續(xù)寫前進行有效閱讀的方法(英語)

例談如何在續(xù)寫前進行有效閱讀

有效閱讀是續(xù)寫的前提——以2016年10月新高考首考試題為例閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

“Tom!”

shecried.“Help!”

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.

Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

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dark.

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daybreak

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_________________________________________⑴.Typeofwriting___________⑵.Inwhatorderisthematerialdeveloped?

⑶.Threeelements(要素)foranarrative:

Character

Setting

Plot1.AnalyzethematerialNarrative記敘文Jane,TomIntheforestTimesequenceOneweekendinJuly,Jane…Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Jane…Janeroseatthebreakoftheday,…But…anditwasgettingdarkagain.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.方法1：繪制思維導圖

quarreledwalkedaway

Beginninglostdrank

atestoppedmissed(wanted)

missedachance(heard)gotaplan(thinking)Findoutthekeyverbsshowingthedevelopmentoftheplot.PlotClimaxEndingquarreledwalkedaway

Beginninglostdrank

atenohelicoptersgettingdarkstoppedmissed

missedachancegotaplanClimaxEndingdaybreakwokeupstruggle?fear？rescue?Jane,Tom,lake,walked,climbed,stream,atadistance,tohergreatjoy,helicopter,yellowblouse2.PlotDeduction（推理）Jane,Tom,lake,walked,climbed,stream,atadistance,tohergreatjoy,helicopter,yellowblousekeywordsgivenClue:Characters:Behavior:Places:Feelings/comments:helicopter;yellowblouseJane;Tom;walked;climbed

lake;stream;atadistancetohergreatjoyTip:Classifythe10keywordstohelpplotting

regretful,homesick,miss,indespair,anxious,giveup,panic,lonely,desperate,breakdown,cheerful,tohergreatjoy…

Qualities:

catchsightof,wave,flag,laugh,burstintotears,dash,hug,shout,struggle,attempt,reunite…getinjured,coldnight,wildbeasts,suffer,tired,lackofconfidence…3.Brainstorm

forwordsandexpressions

Difficulties:calm,firmbelief,courage,cleverself-assured…Emotions:Actions:4.Writing

Tips

★Addpropermentalactivities★Letthesurroundingsspeak★Describeactionsspecifically1.Amidthedreadfuldarkness,strangesoundsofwildbeastswereheard.

2.huggedeachothertightlyinthewarmlightofthesettingsun1.Sherushedtotherock,climbedontoitandwaited.2.Shewavedheryellowblousemadlytothepassinghelicopter.

1.“Ifitweren’tfor

thatstupidquarrel,Iwouldn’tbetrappedhere,”shethoughttoherself.

Para.7Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark.Para.8It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.

Time:thenightbeforesleptFeeling:disappointedFindaplacetosleepPredictingtheDevelopmenttrytogetoutPara.7Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark.PredictingtheDevelopmentWhenWhatHowitwasdark…cold,scared…thinkaboutTomFindaplacetosleepfallasleeptired,hungry…regretful…Jane,Tom,lake,walked,climbed,atadistance,stream,Tohergreatjoy,helicopter,yellowblousePredictingtheDevelopmentJanetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.(Para.6)yellowblousehelicoptersgotoanopenareaWhatwouldJanedo?JanetrytogetrescuedbythehelicopterPara.8It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.

Jane,Tom,lake,walked,climbed,atadistance,stream,Tohergreatjoy,helicopter,yellowblousePredictingtheDevelopmentJanebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.(Para.5)walklakestreamWhatwouldJanedoiftherewerenohelicopterorshefailedtobenoticed?followthestreamtofindthelakeJaneJane,Tom,lake,walked,climbed,atadistance,stream,Tohergreatjoy,helicopter,yellowblousePredictingtheDevelopmentShewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.(Para.4)WouldJanegetoutoftheforest?Yes.HowwouldshereactwhenseeingTom?heldTomandtoldhimshelovedhimWhenWhatHowitwasdark…FindaplacetosleepthinkaboutTomfallasleepcold,scared,tired,hungry,regretful…It

was

daybreak…

trytogetout(bythehelicopter/thestreamtothelake)holdTomandsay…(disappointedifnohelicopter)hopefulexcited…Continuingthestory

Possibledevelopment3.V-ing作狀語Lyingawakeinthedark,Janewantedverymuchtobe…Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.1.Ifonly虛擬語氣2.Never倒裝句Ifonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephone…4.…so…that…Asnight…,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostop…5.With結(jié)構(gòu)

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedon....6.Themore…,themore……thefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.7.形容詞作伴隨狀語Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Reading

forLanguage

Paragraph1:

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Amidthedreadfuldarkness,strangesoundsofwildbeastswereheard.Janewaslonelyandseizedbyextremepanic.“Ifitweren’tforthatstupidquarrel,Iwouldn’tbetrappedhere,”shethoughtregretfullyandthenburstintotears.Manytimes,Janewasontheedgeofbreaki