應(yīng)用文類型5：告知信

告知信【試題探究】

假定你是晨光中學高三學生李華,你校于6月8日舉辦了成人禮活動,你的英國朋友Chris很想了解該活動。你于當晚給Chris寫一封信,介紹相關(guān)情況,內(nèi)容包括:

1.成人禮活動內(nèi)容(成長點滴回顧等);

2.對活動的感受;

3對自己未來的展望。注意:

1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可以適當加入細節(jié),以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫。參考詞匯:成人禮thecoming-of-ageceremonyStep

1:審題布局人稱第一人稱為主,第二人稱為輔時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時,一般過去時要點1.介紹成人禮活動內(nèi)容2.成人禮活動感受Step

2:巧飾亮點要點1:這次的成人禮儀式深深地打動了我們,并且我們從中意識到了責任感始終伴隨著我們的成長過程。一般表達:Wearealldeeplymovedbytheceremonyandwerealizethatthesenseofresponsibilityalwaysaccompaniestheprocessofourgrowthfromit.句式升級(定語從句)Wearealldeeplymovedbytheceremony,________________________________________________________________________________________.fromwhichwerealizethatthesenseofresponsibilityalwaysaccompaniestheprocessofourgrowth要點2:我明白了成長的意義。一般表達:________________________________________.句式升級(倒裝句)這就是我對成長的理解。________________________________________IhaveunderstoodthemeaningofgrowingupSuchismyunderstandingaboutgrowingup.Step

3:銜接成篇DearChris,

I’msogladtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletter,youshowedgreatinterestinthecoming-of-ageceremonyheldinourschool.Thefollowingisabriefintroductiontotheceremony.

TheceremonywasscheduledonJune8,duringwhichwereviewedthepastevents.Wearealldeeplymovedbytheceremony,fromwhichwerealizethatthesenseofresponsibilityalwaysaccompaniestheprocessofourgrowth.Wearedeterminedtofollowtheexamplesofourexcellentschoolmatesandmakeourselvesusefultothewholesociety.Suchismyunderstandingaboutgrowingup.Whataboutyours?

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【句式儲備】1.篇頭——開篇表意,說明目的、原因等①Delightedtolearnthatanimportantvolleyballgamewillbelaunchedinourschoolstadium,I’mwritingtoextendmyexcitementandinformyouofsomerelevantinformation.很高興得知一場重要的排球比賽將在我們學校的體育場舉行,我寫信是為了表達我的興奮,并告訴你一些相關(guān)的信息。②I’mmorethandelightedtotellyouthataninternationalculturalfestivalistobeheldinmycity.我非常高興地告知你們國際文化節(jié)將在我市舉行。2.篇中——詳細介紹,告知具體信息①Firstandforemost,thecompetitiontobeheldwillbeginat2p.m.andlastforroughly3hours.首先,比賽將于下午兩點開始,持續(xù)大約3個小時。②ThenyouwillbetakentotheTeaRoom,whereyoucantastesomefamousChineseteaandwatchperformancesofteaart.有人將你帶至茶室,品嘗中國名茶、觀看茶藝表演。3.結(jié)尾——作總結(jié),盼回復①Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.我非常希望這段經(jīng)歷是有益的,將學習和樂趣完美地結(jié)合在一起。②Itwouldbeniceifyoucouldprovideabitmoreinformationonthearrangementsofthemeeting.你要能提供更多有關(guān)此次會議安排的信息,那將再好不過了。【拓展訓練】

假定你是李華,你因故不能參加下周二的音樂會,想把票轉(zhuǎn)贈給你的留學生朋友John。請你給他寫一封郵件告知相關(guān)情況,內(nèi)容包括:

1.你不能參加音樂會的理由;

2.音樂會的基本情況;

3.如何獲取門票。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右;

2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearJohn,

How’severythinggoing?I’vegotthechancetoenjoyaconcert.However,it’saregretthatIhavetogotomeetanhonoredforeignfriendthen.Thus,you’rethefirstpersonIwanttopresenttheticket.

TheconcertwillbeheldinthecityCulturalPlazaat7p.m.nextFriday,lastingtwohours.Somefamousmusiciansfromhomeandabroadwillbeinvitedtoshowtheir