高中英語(yǔ)作文技巧

學(xué)生：老師，我請(qǐng)假。老師：why?學(xué)生：我暈課，尤其是寫(xiě)作課，上作文課我就頭疼。2021/5/91Badsample卷面不整潔;涂改較多;語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多;層次不清;得10分samplesofstudentwork2021/5/92progresswell∧widenedare詞匯有錯(cuò)誤;卷面有涂改;得19分.samplesofstudentworkroadsMyhometownisbecomingmoreandmore2021/5/93詞匯,句型,語(yǔ)法多樣化

1.覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)

2.應(yīng)用高級(jí)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯

3.有效地使用句子間的連接成分，使結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊

4.書(shū)面干凈整潔要點(diǎn)全連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？2021/5/94

技巧2.使用較高級(jí)的詞匯4.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞詞匯是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。生動(dòng)活潑，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。增強(qiáng)書(shū)面表達(dá)效果的技巧3.使用較豐富的句式1.漂亮的書(shū)寫(xiě)形象面子工程的作用2021/5/95漂亮的書(shū)寫(xiě)是寫(xiě)作得分的亮點(diǎn)影響給分的因素之一：作文的卷面2021/5/96Whichcompositionfeelsmoreattractive,why?2021/5/97影響給分的因素之二：

文中所采用的語(yǔ)言材料人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝A.詞匯的選擇靈活新穎，出奇制勝；2021/5/981.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(幸虧…)2.Ithinkyou’dbetteraskwhatyoudon’tunderstand.

3.Luxunisnotonlyawriter,butalsoathinker.

Thankstothegoodweather,

ourjourneywascomfortable.I.怎樣使用較高級(jí)的詞匯AsfarasI’mconcerned,

you’dbetteraskwhatyoudon’tunderstand.Thereisnodoubtthat

Luxunisnotonlyawriter,butalsoathinker.感情細(xì)膩，表現(xiàn)恰當(dāng)2021/5/99B.句型結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用靈活多變,增加文章的魅力2021/5/910Inordertomyparents,Ishouldmakefulluseofeveryminutetostudywhatmyteachertaught.2)

我很樂(lè)意和你分享我是怎樣學(xué)英語(yǔ)的I’mgladtosharewithyouhowIlearnEnglish.I’mgladtosharewithyoutheway_______IlearnEnglish*語(yǔ)法，句法高分tipsinwhich

定語(yǔ)從句Inordertomakemyparentshappy

賓語(yǔ)從句2021/5/911E.恰當(dāng)使用特殊句式，增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)句表現(xiàn)力ＩＴ句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句型，省略句，感嘆句等將下列句子轉(zhuǎn)換：1.Ididn’trealizethemistakeuntilIgrowup.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句）2.Wecanmakegreatachievementsonlybyworkinghard.（倒裝句）3.Lastbutnotleast,enjoyingsomeEnglishwebsitesishelpfultous.(it)Itwas

notuntilIgrowup

thatIrealizedthemistake．OnlybyworkinghardcanwemakegreatachievementsLastbutnotleast,itishelpfultoenjoysomeEnglishwebsites.2021/5/912影響給分的因素之三：行文的流暢

上下貫通、一氣呵成正確而巧妙地使用好連接詞2021/5/913and,also,besides,morever,what'smorefurthermore,inaddition…1.表遞進(jìn)２.表轉(zhuǎn)折３.表因果４.表目的５.表總結(jié)but,however,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,inspiteof,despite…because,since,therefore,so,thus,

asaresult/consequence,onaccountof...inorderthat,sothat,forthepurposeof...inbrief,inshort,inaword,inconclusion,onthewhole...AsfarasI’mconcerned,2021/5/9142021/5/915Ifyouaretheteacher

假定你是李華,你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況并希望你簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)回信。要點(diǎn):

1.我學(xué)英語(yǔ)已經(jīng)六年了，在老師和同學(xué)們的幫助下取得了一些進(jìn)步；2.但是總覺(jué)得英語(yǔ)難學(xué)，尤其是英語(yǔ)中的一些習(xí)慣用法；3.今后一定要努力學(xué)習(xí)這門(mén)有用的外語(yǔ)，爭(zhēng)取能用流利的英語(yǔ)和你寫(xiě)信；4.我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生很大的變化，蓋起了許多高樓，拓寬了道路，變得越來(lái)越漂亮和現(xiàn)代化；5.如果有時(shí)間可以到中國(guó)來(lái)，我會(huì)帶領(lǐng)你參觀我的家鄉(xiāng)。2021/5/916最近在武安市高三年級(jí)學(xué)生中就市政府“拆違”展開(kāi)了一場(chǎng)討論，請(qǐng)你就下表提供的信息給市長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。約70％的學(xué)生認(rèn)為：1．應(yīng)該拆除違法搭建；

2．違法建筑占用綠化帶并常堵塞交通；

3．大多數(shù)違法建筑陳舊過(guò)時(shí)，既破壞城市的美，又存在安全隱患。約30％的學(xué)生認(rèn)為：1．不宜全部拆除；

2．許多違法建筑系下崗職工所建，以便經(jīng)營(yíng)一些小生意以養(yǎng)家糊口；

3．拆違會(huì)使一部分人失去謀生手段。WritingHomework2021/5/917注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右(不包括已給出部分)；2．文章應(yīng)包括題中所給的主要信息?？蛇m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好。參考詞匯：綠化帶：greenbelt安全隱患：hiddendangerDearMayor,I'mastudentofSeniorThree.I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetherthecitygovernmentshoulddemolishillegalbuildings.Opinionsbetweenusaredivided.______________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes2021/5/918theillegalbuildingstakenupblockedthetrafficoutofdatebreaksthebeautyofthecityexistssomehiddendangersBrainstormingSupport:Notsupport:outofjobrunsomesmallbusinessMakealiving/supportone’sfamilypulldownthesebuildings2021/5/919影響書(shū)面表達(dá)得分的因素：“大錯(cuò)誤”包括時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤、句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤、中式英語(yǔ)等，如：Myhometownhadbigchange,buildmanyhouses,……Myhometownhasgreatchanges.

◆語(yǔ)言表達(dá)出現(xiàn)“大錯(cuò)誤”及“小錯(cuò)誤”

→Greatchangeshadtakenplaceinmyhometownthere.Forexample,manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.2021/5/9203.IfyougettoChinathathavetime,mewithyoulookmyhometown.

4.Iwillwelcometoyou.

◆“小錯(cuò)誤”主要是反應(yīng)在個(gè)別單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、冠詞介詞使用不準(zhǔn)確等方面,如：

Undermyteacherandclassmatesallhelptome,…….

→Ihopeyou’llgetachancetocometoChinaandI’llshowyouaroundmyhometownifyouarefree.→WelcometoChina.→Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,……2021/5/921◆沒(méi)有使用高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句1.Iwillvisitmyhometownwithyou.2.Ifyouhavetime,Iwilltakeyoutotravelaroundmyhometown.→Iwillshowyouaroundmyhometownifyouarefree.2021/5/922◆書(shū)寫(xiě)是否工整清晰也會(huì)影響答卷得分。卷面不整潔，涂改多；大小寫(xiě);標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào);書(shū)寫(xiě)不清，得分會(huì)很低！2021/5/923◆審題不認(rèn)真，要點(diǎn)有所遺漏1.徹底理解題意，看準(zhǔn)答題要求（包括字?jǐn)?shù)要求）。2.把內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)在稿紙上列成提綱。3.連詞成句，連句成文。4.成文后認(rèn)真檢查，確信無(wú)一遺漏。注意：2021/5/924★完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。

★應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。

★

語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面有些錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。

★有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分最高標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（第五檔21---25分）2021/5/925Onepossibleversion:

June8,2008

DearPeter,

I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.

ItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadesomeprogressinEnglish.HoweverIstillfindEnglishhardtolearn,suchassomedifficultidiomswhichmademeconfused.Nomatterhowharditis,Ihavemadeupmymindtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork.2021/5/926NotlongagoIreturnedtomyhometownandfoundgreatchangeshadtakenplacethere.Manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.Myhometownisgettingmodernandmoreandmorebeautiful.IhopeifyouhaveachancetocometoChinaandI’llshowyouaroundmyhometownwhenyouareonleave.

Bestwishes,

LiHua2021/5/927MySuggestions:1.beautifulwordsandexpressions2.propersentencestructures3.connectionsbetweensentences4.propercomplexsentences5.writingmodels2021/5/928Sixstepsforwriting(寫(xiě)作六步驟）

1.

Cross-question(審題)※

Mainidea※Style※

Verbtense※Person2.Seizethemajorpoints/keywords(抓要點(diǎn))3.Arrangement(布局)！4.Sentencesconnection(連句)Words/phrasesSentences6.

Errorcorrecting(查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò))5.Expressyouropinion

(發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）Conjunctions/conjunctiveadverbssentencespassage2021/5/929DearSmithLiHuaYours22

Iwassopleasedtohearfromyouandamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool.You’reright.Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplaceinourschool.Ononesideoftheroadisanewteachingbuilding;

Ontheotherside,where

theplaygroundusedtobe,

standsanothernewbuilding-ourlibrary.Theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandroundtheschool.Ihopethatyouwillbeabletoreturnandseethechangesforyourselfsomeday.Bestwishes,2021/5/930

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。

June8,2008

DearPeter,

I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.………….2021/5/931字?jǐn)?shù)不夠或未能傳達(dá)讀者任何信息，不得分。

samplesofstudentwork2021/5/932readandwritefindithard

fluentEnglishtowriteGreatchanges

roads

hadtakenplaceinmyhometownbuildingswidenedItwillbewonderfulwhen

youcometoChinaifyouarefreeshowyouaroundIwillbegladto語(yǔ)言不地道;中文式思維;語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，得分13分samplesofstudentwork2021/5/933learnoftheteachersandmyprogressreadandwriteithardtolearnhardwork.writelettersinfluentEnglishfoundhadbecomeWelcometoChinaifyouhavetimeshowyouaround語(yǔ)言素質(zhì)較好;基本功不差;語(yǔ)句仍有毛??；得15分.samplesofstudentwork2021/5/934PracticeFindsomesimilarwordsorphrasesofthefollowingsgood2.think3.cleverperfect

excellentoutstandingpleasantwonderfulfavorablemagnificent

inone'sopinion/viewholdtheviewthat…itiswidelysharedthat…

wisebrightsmartintelligentcute2021/5/935III.常用的連接詞1.

表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容

另外，還有：2.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系

但是，然而，相反：

what’smore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition

but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;

onthecontrary.2021/5/9363.表示因果關(guān)系

因?yàn)椋虼?，所?4.表示條件關(guān)系

如果，只要:

除非:

否則:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;if;oncondition(that);aslongasunless

orelse2021/5/937

5.表示時(shí)間關(guān)系當(dāng)…的時(shí)候

:

when;while

在…之后:

after

在…之前:

before

直到:

until

直到…才…:

not……until……

一…就…:

assoonas

后來(lái)，然后:

later;

afterwards

不久:

soon

近來(lái):

lately;

recently

自從…:since

從那時(shí)起:

fromthenon2021/5/9386.表示特定的順序關(guān)系

首先:firstly

最主要的:

aboveall

其次:

secondly

然后:

then;next

最后:

finally;intheend7.換一種方法表述

換句話說(shuō):

inotherwords;thatistosay;

2021/5/9398.進(jìn)行舉例說(shuō)明

例如，比如:9.用于陳述事實(shí)

forinstance;forexample;like;suchasthatistosay,namely,actually,andsoon,believeitornot,

totellyouthetruth,forthisreason實(shí)際上:

infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你說(shuō)實(shí)話:

totellyouthetruth2021/5/94010.

對(duì)一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié)

總而言之，總的來(lái)說(shuō):

onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword,finally,inconclusion,generallyspeaking,asyouknow,intheend,其它常用到的副詞

therefore;otherwise;finally;

furthermore;thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;2021/5/94112.

表示結(jié)果：

thus,therefore,so,asaresult,seeingthat,luckily,unfortunately

13.表示強(qiáng)調(diào)：

aboveall,indeed,surely,certainly,ofcourse,afterall,withoutanydelay,atleast,atmost,mostimportant,undoubtedly2021/5/9426.表示特定的順序關(guān)系

首先:firstly

最主要的:

aboveall

其次:

secondly

然后:

then;next

最后:

finally;intheend7.換一種方法表述

換句話說(shuō):

inotherwords;thatistosay;

2021/5/943II.豐富的句式：(常用到的句型結(jié)構(gòu)）利用不同的句型來(lái)表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思，能增加文章的文采。

HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!

Itwasthisyoungboywho

helpedtheoldgranny.

Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.

Theyreadwhilewalkingor

ridingonabus.

1.感嘆句2.強(qiáng)調(diào)句3.倒裝句4.省略句2021/5/944

Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.

Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.

That’swhatIshoulddo.

Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.

5、with短語(yǔ)6、定語(yǔ)從句7、各種名詞性從句8、各種狀語(yǔ)從句2021/5/945

聯(lián)合國(guó)教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在我國(guó)某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡(jiǎn)要介紹這個(gè)村的情況：1)大?。航?00戶人家，約500口人。2)變化：過(guò)去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?，F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。3)教育：原來(lái)的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過(guò)改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。注意：1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。

2）詞數(shù)：100-120之間。PracticeLadiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.2021/5/946Ladiesandgentlemen,