應用文類型8：求助信

求助信【試題探究】

假定你是李華,你和同學根據(jù)英語課文改編了一個短劇。請你給外教MissEvans寫一封郵件,請她幫忙指導。郵件內(nèi)容包括:

1.劇情簡介;

2.指導內(nèi)容;

3.商定時間、地點。注意:寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。Step

1:審題布局人稱第一人稱、第二人稱時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時要點1.寫郵件的目的2.說明求助事項Step

2:巧飾亮點要點1:我寫郵件是想就我們改編自課本的一個劇本征求您的意見。①高級詞匯:_____________________________________________adaptedfromourtextbook.②高級句式(利用定語從句升級):_________________________________________________________________________________I’mwritingtoaskyouforadviceregardingaplay

I’mwritingtoaskyouforadviceregardingaplaythatwehaveadaptedfromourtextbook.要點2:我們不確定情節(jié)是否完整,我們也想知道如何使用適當?shù)恼Z氣來完美地說臺詞。①高級詞匯和句式(賓語從句):_________________________________________.Wearealsowondering_____________________________________________.②高級句式(利用notonly...butalso合并兩個句子):______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________③高級句式(利用倒裝句升級):______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WeareuncertainwhethertheplotiscompletehowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectlyWearenotonlyuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete,butalsowearewonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.Notonlyareweuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete,butalsowearewonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.Step

3:銜接成篇DearMissEvans,

Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtoaskyouforadviceregardingaplaythatwehaveadaptedfromourtextbook.

Theplayisabouthowmoneyinfluencestheattitudeofpeopletreatingothers.However,notonlyareweuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete,butalsowearewonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.Hopefully,youwouldbesokindastogiveussomeguidance.

Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:30a.m.tomorrowintheschooltheater.We’dappreciateitifyoucoulddousafavor.Yours,LiHua【句式儲備】1.篇頭——開篇表意,請求幫助①Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavortopickupmyuncleattheairport.我想知道你是否能幫我一個忙,到機場接我叔叔。②Wouldyouliketodomeafavortohavemydraftpolished?你愿意幫我潤色草稿嗎?2.篇中——詳細描述,講清困難①Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceonmathslearning?面對上述問題,我渴望得到你的幫助。你能給我一些數(shù)學學習建議嗎?②Now,Istruggle

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study.I’vefoundthathardly

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homework.現(xiàn)在,我在學習上很痛苦。我發(fā)現(xiàn)由于作業(yè)太多,我?guī)缀鯖]時間運動。3.結(jié)尾——盼回復,希望得到幫助①Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Iwouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.我想知道你能不能幫我解決這些困難。如果你能幫助我,我真的很感激。②Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldoffermesomenecessary/timelyhelp(give/lendmesomepractical/valuableadvice).如果你能給我一些必要的幫助/及時的幫助(給我一些實用的/有價值的建議)我會很感激。【拓展訓練】

假定你是李華。最近你校英語俱樂部將舉辦主題為“魅力中國”的演講比賽,請給你的外教Cheslie寫一封電子郵件,請她幫助潤色你的演講稿并給予你有關(guān)演講技巧的指導。內(nèi)容包括:

1.寫信原因;

2.你的困惑;

3.請求幫助。注意:

1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右;

2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearCheslie,

Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearCheslie,

Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.I’llparticipateinanEnglishspeechcontestwiththetitle“CharmingChina”.I’vefinishedmyspeechdraft,butIfinditfarfromsatisfactory.

Firstly,I’mnotsureofsomeproperexpressionsinEnglishandnotawareofthemistakesingrammarandsentencestructures.Wouldyoupleasegothroughtheattachmenttothisemailandthenhelpmecorrectthemistakesandpolishthespeechdraft?Besides,Iamprettynervousaboutthespeech