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續(xù)寫專練一原文鑒賞Thereisafarmnotfarfromthecoastline.ItbelongstoamancalledTom.Tomcouldn'tdoeverythingbyhimselfonthefarm.Thus,heneededtohireonemantohelphimrunthefarm.However,nooneworkedonhisfarmforlong.Why？Becausetheworkwastootiring.Sincethefarmisnearthesea,thereareoftenstormsfromtheseathatstrikehisfarm.Whenastormcomes,Tomandthemanhehiredhavetogetupquicklyandtrytoreducethelossescausedbythestorm.Therefore,noonelikedworkingthere.Tomhadtolookforpeopletoworkforhimallthetime.Oneday,amancalledHenryreadtheposterthatTomhadputupandthencametohisfarm.“Sir,Icanworkforyou,”saidHenry.TomlookedatHenry.Thisyoungmanwasneitherstrongnortall.“Areyousure?”askedTom.“Yes,sir.Icandotheworkwell.Butyoumustpaymetwicewhatyoupaidothersbefore,”saidthatyoungman.Tomwassurprised.Hedidn'treallybelievesuchamancoulddotheworkwell.Butitwasreallyhardforhim

tofindsomeoneelsetoworkforhim.Atlast,hedecidedtogiveHenryatry.However,beforehiringhim,hesaid,“Canyoureallybeagoodhelper？Theworkonthefarmishardandtiring.Andthereareoftenstorms.”Henrysmiledandsaid,“Don’tworry.Icanbeagoodhelper.You'llsee.Andstormswon'tbeaproblem.Theywon'tevendisturboursleep.Wecansleepverywellevenonstormynights.”AndthenHenrystayedonthefarm.ToTom'sjoy,Henryworkedhardanddidhisworkwell.Itwasobviousthathehadn'tlied.However,onenight,therewasabigstorm.Tomwaswokenupbythestrongwind.Hewasworriedthatthestormwouldcausegreatlossesforhisfarm.Andhesawhishelpernowhere.Paragraph1TomthoughtHenrymuststillbesleeping.Paragraph2Tomthoughthehadhiredthewrongman.Why？此處注意銜接嘗試概括本文的主旨大意這篇文章主要說的是主人公Tom在靠近海邊的地方有一個農(nóng)場。因為海邊暴風(fēng)雨比較多，當暴風(fēng)雨來的時候，需要巨大的工作量。Tom雇傭的工人因為受不了繁重的勞動而辭職。后來，Henry來應(yīng)聘，他提出雙倍工資，但是，他很能干，是個好助手。一個風(fēng)雨交加的晚上，Tom需要Henry一起去防護農(nóng)場，但是看不到Henry的人影。段首指導(dǎo)語第一段Tom以為Henry在睡覺，第二段Tom認為自己雇傭錯了人。思路分析（兩段話分別該寫什么內(nèi)容？）Henry在哪兒？做了什么事情會讓Tom覺得雇傭錯了人？Tom接下來會怎么做？結(jié)局是怎樣的？范文賞析Paragraph1

TomthoughtHenrymuststillbesleeping.Soanxious

washethat

heknockedatthedoorofHenry’sroomviolently.（描寫Tom在暴風(fēng)雨來臨的時候，找不到幫手那種焦急的情緒。）ToTom’sastonishment,Henrywasstilllyinginhisbed.（令人意外的情況，與Tom的極其焦慮相比較，Henry好像沒事一樣。）ItwasextremelyevidentthatHenrydidn’trealizehowseriousthesituationwas.（Henry在這樣嚴重的暴風(fēng)雨天氣還在坦然的睡覺，很明顯他沒有意識到情況有多么糟糕。）Filledwithrage,Tomshouted,“Getup!Thereisabigstorm.Wemustworkrightnow.”（看到這個場景，Tom更加憤怒）Calmandpeaceful,Henryresponded,“Sir,haveyouforgottenItoldyouthatstormswouldn’tdisturboursleep?Whynotjustgobacktosleep?”（然而，Henry卻異常平靜，無動于衷。）

Hearingthewords,awidedisappointmenttookholdofTom.(此情此景，留給Tom的只有失望。)Paragraph2Tomthoughthehadhiredthewrongman.Feeling

helpless,herushedouttoworkonhisown.（孤身作戰(zhàn)，Tom感到很無力。）Nevertheless,nosoonerhadhegone

outsidethananunexpectedscene

cameintohissight,alltheroofscoveredandallhischicken,horsesandcowssettled.（然而，當他到室外正準備干活時，看到了意外的場景，一切都井然有序。）Tomwasseized

byastrongsenseofrelief,tearsstreamingdownhischeeks.（這種強烈的轉(zhuǎn)折令他如釋重負。）ItwasHenrythatdidalltheworkwellinadvance

beforethestormcame.（此時此刻他才明白，原來是Henry早在暴風(fēng)雨來之前就把農(nóng)場整理好了。）Herealizedhehadhiredthebestman.（結(jié)局皆大歡喜，Tom找到了最好的員工。）TomthoughtHenrymuststillbesleeping.Soanxious

washethat

heknockedatthedoorofHenry’sroomviolently.Tom以為Henry一定是正在睡覺。他是如此著急以至于他使勁地敲Henry的門。ToTom’sastonishment,

Henrywasstilllyinginhisbed.

ItwasextremelyevidentthatHenrydidn’trealizehowseriousthesituationwas.令Tom感到吃驚的是,Henry仍躺在床上。很明顯,

Henry沒有意識到情況多么嚴重。Filledwithrage,Tomshouted,“Getup!Thereisabigstorm.Wemustworkrightnow.”/re?d?/n.盛怒Tom生氣地喊道，起床！有大暴雨，我們必須立刻干活啦。Calmandpeaceful,

Henryresponded,“Sir,

haveyouforgottenItoldyouthatstormswouldn’tdisturboursleep?Whynotjustgobacktosleep?”Henry平靜地回答，先生，你忘記我跟你說過的暴風(fēng)雨不會影響我們的睡眠了嗎？為什么不回去睡覺呢？Hearingthewords,

awidedisappointmenttookholdofTom.聽到這些話，Tom感到很失望Tom以為Henry一定是正在睡覺。他是如此著急以至于他使勁地敲Henry的門。令Tom感到吃驚的是,Henry仍躺在床上。很明顯,

Henry沒有意識到情況多么嚴重。Tom生氣地喊道，起床！有大暴雨，我們必須立刻干活啦。Henry平靜地回答，先生，你忘記我跟你說過的暴風(fēng)雨不會影響我們的睡眠了嗎？為什么不回去睡覺呢？聽到這些話，Tom感到很失望TomthoughtHenrymuststillbesleeping.SoanxiouswashethatheknockedatthedoorofHenry’sroomviolently.ToTom’sastonishment,Henrywasstilllyinginhisbed.ItwasextremelyevidentthatHenrydidn’trealizehowseriousthesituationwas.Filledwithrage,Tomshouted,“Getup!Thereisabigstorm.Wemustworkrightnow.”

Calmandpeaceful,Henryresponded,“Sir,haveyouforgottenItoldyouthatstormswouldn’tdisturboursleep?Whynotjustgobacktosleep?”

Hearingthewords,awidedisappointmenttookholdofTom.Tomthoughthehadhiredthewrongman.Feeling

helpless,herushedouttoworkonhisown.Tom認為他雇錯了人。感到無助，他自己沖出去工作。Nevertheless,nosoonerhadhegone

outside

thananunexpectedscenecameintohissight,alltheroofscoveredandallhischicken,horsesandcowssettled.然而，他剛到戶外就看到意外的場景，房頂都被遮蓋好了，所有的雞，馬和牛都被安置妥當。Tomwasseizedbyastrongsenseofrelief,tearsstreamingdownhischeeks.Tom松了一口氣，眼淚流下來ItwasHenrythatdidalltheworkwellinadvancebeforethestormcame.是Henry提前把所有的工作都做好了。Herealizedhehadhiredthebestman.他意識到他雇傭了最好的人。Tom認為他雇錯了人。感到無助，他自己沖出去工作。然而，他剛到戶外就看到意外的場景，房頂都被遮蓋好了，所有的雞，馬和牛都被安置妥當。Tom松了一口氣，眼淚流下來。是Henry提前把所有的工作都做好了。他意識到他雇傭了最好的人。Tomthoughthehadhiredthewrongman.Feeling

helpless,herushedouttoworkonhisown.Nevert