高三二模英語(yǔ)Guided+Writing+作文+Parting+Gift+for+Our+Friendship+講義

GuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

76.你是新華中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生張敏。臨近畢業(yè)，同學(xué)間正在互留贈(zèng)言。假設(shè)李華是你的同班好友，請(qǐng)給他/她寫(xiě)一封郵件，你需要在郵件中：

1）寫(xiě)明你給他/她的臨別贈(zèng)言；

2）結(jié)合李華的高中生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀闼退?她該贈(zèng)言的理由。Sample1APartingGiftforOurFriendship臨別贈(zèng)言DearLiHua,

As

we

approach

graduation,Iwanttoleaveyouwithapartingmessage:"Alwaysbelieveinyourselfandnevergiveuponyourdreams."Overthepastthreeyears,Ihaveseenyougrow

and

overcomemanychallenges.Youhaveworkedhard

and

persevered

throughdifficulttimes,andIadmireyourdetermination，perseverance，and

patience.【①As引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，②

apartingmessage:臨別贈(zèng)言，③seesomebodydosomething看見(jiàn)某人做了某事，④

persevered

堅(jiān)持不懈⑤三個(gè)黑體字and:

第一個(gè)and并列兩個(gè)補(bǔ)語(yǔ)，第二個(gè)and并列兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)且省略了have，第三個(gè)and并列三個(gè)賓語(yǔ)?！坑H愛(ài)的李華，

在我們即將畢業(yè)之際，我想給你留一句話:“永遠(yuǎn)相信自己，永遠(yuǎn)不要放棄你的夢(mèng)想。”在過(guò)去的三年里，我見(jiàn)證了你的成長(zhǎng)，見(jiàn)證了你克服了許多挑戰(zhàn)。你在困難時(shí)期努力工作，堅(jiān)持不懈，我欽佩你的決心，毅力和耐心。Your

journey

throughhighschoolhasnotbeeneasy,butyou

havealwaysmanaged

to

staypositiveand

pushforward.

Whether

itwasstrugglingwithdifficultclasses

or

facingpersonalchallenges,younever

backeddown.Youalways

foundaway

topickyourselfupandkeepgoing.【①managetodosomething≈succeedindoingsomething做成某事了，②

staypositiveand

pushforward.積極向上③neverbackdown

從不退縮，④findaway找到辦法，picksomebodyup≈cheersomebodyup使某人振作起來(lái)】

你的高中之旅并不容易，但你一直努力保持積極向上的態(tài)度。無(wú)論是在艱難的課程中掙扎，還是面對(duì)個(gè)人挑戰(zhàn)，你從不退縮。你總能找到辦法讓自己振作起來(lái)，繼續(xù)前進(jìn)。

ThisiswhyIbelievethatthismessage

isperfectfor

you.Your

strengthandperseverance

areaninspirationto

those

aroundyou,andIknowthatyouwillcontinuetoinspireothersasyou

pursueyourdreams

inthefuture.Neverstopbelievinginyourself,andnevergiveuponwhatyouwanttoachieve.【①beperfectfor≈betrueof

非常適合某人②本段祈使句照應(yīng)第一段祈使句，】

這就是為什么我認(rèn)為這句話非常適合你。你的力量和毅力激勵(lì)著你周?chē)娜?，我知道你在未?lái)追求夢(mèng)想的過(guò)程中會(huì)繼續(xù)激勵(lì)別人。永遠(yuǎn)不要停止相信自己，永遠(yuǎn)不要放棄你想要實(shí)現(xiàn)的目標(biāo)。

Aswe

partways

and

takeup

ourseparatejourneys,rememberthatyouhaveafriendwhobelievesinyouandwishesyou

nothingbut

thebest.

Keepintouch,

andIlookforwardtohearingaboutallthe

amazing

thingsyouwill

accomplish.

Bestregards,

ZhangMin

當(dāng)我們各奔東西，踏上各自的旅程時(shí)，請(qǐng)記住，你有一位相信你、祝你一切順利的朋友。保持聯(lián)系，我期待聽(tīng)到你將完成的所有驚人的事情。致以最良好的問(wèn)候，張敏Sample2APartingGiftforOurFriendship?臨別贈(zèng)言DearLiHua,

Asweareapproachingourgraduation,Ican'thelpbutfeelamixofexcitementandhomesickness.

It

feelslike

justyesterday

when

wefirst

steppedinto

XinhuaHighSchoolasnaivefreshmen,andnowwe

areaboutto

takeup

differentpaths.Asadearfriend,Iwanttoleaveyouwithapartinggift,asignofourfriendshipandthememorieswe'veshared.【①

It

feelslike

justyesterday

when

wefirst

steppedinto

XinhuaHighSchool……注意兩點(diǎn)∶時(shí)態(tài)不一致；不是狀語(yǔ)從句而是定語(yǔ)從句。②beabouttodosomething將要做某事】

當(dāng)我們即將畢業(yè)時(shí)，我情不自禁感到興奮，感到戀戀不舍。感覺(jué)就像在昨天,我們作為純真的新生第一次走進(jìn)了新華社中學(xué),現(xiàn)在我們即將走上不同的道路。作為一個(gè)親愛(ài)的朋友，我想給你留下一份離別禮物，這是我們友誼和共同回憶的象征。

Ourtimeinhighschoolhasbeena

journey

filledwith

laughterandtears,achievementsandsetbacks.Irememberhowyoualways

persevered

throughchallenges,

nomatterhowdifficult

theywere.Yourdeterminationandhardwork

paidoff,

andyou've

growninto

anamazingperson.That'swhyIwanttogiveyou

thepartinggift

that

marks

thespiritof"KeepMovingForward."

我們的高中時(shí)光是一段充滿歡笑與淚水、成就與挫折的旅程。我記得你總是堅(jiān)持不懈地面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)，不管它們有多困難。你的決心和努力得到了回報(bào)，你已經(jīng)成長(zhǎng)為一個(gè)了不起的人。這就是為什么我想給你一份臨別禮物，它象征著"勇往直前"的精神

Thequote,"Theonlywaytodogreatworkistolovewhatyoudo"bySteveJobshasalwaysbeeninlinewithme.Ibelievethatyourpassionandloveforwhatyoudowillcontinueto

driveyou

towardssuccess.Aswe

stepinto

thefuture,Ihopeyou'llrememberthisquoteandneverstop

chasingyourdreams.【

chase

yourdreams≈

pursueyourdream

】

史蒂夫·喬布斯(SteveJobs)的那句話:“做偉大工作的唯一途徑就是熱愛(ài)你所做的事情”，一直對(duì)我很有幫助。我相信你對(duì)你所做的事情的熱情和熱愛(ài)將繼續(xù)推動(dòng)你走向成功。當(dāng)我們邁向未來(lái)時(shí)，我希望你能記住這句話，永遠(yuǎn)不要停止追逐你的夢(mèng)想。

Lastly,Iwanttothankyoufor

being

suchawonderfulfriend.Ourlate-nightstudy

sessions,sharedlaughter,andmutualsupport

havecreatedunforgettablememories.Eventhoughwe'llbegoingour

separate

ways,Iknowourfriendshipwilllastalifetime.

Wishingyou

allthebest

inyourfuture

endeavors,

ZhangMin

最后，我想感謝你是我這么好的朋友。我們深夜的學(xué)習(xí)，共同的歡笑和相互的支持創(chuàng)造了難忘的回憶。即使我們將分道揚(yáng)鑣，我知道我們的友誼將持續(xù)一生。祝你在今后的工作中一切順利張敏Sample3APartingGiftforOurFriendship臨別贈(zèng)言DearLiHua,As

we

areapproaching

ourgraduation,I

amwriting

toleaveyouwithsome

heartfelt

words.ThroughoutourtimeatXinhuaHighSchool,wehavesharedcountlessmemoriesandexperiences

that

haveshapedus

intowhowearetoday.

在我們即將畢業(yè)之際，我寫(xiě)這封信是為了給你留下一些衷心的話。在新華中學(xué)的時(shí)光里，我們分享了無(wú)數(shù)的回憶和經(jīng)歷，這些經(jīng)歷塑造了今天的我們。

Ichoosethequote"Thefuturebelongstothosewhobelieveinthebeautyoftheirdreams"asmypartinggifttoyou.Thisquoteisinlinewithyoubecauseofyouroptimisticanddream-drivennature.Throughouthighschool,youhavealwaysbeentheonetoinspireotherswithyour

vision

anddetermination.

Whether

itwasachievingacademicsuccess

or

takingpartinvariousextracurricular

activities,you

have

always

strivedfor

excellence.

我選擇這句話“未來(lái)屬于那些相信夢(mèng)想之美的人”作為我送給你的離別禮物。這句話很適合你，因?yàn)槟銟?lè)觀和夢(mèng)想驅(qū)動(dòng)的天性。在整個(gè)高中，你一直是那個(gè)用你的遠(yuǎn)見(jiàn)和決心激勵(lì)別人的人。無(wú)論是在學(xué)業(yè)上取得成功，還是參加各種課外活動(dòng)，你都一直追求卓越。

Yourpassionforlearningandyourperseverantspirithaveleftanimpressiononeveryonearoundyou.Youhave

consistently

beenarolemodelforyourpeers,and

ithasbeenanhonor

tocallyouafriend.Aswe

takeup

our

separate

pathsaftergraduation,Ibelievethatthisquotewillserveasaremindertocontinuechasingyo