高三下學(xué)期太原三模英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫助人類+A+special+harvest+fair+講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。人與社會(huì)——人與人之間（人際關(guān)系）——分享自己的機(jī)會(huì)給別人同樣會(huì)獲得相同的回報(bào)Onasunny

afternoon,

myfriend

Ollie

and

I

were

enjoyingskateboarding

atourlocalpark.

OurmoodwaslightuntilOlliespotteda

poster

fortheupcoming

HarvestFair.

Theideaof

attendingitwas

thrilling,

but

the

ticket

price

of$50quickly

iced

our

enthusiasm.在一個(gè)陽(yáng)光明媚的下午，我和朋友奧利在當(dāng)?shù)氐墓珗@玩滑板。我們的心情很輕松，直到奧利看到了即將到來的收獲博覽會(huì)的海報(bào)。參加的想法讓人很激動(dòng)，但50美元的票價(jià)很快就打消了我們的熱情。Whilewewerethinkingoverthecost,

ourattentionwasdrawntothelistofattractions.

Among

thevariousactivities,

wenoticedthat

ourfavoriteband—Eagles

wasgoingtoperform.

We

couldn't

helpbutbreak

intosingingour

favoritesong

bythem.

What

addedtoourexcitement

wasthe

piecontest

intheposter,

adelightfulreminderof

oursharedmemory.

It

usedtobethe

mostpopulareventinourcommunity.

Butthinkingoftheexpensive

tickets,

whichseemedto

bea

shadowoverour

excitement,

weallsighed.

ThenIsuggestedgoingtomyparents'

storeto

seeif

theycould

help.當(dāng)我們考慮成本時(shí)，我們的注意力被吸引到了景點(diǎn)列表上。在各種各樣的活動(dòng)中，我們注意到我們最喜歡的樂隊(duì)——老鷹樂隊(duì)要表演了。我們?nèi)滩蛔〕鹆怂麄冏钕矚g的歌。更讓我們興奮的是海報(bào)上的餡餅比賽，這令人愉快地提醒我們共同的記憶。它曾經(jīng)是我們社區(qū)最受歡迎的活動(dòng)。但一想到昂貴的門票，我們都嘆了一口氣，這似乎給我們的興奮蒙上了陰影。然后我建議去我父母的商店看看他們是否能幫忙。Uponarriving,

mydadtoldushehadsomegoodnews,

showingsometicketstous.

They

weretheveryoneswehadseenin

the

poster!

Mydadexplainedthat

hisoldpartnerhadmadea

request

tohanga

poster

herefor

theHarvestFair,

andinreturn,

heofferedusfreepasses.

Muchto

my

delight,

thereweresixticketsfor

fivepeopleinourfamily

andan

extraoneformyfriend!

The

news

waslike

abreathof

freshair,

bringingunexpectedjoy

into

ourday.

We

couldallsetout

toexperiencethefair

together,

noonemissingout.到達(dá)后，我爸爸告訴我們他有一些好消息，給我們看了一些票。正是我們?cè)诤?bào)上看到的！我爸爸解釋說，他的老搭檔要求在這里掛一張豐收集市的海報(bào)，作為回報(bào)，他給了我們免費(fèi)通行證。令我非常高興的是，我們家五口共有六張票，還有一張給我朋友的！這個(gè)消息就像一股新鮮空氣，給我們的一天帶來了意想不到的歡樂。我們可以一起去體驗(yàn)博覽會(huì)，沒有人會(huì)錯(cuò)過。Justthen,

Mrs.

Smith,

ourawesome80-year-oldneighbor,

walkedunsteadilytowardsus.

"I

justsawtheposter

inyourwindow.

HowIused

tolovegoing

tofairs!"

She

paused,

with

hereyes

droppingbeforeshecontinued.

"But

it'shardformetoget

aroundnow,

andticketscostsomuch

thesedays..."就在那時(shí)，夫人。我們80歲的鄰居Smith搖搖晃晃地向我們走來?！拔覄倓偪吹侥銠淮袄锏暮?bào)。我以前多么喜歡去集市！”她停頓了一下，眼睛往下掉，然后繼續(xù)說道。“但我現(xiàn)在很難四處走動(dòng)，而且這些天門票太貴了……”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1Ollieapproachedme,

seemingly

tosaysomething.

_____________________________________________文本分析：?jiǎn)栴}1---年邁Mr.Smith的想去豐收季集市，但昂貴的門票加上行動(dòng)不便，讓這次行程非常困難。解決途徑---Ollie把自己的票讓給年邁的Mr.Smith問題解決--Mr.Smith成功去了集市并非常開心問題2----Ollie沒能去成收獲節(jié)集市解決途徑---我們?yōu)樗e辦簡(jiǎn)易的家庭版豐收節(jié)集市問題解決----Ollie彌補(bǔ)了遺憾，大家收獲了喜悅，感悟到小“善舉”成就大“快樂”。主題：ItwasOllie’sactofkindnessthatsparkedarippleoflastingjoyforusall.續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展：第一段續(xù)寫：奧利走向我，看起來有話要說?！径卫m(xù)寫的關(guān)鍵在于把“要說的話”具體化，同時(shí)結(jié)合二段提示，可知，奧利把票讓給了史密斯夫人。同時(shí)收尾要回到參加本次的豐收節(jié)為下文的“彌補(bǔ)”做鋪墊?！獏⒖荚~匯有：Ollie；I；ticket；Mrs.Smith；HarvestFair；family；Eagle；enthusiasm；excitement；delight示范與行文：Paragraph1Ollieapproachedme,

seemingly

tosaysomething.

Onhearing

that

Ollie

wouldliketogivehis

ticket

to

Mrs.Smith,

atfirst

Icouldn’t

believemyears,

but

withmyeyes

spotting

how

delightful

andexcited

Mrs.Smithappeared/seemed

whensheacceptedthe

precious/prizeticket

fromOllie,I

immediately

acknowledged/perceived

thetruemeaningofOllie’saction.

Undoubtedly,

thelater

HarvestFair

did

shockour

family

andtheoldladybothvisuallyandemotionally,

especially

my

enthusiasm

and

excitement

totally

rekindled

by

Eagles’

performance,

but

the

absence

ofOlliealways

remindedmeof

something

thatIshoulddoforhim.(2句)Paragraph2Afterthefair,

Icameupwithaplan

tomakeup

for

Ollie's

absence.

________________________________第二段續(xù)寫：豐收節(jié)之后，我想出了一個(gè)為奧利缺席的彌補(bǔ)計(jì)劃。——本段續(xù)寫的關(guān)鍵在于計(jì)劃的全面展示，同時(shí)文章很多兩人共有的元素變可以加以充分利用，比如Eagle的音樂和piecontest的回憶，只是這些的內(nèi)容需要進(jìn)行主體的調(diào)整?！獏⒖荚~匯有：family；Ollie；HarvestFair；thrilling；piecontest；Eagle；favoritesong；sharedmemory示范與行文：Paragraph2Afterthefair,

Icameupwithaplan

tomakeup

for

Ollie's

absence.

Beyondmyexpectation,my

family

agreedonmy

ideathat

Ollie

deserved

aprivate

HarvestFair.

Then

wetogether

devotedourselvesto

thebigevent.

When

Olliewasinvitedtomyfamily,hewas

thrilled

bywhatwehadprepared.Laughter,

delicate

foodandwarmatmospherefilledthehouse.

Withthefamiliar

piecontest

appearing,ourmood

reachedtothesummit.

Atthemoment,Iplayedavideo

recordedduring

Eagle’s

performance

asagiftforhim.

Immersedin

our

favoritesongs,weall

recollected

our

sharedmemory

again,

allofwhich

originatedfrom

Ollie’skin