyougothere,I’msureyouwill...【高分作文】______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwenttoXi’anwithmyparentslastweek.It’sreallyabeautifulcity.ItliesinthecenterofShaanxiProvinceandhasanareaofmorethan10,000squarekilometers.Xi’anisacitywithahistoryofmorethan3,000years,andtherearemanyplacesofinterestinXi’an,suchasthefamousTerracottaArmyandtheamazingBellTower.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IfyougotoXi