進(jìn)階練19概要寫作（滿分范文）專練-新高考英語一輪總復(fù)習(xí)培優(yōu)全

進(jìn)階練19概要寫作（滿分范文）專練（解析版）學(xué)校:___________姓名：___________班級(jí)：___________考號(hào)：___________一、概要寫作1．（2023·上海靜安·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.SecondhandfashionstagesaebackFewfollowersoffashionwillforgetthemomentwhenasupermodelarrivedataNewYorkfashionweekdinner,wearinga1950sdress.Thenextday,ahuntforsomethingsimilarbegan.Thatwas2003.Fastforwardtothe2020sandsecondhandfashionisrenewinganewroundofcraze,andthistime,arguably,it’sbackforgood.Whensupermodelsanddesignerswerebuyingthingsatsecondhandmarketsandmatchingthemwithexpensivepieces,theactwasmorerelatedtotheoldidealofwhatfashionwas—verytrendbasedandveryseasonbased.Today,ordinarypeoplealwayswanttohavenewlooksbutthey’rebeingmoreawareoftheimpactoftheirchoicesontheenvironment,andthebestthingwecandointhisclimatecrisisistolimittheresourceswetakeoutoftheplanet.Secondhandfashionspeakstowhat’shappeningrightnow.Andtheworldisspeakingback.It’sestimatedthatthetotalresaleclothesmarketisexpectedtoriseinvaluefrom$96billionin2021to$141billionby2023.Morethan‘backforgood’,secondhandfashionlookssettobeethenewnorm.Theincreasedcraftsofrepairandupcyclingofferanothercontemporarydimensiontothetrend.There’sariseinyoungpeoplelookingatthingsthatalreadyexist,notonlytotakeinspirationfrom,butalsotouseasmaterialfornextstagecreation.Currentrepairandupcyclingskillsmaketheirwishareality.Evensocialmediaplatformsareonboard.“Onceyoustartfindingheatatthesecondhandfashionshop,itquicklyturnsintoanevergrowingaddiction.Eachpiecehashistorybehindit,”saidanonlinecelebritywith1.7millionfollowers.He,alongwithothercelebritiespostingvisitstoshopsofthiskind,haspushedupsales.Theirpowerinthefieldcan’tbeneglected._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Unlikeformerheat,todaysecondhandfashionisbackpermanently.paredwithfashionorientedprofessionals,ordinarypeopleturntosecondhandfashionoutofconsiderationforenvironmentprotection.Thehugemarketrisedemonstratesitspopularity.Theupgradedrepairandupcyclingcraftsmakefurthercreationpossible.Socialmediaalsostepin,withonlinecelebritiesinfluencingsalestoaddtothecraze.【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇說明文。文章介紹說，與過去不同的是，如今二手時(shí)尚永久回歸。相比于以時(shí)尚為導(dǎo)向的專業(yè)人士，普通人出于環(huán)保的考慮而選擇二手時(shí)尚。巨大的市場(chǎng)上漲表明了它的受歡迎程度。升級(jí)的維修和升級(jí)回收工藝使進(jìn)一步的創(chuàng)造成為可能。社交媒體也參與進(jìn)來，網(wǎng)紅影響銷量，助長(zhǎng)了這股熱潮?！驹斀狻?.要點(diǎn)摘錄①Fastforwardtothe2020sandsecondhandfashionisrenewinganewroundofcraze,andthistime,arguably,it’sbackforgood.②Whensupermodelsanddesignerswerebuyingthingsatsecondhandmarketsandmatchingthemwithexpensivepieces,theactwasmorerelatedtotheoldidealofwhatfashionwas—verytrendbasedandveryseasonbased.Today,ordinarypeoplealwayswanttohavenewlooksbutthey’rebeingmoreawareoftheimpactoftheirchoicesontheenvironment,andthebestthingwecandointhisclimatecrisisistolimittheresourceswetakeoutoftheplanet.Secondhandfashionspeakstowhat’shappeningrightnow.③Theincreasedcraftsofrepairandupcyclingofferanothercontemporarydimensiontothetrend.④Evensocialmediaplatformsareonboard.“Onceyoustartfindingheatatthesecondhandfashionshop,itquicklyturnsintoanevergrowingaddiction.Eachpiecehashistorybehindit,”saidanonlinecelebritywith1.7millionfollowers.He,alongwithothercelebritiespostingvisitstoshopsofthiskind,haspushedupsales.Theirpowerinthefieldcan’tbeneglected.2.縝密構(gòu)思將第1個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行總說，將第2、3、4三個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行分說。Unlikeformerheat,todaysecondhandfashionisgettingbackpermanently.paredwithfashionorientedprofessionals,monpeopleturntosecondhandfashionoutofconsiderationforenvironmentprotection.Thehugemarketrisedemonstratesitspopularity.Theupgradedrepairandupcyclingcraftsmakefurthercreationpossible.Socialmediaalsostepin,withonlinecelebritiesinfluencingsalestoaddtothecraze.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]paredwithfashionorientedprofessionals,ordinarypeopleturntosecondhandfashionoutofconsiderationforenvironmentprotection.運(yùn)用過去分詞作狀語對(duì)第二段進(jìn)行了概括。[高分句型2]Socialmediaalsostepin,withonlinecelebritiesinfluencingsalestoaddtothecraze.用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)對(duì)最后一段進(jìn)行了概括，表達(dá)非常高級(jí)。2．（2023·上海徐匯·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.IsBanningSingleusePlastictheRightOption?Theharmfuleffectsofusingplasticarebeingincreasinglyapparent.Plasticdoesnotdepose,butbreaksdownintosmallerandsmallerparticles.Itthreatensournatureaswellasourhealth.Onepopularsolutiontotheproblemistoprohibitsingleuseplastics.IntheUK,supermarketsarebeingencouragedtosetupplasticfreeaisles,inwhichthefoodisdisplayedloose,andshoppersareencouragedtomakemoreenvironmentallyfriendlychoicesinpackingandtransportingtheirfood.Suchplansarewellintentioned,butitmaynotbebeneficialtoeliminate(清除)theuseofsingleuseplasticaltogether.Oneofthefieldswheresingleuseplastichasavitalroleisthefoodindustry.Whenfoodorfreshgoodsarepackedinplastic,theyareprotectedandpreserved,helpingthemremainfresherandkeepingthemfromspoiling.Singleuseplasticisalsocrucialinthemedicalindustry.Thisisnotjustbecauseofitslowcost.Ithelpstopreventthespreadofinfectionandthatisthebiggestbenefitofthematerialinthemedicalfield.Replacingplasticwithothermaterialsisneithersimplenorstraightforward,mainlyduetothechallengeoffindinganalternativethatbinesallthemostdesirableplasticproperties.Forexample,glassproductsareapotentialalternative,butcleaningthemwouldbeextremelyexpensivewhileincreasingtherisktohealth.Anotherissueisthatalternativematerialstoplasticareoftenmoreenvironmentallyharmfulthanplastic.Takepaperbags,forexample.ResearchbytheNorthernIrelandAssemblyshowsfourtimesmoreenergyisrequiredtomanufactureapaperbagthanaplasticbag.Ifpeoplerespondbysimplyusingothermaterials,abanonsingleuseplasticcanendupmakingtheproblemworse.Clearlythereisaneedtoreduceplasticwasteanditsimpactontheenvironment.However,simplybanningtheirsingleusemaynotbethebestoption.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考答案Plasticwastecancausegreatharmtobothnatureandourhealth.Banningsingleuseplastic,althoughwellintentioned,isnotthebestsolution,becausesingleuseplasticiswidelyusedinfoodandmedicalindustrytoensuresafetyandsavemoney.Besides,thealternativematerialsmaynothavethedesirableproperties,andcancausemoreharmtotheenvironment.(57words)【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇說明文。文章介紹了塑料垃圾會(huì)對(duì)自然和我們的健康造成很大的危害。禁止使用一次性塑料，雖然是出于好意，但并不是最好的解決方案。替代材料可能沒有理想的性能，并可能對(duì)環(huán)境造成更大的危害。【詳解】1要點(diǎn)摘錄①Theharmfuleffectsofusingplasticarebeingincreasinglyapparent.Itthreatensournatureaswellasourhealth.②Onepopularsolutiontotheproblemistoprohibitsingleuseplastics.③Suchplansarewellintentioned,butitmaynotbebeneficialtoeliminate(清除)theuseofsingleuseplasticaltogether.④Oneofthefieldswheresingleuseplastichasavitalroleisthefoodindustry.Singleuseplasticisalsocrucialinthemedicalindustry.Thisisnotjustbecauseofitslowcost.⑤Ifpeoplerespondbysimplyusingothermaterials,abanonsingleuseplasticcanendupmakingtheproblemworse.⑥However,simplybanningtheirsingleusemaynotbethebestoption.2.縝密構(gòu)思將第1要點(diǎn)單獨(dú)概括，將2、3、4三個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重組，將第5、6兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整合。3.遣詞造句Plasticwastecancausegreatharmtobothnatureandourhealth.Banningsingleuseplastic,althoughwellintentioned,isnotthebestsolution,becausesingleuseplasticiswidelyusedinfoodandmedicalindustrytoensuresafetyandsavemoney.Besides,thealternativematerialsmaynothavethedesirableproperties,andcancausemoreharmtotheenvironment.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Banningsingleuseplastic,althoughwellintentioned,isnotthebestsolution,becausesingleuseplasticiswidelyusedinfoodandmedicalindustrytoensuresafetyandsavemoney.運(yùn)用一個(gè)復(fù)雜的主從復(fù)合句對(duì)原文第一段后半部分和第二段進(jìn)行了概括。其中省略的although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句和because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句表達(dá)非常高級(jí)。[高分句型2]：Besides,thealternativematerialsmaynothavethedesirableproperties,andcancausemoreharmtotheenvironment.用文章紐帶連接副詞Besides對(duì)第三段和第四段進(jìn)行了概括，運(yùn)用了并列連詞and連接謂語，表達(dá)高級(jí)。3．（2023·上?！ど虾Ｊ薪ㄆ街袑W(xué)?？既＃〥irections:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.MultitaskingAreyouamultitasker?DoyouwatchTVandcookdinneratthesametime?Doyouofteninterruptyourworktocheckyouremail?Doyoutalkonyourphonewhileyou’redriving?Ifyoudotheseorsimilarthings,thenyouareoneofmanymultitaskers.AccordingtoasurveybythemagazineScientificAmericanMIND,90percentofAmericanadultsmultitaskregularly.Mostpeoplesaytheymultitaskbecausetheyaretoobusy,andmultitaskingsavestime.Popularelectronicdevicesliketabletsandsmartphonesmakeitconvenienttodoseveraltasksatonce,sopeoplefeelliketheyaregettingmoredone.MelissaBrownofEvanston,Illinois,saysshehasnotroublelisteningtomusic,surfingtheInternet,andsendingtextmessagestofriendswhileshedoesherhomework.Recentstudies,however,showthatMelissaandotherslikeherareperhapsgettinglessdonethantheythinktheyare.That’sbecausewithmultitasking,thereareactuallymany“microinterruptions”inwhichpeoplestoponetask,startanother,andeventuallyreturntothefirstone.Thesestopsandstartsmakeitdifficulttoconcentrate,andsomultitaskersactuallywastetime,accordingtoastudyatMicrosoftCorporation.Inthestudy,workerswhointerruptedtheirworktoansweranemailortextmessagetookanaverageof15minutestoreturntotheworktheyweredoingbeforetheinterruption.Somepsychologistssaythatthehumanbrainjustisn’tgoodatconcentratingontwothingsatthesametime.Thisdoesn’tmatterifyou’reonlypreparingasaladandlisteningtotheradio,theysay.Butifyou’redoingadifficulttaskthatrequiresthinking,likewritingareport,thenmultitaskingcanslowyoudownandcausemistakes.Itcanevenbedangerous,asinthecaseofpeoplewhotalkonthephone,eat,orevenapplymakeupwhiledriving.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Multitaskinghasbeeapopularhabitmainlybecausetheyfeeltoobusyandmultitaskinghelpssavetime.However,studiesshowmultitaskingleadsto“microinterruptions,”makingitdifficulttoconcentrateandwastetime,causinglowproductivity.Moreover,ashumansarenotgoodatconcentratingontwothingssimultaneously,multitaskingcanmakepeopleslowatworkandcausemistakesanddangers.【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇說明文。文章介紹說，多任務(wù)處理已經(jīng)成為一種流行的習(xí)慣，主要是因?yàn)樗麄冇X得太忙了，而多任務(wù)處理有助于節(jié)省時(shí)間。然而，研究表明，多任務(wù)處理會(huì)導(dǎo)致“微干擾”，使人難以集中注意力，浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，導(dǎo)致效率低下。此外，由于人類不擅長(zhǎng)同時(shí)專注于兩件事，多任務(wù)處理會(huì)使人們工作速度變慢，并導(dǎo)致錯(cuò)誤和危險(xiǎn)?！驹斀狻?.要點(diǎn)摘錄①AccordingtoasurveybythemagazineScientificAmericanMIND,90percentofAmericanadultsmultitaskregularly.Mostpeoplesaytheymultitaskbecausetheyaretoobusy,andmultitaskingsavestime.②Thesestopsandstartsmakeitdifficulttoconcentrate,andsomultitaskersactuallywastetime,accordingtoastudyatMicrosoftCorporation.Inthestudy,workerswhointerruptedtheirworktoansweranemailortextmessagetookanaverageof15minutestoreturntotheworktheyweredoingbeforetheinterruption.③Somepsychologistssaythatthehumanbrainjustisn’tgoodatconcentratingontwothingsatthesametime.Thisdoesn’tmatterifyou’reonlypreparingasaladandlisteningtotheradio,theysay.Butifyou’redoingadifficulttaskthatrequiresthinking,likewritingareport,thenmultitaskingcanslowyoudownandcausemistakes.2.縝密構(gòu)思將第1個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行總說，將第2、3三個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行分說。Multitaskinghasbeeapopularhabitmainlysincetheyfeeltoooccupiedandmultitaskinghelpssavetime.Butstudiesshowmultitaskingcontributesto“microinterruptions,”makingithardtoconcentrateandwastetime,causinglowproductivity.Besides,ashumansarenotexpertatfocusingontwothingssimultaneously,multitaskingcanmakepeopleslowatworkandcausemistakesanddangers.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Multitaskinghasbeeapopularhabitmainlybecausetheyfeeltoobusyandmultitaskinghelpssavetime.運(yùn)用because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句原文第一段和第二段進(jìn)行了概括。[高分句型2]Butstudiesshowmultitaskingcontributesto“microinterruptions,”makingithardtoconcentrateandwastetime,causinglowproductivity.用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語對(duì)第三段進(jìn)行了概括，表達(dá)非常高級(jí)。4．（2023·上海浦東新·統(tǒng)考三模）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.KeepingtheKidsEatingHealthyFruitsandvegetablesaresuperimportantforkidstobeabletogrowuphealthyandstrong.Scienceremendsthatchildrenaged2to18getatleasttwoservingsoffruitandthreeservingsofvegetableseachday.Butgettingkidstoeattheirfruitsandvegetablesisofteneasiersaidthandone.Ifyouneedadditionalreasonstohelpyourkidsboosttheirintake,newresearchhasfoundthatstudentswhoeatmorefruitsandvegetablesmighthavebettermentalwellbeingthanthosewhoeatless.ArecentstudypublishedinBMJNutrition,PreventionandHealthlookedat9,000studentsfromacrosstheU.K.About7,500wereinsecondaryschool,and1,500wereinprimaryschool.Studentsselfreportedtheirdietandweregivenageappropriatetestsformentalwellbeingthatlookedathappiness,relaxationandhealthyinterpersonalrelationships.Thestudyfoundastrongassociationbetweeneatingmorefruitsandvegetablesandhighermentalwellbeingscores.However,onlyabout25percentofthestudentsmettheremendationofatleastfiveservingsofproduceaday.Anotherinterestingfindingconcernedbreakfast,anespeciallyimportantmealforschoolagekids,asitprovidesthefueltheyneedtolearnandfunctioningeneral.However,theresearchfoundthatmorethanoneinfivesecondaryschoolchildrenandonein10primaryschoolchildrendidn’tcatastandardbreakfastatall,andmanyjusthadasnackordrinkinplaceofameal.Thosewhohadafullbreakfasthadsignificantlybettermentalwellbeingscoresthanthosewhoskippedthemorningmeal.Inshort,thefindingssuggestthateatingahealthydietthatincludesafullbreakfastandatleastfiveservingsoffruitsandvegetablesadayleadstothebestmentalhealthoutesforchildren.Unfortunately,manystudentssurveyedweremissingthemarkwitheitherfruitsandvegetables,breakfast,orboth.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Fruitsandvegetablesareessentialtokids’growth,butitisdifficulttogetthemtoeat.Newresearchfindshigherintakeoffruitsandvegetablesandafullbreakfastbeneficialtoschoolchildren’smentalwellbeing.Despiteresearchers’advicetocatahealthydiet,manychildrenfailtoconsumetheremendedquantityoffruitsorbreakfast.(55words)【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇說明文。文章介紹說，水果和蔬菜對(duì)孩子的成長(zhǎng)是必不可少的，但很難讓他們吃。一項(xiàng)新研究發(fā)現(xiàn)，多吃水果和蔬菜以及豐盛的早餐有利于學(xué)童的心理健康。盡管研究人員建議保持健康飲食，但許多兒童沒有攝入推薦量的水果或早餐。【詳解】1要點(diǎn)摘錄①Fruitsandvegetablesaresuperimportantforkidstobeabletogrowuphealthyandstrong.

②Butgettingkidstoeattheirfruitsandvegetablesisofteneasiersaidthandone.③Thestudyfoundastrongassociationbetweeneatingmorefruitsandvegetablesandhighermentalwellbeingscores.④Inshort,thefindingssuggestthateatingahealthydietthatincludesafullbreakfastandatleastfiveservingsoffruitsandvegetablesadayleadstothebestmentalhealthoutesforchildren.⑤Unfortunately,manystudentssurveyedweremissingthemarkwitheitherfruitsandvegetables,breakfast,orboth.將第1、2和4、5幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重組，將第3要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整合。Fruitsandvegetablesareessentialforthegrowthofchildren,butitishardtoletthemeat.Eatingmorefruitandvegetablesandaheartybreakfastisgoodforthementalhealthofschoolchildren,anewstudyhasfound.Althoughresearchersremendmaintainingahealthydiet,manychildrendonotconsumetheremendedamountoffruitorbreakfast.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Fruitsandvegetablesareessentialtokids’growth,butitisdifficulttogetthemtoeat.(運(yùn)用it作形式主語，真正主語為不定式的結(jié)構(gòu))[高分句型2]Newresearchfindshigherintakeoffruitsandvegetablesandafullbreakfastbeneficialtoschoolchildren’smentalwellbeing.(運(yùn)用了“find+賓語+賓補(bǔ)”結(jié)構(gòu))5．（2023春·上海楊浦·高三同濟(jì)大學(xué)第一附屬中學(xué)?？茧A段練習(xí)）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizeinnomorethan60wordsthemainideaofthepassageandhowitisillustrated.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.LearningtowriteeffectivelyI’vebeenwritingformostofmylife.ThebookWritingWithoutTeachersintroducedmetoonedistinctionandonepracticethathashelpedmywritingprocessestremendously.Thedistinctionisbetweenthecreativemindandthecriticalmind.Whileyouneedtoemploybothtogettoafinishedresult,theycannotworkinparallelnomatterhowmuchwemightliketothinkso.Tryingtocriticizewritingontheflyispossiblythesinglegreatestbarriertowritingthatmostofusencounter.Ifyouarelisteningtothat5thgradeEnglishteachercorrectyourgrammarwhileyouaretryingtocaptureafleeting(lastingonlyashorttime)thought,thethoughtwilldie.Ifyoucapturethefleetingthoughtandsimplyshareitwiththeworldinrawform,nooneislikelytounderstand.ThepracticethatcanhelpyoupastyourlearnedbadhabitsoftryingtoeditasyouwriteiswhatElbowcalls“freewriting.”Infreewriting,theobjectiveistogetwordsdownonpapernonstop,usuallyfor1520minutes.Nostopping,nogoingback,nocriticizing.Thegoalistogetthewordsflowing.Asthewordsbegintoflow,theideaswillefromtheshadowsandletthemselvesbecapturedonyournotepadoryourscreen.Nowyouhaverawmaterialsthatyoucanbegintoworkwithusingthecriticalmindthatyou’vepersuadedtositonthesideandwatchquietly.Mostlikely,youwillbelievethatthiswilltakemoretimethanyouactuallyhaveandyouwillendupstaringblanklyatthepagesasthedeadlinedrawsnear.Insteadofstaringatablank,startfillingitwithwordsnomatterhowbad.Halfwaythroughyouravailabletime,stopandreworkyourrawwritingintosomethingclosertofinishedproduct.Movebackandforthuntilyourunoutoftimeandthefinalresultwillmostlikelybefarbetterthanyourcurrentpractices.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Howcanyoubeeaneffectivewriter?ThebookWritingWithoutTeachersadvisesthatyoushouldseparatecreativewritingfromcriticalwriting.Mixingthetwomeanseitherkillingbrilliantideasorpresentingsomethinginprehensible.Toacquiretheskill,takedownyourthoughtsfreelytocaptureideasandkeeprevisingyourwritinguntilitbeesagoodpiece.【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇說明文。文章介紹了如果你想要成為一名有效的作家，《沒有老師的寫作》一書建議你應(yīng)該把創(chuàng)造性寫作和批判性寫作分開。為了獲得這項(xiàng)技能，你可以通過自由地記下你的想法來捕捉想法，并不斷修改你的寫作，直到它成為一篇好文章。①ThebookWritingWithoutTeachersintroducedmetoonedistinctionandonepracticethathashelpedmywritingprocessestremendously.②Tryingtocriticizewritingontheflyispossiblythesinglegreatestbarriertowriting.③Thepracticethatcanhelpyoupastyourlearnedbadhabitsoftryingtoeditasyouwriteiscalled“freewriting.”④Whenyouhaverawmaterialsusingthecriticalmindandwatchquietly,youwillendupstaringblanklyatthepagesasthedeadlinedrawsnear.⑤Halfwaythroughyouravailabletime,reworkyourrawwritingintosomethingclosertofinishedproduct.2.縝密構(gòu)思將第2、3兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整合，將第4、5兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整合。3.遣詞造句Itislikelythatyouwillbelievethiswilltakemoretimethanyouactuallyhaveandyouwillendupstaringblanklyatthepagesasthedeadlinedrawsnear.Throughthehalfavailabletime,youcanstopandreworkyourrawwritingintosomethingclosertofinishedproduct.Ifthefleetingthoughtcanbecapturedandsimplybesharedwiththeworldinrawform,nooneislikelytounderstand.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]：ThebookWritingWithoutTeachersintroducedmetoonedistinctionandonepracticethathashelpedmywritingprocessestremendously.運(yùn)用一個(gè)復(fù)雜的主從復(fù)合句對(duì)原文第一段內(nèi)容進(jìn)行了概括。其中that引導(dǎo)的定語從句表達(dá)高級(jí)。[高分句型2]：Ifyouarelisteningtothat5thgradeEnglishteachercorrectyourgrammarwhileyouaretryingtocaptureafleeting(lastingonlyashorttime)thought,thethoughtwilldie.運(yùn)用if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句和while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句對(duì)第二段主題進(jìn)行了舉例說明。表達(dá)非常高級(jí)。6．（2023·上?！つ涎笾袑W(xué)校考三模）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.TheCrucialRoleofEarlyChildhoodEnvironmentTheenvironmentweareinaffectsourmoods,abilitytoformrelationships,effectivenessinworkorplay—evenourhealth.Inaddition,theearlychildhoodenvironmenthasaverycrucialroleinchildren’slearninganddevelopmentfortwoimportantreasons.First,youngchildrenareintheprocessofrapidbraindevelopment.Intheearlyyears,thebraindevelopsmoresynapses(神經(jīng)元的突觸)orconnectionsthanitcanpossiblyuse.Thosethatareusedbythechildformstrongconnections,whilethesynapsesthatarenotusedgraduallydisappear.Children’sexperienceshelptomakethisdetermination.TheNationalScientificCounciloftheDevelopingChildparesthedevelopmentofthebraintoconstructingahouse,stating,“Justasalackoftherightmaterialscanresultinblueprintsthatchange,thelackofappropriateexperiencescanleadtoalterationsingeneticplans.”Becausechildren’sexperiencesarelimitedbytheirsurroundings,theenvironmentweprovideforthemhasacrucialimpactonthewaythechild’sbraindevelops.Thesecondreasonthattheearlychildhoodenvironmenthassuchastrongroleinchildren’sdevelopmentisbecauseoftheamountoftimechildrenspendintheseenvironments.Manychildrenspendalargeportionoftheirwakefulhoursinearlychildhoodsetting.Forexample,ababybeginningchildcarewillspendupto12,000hoursintheprogram.Thisismoretimethanhewillspendinbothelementaryandsecondaryschools.Childrenwilltypicallyspendanother4,000hoursinkindergartenthroughthirdgradeclassrooms.AnitaRuiOlds,awellknownenvironmentaldesigner,believesthatweshoulddesignourearlychildhoodenvironmentsformiracles,notminimums.Shestates:“Childrenaremiracles.Believingthateverychildisamiraclecantransformthewaywedesignforchildren’scare.Whenweinviteamiracleintoourlives,weprepareourselvesandtheenvironmentaroundus.Wemakeitourjobtocreate,withgreatrespectandgratitude,aspacethatisworthyofamiracle!_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Therearetworeasonswhychildren’slearninganddevelopmentdependontheearlychildhoodenvironment.First,theenvironmentwherechildrengettheirexperiencesdeterminesthewayofchildren’sbraindevelopment.Second,paredtootherperiods,childrenspendmoretimeinearlychildhoodsettings.Soabetterearlychildhoodenvironmentshouldbesetforchildren’sbraindevelopment.【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇說明文。文章主要講述幼兒環(huán)境對(duì)兒童的學(xué)習(xí)和發(fā)展有著非常關(guān)鍵的兩方面的作用?！驹斀狻?要點(diǎn)摘錄①Inaddition,theearlychildhoodenvironmenthasaverycrucialroleinchildren’slearninganddevelopmentfortwoimportantreasons.②First,youngchildrenareintheprocessofrapidbraindevelopment.③Thesecondreasonthattheearlychildhoodenvironmenthassuchastrongroleinchildren’sdevelopmentisbecauseoftheamountoftimechildrenspendintheseenvironments.④Whenweinviteamiracleintoourlives,weprepareourselvesandtheenvironmentaroundus.Wemakeitourjobtocreate,withgreatrespectandgratitude,aspacethatisworthyofamiracle!2.縝密構(gòu)思全文是“總分總”的結(jié)構(gòu)。以上四句話分別描述每一段的主旨大意，因此概括全文內(nèi)容可以使用它們的組合。3.遣詞造句①Becausechildren’sdevelopmentsarecreatedbyeducation,theenvironmentweprovideforthemhasacrucialimpactonthem.②Manypeoplespendalargeportionoftheirwakefulhoursinplayingmobilephones.③Believingthateveryeffortwillcreateamirac