2025屆高考英語精準(zhǔn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí) 讀后續(xù)寫高分句式

2025屆高考英語精準(zhǔn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫高分句式題型分析01“讀后續(xù)寫”第一要真正讀懂原文，第二寫出恰當(dāng)又正確的句子，第三才是寫作技巧。讀懂原文之后寫出恰當(dāng)而正確的句子很重要，否則你的“讀懂”只是在做無用功。只有寫出符合故事情節(jié)恰當(dāng)、正確的句子才說明你真正讀懂了。作文的高分關(guān)鍵是“規(guī)范的書寫+整潔的卷面+正確流暢的語言+豐富的句式”，其中讀后續(xù)寫還要注重情節(jié)的邏輯性、銜接性、合理性。寫作中，有好句，才有亮點(diǎn)，有亮點(diǎn)，就容易拿高分。一、情緒描寫常用句式（一）表示“感到……情緒與情感”場景【句式1】aflushof＋表情緒的名詞＝awave/feeling/senseof...一陣……【句式2】表情緒的名詞＋floodedoversb/sweptoversb/seizedsb……涌上心頭【句式3】aburst/wave/surge/rush/ripple/sense/feelingof＋表情感狀態(tài)的名詞＋有靈動(dòng)詞＋sb.表示"某人感到……"或"一陣/一種……向某人襲來"。【句式4】Awaveofjoywashedover/seized/enveloped/struckhimwhenheheardthenews當(dāng)他聽到消息，他非常高興。（happiness/sadness/sorrow/delight/panic/fear/horror/depression/guilt/embarrassment/hate/regret/panic/jealousy/envy/pride/shame/anxiety/boredom/relief/satisfaction/humiliation/insecurity/irritation/isolation/loneliness/misery/outrage/rage/resentment/torture）1.Aflushofpridesweptoverhimashewatchedhischildren.＝Hefeltaflushofprideashewatchedhischildren.當(dāng)他看著自己孩子的時(shí)候，一種強(qiáng)烈的自豪感涌上心頭。2.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Andmuchsoonerthancouldbeexpected，Bernardreturnedwithanemptybasket.Neverbeforehadheearnedsomuchmoneyinhislife.Awaveofhappinessfloodedoverhim.一切準(zhǔn)備就緒后，伯納德開始了他的新生意。伯納德帶著一個(gè)空籃子回來，比預(yù)期的要快得多。他一生中從未掙過這么多錢。他感到高興極了。1.Tomysurprise,Ilearnedthatmyessayhadrankedfirstinthecontest.Amixofexcitementanddoubtwashedoverme.令我吃驚的是，我得知我的作品在比賽中排名第一。興奮和懷疑涌上心頭2.Sufferinganddespairdefeatedme,andIfellsobbingonthedoorstep.(《簡·愛》)痛苦和絕望擊垮了我，我倒在門階上哭泣。3.Motherfeltawaveofprideandwarmthsweepoverher.媽媽感到一陣自豪和溫暖。4.Thepolarbearcamenear.Horrorslowlycrepton/floodedover/rushedover/sweptoverus.北極熊走近了?？謶致蛭覀円u來。（二）表示“(因?yàn)榫o張、害怕)心跳”場景【句式1】sbcouldfeelone'sheartpoundingwildlyinone'schest感到心在胸中怦怦直跳【句式2】one'sheartthumped/raced/beatwildly/loudly/hard某人心怦怦直跳1．IcouldfeelmyheartpoundingwildlyasIwentonstagetocollecttheprize.上臺(tái)領(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)時(shí)我感到心怦怦直跳。2．Heunfoldedtheletter,hisheartracing.他打開信，心在咚咚跳著。3．Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Theirheartsbegantothumpwildlyastheywereafraidofbeingscoldedbytheirfather.天哪！鍋里的那塊面包也變黑了。當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時(shí)，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了。他們害怕被父親責(zé)罵，心開始怦怦直跳。（三）表示“流淚”場景【句式1】One'seyesgotmisty./One'seyesmistedwithtears.淚眼模糊【句式2】beclosetotears幾乎要哭了【句式3】tearsrolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face淚水從眼睛/臉頰/面部落下1．MymotherwasclosetotearswhensheheardIwasadmittedtoakeyuniversity.當(dāng)?shù)弥冶恢攸c(diǎn)大學(xué)錄取時(shí)，我母親差點(diǎn)兒就哭了。2．Withtearsofgratituderolling/streamingdownhischeeks,PeterhuggedGreentightly,saying“You'vesavedmetoday.Icouldn'tthankyouenough.”感激的淚水順著他的臉頰流下，彼得緊緊地?fù)肀е窳郑f：“今天你救了我。我對(duì)你感激不盡?！?．Thedayhelefthospital,hehuggedme,hiseyesmistingwithtears,saying，“Youareatrulygoodnurse,thankyou.”出院那天，他淚眼模糊地?fù)肀е艺f，“你是個(gè)真正的好護(hù)士，謝謝你?！保ㄋ模┏Ｓ镁湫蜌w納【句式1】So情緒adj.wassbthat+從句【句式2】What情緒v.sbwasthat+從句【句式3】Much/Greatlytoone’s情緒n.,sbdidsth1.SosadwasTomthattearswelledupinhiseyes.湯姆傷心得眼淚奪眶而出。2.Soguiltywasmymomthatsheloweredherheadandmurmured,“Sorry.”我媽媽非常內(nèi)疚，她低下頭喃喃地說：“對(duì)不起。3.Whatsurpriseduswasthathemadegreatprogressinsuchashorttime.令我們驚訝的是，他在這么短的時(shí)間內(nèi)取得了長足的進(jìn)步4.Whatfrightenedhimwasthathesuddenlyrealizedthatmaybetheyoungmanwasthebankrobber.令他害怕的是，他突然意識(shí)到，也許這個(gè)年輕人就是那個(gè)銀行劫匪。5.Beingthecoachofthenewteam,IwasexcitedbecauseIknewweweregoingtowin,buttomydisappointmentweweredefeated.作為新球隊(duì)的教練，我很興奮，因?yàn)槲抑牢覀儠?huì)贏，但令我失望的是，我們被擊敗了。6.Muchtothefamily’ssurprise,Dennisstucktohispromise!令家人驚訝的是，丹尼斯信守諾言！二、動(dòng)作描寫常用句式（一）表示“一……，就……”場景【句式1】upon/on＋n./doing...“一……就……”，相當(dāng)于assoonas引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句?！揪涫?】immediately/directly/instantly＋從句【句式3】themoment/minute/instant＋從句【句式4】nosooner...than.../hardly...when...【句式5】atthesight/thoughtof…1.TheinstantIsawhim,Iknewhewasthepolicemanwhohadhelpedmecarrythebox.我一看見他，就知道他就是那個(gè)曾經(jīng)幫我搬過箱子的警察。2.“IgnorewhattheplayersfromotherteamswouldsayandIbelieveyoucouldmakeit！”Uponhearingmywords，Davidbeamedabigsmile，stoodupandmovedtowardsthestartingline.“不管其他隊(duì)的隊(duì)員怎么說，我相信你能做到！”聽到我的話，大衛(wèi)笑了笑，站起來朝起跑線走去。3.Uponhearingthis,IcouldfeelmyheartpoundingwildlyandmymindgoingunconsciouslybacktothedaysIrackedmybrainforstories.一聽到這些話，我感到心跳加快，大腦不由自主回到那些絞盡腦汁編故事的日子。4.NosoonerhadIsteppedintothisfamiliarroomthanIsawmyteachersittingamongpilesofpapers.我剛一走進(jìn)這個(gè)熟悉的房間就看到歷史坐在一堆試卷前。5.Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthisgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.一看到這個(gè)感恩的蜂鳥我感到一陣寬慰和敬畏，當(dāng)我爬進(jìn)車?yán)镩_走時(shí)我知道我會(huì)珍惜這些一起分擔(dān)的記憶。（二）表示“迫不及待做……；毫不猶豫”場景【句式1】sbcouldhardlywaittodosth【句式2】withoutasecondthought...不假思索；毫不猶豫地【句式3】withouteventhinking...連考慮都不考慮【句式4】withoutdelay...立即；毫不遲延地.【句式5】withouthesitation...毫不猶豫1．Thewaterwasfreezingcold,butwithoutasecondthoughttheyoungmanjumpedin.水冰冷冰冷，可那個(gè)年輕人想也沒想就跳了進(jìn)去。2．Withoutdelay,heclimbedupthetreequicklytoreachfortheleaf.他毫不遲疑地迅速爬上樹去摘樹葉。3．OnChristmasmorning,Icouldnotwaittoopenthepackage.Tomyexcitement,itwasabrand-newpairoficeskateswhichIwaseagerfor.圣誕節(jié)早晨，我迫不及待地打開包裹。令我興奮的是，這是一雙我一直想要的嶄新的溜冰鞋。4.Mydevotionandperseverancereallymattered,butwithouthisencouragement,IcouldneverbewhatIwastoday.我的付出和堅(jiān)持固然重要，但是沒有他的鼓勵(lì)我就不會(huì)有今天的成就。（三）表示“因……顫抖”場景【句式1】tremble/shakewithfear,panic,excitement,rage...1．Herlipstrembledwithrageandbigtearsrolleddownhercheeks.她氣得嘴唇發(fā)抖，淚珠順著面頰滾落下來。2．Helaythereforalongtime,shakingwithfear.他躺在那里很長時(shí)間，害怕得發(fā)抖。3．FarmerMike'shousehadbeenagreatplaceforthelittlemouseuntilthefarmermarriedawifewhohadacat.Zigfriedshookwithfearwhenhethoughtofit.農(nóng)夫邁克的房子對(duì)小老鼠來說一直是一個(gè)好地方，直到農(nóng)夫娶了一個(gè)養(yǎng)貓的妻子。Zigfried一想到這件事就嚇得直哆嗦。常用句型歸納【句式1】Sbdidsth,onlytofind…【句式2】地點(diǎn)狀語(inthebox...)lay/was/were+主語【句式3】outof+地點(diǎn)/out/into+地點(diǎn)/in/away/off+walked(rushed/stormed...)+主語【句式4】Atthethought/sight/soundofsth,sbdidsth【句式5】On/Upondoingsth,sbdidsthon/upon后面的動(dòng)名詞多為：go,arrive,leave,reach,return,step,enter等。1.Iturnedbacktothetractor,onlytofinditmovesuddenlyawayfromme.我轉(zhuǎn)身走向拖拉機(jī)，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)它突然從我身邊移開了。2.Istoppedteachingandopenitup.IntheboxwereashirtandanotefromFreddy’smother.停止了教學(xué)，打開了它。盒子里有一件襯衫和一張弗雷迪母親的紙條。3.Insidethebottlewasapieceofpaper.瓶子里有一張紙。4.Outofthehouserushedadog,followedbyapuppy.從屋子里沖出一只狗，后面跟著一只小狗。5.OutdashedMary,cryingalltheway.瑪麗沖了出來，一路哭泣。6.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorwithmypalmssweating.一看到兇猛的狼，我被一股強(qiáng)烈的恐懼感抓住，手心出汗。7.Atthesoundofthealarm,thewolffledintothethickwoods警報(bào)聲響起，狼逃進(jìn)了茂密的樹林中.8.Onarrivingatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.到達(dá)村子后，我們受到了村民的熱烈歡迎。9.Upongoingoutoftheroom,Jackheardthetelephoneringing.走出房間后，杰克聽到電話鈴聲。模擬練習(xí)02閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。OnChristmasEve,IcalledmymomfromthebakerywhereIworkedpart-time,tellingherthatIwasworkingwithacoupleofco-workers.Thestorewasabouttoclose.Thepersonfromalocalcharitywhowasscheduledtopickuptheleftover（剩下的）breadhadnotshownup.Iwasworriedaboutwhattodowiththefood,soIcalledmymomandshesuggestedIcallthemanagertoaskforadvice.Themanagertoldmetothrowtheleftoversintothegar-bage.Theywereapproximately1,500dollars'worthoffreshbakedgoods.Itseemedcompletelywrongforallthisgoodfoodtogotowaste,soIcalledMomagainandtalkedaboutwherewecouldtakeit.Shetoldmethatanewhomelessshelterhadjustopenedinourcity,soMomcalledandaskedifthehomelessshelterneededthefreebakedgoods.Anexcitedstaffmembersaid,“Yes,please!”Momdrovetothebakery.Weloadedupthevan（小型貨車）withmyco-workersandMomdrovetothehomelessshelter.Aswewalkedtowardtheentrance,awomanopenedthedoorforus.Shethankedusforwhatweweredoingandsaidshewasreallygratefulforhernewtemporaryhome.SheintroducedherselfandtoldusherfriendscalledherStar.Wechat-tedforawhileonthesidewalkwithlightsnowfallingaroundus.Starsaidthatmovingoffthestreetsintotheshelterhadsavedherlife.Startoldusthatshehaddecidedherjobinlifewastohelpandprotectpeople.Shespentherdayslookingoutforthosewhoneededhelp.Shetriedtodokindthingsforotherswhen-evershecould.Thensheaskedmeforafavor.Sheshowedmeabookthatafriendhadgivenherwhenshe'dbeenlivingonthestreets.Shewantedtotellhimshewasokay,butshecouldn'taffordthelong-distancecall.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ItoldStarIwouldbehappytopasshermessageontoherfriend.Afewmonthslater,whenIwaswalkingtothebakery,Isawawomanstandinginthemiddleofthecrosswalk.I