unit3AhealthylifeWriting市公開課一等獎省賽課微課金獎課件

Unit3AhealthylifeWriting1/342/34英文提議信屬于應用文寫作范圍，是向咨詢提議者就某事提出寫信人提議和忠言。3/34高考中這類信件多屬于半開放性作文，要求考生依據(jù)所給材料(多為征求提議信)，提出合理化提議，或者給出有針對性處理方法。4/34提議信要寫明寫信原因、提議內(nèi)容、提出提議理由，而且提出理由要合情合理，語氣一定要委婉禮貌。另外，提議信要寫得簡明扼要、目標明確、語言要含有合理性和說服力。5/346/34開門見山，表明寫作意圖。在本段中，寫信人應該先簡單介紹自己，然后陳說事由，表明寫信目標及原因。7/34委婉地提出提議及改進辦法，或提出忠言。8/34禮貌地總結并期盼對方回復。9/34Readthisletterandimaginethatyouaretheadviserwhodealswithstudents’problems.WritealettertogiveXiaoLisomehelpfuladvice.Writingtask10/34Dear_______,Canyouhelpmeplease?Mybestfriendhasjuststartedsmoking.IdonotlikeitandItoldherwhatIthought.ShelaughedatmeandsaidthatIwasnotgrown-upenough.11/34ThensheofferedmeacigaretteandIfeltsoembarrassed.Ididnotknowhowtorefuseit.Pleasehelpme.Idonotwanttostartsmoking,butIdonotwanttolosemybestfriend,either.Yourssincerely,LiXiaolei12/3413/34Dear___________,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_______(提議主題),andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.14/34Inmyhumbleopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:____________(提議內(nèi)容)15/34Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals______,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouto_____________.YoursSincerely,LiMingusefulfurtherdetails16/34Yourfriendis___________smokingandyour_______towardsthismatter.addictedtoattitude17/34Ithinkitmoreimportantto______thesmokertousegoodjudgmentandtoshow________forothers.callonconcern18/34Youhadbetter______hisoffer,andhewill__________youatlast.rejectunderstand19/34巧列提要，詳略得當:針對問題需要提出什么樣提議，要講哪些內(nèi)容，應該先列出提要，并要做到內(nèi)容重點突出、詳略得當、井然有序，到達提要挈領作用。20/34Pointingouttheharmofsmoking.Showingyouradvice.21/34翻譯關鍵點，勾勒脈絡:列出提要后，能夠嘗試著將文章中包括到提議關鍵點或忠言翻譯成對應英語句子，這么全文骨架就已經(jīng)形成了。在此基礎上，可增加合理想象以及適當擴展。22/34Smokingis_______toyourhealth,especiallytoyourlung.Ithinkitmoreimportantto______thesmokertousegoodjudgmentandtoshow________forothers.Youhadbetter_____hisoffer,andhewill__________youatlast.harmfulcallonconcernrejectunderstand23/34巧妙構思，渾然成篇:增加適當情節(jié)和一些過渡詞將上述關鍵點連接起來，加以適當潤色，形成一篇地道、完整英語提議信。24/34Medicalscientistshaveexpressedtheirconcernabouttheeffectofsmokingonthe______notonlyofthosewhoaresmokingbutalsoofthosewholiveintheair________bytobaccosmoke.healthpolluted25/34Smoking,whichmaybe_________forsomepeople,isaseriesof___________fortheirfellows.apleasurediscomfortsStudiesshowthat____________suffermorethanthesmokersthemselves.non-smokers26/34規(guī)范書寫，落筆成文:上述四個步驟是構思寫作基礎，而規(guī)范書寫是落筆成文關鍵。在這個步驟中，切不可因為書寫潦草、亂涂亂改而讓人看不出個所以然，結果使整篇文章黯然失色。27/34DearLiMing,

Youhaveaskedmeformyadvice.Yourfriendisaddictedtosmokingandyoustronglyobjecttoit.Iwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.

Sample28/34Asweknow,smokingisharmfultoourhealth.

Medicalscientistshaveexpressedtheirconcernabouttheeffectofsmokingonthehealthnotonlyofthosewhoaresmokingbutalsoofthosewholiveintheairpollutedbytobaccosmoke.29/34Smoking,whichmaybeapleasureforsomepeople,isaseriesofdiscomfortsfortheirfellows.Andstudiesshowthatnon-smokerssuffermorethanthesmokersthemselves.30/34

Inmyopinion,itismoreimportanttocallonthesmokertousegoodjudgmentandtoshowconcernforothers.Takingyourhealthintoconsideration,youhadbetterrejecthisoffer,andIthinkhewillunderstandyouatlast.31/34Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.YoursSincerely,LiMing32/34HomeworkWorkingroups.Imagineyouareproducingasch