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40分寫作規(guī)范練(六)寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分40分)第一節(jié)(滿分15分)[2024·浙江省杭州市高三一模]假定你是某國際學校學生李華，你的愛爾蘭筆友Kelly對你提到的學?！岸嘣幕铡?MulticulturalDay)活動很感愛好。請回信告知他關于該活動的相關信息。內(nèi)容包括：1．活動時間；2．活動目的和內(nèi)容。留意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；2．可以適當增加微小環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________其次節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，依據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Eggs,bacon,bagels,andcroissants(羊角面包)—herfavouritemealofthedaysatrightinfrontofhertellinghertohavemore,probablyjustthisoneday.Herhandreachedoutforthelastcroissant.“STOP，”saidhermind;“PLEASE，”beggedthenineteen-year-oldheart.Anniecouldfeelthetyresaroundherwaist,weighingherdown,emotionallyandphysically.Shepulledherhandback,eyeingtheinvitingcroissant,whichwouldhavebeenhers,ifonlyshehadnotdecidedtofollowherdream,adreamwhichseemedbeyondherreach.Butthereshewas.Shewantedit,andwanteditbadly,afantasyofateenagertofitintothebeautifulpeacockblueswimsuit.Atriphadbeenplanned,tothesunnybeaches,byagroupoffriends,andthetripincludedher.Sheusedtositdepressedly,listeningtoherslimfriendsdiscussaboutthekindofclothestheypurchased,andhowsmarteachoftheirskirtswas,andhowbeautifultheylooked.Shewantedtoseetheirexpressionschangefromsurprisetoadmiration,soshedecidedtogoonadietandtakefitnesscourses.Weekspassed,andherpatiencestartedtodieaway.Thefatwasstubbornandrefusedtomeltfast,butthetimewentfast.Nomatterhowlesssheate,shestilllookedawfullyplump(胖乎乎的),whichannoyedher,andshewasreadytocallitquits.Shesatonherbedandwepttheentireevening,ignoringherdinner.Hertearsdriedup,andshelaydownonherbedstaringattheceiling,lettingrandomthoughtspassthroughhermind.Thensheheardtwowomentalkingoutsideherwindow.Sheheardonewomansaying,“Mychildisspecial,andeverychildisagift.Itdoesn'tmatterwhat'sontheoutside,andtheinnerselfiswhatmatters.”留意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2．請按如下格式作答。Curious,Anniegotupandlookedoutofherwindow.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Annieturnedhereyesawayfromthesceneandsawherownfigureinthemirror.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________40分寫作規(guī)范練(六)第一節(jié)答案：DearKelly，KnowingthatyouareinterestedinMulticulturalDayofourschool,Iamwritingtointroduceittoyou.Itisdesignedtoincreasethestudents'understandingofdifferentculturesallovertheworld.WecelebrateitonJuly1steveryyear,whenweorganizeavarietyofactivitiessuchasdanceperformances,exhibitionsandfashionshowsandsoon.Itisthroughtheseactivitiesthatwecanhaveadeeperunderstandingofdifferentculturesaroundtheworld.Forexample,duringthedanceperformance,wecanenjoydancesperformedbystudentsfromdifferentcountries.Yours，LiHua其次節(jié)【語篇解讀】本文以人物為線索綻開，講解并描述了安妮對自己的身材不滿足，始終幻想著減肥之后去沙灘穿美麗的泳衣，但是一位女士的話激起了安妮的新奇 心。這位女士認為，每個孩子都很特殊，是一份饋贈，并且真正的美不在于外表，而在于心靈。解析：1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“安妮新奇 地起身，看著窗外”可知，第一段可描寫窗外的場景。②由其次段首句內(nèi)容“安妮把視線從這個場景移開，在鏡子里看到了自己的身影”可知，其次段可描寫安妮看到自己豐潤的體態(tài)，最終感悟到女孩真正的美不在于外表。2．續(xù)寫線索：觀看——互動——微笑——照鏡子——回憶——感悟答案：Curious,Anniegotupandlookedoutofherwindow.There,sittingbythewoman'sfeet,wasaboyplayingwithaRubik'sCube,hisfacetwistingwitheachturnofthecubeandhiseyesfixedonthecolourfulobject.Despitehisplainface,therewassomethingangelicaboutthisboywhenheshowedhismotherthefinishedcube.Themothersmiledathimasifhehadbeenthemosthandsomeboyintheworld.Annieturnedhereyesawayfromthesceneandsawherownfigureinthemirror.Yes,shewasplumpandherfacewaschubby.Butshewashealthyandherskinwasrosy.Withlovingstarryeyesandcurlyhair,shelookedalmostlikesomeladyfromaclassicportrait.MumoncesaidwhensheplayedBeethovenonthepianoinherpurpledre