2025屆高考英語(yǔ)精準(zhǔn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí) 讀后續(xù)寫的七個(gè)技能

2025屆高考英語(yǔ)精準(zhǔn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫的七個(gè)必備技能Contents

目錄技能一：善用修辭，使表達(dá)更形象技能二：用動(dòng)作鏈，營(yíng)造畫面感技能三：適當(dāng)修飾，精準(zhǔn)化描寫動(dòng)作技能四：用倒裝句，刻畫生動(dòng)畫面技能五：巧用狀語(yǔ)，寫“情”更具體技能六：增加心理活動(dòng)和情緒描寫技能七：“環(huán)境描寫”不可少技能一善用修辭，使表達(dá)更形象3明喻是將具有某種共同特征的兩種不相同的事物連接起來(lái)的一種修辭手法。asbusyasabeeasproudasapeacockasprettyasapictureashungryasawolfasbraveasalionasquiteasamouse1.用明喻為句子表達(dá)增色忙得團(tuán)團(tuán)轉(zhuǎn)驕傲如孔雀美的如畫饑腸轆轆勇如猛獅非常安靜句式演練①Dominatedbyanoverwhelmingsenseofexcitementandprideathiswords,Isimplystoodtheredumbfounded,andmyfeet,asifIwererootedtotheground（腳像扎根在地上一樣）,couldn’tmoveabit.①SoangrywasIthatIshookmyfistather.Themomentshesawmyreaction,she

(嚇呆了，腳就像在地上扎了根

）.Allofasudden,sheburstintotears.②Accompaniedbyus,Dadwalkedintothemuseum.Hesmiledlikeachildatthecrowd（對(duì)著人群笑得像個(gè)孩子）,withhiswrinkledfacelightingup. ②Thelittlegirlshoutedexcitedlyand.(像一只快樂(lè)的小鳥一樣撲向父親。③Ifeltsosorrytohearthat,asrestlessasantsonahot

pan像熱鍋上的螞蟻一樣坐立不安）,andIthoughtIshouldvisithiminanycase. ③Onarrivinghome,shesteppedouthercarand

ranintothehouse.(高興的像只歸巢的小鳥）④Herfacewasasbrightasthestar（像星星一樣明亮）

thatshoneonourChristmastreeinthecornerofthesmallroom. ④Ifoundhimlyingonhisbed;hewas

（酩酊大醉）

frozewithfright,Asifshewererootedtothegroundthrewherselftoherfatherlikealittermerrybirdashappyasabirdtogethomeagain

asdrunkasamonkey.暗喻是直接將A事物當(dāng)作B事物描寫，A事物和B事物之間的聯(lián)系或相似之處是暗含的。不用like，asif等標(biāo)志詞，一般通過(guò)be動(dòng)詞或其他動(dòng)詞建立聯(lián)系。2.用暗喻為句子表達(dá)潤(rùn)色①Lifeisanunexploredriver,fulloftwistsandturns.生活就像一條未被涉足的河流,充滿各種曲折。 2.用暗喻為句子表達(dá)潤(rùn)色

①Theairinsidethehollowvegetable

.

空心蔬菜里的空氣充滿了我焦慮的氣息。

②Sheissuchawomanwithastonyheart.You‘d

betterkeepyourdistancefromher.她是一個(gè)鐵石心腸的女人。你最好與她保持距離。 wasfloodedwithmyanxiousbreath②

byplane,train,truckandcar. 食品和醫(yī)療用品由飛機(jī)、火車、卡車和汽車源源不斷地運(yùn)來(lái)。Foodandmedicalsuppliesstreamedin擬人就是把事物人格化，賦予動(dòng)物、自然現(xiàn)象或含蓄抽象的概念以人類的行為特點(diǎn)和生命力，具體形象地表達(dá)情感，使文章更生動(dòng)、形象。3.用擬人表達(dá)作者感情①Withtheyellowshirtdancinginthebreeze,sheflashedbacktoherhappylifewithTom.

黃襯衫在微風(fēng)中飛舞,她又回想起她和湯姆的幸福生活。

3.用擬人表達(dá)作者情感①

,andbirdsinthetreesweresingingabeautifulsong.風(fēng)在林間低語(yǔ),小鳥在樹上唱著美妙的歌曲。

空心蔬菜里的空氣充滿了我焦慮的氣息。

②Thesprayranandran.Afterawhile,sheloweredher

headwithtears.浪花跑啊跑,不一會(huì),她含著淚低下了頭。 Thewindwaswhisperinginthetrees②Rainbowgirl

.彩虹姑娘在天邊拋出了七彩的綢緞。threwcolorfulsilkinthesky夸張是運(yùn)用豐富的想象力，在客觀現(xiàn)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)上有目的地放大或縮小事物的形象特征，以增強(qiáng)表達(dá)效果的修辭手法，常用夸大的詞語(yǔ)來(lái)形容事物，如數(shù)詞、量詞、動(dòng)詞、介詞短語(yǔ)、形容詞(miserable,horrible,splendid)或副詞(extremely,awfully,terribly,perfectl,horribly)等渲染和修飾微不足道的事情，達(dá)到夸張的效果。4.用夸張來(lái)烘托氣氛①Tomoftencomplainedwithmillionsofreasons.湯姆總有千千萬(wàn)萬(wàn)個(gè)理由來(lái)抱怨。 4.用夸張來(lái)烘托氣氛

①Thenoisewas

.

這聲音大得足以把死人吵醒。

②Itisthelaststrawthatbreaksthecamel'sback.這是壓死駱駝的最后一根稻草。 loudenoughtowakethedead②Atthenews,I

.聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息,我樂(lè)不可支。 overthemoon/onthetopoftheworld排比是把三個(gè)或以上意義相關(guān)或相近、結(jié)構(gòu)相同或相似、語(yǔ)氣相同的詞組或句子并排在一起的修辭手法。有時(shí)候兩個(gè)句子或以上的并列句也可以稱為排比句。5.用排比加強(qiáng)句子語(yǔ)氣①We'restillalive,we'restillyoung,we'restillholdingon.我們?nèi)匀换钪?我們?nèi)匀荒贻p,我們?nèi)匀粓?jiān)持著!

5.用排比加強(qiáng)句子語(yǔ)氣①Homeisawarmharbor,

,andthesustenanceofthesoul.家是溫暖的港灣,家是幸福的源泉,家是靈魂的寄托。

②Modestymakespeopleprogress,modestymakepeoplegrow,modestymakespeoplegainmore.謙虛使人進(jìn)步，謙虛使人成長(zhǎng),謙虛使人收獲更多。thesourceofhappiness②Adapttonewposts,standonnewplatforms,

.適應(yīng)新崗位、站上新平臺(tái)、迎接新挑戰(zhàn)、創(chuàng)造新業(yè)績(jī)。 。meetnewchallengesandcreatenewachievements技能二用動(dòng)作鏈，營(yíng)造畫面感141.主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)作A，動(dòng)作Band動(dòng)作C;主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)作A,動(dòng)作B,動(dòng)作Cand動(dòng)作D該句式中連詞and連接三個(gè)或三個(gè)以上的動(dòng)作，構(gòu)成動(dòng)作鏈,動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)是一致的。技能二用動(dòng)作鏈，營(yíng)造畫面感①Atthemoment,Iwasforgivenbymyteammates.Ipulledmyselftogether,quicklystraightenedoutmyideasand

finished

my

speech.

此刻,隊(duì)友們?cè)徚宋?。我打起精神，迅速理清思路，結(jié)束了演講。②Althoughthegirlwasterrified,shethrewherhandsandlegsintothewaterandtriedtogetclosetoRichardandgrabhishand.盡管女孩很害怕,但她還是把手和腿都伸進(jìn)了水里,試圖靠近理查德并且抓住他的手。 技能二用動(dòng)作鏈，營(yíng)造畫面感①1approachedDad,

myownmoneyand

him.

我走近爸爸,驕傲地拿出我自己的錢遞給他。②Themomentshegotonthestage,herpulsesbeatfast,andtheblood

everyinchofherbody.

她一登上舞臺(tái),她的心跳加快,熱血溫暖了全身，身體完全放松下來(lái)。 thebloodwarmedandrelaxedproudlytookoutofhandeditto2.主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)作Aand動(dòng)作B,非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞該句中連詞and連接兩個(gè)或兩個(gè)以上的動(dòng)作，構(gòu)成動(dòng)作鏈。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)，可置于句首或句尾。技能二用動(dòng)作鏈，營(yíng)造畫面感①Realizingitwasfullyreadyforfreedom,wetooktheboxoutside,placedthebirdinmypalmandpetteditsoftlywithmixedfeelings. 意識(shí)到它已經(jīng)完全準(zhǔn)備好自由了，我們把盒子拿出來(lái)，把小鳥放在我的手掌里,輕輕地?fù)崦?心里百感交集。②Wesatonalargerockandatesandwiches，enjoyingsounds,thesmellsandthesunlight. 我們坐在一塊大石頭上,吃著三明治,享受著聲音、氣味和陽(yáng)光。技能二用動(dòng)作鏈，營(yíng)造畫面感①Ourperformancestoodoutandgainedmuchpraise,

.我們的表現(xiàn)很突出,得到了很多好評(píng)，讓我們非常自豪和開(kāi)心。②Lookingaroundhimcautiously,he

theroomand

.他小心翼翼地環(huán)顧四周,然后溜進(jìn)了房間,輕輕地關(guān)上門。

softlyclosedthedoormakingusveryproudandfullofhappinessslippedinto技能三適當(dāng)修飾，精準(zhǔn)化描寫動(dòng)作211.形容詞(短語(yǔ)),主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)……;主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)……,形容詞(短語(yǔ))形容詞(短語(yǔ))在句中作狀語(yǔ)，表示人物做某個(gè)動(dòng)作的原因、結(jié)果或狀態(tài)，可置于句首或句末，增強(qiáng)感染力，使描述更生動(dòng)形象。①Filledwithanger,Iwasunabletoutterasingleword.我氣的一句話也說(shuō)不出來(lái)。②Shewalkedandwalked,exhaustedbutfullofhope.她走啊走,疲憊不堪,但充滿希望.①

,lopenedthedoorandSantasteppedinside.我既興奮又緊張,打開(kāi)門,圣誕老人走了進(jìn)來(lái)。 ②

,shepickedupherconfidenceandrememberedherlines.她放松了一些，恢復(fù)了信心,記起了自己的臺(tái)詞。ExcitedandnervousMorerelaxed2.主語(yǔ)+具體動(dòng)詞+副詞/介詞結(jié)構(gòu)常見(jiàn)副詞：cheerfully,curiously,eagerly,excitedly,fiercely,firmly,joyfully,immediately,impatiently,restlessly,swiftly,suddenly等。體現(xiàn)動(dòng)作迅速時(shí)的修飾語(yǔ)：suddenly,immediately,withoutpausing,withoutdelay等。①Ashortdrivelater,thethreemenknockedonthedoorofWill‘shouseandtriedtowaitpatiently.開(kāi)了一會(huì)兒車,三個(gè)人敲了敲威爾家的門,耐心地等著。②Everythingwentsmoothly,andagreatideahitme.一切都進(jìn)行得很順利,我突然想到了一個(gè)好主意。①IwatchedLaurendoingwarm-upsinthecourtwide-eyedand.

我睜大眼睛看著勞倫在球場(chǎng)上做熱身,我的心跳得厲害。②Thomas

assoonashesawhisdog.托馬斯一看到他的狗就高興地叫了起來(lái)。myheartbeatwildlyshoutedjoyfully3.With復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)該結(jié)構(gòu)常見(jiàn)的有withone'shelp,with+身體部位，如withherpalelips(用蒼白的嘴唇),withatrembling/shakinghand(用顫抖的手)等。①JackandIlookedateachotherwithabroadsmileonourface,feelingthatwewerequalifiedvolunteerwildliferescuersnow. 杰克和我相視一笑,覺(jué)得我們現(xiàn)在是合格的野生動(dòng)物救援志愿者了。②Withherpresentationrehearsedandhernotesorganized,shefeltconfidentbeforethemeeting.她的演講已經(jīng)排練好了,筆記也整理好了,開(kāi)會(huì)前她感到很自信。①AfterItoldherthetruth,

onherlips,shewentdownonherknees.我告訴她真相之后,她的嗍唇上帶著一種奇怪的微笑,她雙膝下跪。 ②

,thenewapartmentfeltlikeacozyhome.粉刷了墻,布置了家具，新公寓感覺(jué)像個(gè)舒適的家。 withakindofstrangesmileWiththewallspaintedandthefurniturearranged技能四用倒裝句，刻畫生動(dòng)畫面28讀后續(xù)寫中,人物不可能一直在一個(gè)場(chǎng)景里,總會(huì)有時(shí)空變化,如:發(fā)生火災(zāi)沖進(jìn)房間救人、放學(xué)后回家……在描寫人或物空間位置變化時(shí),應(yīng)靈活使用倒裝句。①Hardlycouldheimaginehimselfspeakinginfrontofabigcrowd.他幾乎無(wú)法想象自己在一大群人面前講話。②Soattachedweretheytoeachotherthattheybecamegenuinepartners.他們彼此依戀,成了真正的伴侶。

①

whenheknewhegotthefirstprize.當(dāng)他知道自己得了一等獎(jiǎng)時(shí),他幾乎抑制不住內(nèi)心heHardlycouldheholdbackhisexcitement②

isarmstrembledslightly.他興奮得手臂微微顫抖。Soexcitedwashethat技能五巧用狀語(yǔ)，寫“情”更具體311.表示"情感"的介詞短語(yǔ)常用的表示情感的介詞短語(yǔ)“toone's+情感名詞或in/with+情感名詞"，如withdelight/anger/terror(高興地/生氣地地)等介詞短語(yǔ)置于句首,能使情感細(xì)節(jié)描寫更為具體。①Thinkingthatitmightbeherbirthday，shewentupandopenedtheboxwithdelight.想到這可能是她的生日禮物,她高興地走上去打開(kāi)了盒子。②Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousandperfectbreakfastinfrontofhereyeswidenedinsurprise.當(dāng)他們的媽媽看到美味,完美的早餐在她面前時(shí),驚訝地睜大了眼睛。①Thepeopleincharge

,addingthatmyfather‘screativitywasdeeplyappreciated. 負(fù)責(zé)人很高興地同意了,并補(bǔ)充說(shuō),他們非常欣賞我父親的創(chuàng)造力。agreedwithpleasure②Feelingasifthewholeworldwaswatchingme.Iwasstruck

.感覺(jué)好像全世界都在看著我,我尷尬得要死。deadwithembarrassment2.withone'seyesfullof+(tearsof+)情感名詞withhiseyesfullofhappiness(雙眸子滿是喜悅)等作伴隨狀語(yǔ),可使動(dòng)作或?qū)υ捗鑼懜鷦?dòng)。Hismotherlistenedattentivelytothechildren,withhereyesfullofexcitementandgratitude.他媽媽認(rèn)真地聽(tīng)著孩子們說(shuō)話,雙眸滿是興奮和感激。RenheldhisfisttightandwavedtoSadiegratefully.任握緊拳頭,含著淚水感激地向賽迪揮手。withtearsineyes技能六增加心理活動(dòng)和情緒描寫361.開(kāi)心、激動(dòng)MywifeandIthrewourarmsaroundeachother,tearsofhappinessrollingdowncheeks.我和妻子擁抱在一起,幸福的淚水順著臉頰滾落下來(lái)。Karenlaughed,determinedtodomoreforherparents,

.卡倫笑著,眼睛里閃爍著興奮的光芒,她決定為她的父母做更多事。

hereyesshiningwithexcitement2.悲傷Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn‘thelpcryingbitterly.一聽(tīng)到這個(gè)壞消息，她被一股悲傷之情控制，忍不住痛哭起來(lái)。I

tearsstreamingdownJane’sface.看到簡(jiǎn)淚流滿面,我很傷心。wasveryheartbrokentoseeSarahwentinherroom

.莎拉走進(jìn)她的房間,把悲傷深深地埋藏在心里。hidinghersadnessdeepinherheart3.焦慮、憤怒Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.她渾身發(fā)抖,感覺(jué)如坐針氈。WhatDadsaidwas

,leavingmeintodeeperanxiety.爸爸的話對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)沉重的打擊,讓我陷入更深的焦慮。Atthisverymoment.Sirincould

controlheranger.此時(shí)此刻,西林再也無(wú)法抑制她的憤怒。nolo