讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)(狩獵老人野外遇險,好心司機展開營救)2024屆高三

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)1——狩獵老人野外遇險，好心司機展開營救題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目再現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文60-year-oldRichardOlsenhadretiredfromhiswork.Hewasveryinterestedinadventureandhunting.ThistimehehuntedonalandnearWatfordCity,N.D.,inthesparsely(稀少地)populatedwesternportionofthestate.Inthecoldwinter,hetriedanewspotandforgottobringhiscellphone,theonlytimeonthetrip.Hetrekkedmorethanhalfamilewithtwodogstoaharvestedwheatfield.Eyesfixedinthehorizoninexpectationofanotherpheasant(野雞)takingflight,Richardsteppedonathincrustofsnowonacanal.Itcollapsedanddroppedhim.Realizingthathewasintroubleandwasgoingtohurthimself,Richardwassuddenlypickingupalotofspeed.Hisleftleghitfirst,andhelayonhissidetoreachforhisshotgun,unloadeditanduseditasacrutch(拐杖).Hespentanhourandahalfclimbingtheearthencanalbackwardtokeeppressureoffhisbadleg.Whenhewaspartlyup,heslippedandslidbackdown,becauseoneofhisfeetgotstuckbetweentworocks.Richardtoldhimselfthatifhedidn’tgethimselfoutofthecanal,hewasn’tgoingtohaveaverygoodnight.4續(xù)寫原文Richardwalkedhisfootfreeandclimbedmoreslowlyandcautiouslyoutofthecanal.Richardimmediatelyrealizedthedifficultyofthetaskbeforehim.Theaccidentoccurredatabout2p.m.,anditwasnearly5p.m.withtheroadfarawayandthesunsetting.Richardfocusedoncrawlingtosafety.Evenwithhisgun’ssupport,hopping(單足跳躍)wasimpractical.Instead,hesatdownandpushedhimselfbackwardlessthan40inchesatatimewithhisgoodleg.Hewasstubbornandsurethathemustbepersistent.Hewasinexhaustionandhadmorefrequentbreaks.Temperaturesdroppedbelowzeroovernight,andhisglovesandbootsgotwet.Hishandsandfeetsoonwerecompletelynumb.5段首句Paragraph1:Richard’sdogshadbeenplayinginthefieldandeventuallycameuptohim.Paragraph2:However,gleamsofdaylightremained—Richardsawtheseventhcar.6Part2題目分析7已知短文內(nèi)容本文講述了8點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫建議第一段：理查德的兩只狗之前一直在地里玩，最后終于來到主人身邊，它們不停地叫著，圍住他的身體來溫暖他。理查德最后在兩只狗的幫助下掙扎著走到靠近路邊的籬笆旁。雖然理查德此時已經(jīng)筋疲力盡，腿也很疼，但他仍然試著去揮手，想要攔下一輛車，因為他害怕自己可能會隨時喪失意識。他拼命地揮手并大喊，但是沒有一輛車有所回應(yīng)。當(dāng)?shù)诹v車開過沒有停下時，他陷入了絕望。第二段：所幸，天空此時仍有一絲光亮。理查德看到了第七輛車。他用盡所有力氣和勇氣，再一次拼命揮手。幸運的是，這一次車停了下來，駕駛員搖下車窗問他出了什么事。在意識到理查德的處境以后，司機下了車，幫助理查德和他的狗一起坐在后座上。淚水涌上理查德的眼睛，他用虛弱的聲音表達了感激。最終他獲救并得到了治療。從那以后，每當(dāng)遇到糟糕的情況，他總會用這次事故激勵自己。10Part3范文呈現(xiàn)11范文呈現(xiàn)Richard’sdogshadbeenplayinginthefieldandeventuallycameuptohim.Thetwodogssurroundedhisbodytowarmhimwhilebarkingwildly.Richardfinallystruggledtothefenceneartheroadwiththehelpofthedogs.Despitehisexhaustionandpainfulleg,hestilltriedtowavedownadriverforthefearthathemightloseconsciousnessatanytime.Hewavedwildlyandshoutedloudlybutwithnoreplyfromanycar.Whenthesixthcarpassedwithoutstopping,hisheartsankindespair.12范文呈現(xiàn)However,gleamsofdaylightremained—Richardsawtheseventhcar.Musteringupallhisstrengthandcourage,hewavedwildlyagain.Fortunately,thistimethecarstoppedandthedriverrolleddownthewindowtoaskhimwhatwaswrong.AfterrealizingRichard’ssituation,thedrivergotoff,andassistedRichardontothebackseatwithRichard’sdogs.Withtearswellingupinhiseyes,Richardexpressedhisgratitudeinaweakvoice.Finally,hegotrescuedandcured.Fromthenon,wheneverheisconfrontedwithaterriblesi