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大作文漫畫之一：創(chuàng)新【范文】Itissaidthatinnovationsustainstheprogressofanation.Thesameistrueforindividuals.Thehurdleracethepicturedepictsissymbolicofaninnovationrace.Inthecourseofclearingthehurdles,everyathleteisconsciouslylookingoverhisorhershouldersatopponentsforfearoflaggingbehindothers.Strangely,practicallynoonefocusesonhurdlesathisorherfeet.Asamatteroffact,innovationshouldinvolvetwosides:Weshouldnotonlysurpassothersbutsurpassourselvesendlessly.Theathletesthepicturedescribes,however,justsettheirmindsontheformerandshuteyestothelatter.Iftheresultsofourinnovationareonlysmallstepsaheadofothersbutbringnofundamentalshiftstoourselves,thenthisinnovationisonlyimprovementofakindbutnotabreakthroughinarealsense.Thiskindofinnovationlacksvitalitywhosegradualweakening,disintegrationandperishingareonlyamatteroftime.Judgingfromthisaspect,Iwouldarguesettingupatwo-way,reasonableandeffectiveinnovationmechanismissorelyneeded.Thissystemshouldnotonlycorrectlyevaluateexternalcompetitionsinnovationsarefacedwithbutalsoputself-improvementonitsagenda.Intermsoftheevolutionofthewholenation,innovationisnotsomuchameansasoneoftheultimateobjectives.Onlybyputtinginnovationatalevelofsurpassingothers,especiallyourselves,canwehopetostayaheadoftheincreasinglyfiercecompetition.【翻譯】有道是，創(chuàng)新是一個民族的靈魂，其實(shí)個人也適用。圖片中所描述的跨欄比賽即象征著一場創(chuàng)新比賽。在跨欄過程中，每名運(yùn)動員都有意識地回頭探望其它對手，唯恐落后于人，奇怪的是，幾乎沒有人關(guān)注其腳下的欄桿。其實(shí)，創(chuàng)新應(yīng)包括兩個方面：不僅對外要不斷超越他人，對內(nèi)更要無止境地超越自身。然而這幅圖片所描述的運(yùn)動員們恰恰只側(cè)重前者，對后者則置若惘然。如果我們創(chuàng)新的結(jié)果只是領(lǐng)先別人一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)，而相對于自身沒有本質(zhì)的變化，那這一創(chuàng)新僅僅是某種形式的改良，而不是真正意義上的突破!這樣的創(chuàng)新是沒有生命力的，其接下來逐漸地弱化，瓦解，滅亡僅僅是一個時間上的問題。從這一層面上說，建立一種雙向，合理，有效的創(chuàng)新機(jī)制迫在眉睫。這一機(jī)制不僅要正確評估創(chuàng)新的外在競爭，更要將其對自身的提升納入日程。創(chuàng)新就整個國家的發(fā)展而言，與其說是一種手段，不如說是最終目的之一。只有將創(chuàng)新置于超越他人，尤其是超越自己的高度，我們才有望在日益激烈的競爭中立于不敗之地。漫畫之二：持之以恒【范文】Perseveranceiscruciallyimportant.Inthispicture,amaninhismiddleadulthoodiswatchingastreamofdropsdripacrossanopeningontheedgeofacliff,flushingandratherconfused,seemingtobepondering:howcantheseinsignificantdropswearthestone?Whatthepicturetriestoconveyisobviouslyaspiritofperseverance.Thistruthisself-evidenttoeveryone,butnoteveryonewouldputitintopractice.Perseveranceisalong-termslowprocess,oftenwithoutoutstandingadvancementsduringthecoursealthoughyouhavemadepainstakingefforts.Thisdrainsawealthofpeople'spatience,disheartenthemandmakesthemgiveupintheend.Butforpeoplehopingtomakesomeachievementsinstudyandcareer,perseverance,Iwouldargue,isthemostbasicstandardofbehavior.Anyattainmentisaccumulatedbylittlemattersinordinarylife.Noonewillgetoninlifeovernight.Althoughtheprocessofperseveranceisboringandback-busting,itisawealthtorememberinlife,nottomentionthefruitsforwhichyouhavebeencraved.Alwaysbearinmind:Romewasnotbuiltinaday.【譯文】持之以恒是至關(guān)重要的。在這張圖片中，有一位中年人親眼看著一連串的水滴從山崖邊的空隙中穿過并落下，他漲紅著臉表現(xiàn)得十分困惑，似乎在想：這些微不足道的水滴是如何滴穿山崖的。顯然這幅圖畫要傳達(dá)的是一種持之以恒的精神。任何人都知道這個道理，但是并非每一個人都會付諸實(shí)踐。持之以恒是一個長期緩慢的過程，期間往往沒有突出的進(jìn)展，盡管你付出了一定的艱辛努力，這使得許多人逐漸失去耐心，繼而灰心，最終放棄。然而對于期望在學(xué)習(xí)或事業(yè)方面有所成就的人們來說，我認(rèn)為，持之以恒是最基本的處事方式和行為準(zhǔn)則。任何成就都是依靠平常生活中的點(diǎn)滴積累起來的，沒有人會在一夜之間發(fā)跡。雖然持之以恒的過程是枯燥而辛苦的，但其過程卻是人生值得回味的一筆財富，更何況最終夢寐以求的成果。永遠(yuǎn)記住，羅馬不是一日而建成的。漫畫之三：自立【范文1】Virtuallyallyoungadultsaspiretobeindependent,nomatterinentertainmentorstudyorsurvival.Ironically,someofthem,vividlydepictedbythepicture,areunabletoliveonthemselves.Itisobviousthatthemuscularmanshowninthepictureiscallinghismotherjustforaneasyproblem:washingthesocks.Indeed,wearetreatedtoawealthofridiculousspectacles,whicharenowmorethaneverinamplesupply:studentsplanningonsharinganannyarerisinginnumbers;someprominentprofessorsonlystresstheoreticalknowledgeandalargeportionoftheirstudentslackbasiclivingskills;countlessfamiliesacrossthewholesocietyare,withoutdisguise,acceptingandboastingsuchaprejudice:youngsterscapableofdoinghouseworkarenotpromising.Eventherearemediawhichkeeptrumpetingsomechildprodigiesbyoutdatedstandardswhichplaceahighvalueonexternalscoresoverinternalquality.Therefore,itisnosurprisingwhenwetakealookatthepictureagain.Confrontingsuchaworseningphenomenon,weshouldengageourselvesinself-reflection.Sodoesthewholeeducationalcircle.Itismystrongconvictionthatitisessentialfortheadministrationtoreformorestablishanoveleducationalsystem,whichwillcontributetoheighteningyoungfolks’capacityofadaptingtopracticalliving.Plus,averageeducatorsshouldshiftconventionalnotionsinanefforttogiveoutasignalthatscoresarenolongerGod.Afterall,qualityissuperiortoscores.Healthy,ambitiousandindependentyoungstersaretheintrinsicdrivingforcebehindthesustainedgrowthofthefuture.Lastly,youngpeopleshouldlearnhowtocopewiththemostbasicdailyroutinesontheirownandseeevadingsuchdutiesasadisgrace.【翻譯】幾乎所有的年輕人都渴望獨(dú)立，無論是在娛樂方面，還是學(xué)習(xí)抑或生存方面，這是一個事實(shí)。諷刺的是，一些年輕人，正如圖片中所描述的，對日常生活不能自理。顯然，圖片里的那個肌肉發(fā)達(dá)的年輕人正在給她媽媽打電話，僅僅是為求解決洗襪子的這一簡單的問題。的確，我們目前面對的這些可笑的景象比以往任何時候都要多：越來越多的學(xué)生打算合租保姆；一些著名教授只強(qiáng)調(diào)理論知識，他們的很大一部分學(xué)生缺乏基本的生活技能；社會上無數(shù)的家庭正不加掩飾地接收并吹噓這樣一種偏見：年輕人會做家務(wù)是沒有前途的。甚至還有媒體依舊用過時的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)來不斷地炒作一些神童，而這些標(biāo)準(zhǔn)重視的是外在的分?jǐn)?shù)而不是內(nèi)在的素質(zhì)。因此，當(dāng)我們再次將視線轉(zhuǎn)向這張圖片時，就不會再驚訝了。面對這種日益糟糕的現(xiàn)象，我們應(yīng)該自我反省，整個教育界也應(yīng)該這么做。我強(qiáng)烈認(rèn)為，讓政府改革或建立一種新的教育體系是必需的，這一體系將有助于增強(qiáng)年輕人適應(yīng)實(shí)際生活的能力。此外，一般學(xué)者應(yīng)該轉(zhuǎn)變傳統(tǒng)觀念以發(fā)出一種信號：分?jǐn)?shù)不再是至高無上的。畢竟，素質(zhì)優(yōu)于分?jǐn)?shù)。健康，雄心勃勃和獨(dú)立的年輕人才是未來持續(xù)發(fā)展的內(nèi)在動力。最后，年輕人應(yīng)該學(xué)會如何獨(dú)立處理最基本的日常事務(wù)，并視逃避這些事情為恥辱?！痉段?】Inthiscartoon,astudentinhisdormitoryisphoninghismotherandaskingherhowtowashsocks.HisheavydependenceonhismotherreflectsawidespreadphenomenoninChinaMainlandnow.Howtomaketheirchildrenindependentconcernsamajorityofparents.Aonlychildisalwayslikeaflowerinaglasshousewhichcan'tweatheranystorm.Thereisawidespreadimpressionthatthesechildrenarenotstrongenoughtoovercomevariousdifficulties.Theselittleemperorsareindulgedandprotectedbytheirparents.Andexcessivecareandlovealwayswouldproduceanadverseeffect.Theyarealwayspuzzledabouthowtoleadanindependentlifewhentheyreachadulthood.Parentsshouldteachtheirchildrenhowtodealwithvarioussituations,especiallyawkwardones.Childrenshouldtakeeveryopportunitytoimprovetheirproblem-solvingabilitiesandgainrealindependence.Weallferventlyhopethatthesechildrenhavelessrelianceontheirparentsandbecomeindependenteconomicallyandmentally.【翻譯】在這卡通畫中，一個學(xué)生正在宿舍中給他母親打電話并且問如何洗襪子。他對母親的嚴(yán)重依賴反映了目前一個在中國大陸的廣泛現(xiàn)象。怎樣使他們的孩子獨(dú)立起來讓大部分父母憂心忡忡。一個獨(dú)生子女往往像溫室里的花朵，經(jīng)不起任何風(fēng)雨。一個普遍的印象是這些孩子不夠堅強(qiáng)而不能戰(zhàn)勝各種困難。這些向皇帝們被父母所寵愛和呵護(hù)。而過度的呵護(hù)和關(guān)愛將會適得其反。他們往往會在成年之時對如何開始獨(dú)立生活茫然無措。父母應(yīng)該教會他們的孩子如何處理各種狀況，特別是艱難的。孩子們應(yīng)該抓住每一個機(jī)會增強(qiáng)他們解決問題的能力而走向真正的獨(dú)立。我們熱忱地希望這些孩子能對父母少些依賴而在經(jīng)濟(jì)和心智兩方面獨(dú)立起來?！咀⒔狻?.phone<vt>:tospeaktosomeonebytelephone[=telephone]-在電話中通話<e.g.>I'llphoneyouthisevening.-今天傍晚我將打電話給你。2.heavydependence:嚴(yán)重依賴3.concern<vt>:tomakesomeonefeelworriedorupset-讓某人擔(dān)心或煩躁<e.g.>Issueslikefoodadditivesdoconcernme.-諸如食品添加劑之類的問題實(shí)實(shí)在在地困擾著我。(Howtomaketheirchildrenindependent)concernsamajorityofparents.加括號部分是一個主語從句。4.onlychild:獨(dú)生子女5.weather<vt>:tocomethroughaverydifficultsituationsafely-歷經(jīng)艱險<e.g.>Thecompanyweatheredthestormofobjectionstothescheme.-這個公司歷經(jīng)了反對此方案的風(fēng)暴。6.widespreadimpression:普遍印象7.produceanadverseeffect:產(chǎn)生反作用、適得其反8.Theyarealwayspuzzledabout(howtoleadanindependentlifewhentheyreachadulthood).加括號部分為介詞about所接的賓語從句。9.Parentsshouldteachtheirchildren(howtodealwithvarioussituations,especiallyawkwardones).teachsbsth-教某人某事，加括號部分為動詞teach的直接賓語部分，是賓語一個從句。SectionIV:Writing參考范文Thedefinitionofloveisbroadandshouldn'tbeconfinedtotherelationshipbetweenlovers.Loveisacommonlanguagearoundtheplanet.Thispicture'shiddenmeaningiseasytograsp:thehardertimesoneexperiences,themorevaluableothers'helpis.ProjectHopeisaclassicexampledemonstratingthecrucialimportanceoflovetous.ManychildreninunderdevelopedregionsinChinadropoutofschoolsoasnottoburdentheirfamiliesofloweconomicstatus.Formostofthem,theirdreamsareshatteredaftertheyquitschool.Aconsiderablemajorityofthemstarttheircareersasamigrantworker.Thisproject,designedtohelpthemfurthertheirstudies,attractsgreatattentionfromsociety.Agrowingnumberofpeoplearegettinginvolvedinthisworthycause.Thesufficientfinancialsupportandwidespreadpublicconcernresultingfromthisprojectallowmanychildreninpoverty-strickenareastoreturntoschool.Thebestwaytoexpresslove,inmyeyes,istoofferahandtowhoeverisindesperateneedofhelp.Thepowergeneratedbyloveisimmeasurable.Wehopethatloveshinesalightineverycornerofourhearts.【譯文】愛的定義是寬泛的，因而不應(yīng)該局限在情人愛慕關(guān)系的范圍內(nèi)。愛是這個世界的共通語言。這幅圖畫的涵義很好理解：一個人所歷經(jīng)的日子愈困難，別人的幫助愈顯珍貴。希望工程是一個能證明愛對于我們至關(guān)重要的典型例子。在中國欠發(fā)達(dá)地區(qū)的許多孩子輟學(xué)以不拖累他們貧困的家庭。對于他們中的大部分人來說，離開學(xué)校之后他們的夢想也隨之破滅。他們中的相當(dāng)一部分人會去打工掙錢。這項(xiàng)旨在幫助他們繼續(xù)完成學(xué)業(yè)的工程受到了社會的極大關(guān)注。越來越多的人開始參與這項(xiàng)扶助事業(yè)之中。這個工程所帶來的足夠的資金支持和廣泛的社會關(guān)注，使得許多貧困地區(qū)的孩子返回校園。在我看來，最好的示愛方式是向任何一個亟需幫助的人伸出援助之手。愛所激發(fā)的能量是無窮的。我們渴望愛在我們心的每個角落熠熠閃光?！局攸c(diǎn)詞匯】aroundtheplanet:planet(n)意思為“行星”，常用來特指地球。aroundtheplanet即表示“在全世界范圍內(nèi)”。<e.g.>auniquemixofbackgroundsandculturesfromaroundtheplanet()-來自全球的背景和文化的獨(dú)特混合confine(vt):tokeepsomeoneorsomethingwithinthelimitsofaparticularactivityorsubject(Longman)-限制<usage>confinesthtosth-將某物局限于<e.g.>Immigrationproblemsaren'tconfinedtoU.S().-移民問題并不局限于美國（其他國家也有）。grasp(vt):tocompletelyunderstandafactoranidea,especiallyacomplicatedone(Longman)-完全理解burden(vt):toplaceaweightorburdenon(Webster)-使受負(fù)擔(dān)或重量<e.g.>Collegestudentsareburdenedwithhugetuitionfees.-大學(xué)生承受著巨額學(xué)費(fèi)的負(fù)擔(dān)。worthy(adj):tryingtohelpotherpeople(Longman)-努力幫助他人的<e.g.>Themoneywillgotoaworthycause.-這些錢將用于一項(xiàng)扶助事業(yè)。poverty-stricken:受貧困所困饒的-stricken表示受自然災(zāi)害襲擊的、受某事物糾纏困擾的。<e.g.>ReliefeffortshavebeenaimedatprovidingthenecessitiesforlocalresidentsinAnhui'sflood-strickenareas.-在安徽洪水受災(zāi)地區(qū)，救援工作瞄準(zhǔn)在提供生活必需品給當(dāng)?shù)鼐用裆?。further(vt):tohelpsomethingprogressorbesuccessful(Longman)-幫助某物進(jìn)步或成功<e.g.>Hededicatedhislifetofurtheringthecauseofworldpeace.-他為推動世界和平事業(yè)傾注全生。immeasurable(adj):usedtoemphasizethatsomethingistoobigortooextremetobemeasured(Longman)-不可估量的<e.g.>Therefugeeproblemhasnowreachedimmeasurableproportions.-難民問題（的嚴(yán)重性）已到達(dá)了不可估量的程度?！酒Z】久旱撒甘霖，暴雪送炭火雪中送炭遠(yuǎn)比錦上添花更具價值。我們應(yīng)該把自己在最困難的時候受到的些許幫助銘記為浩蕩之恩?！径鄻颖磉_(dá)】underdeveloped--poverty-stricken:欠發(fā)達(dá)的、貧窮的region--area:地區(qū)dropoutofschool--quitschool:輟學(xué)furtherone'sstudies--returntoschool:繼續(xù)完成學(xué)業(yè)--重返校園aconsiderablemajorityof--mostof:大部分attention--concern:關(guān)注【替換】同義、近義替換grasp->understand:理解aroundtheplanet->intheworld:在全球、全世界范圍內(nèi)<+>其他的表示同樣意思的用法有：aroundtheglobe/earth,globally；形容詞“全球的、國際的”單詞有：global/international/worldwideinmyeyes->inmyopinion:在我看來<+>其他的表示相近意思的用法有：inmyjudgment/inmyview/frommyperspectivefamiliesofloweconomicstatus->poorfamilies:經(jīng)濟(jì)貧困的家庭agrowingnumberof->moreandmore:越來越多的詞性替換in(desperate)needofsth->(desperately)needsth:（亟）需某物搭配替換furtherone'sstudy->continueone'sstudy:繼續(xù)學(xué)業(yè)【搭配】1.文中搭配形容詞+名詞broaddefinition:寬泛的定義commonlanguage:共通語言hiddenmeaning:暗含的意思hardtimes:困難時期classicexample:典型的例子crucialimportance:至關(guān)重要underdevelopedregion:欠發(fā)達(dá)地區(qū)economicstatus:經(jīng)濟(jì)地位、經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況considerablemajority:很大一部分migrantworker:民工greatattention:熱切的關(guān)注worthycause:扶助事業(yè)financialsupport:財政支持widespreadconcern:廣泛關(guān)注desperateneed:亟需immeasurablepower:不可估量的能量動詞+名詞graspthemeaning:掌握含義shatterone'sdream:粉碎某人的夢想quitschool:退學(xué)startacareer:開始工作furtherone'sstudy:繼續(xù)完成學(xué)業(yè)attractattention:吸引注意力expresslove:表達(dá)愛、示愛offerahand:伸出援助之手generatepower:發(fā)電、產(chǎn)生能量shinealight:發(fā)光、閃光名詞+介詞介詞+名詞importanceto:對...的重要性inone'seyes:在某人看來、某人的觀點(diǎn)是動詞+介詞confinesb/sthto:把…局限在某個范圍以內(nèi)resultfrom:因...而產(chǎn)生、發(fā)生2.補(bǔ)充搭配<1>attention動詞+名詞payone'sattentionto:關(guān)注directone'sattentionto/towards:關(guān)注concentrate/