高中英語(yǔ)考試讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)公式

第一部分

語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)

一、正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)(1)說(shuō)話人+說(shuō)話內(nèi)容“說(shuō)”后用逗號(hào)，引號(hào)內(nèi)第一個(gè)字母大寫(xiě)，句尾標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)放在引號(hào)內(nèi)。Hesaid,“Youaremybestfriend!”(2)

說(shuō)話內(nèi)容+說(shuō)話人陳述句引號(hào)內(nèi)用逗號(hào)，

引號(hào)外第一個(gè)字母小寫(xiě)：疑問(wèn)句或感嘆句引號(hào)內(nèi)用問(wèn)號(hào)或感嘆號(hào)，

引號(hào)外第一個(gè)字母小寫(xiě)。且“某人說(shuō)”可以寫(xiě)作“sb.said”也可以寫(xiě)作“saidsb.”。①"Yes,"hesaid.②"Youmaybothgo,"saidAndy.③"Don'tmove,"shesaidtoMikeinasoftvoice.(3)說(shuō)話內(nèi)容+說(shuō)話人+說(shuō)話內(nèi)容“某人說(shuō)”可以寫(xiě)作“sb.said”也可以寫(xiě)作“saidsb.”:“某人說(shuō)”前面引號(hào)內(nèi)用逗號(hào)，引號(hào)外第一個(gè)字母小寫(xiě)。“某人說(shuō)”后面如果用句號(hào)，則后面引號(hào)內(nèi)第一個(gè)字母大寫(xiě)；“某人說(shuō)”后面如果用逗號(hào)，則后面引號(hào)內(nèi)第一個(gè)字母小寫(xiě)。①“That'scool,”hesaid.“CanIhaveatry?”②“You'dbetterletmego,”teasedhertwinbrother,William.“Therearedangersalloverthisplace.”③“Youcangoanyplaceyouwant,”Amysaid,“butIthinkyou'llfindwhatyouneed.”二、避免重復(fù)使用

say在進(jìn)行語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)時(shí)很多同學(xué)全部都只用“said”這一個(gè)單詞，這樣使得句子重復(fù)呆板，因此要學(xué)會(huì)靈活多變的各種“說(shuō)”。explain

解釋state

陳述protest

抗議sob哭訴insist

堅(jiān)持comfort安慰repeat

重復(fù)agree同意order命令scream

尖叫promise承諾whisper

耳語(yǔ)yell/shout

大叫declare

聲稱(chēng)add

補(bǔ)充assure

保證complain

抱怨apologise

道歉announce

宣告argue

爭(zhēng)論interrupt

打斷beg

請(qǐng)求demand

要求mock

嘲諷claim

聲稱(chēng)cry/exclaim

喊叫suggest/advise

建議stammer/stutter/stumble

結(jié)巴ask/inquire

詢問(wèn)reply/answer/respond回答1.“Christine!照顧好你弟弟!”母親高聲喊道。“Christine!Takecareofyouryoungbrother!”Mothershoutedatthetopofhervoice.2.“Hannah，你知道她在哪兒?jiǎn)?她怎么樣?請(qǐng)告訴我?！彼麘┣蟮馈?Hannah,doyouknowwheresheis?Howisshe?Pleasetellme."Hebegged.3.“報(bào)紙上有一個(gè)圣誕愿望競(jìng)賽。”Amy的媽媽宣布，“給圣誕老人寫(xiě)封信可能會(huì)得獎(jiǎng)。”“There'saChristmaswishcontestonthenewspaper,”Amy'smomannounced.“WritealettertoSanta,andyoumightwinaprize.”

三、如何讓對(duì)話更生動(dòng)

第一類(lèi)“……,”sbsaidina…voice/tone.某人以…的聲音、語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)到inapleasanttone/voice

以一種愉悅的聲音/語(yǔ)氣inafirmtone/voice以一種堅(jiān)定的聲音/語(yǔ)氣inarudetone/voice以一種粗魯?shù)穆曇?語(yǔ)氣inasadtone/voice

以一種悲傷的聲音/語(yǔ)氣也可以用

inavoice/toneof+名詞的搭配inatone/voiceofsurprise

用一種驚訝的語(yǔ)氣inatone/voiceofcuriosity

用一種好奇的語(yǔ)氣inatone/voiceofimpatience

用一種不耐煩的語(yǔ)氣inatone/voiceofcommand用一種命令的語(yǔ)氣1.“你一定是安妮吧?”他用友好的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)。“YoumustbeAnnie,”hesaidinafriendlytone.2.“我很樂(lè)意。”艾米莉用愉快的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)?！癐wouldloveto.”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.3.“我不想和你一起去?！卑愑貌荒蜔┑恼Z(yǔ)氣說(shuō)?！癐don'twanttogowithyou.”saidEmilyinatoneofimpatience.4.“不，我沒(méi)有告訴他這個(gè)秘密?！彼玫统恋恼Z(yǔ)調(diào)說(shuō).“No,Ididn’ttellhimthesecret.”hesaidinalowtone.

第二類(lèi)“xxx,”sbsaidin/with+心情類(lèi)名詞.某人以…的心情說(shuō)道……1.“Youaresafe,”Tomcriedwithexcitement.“你安全啦！”Tom

激動(dòng)地說(shuō)道。2.“Ihateyou!”shescreamedinanger.“我討厭你！”她生氣地大喊道。3.“Whatalovelyrabbit,”Isaidinastonishment.“好可愛(ài)的兔子啊！”我詫異地說(shuō)到。4.“Nicetomeetyou,”hesaidwithenthusiasm.“很高興認(rèn)識(shí)你?！彼麩崆榈卣f(shuō)。第三類(lèi)

“xxx,”sbsaid+adv..+doing.(添加非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞表達(dá)后續(xù)動(dòng)作)1.“我去給我們拿點(diǎn)咖啡。”她溫柔地說(shuō)道，朝廚房走去?！癐'llgetussomecoffee,”shesaidgently,headingforthekitchen.2.“我再也不相信你了?！彼鷼獾卮蠛暗?，砰的一聲關(guān)上門(mén)?！癐don'tbelieveyouanymore.”Heyelledangrily,slammingthedoor.3.“我被狼襲擊了，我以為再也見(jiàn)不到你了。”麥克激動(dòng)地說(shuō)，緊緊抱住他們?！癐wasattackedbyawolfandIthoughtIwouldneverseeyouagain.”Mikesaidexcitedly.huggingthemtightly.第四類(lèi)sbdidsth.didsthandsaid“xxx.”(添加動(dòng)作鏈)1.他攔下出租車(chē)，提著行李箱跳上車(chē)，對(duì)司機(jī)說(shuō)："請(qǐng)去警察局。"Hestoppedthetaxi,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver.“Gotothepolicestation,please.”2.她沖上前去，跪在地上，喃喃地說(shuō)：“對(duì)不起，我的寶貝。”Shedashedforward.kneltdownandmurmured,"I'msorry,mybaby.”3.我匆忙穿上衣服，拿起包說(shuō)：“請(qǐng)等一下我！”Iputonmyclotheshurriedly,grabbedmybagandsaid."Pleasewaitforme!"Translation1.“沒(méi)人能理解我！”安迪哽咽著，雙手掩面?！癗obodycouldunderstandme!”Andysobbed,buryinghisfaceinhishands.2.農(nóng)夫抱起狗，跪下來(lái)，輕聲說(shuō)：“現(xiàn)在是你的了。”Thefarmerpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaidinasoftvoice,“It'syoursnow.”3.她眼里噙著淚水說(shuō)：“對(duì)不起。”Withtearsinhereves,shesaid,“Sorry.”4.“嗨，蘭迪。我對(duì)意大利面條的事感到抱歉?！眲P瑟琳低聲道歉，臉漲紅了?！癏i,Landy.I'msorryaboutthespaghettithing.”Catherinemurmuredanapology,herfacereddening.5.“看！”羅斯指著窗戶，激動(dòng)地喊道?！癓ook!”Rosepointedoutthewindowandcriedingreatexcitement.6.“想試一下嗎?”我撫摸著瑪麗娜的手說(shuō)?！癢anttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina'shand.7.我打開(kāi)窗戶對(duì)著對(duì)面喊道?！拔抑牢覀円郧耙?jiàn)過(guò)面，但我不記得在哪里了?！?。Iopenedmywindowandshoutedacross,“Iknowwe'vemetbefore,butIcan'trememberwhere.”8.“想試一下嗎?”我撫摸著瑪麗娜的手說(shuō)?！癢anttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina'shand.

第二部分結(jié)尾升華

一、分類(lèi)1、氛圍結(jié)尾:floatedintheair/filled+地點(diǎn)/…wasbathedin“飄在空中/充滿/沉浸在”(1)Thegoldensunlightstreamingin,laughterlingeredaroundtheyardandhappinessfloatedintheair.(2)Withthecoolbreeze,thewholefamilywasbathedinhappinessandlove.2、擁抱哭泣對(duì)話法AhuggedBtightlywithtearsflowingdownone'scheeks,whispering...母親給了我們每個(gè)人一個(gè)大大的擁抱，眼淚順著臉頰流下來(lái)，在我們耳邊低語(yǔ)：“謝謝你們的好意。是你的愛(ài)溫暖了我們。Themotherhuggedustightlywithtearsflowingdownhercheeks,whisperinginourears,“Thankyouforyourkindness.It'syourlovethathaswarmedusup.”3.強(qiáng)調(diào)句:Itis+名詞+that+謂語(yǔ)(count/matter/bring...)“正是…”正是愛(ài)和關(guān)懷使世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)。Itisloveandcarethatmaketheworldgoaround.4.Fromthenon,“從那時(shí)起,……”從那時(shí)起，我總是盡可能地幫助別人。Fromthenon,Ialwaysgiveothersahelpinghandifpossible.從那時(shí)起，友誼在我們兩人的心中綻放。Fromthenonfriendshipbloomedinbothofourhearts.5.Onlythendidsb.realizethat…“直到那時(shí)某人才意識(shí)到…”直到那時(shí)我才意識(shí)到，我們不應(yīng)該把愛(ài)視為理所當(dāng)然。OnlythendidIrealizedthatweshouldnevertakeloveforgranted.6.Itoccurredtosb.that…“某人突然想到…”他突然想到，有了家人的愛(ài)，過(guò)生日就不再是煩惱了。Itoccurredtohimthatwithfamily'slove,itwasnolongerdisturbingtohavebirthday.7.Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforget...“許多年過(guò)去了，但我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記…”許多年過(guò)去了，但我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記那份特別的禮物。Manyyearshave

passed,butIwillneverforgetthespecialgift.8.Manyyearshavepassed,buttheexperienceisstilldeeplyengravedinone'smind.許多年過(guò)去了，但這段經(jīng)歷仍深深地銘刻在一個(gè)人的腦海里。9.Neverhadsb.donesth.“某人從來(lái)沒(méi)有…”她從來(lái)沒(méi)有這么驕傲過(guò)！Neverhadshebeensoproud!

二、精彩結(jié)尾賞析

親情類(lèi)1.TheMotherhuggedthetwinstightly,whispering,“Thisisthebestsurpriseintheworld!”2.OnlythendidIrealizedthathowmuchmymomlovedme.3.Itoccurredtomethatfamilyloveisthegreatestgiftinlife.4.ItwasatthatmomentthatIhadafullunderstandingofthesignificanceoffamily.5.Itwasatthisverymomentthatthefrozenicebetweentwogenerations——melteddownintoawarmstreamflowingintotheirhearts.6.Theearlysunlightstreamingin,laughterlingeredaroundtheroomandhappinessfloatedintheair/thewholefamilywasbathedinhappinessandlove.7.Aftersomanyyears,thetasteofthecake,thelaughteroffriendsandtheembraceofmyparentsstilllingeredinmymind.=thetasteofthecake,thelaughteroffriendsandtheembraceofmyparentswerestilldeeplyengravedinmymind.8.Thisbirthdayisboundtobekeptinmymemoryforever,lighteningmyfuturepath.助人類(lèi)1.有時(shí)候，我們小小的行動(dòng)可以給別人帶來(lái)很大的不同。Sometimesoursmallactioncanmakeagreatdifferencetoothers.2.許多年過(guò)去了，但我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記瑪格麗特的圣誕禮物和她的善舉。Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforgetMargret's

Christmasgiftsandheractofkindness.2.母親給了我們每個(gè)人一個(gè)大大的擁抱，在我們的眼中低語(yǔ)：“謝謝你們的好意。是你的愛(ài)溫暖了我們。”Themothergaveeachofusabighug,whisperinginoureyes,“Thankyouforyourkindness.It'syourlovethathaswarmedusup.”3.我突然想到，一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的舉動(dòng)可以讓世界變得更美好。Itoccurredtomethatasimpleactcouldmaketheworldsomuchbetter.5.雖然外面的風(fēng)還在呼嘯，但一股暖流涌上心頭。Althoughthewindstillscreamedoutside,awarmcurrentroseinmyheart.個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類(lèi)(逆境、積極向上)1.在你身上發(fā)生了什么并不重要，重要的是你如何應(yīng)對(duì)。It'snotwhathappenstoyou,buthowyoureacttoitthatmatters.2.直面困難，努力。你終將制造奇跡。Bebrave,risetosetbacks,andmakeefforts.Youwillendupcreatingmiracles.3.恐懼締造不了未來(lái)，但希望可以。Fearneverbuildsthefuture,buthopedoes.4.每個(gè)人都像一朵花，有的有香味，有的沒(méi)有。只要你開(kāi)花，就會(huì)有蜜蜂和蝴蝶。Everyoneislikeaflower,somehavingfragrance,butsomenot.Aslongasyoubloom,therewillbebeesandbutterflies.5.要把最壞的情況變成最好的情況，一個(gè)人應(yīng)該采取行動(dòng)。Tochangetheworstsituationintobest,oneshouldtakeactions.6.正如諺語(yǔ)所說(shuō)，永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)失敗。我要么贏，要么學(xué)習(xí)。Justasasayinggoes,“Neverlose.Ieitherwinorlearn.”7.成功之路并不平坦。它充滿了挑戰(zhàn)和困難。Thejourneytosuccessisnotsmooth.Itisfullofchallengesanddifficulties.個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類(lèi)(夢(mèng)想)1.這是真的：如果夢(mèng)想足夠大，事實(shí)并不重要。It'strue:Ifthedreamisbigenough,thefactsdon'tcount.2.任何一個(gè)有夢(mèng)想，有勇氣和毅力的人都會(huì)成功。Anyonewithadream,co