讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+雇主誤多給了保姆女孩工資女孩主動歸還感動了雇主 高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)雇主誤多給了保姆女孩工資，女孩主動歸還感動了雇主1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Annatookherfirstbaby-sittingjobinPeterSmith’sandplayedgameswithPeter’sthreechildrenuntilthebedtime.Mr.Smithpraisedherforthegreatwork.AfterMrs.Smithhadpressedthemoneyintoherhand,Annadidn’tevenlookatthemoneyandthenwalkedoutofthehouse.She’dexpectedtendollars.Nowshesawthatitwasaone-hundred-dollarbill!Annaimaginedherparents’faceswhenshehandedthemtheonehundreddollars.Thingshadn’tbeeneasyforAnna’sfamilysinceAnna’sdadhadlosthisengineeringjobayearago.Therehadbeennonewclothesormoviesinthelastyear.TheynolongerwentouttoeatonFridays.Annadidn’treallymind,aslongasherfamilywastogether.Butnowshecouldhelp.Onehundreddollars!Thatwasenoughtofillthecarwithgasortobuyabagofgroceries.4續(xù)寫原文HerexcitementfadedasshewonderedifMrs.Smithrealizedhowmuchmoneyshehadgivenher.Couldshehavemadeamistake?AnnafeltbadassherememberedthatMrs.Smithhadsimplypulledthemoneyfromherpursewithoutlookingatit.Annathought,“MaybeMrs.Smithmeanttogivemetheone-hundred-dollarbill.Baby-sittingthreechildrenisalotofwork.”SoonAnnarememberedthattheSmithsdidn’tseemtohavemuchmoney,either.But,shesilentlyarguedwithherself.“Theygavemethemoney.Ididn’tstealit.”Shefoundherparentsinthelivingroom.Annatookadeepbreathandtoldthemwhathadhappened.“Iwantedtogivethemoneytoyoutohelpoutthefamily,butIthinkMrs.Smithmadeamistake.”Shecontinued.“I’mgoingtogiveitbacktoher.”Dadsettledhisbighandonhershoulder.“Youjustgaveusthebestgift,Anna.”Momkissedher.“We’reproudofyou,sweetheart.”5段首句Para1：Thenextmorning,AnnawenttoMrs.Smith’shouseagain.Para2：Mrs.Smithopenedherpurseandcountedouttendollars.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章以人物為線索展開，講述安娜在給史密斯夫婦看孩子之后史密斯太太給了她一百塊錢報酬?；丶抑笏苊埽环矫嬖谙胧欠袷鞘访芩固缅e了，一方面又想可能是她的勞動應(yīng)該值這么多，并且這些錢能幫助家里改善一下生活，但她最終還是跟父母講了這件事，說她覺得是史密斯太太給多了報酬，她要還給人家，她的父母聽完之后很為她驕傲。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1Thenextmorning,AnnawenttoMrs.Smith’shouseagain.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“第二天早上，安娜又去了史密斯太太家。”可知，第一段可描寫安娜說完來意之后史密斯太太的反應(yīng)。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Mrs.Smithopenedherpurseandcountedouttendollars.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“史密斯太太打開錢包，數(shù)了十美元?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫史密斯太太為安娜的誠實(shí)所感動，付了報酬并且決定繼續(xù)讓她幫忙看孩子。11續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材詢問——事實(shí)——感動——繼續(xù)雇用——開心——感悟12續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材行為類①開始：starttodo/begintodo②回家：gobackhome/returnhome③需要：need/want情緒類①吃驚：surprised/amazed②對……感到驕傲：beproudof/takepridein13續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材[高分句型1].Ididn’tknowwherethatmoneyhadgone!（由where引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作know的賓語）[高分句型2].Imadeamistakeofgivingyoutheonehundreddollars,butyouaresuchanhonestandkindgirlthatyoudidnotkeepit.（such…that結(jié)構(gòu)的結(jié)果狀語從句）[高分句型3].Whenshegavehermotherthetendollars,thebestgiftforher,shefeltveryproudbecauseshethoughtshedidagreatajob.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句；省略that的賓語從句）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,AnnawenttoMrs.Smith’shouseagain.“Ithinkyouoverpaidmelastnight,”shesaidandhandedtheone-hundred-dollarbilltoher.Mrs.Smithlookedsurprised.“Ididn’tknowwherethatmoneyhadgone!IknewthatIhadputitinmypurse.Thenthismorning,Icouldn’tfindit.”Shestartedtocry.“It’sthelastpaymentforsomethingmyhusbandneeded.Imadeamistakeofgivingyoutheonehundreddollars,butyouaresuchanhonestandkindgirlthatyoudidnotkeepit.”16范文呈現(xiàn)Mrs.Smithopenedherpurseandcountedouttendollars.“Ihopeyou’llbaby-sitforusagain.Ourchildrenthinkyou’rethebestbaby-sitterthey’veeverhad,andsodoI.Ithinktheywillbeproudofhavingsuchagreatsistertobaby-sitthem!”Annasaidyesandwentbackhomehappily.Whenshegavehermotherthetendollars,thebestgiftforher,shefeltveryproudbecauseshethoughtshedidagreatajob.17范文譯文第二天早上，安娜又去了史密斯太太家。“我想你昨晚給我的錢太多了，”她說，然后把那張一百美元的鈔票遞給了她。史密斯太太看起來很驚訝?！拔也恢滥切╁X去哪里了！我知道我把它放在錢包里了。然后今天早上，我找不到了?！彼_始哭了?！斑@是我丈夫需要的東西的最后一筆付款。我給你一百美元是個錯誤，但你是個誠實(shí)善良的女孩，沒有留著?！笔访芩固蜷_錢包，數(shù)出十美