讀后續(xù)寫+馬背上的抉擇：勝利與友誼的考驗 講義 高二下學(xué)期6月期末英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文?！癉oyouthinkyoucanwinthiscompetition,Caroline?”MrsWinterbottomaskedherdaughter.“Idon'tknow,mum.ButIwilldomybest.”

“Iknow,mydear.Justrememberthatyourfatherpaysalotofmoneyforthehorse.Alotofmoneyforthestables(養(yǎng)馬場).Andalotofmoneyfortheridingclub.”“Iknow,mum,Iknow.I'lldomybest.Ireallywill.”Carolinealwaysdidherbest,butitwasneverenough.Shewasagoodrider,andherhorseApplewindwasagreathorse.Andshenevermissedacompetition.ButSophieCraigwasalwaysbetterthanher.Sophiewonalloftheshowjumpingcompetitions,andSophie'shorseBlossomwaseverybody'sdarling.EveryonelovedSophieandBlossom.“Ifyoureallywanttowin,youwillwin”,Caroline'sdadsaid.Hesaidthesamethingbeforeeverycompetition.“Lifeisaboutwinning.Youhavetolearnthat,Caroline!”Carolinesighed.“Dad,”shesaid.“Iwanttowin,too.ButSophieistoogood.”“Youhavetobebetterthanher,”MrWinterbottomsaid.”Ifyoudon'twin,Caroline,I'llsellyourhorse.Notrophy(獎杯),nohorse!”Withthenextcompetitiondrawingnear,Carolinetrainedevenharder.“What'sthematter,Caroline?Youlookunhappy.”ItwasSophie,Caroline'sstrongrivalaswellasclosefriend.“Dadsaidthathe'llsellApplewindifIdon'twinthenextcompetition.”SophieknewclearlywhatthatwouldmeantoCaroline.Afterall,theysharedthesamehobby,andtheywentthroughmanycompetitionstogether.IfshehadtoquitridingandleaveBlossom,shecouldn'timagine,oreventhinkaboutsuchascene.PoorCaroline.PoorApplewind.“You’llwin,Caroline.Everythingwillbefine.”Sophiegaveherafirmhug.Thedayofthecompetitionsooncame.Carolineknewshewasgoingtoloseagain.AndthenherdadwouldsellApplewind.Carolinewantedtocry,butshehadtobebrave.“Areyounervous,too?”CarolinewhisperedintoApplewind'sear.“Wemustwinthecompetitiontoday.Let'sgoandgetready!”注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thecompetitionstarted.“ButhowcouldSophiefalloffthehorseback?”Carolinewondered.故事梗概：本文講述了CarolineWinterbottom與她的愛馬Applewind參加一場重要的馬術(shù)比賽。她的父親對她施加了巨大壓力，要求她必須贏得比賽，否則將賣掉Applewind。Caroline雖然技術(shù)精湛，但總是輸給技藝超群的SophieCraig。在比賽當(dāng)天，Caroline意外地看到Sophie落馬，這讓她感到震驚。盡管內(nèi)心擔(dān)憂，Caroline仍需集中精力完成自己的比賽。最終，她在沒有父親期望的獎杯下，體會到了勝利的喜悅和對朋友的同情。伏筆：Caroline的父親對她施加壓力，如果她不贏得比賽，就會賣掉她的馬Applewind。Sophie是Caroline的強勁對手，但同時也是她的親密朋友，她知道如果Caroline失去她的馬意味著什么?；貞?yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，Caroline在比賽中意外領(lǐng)先，因為Sophie意外地從馬上摔了下來，這是對父親壓力的直接回應(yīng)，也是Caroline可能贏得比賽的轉(zhuǎn)折點。Caroline對Sophie的擔(dān)憂和關(guān)心體現(xiàn)了她對朋友的同情，盡管她處于領(lǐng)先地位，但她的第一反應(yīng)是關(guān)心Sophie的安危，這與她父親只關(guān)注勝利的態(tài)度形成了鮮明對比。通過這些伏筆和回應(yīng)，故事展現(xiàn)了Caroline內(nèi)心的掙扎和成長，以及她對勝利和友情的不同看法。續(xù)寫包含的重要情節(jié)點：比賽開始：描述比賽的緊張氣氛和Caroline的心理狀態(tài)，展現(xiàn)她的決心和對勝利的渴望。Sophie的意外：Sophie在比賽中意外落馬，這一轉(zhuǎn)折點不僅影響了比賽的結(jié)果，也對Caroline產(chǎn)生了情感上的沖擊。Caroline的內(nèi)心沖突：Caroline在看到Sophie落馬后，內(nèi)心經(jīng)歷了掙扎，她需要在關(guān)心朋友和追求勝利之間做出選擇。比賽的完成：Caroline決定繼續(xù)比賽，并以出色的表現(xiàn)完成自己的賽程，這一行為展示了她的專注和決心。對Sophie的關(guān)心：比賽結(jié)束后，Caroline立即關(guān)心Sophie的狀況，體現(xiàn)了她對朋友的同情和關(guān)懷。父親的反應(yīng)：故事應(yīng)該展現(xiàn)Caroline的父親對于比賽結(jié)果的反應(yīng)，特別是當(dāng)Caroline可能贏得比賽時，他是否會改變賣掉Applewind的決定。情感的解決：故事應(yīng)該有一個情感上的解決，無論是Caroline如何處理與父親的關(guān)系，還是她與Sophie之間的友情如何得到加強。主題的體現(xiàn)：續(xù)寫應(yīng)該強化故事的主題，比如勝利、友情、家庭壓力和個人成長等。主題：競爭與壓力：Caroline面臨的來自父親的壓力，要求她在馬術(shù)比賽中獲勝，體現(xiàn)了競爭環(huán)境下的個人壓力。友情與同情：盡管Sophie是Caroline的競爭對手，但她們之間深厚的友情超越了比賽的勝負(fù)，展現(xiàn)了同情和關(guān)懷的重要性。自我價值與成長：Caroline在比賽和個人挑戰(zhàn)中的成長，她學(xué)會了如何在壓力下保持自我價值和尊嚴(yán)。勝利的真正含義：故事探討了勝利不僅僅是贏得比賽，更重要的是過程中的體驗、學(xué)習(xí)以及人際關(guān)系的建立。參考答案：Thecompetitionstarted.Sophiewasfirst.Sheclearedthefirstobstacleeasily.Carolinewasnext.Firstobstacle,changeofdirection.“Wearedoingfine!”she

thought.Thentherewasasharpturn,thentwowidejumps.Blossomwasflyingbut

suddenlysomethingwaswrong.FromthecornerofhereyesshesawSophiewason

theground,alldirty.Butshehadtogo.Afewmomentslatershefinishedtheround!Yes,shewasthewinneratlast!“ButhowcouldSophiefallofthehorseback?”Carolinewondered.“Sophie,are

youalright?Whathappened?”“I’mfineandhappy.”Sophiesaidtoherfriend.“Now

youwinandyoucankeepApplewind.”“ButIonlywonbecauseyouaccidentallyfell

off.”Bysayingso,somethingsuddenlyoccurredtoCaroline.“Sophie!Youdidthis

forme?”Sophiegrinned.Intears,Carolinegaveherfriendandrivalalonghug.“Let’sgoforanotherridetomorrow!AndthistimeI’llbeatyou.”Thegirls

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下水文1Thecompetitionstarted.Ridersandtheirhorsesfilledthearena,theairelectricwithanticipation.Carolinetookherplace,herheartpoundinginsyncwithApplewind'srhythmicbreaths.Thejumpswerehigh,thecoursecomplex,butshefeltastrangecalmnesssettleoverher.Astheracebegan,sheandApplewindmovedasone,clearingeachobstaclewithgraceandprecision.Thecrowd'scheerswereadistanthum,andallthatexistedwasthecourse,thehorse,andtherider'sunyieldingdetermination.“ButhowcouldSophiefalloffthehorseback?”Carolinewondered,stunned,assheroundedthefinalturn.Inthemiddleofthearena,Sophiewasontheground,Blossomstandingcalmlybyherside.Itwasanunprecedentedsight,andforamoment,Caroline'sconcentrationwavered.Butassheregainedherfocus,sheknewshecouldn'taffordtoletthisdistractionderailher.Withafinalpush,sheandApplewindsoaredoverthelastjump,crossingthefinishlinetothesoundofthecrowd'seruptionintoapplause.Carolinehadwon,butthevictoryfeltbittersweetasshesawSophiebeinghelpedtoherfeet,alookofdisappointmentonherface.下水文2Thecompetitionstarted.Theatmospherewastenseastheriderslinedup,eachfocusedonthetaskathand.Carolinetookadeepbreath,hereyesscanningthecourseonelasttime.Thejumpsloomedlarge,butshefeltasurgeofconfidence.Applewindseemedtosenseittoo,prancinglightlybeneathher.Asthestartingbellrang,theysprangforward,aperfectlysynchronizedteam.Thejumpscameatthemoneafteranother,butCarolineandApplewindnavigatedthemwithaneasethatsurprisedevenher.“ButhowcouldSophiefalloffthehorseback?”Carolinewon