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Continuationwriting讀后續(xù)寫Howtoreadapassageofcontinuationwriting?When?Who?What?Where?Why?Step1Pre-readingⅢ.讀后續(xù)寫:閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。MynameisFrank.IwasfromthenorthofEngland,butmyfatherhadbeenofferedabetterjobinLondon,andourwholefamilyhadmovedthere.Iwas12and,havinglostallmyoldfriends,Ifeltshyandlonelyatmynewschool.Therewere33studentsinmynewclass,andmostpeopleweren'tveryinterestedinashynewboy.Tonywasoneofthefewpeoplewhowerekindtome.Heofteninvitedmetojoinhisparticulargroup,andasaresult,Istartedgettingtoknowpeople.TonyandIbecamegoodfriends.Wetrustedeachotherandwecouldtalkaboutpersonalmatters,thingsthatwereimportanttous.Step2While-readingFindtheanswersof5W選必三小本P231Fiveyearslater,TonyandIarestillinthesameclass.Butjustunderayearago,Tony'sfatherwasknockedoverbyacar.Hediedafewdayslater.Thefamilyhadtomovetoamuchsmallerhouseinordertomanagefinancially.Tony,whohadalwaysbeenveryclosetohisfather,changedcompletely,becomingsilentandmoody.Hehadalwaysbeenaclever,hard-workingstudentbutnowheseemedtoloseallinterestinhiswork.Hestartedlosingfriends.Thesedays,TonyandIseeeachotherfromtimetotime,butwe'renolongerclose.Aboutthreemonthsago,agroupofuswereplayingfootballtogetherafterschool.Havingleftsomethinginthecloakroom,Iwentinsidetogetit,andfoundTonygoingthroughthepocketsofpeople'scoats.Inhishandhehadawallet—andIknewitwasn'this!注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。Paragraph1:My
mouth
fell
open
and
I
just
looked
at
him.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:I
knew
I
must
do
something
to
help
Tony.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.Howtoreadapassageofcontinuationwriting?When?Who?What?Where?Why?I(Frank),andTony(mybestfriendatmynewschoolInLondon,atmynewschool,inthecloakroomaboutthreemonthagoTonyandIbecamegoodfriends,Tony’sfatherwasdead,Tonychangedcompletelyandhadawalletthatwasn’this.Tony’sfamilyhadfinacialcrisisStep3Post-reading2.Whatshouldweneedtofocusonwhenwearewriting?確定結(jié)局WehelpedTonysolvehisproblem.確定人稱I,him,we確定時(shí)態(tài)一般過(guò)去式(主語(yǔ)+Ved)Step3Post-readingStep4Pre-writingDesigntheplotParagraph1:My
mouth
fell
open
and
I
just
looked
at
him.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:I
knew
I
must
do
something
to
help
Tony.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Howtowrite?+心理描寫+神態(tài)描寫+動(dòng)作描寫+環(huán)境描寫+心理描寫(怎么看待Tony的這個(gè)行為?)
驚訝的
難以置信的unbelievableastonished/surprised+心理描寫(Tony被
I看到了這個(gè)行為,Tony的心理是怎么樣的?)尷尬的embarrassed+神態(tài)描寫(我看到了Tony這個(gè)行為,我會(huì)有什么神態(tài)表現(xiàn)?)皺緊眉頭frown+神態(tài)描寫(Tony被我看見(jiàn)了這個(gè)行為,他會(huì)有什么神態(tài)表現(xiàn)?)他神情慌張helookedflustered他的臉漲得通紅hisfaceflushedbrightred.Step4Pre-writingDesigntheplotParagraph1:My
mouth
fell
open
and
I
just
looked
at
him.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:I
knew
I
must
do
something
to
help
Tony.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________+動(dòng)作描寫(我看到Tony的這個(gè)行為,我會(huì)有什么動(dòng)作?)轉(zhuǎn)身離開(kāi)turnedaroundandwalkedout+動(dòng)作描寫(Tony會(huì)放回錢包嗎?)拿著錢跑走了?VS把錢放回去?tookthemoneyanddashedoutoftheclockroom
VSputtedthemoneyintothepocketsofpeople’scoat.+環(huán)境描寫(我看到Tony完全變了一個(gè)人,能否用環(huán)境表達(dá)悲傷?)世界充滿了黑暗。VS天空陰沉、烏云密布,整個(gè)世界仿佛被一條巨大的灰色棉被籠罩著.The
world
was
loaded
with
a
sea
of
darkness.
VSTheskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomycloudsandthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.Para2.故事的走向怎么幫助Tony解決經(jīng)濟(jì)危機(jī)?Tony得到我的幫助,Tony的動(dòng)作描寫?結(jié)局是什么?怎么銜接上下I
knewImustdosomethingtohelpTony?Step4Pre-writing2.Thesentencesaboutfriendship:Step5While-writing1.Usingtheplotsthatwedesignedtofinishthewriting.1.Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.
生活中沒(méi)有朋友,就像生活中沒(méi)有太陽(yáng)一樣。2.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed?;茧y見(jiàn)真交。3.Smoothlywhenmakingfriends,adversitytriesthem.
順利時(shí)結(jié)交朋友,逆境中考驗(yàn)朋友。4.Friendshipisacupofhotteainwinter,giveyouwarm.
友情,是冬天里的一杯熱茶,給你溫暖。5.Thelightoffriendshiplikewildfire,whensurroundedbydarkduringtheshow.友誼之光像磷火,當(dāng)四周漆黑之際最為顯露。Step6Post-writing1.Presentyourwritingtoclassmates.2.Appreciatehis/heramazingsentences.Step6Post-writing3.Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:My
mouth
fell
open
and
I
just
looked
at
him.IwassosurprisedthatIcouldn'tbelievemyeyes.Tonywentbrightredwithaveryembarrassedlook.“I'llputitbackrightnow,”hesaid,andhedidso.Iturnedroundandwalkedoutwithoutsayingaword.IreallyhopedthatTonywouldexplainwhyhehadbeenstealing,buthedidn't.Atthesametime,smallamountsofmoneystarteddisappearingfromstudents'lockers.IwonderedifthethiefwasTonybutdecidednottosayanythingtoanyone.Ireallyhopeditwasn'thim.Step6Post-writing3.Onepossibleversion:Paragraph2:IknewImustd
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