樹作文之英語作文關(guān)于對圖書館的建議信

英語作文關(guān)于對圖書館的建議信【篇一：作文模版之建議信與圖書館】見紙……。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。充分利用考前十分鐘寫的模板連接詞（如何語意連貫？）原因becausesinceasduetohisdoctorsdegreeinthat所以/因此sotherefore并列andaswellasoreitherorneithernornotonly…but遞進alsotoomoremoreoveraswellafterallbesides讓步asoncethoughalthougheventhoughwhilewhendespiteinspitenevertheless轉(zhuǎn)折buthoweverwhilestillonthecontrary時序firstofallsecondlythenwhat’smoremoreoverinaddition(另外，此外)強調(diào)especially總結(jié)personally就我而言tosumup總之。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。大體四級作文用詞中心細節(jié)aletterofsuggestionwritealettertothepresidentofyourcollegeoruniversityabouttheproblemsinthelibrary.1.圖書館存在很多問題，如藏書偏舊，數(shù)目較少，燈光昏暗等2.提出可行的建議3.期待圖書館出現(xiàn)新面貌正文：onmonday,march11,2013dearpresident,mynameissimonwhoisafreshmanintheshanghaimaritimeuniversity(考試時候不能寫學校的喲～).libraryisthethirdhometothemostofthestudentsnexttotheclassroomsanddormitories.therearemanybenefitsofreadingregularlyinthelibrary.weacquireskillsandinspiration,increasecreativityaswellasmotivationhere.therefore,itisimportantforustohaveagoodlibrary.however,someproblemsemergeintheprocessofusingourlibrary.onbehalfofthestudents,i’dliketoexpressourviews:firstofall,openinghoursaredifferentfromourstudytime,whichhasbroughtmuchinconveniencetous.thelibraryisclosedtooearly.sowhenwehavesparetimeafterclass,itisoftennotaccessible(我們有時間的時候圖書館不開稍微把邏輯關(guān)系再表達清楚一點更好).therefore,mysuggestionistoextendtheopeningtime.secondly,therearetoomanyoutdatedbooks.specially,theperiodicalsinthelibrarycantkeepupwithtrends.thirdly,thelibraryisinapoorstudycondition,forexamplethelightingisdingy.worsestill,somethingisalwayswrongwithcomputers,whichexhaustsourpatience.forthereasonsmentionedabove,therearesomesuggestionsforreference.isuggesttheheadsetisprovided.what’smore,itisnecessarytopurchasemorebooksandacademicjournals,forinstance,magazines,periodicalsandliteraturebooks.lastbutnotleast,wehopethatbetterlightingsystemwillbeprovided,andthelibrarysystemwillbeupdatedandkeyboardswillbereplaced.ibelievethatourlibrarywillhaveanewlookinthenearfuture.sincerelyyourssimon整個文章寫得很好，結(jié)構(gòu)、用詞、語法都很好，現(xiàn)在這個水平13分以上應該沒什么問題。如果想進一步完善，包括之后要考雅思的話，有幾個小問題再注意一下：1。動詞使用，什么時候是謂語，什么時候用ing,單復數(shù)等。2。名詞的單復數(shù)細節(jié)再注意）3。文章段落太多啦，問題可以合并，建議可以合并。3－4段是最清晰的結(jié)構(gòu)了。希望你再接再厲爭取拿個高分喔！指導老師:郭蕾劉如虹recently,asurveyhasbeenconductedamongthestudentsingradethreeaboutwhattheywilldoduringthethreemonthholidayafterthecollegeentranceexam.7.whynotdo/whydon’tyoudo…?為什么不…3.表示喜歡和感興趣1.like/lovedoing2.enjoydoing3.befondofdoing喜歡做…4.bekeenonn/doing喜歡做…5.prefertodoaratherthandob寧愿做a也不愿做b6.beinterestedindoing=show/takegreatinterestinn/doing4.努力做…1.trytodo努力做…2.strivetodo努力做…3.tryone’sbesttodo=doone’sbesttodo竭盡全力做…4.makeeffortstodo=makeeveryefforttodo盡力做…5.dowhatsbcan(do)todo盡力做…6.sparenoefforttodo不遺余力的做…7.dowhat/everythingsb.cantodo盡某人全力做…5.打算做…/計劃做…1.intend/plantodo打算做…2.begoingtodo打算做…3.decidetodo決定做…4.determinetodo決定做…5.bedeterminedtodo決定做…6.makeupone’smindtodo下定決心做…6.表示想/希望1.wanttodo=wouldliketodo想做…2.hopetodo希望做…3.expecttodo期待著做…4.wishtodo希望做…5.considerdoing考慮做…7.只加doing作賓語的動詞1.finish完成practice練習suggest建議consider考慮mind介意enjoy喜歡+doing2.固定句型lookforwardtodoing盼望做…keepondoing堅持做…dreamofdoing夢想做…can’thelpdoing情不自禁地做…keep/stop/preventsb.fromdoing阻止某人做…bebusy(in)doingbebusywith+名詞忙于做…spendtime/money(in)doingspendtime/moneyon+名詞花費時間做…h(huán)avefun/haveagoodtime/enjoyoneselfdoing玩得開心havetrouble/haveproblem/havedifficulty(in)doing或with+名詞做…有困難8.學習用定語從句先行詞+關(guān)系詞+定語從句高中英語滿分書信作文模板——建議信dear______,①youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout______,andiwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.②inmyopinion,_____（建議的內(nèi)容）.③iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.iwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.yourssincerely,liming高中英語滿分書信作文模板——請求信dear______,①iamwritingaskto_____（請求的內(nèi)容）.②couldyouplease___________-②wouldyoumind___________③iwonderifyoucould___________⑥thankyouforyourattentiontotheserequests..⑧ilookforwardtoafavorablereply.yourssincerely,liming高中英語滿分書信作文模板——詢問信dear______,①iam______（自我介紹）.②iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding______（要詢問的內(nèi)容）.③firstofall,whatare______（第一個問題）?④secondly,whenwill______（第二個問題）?⑤thirdly,is______（第三個問題）?⑥iwouldalsoliketoinquire______（將最重要的問題單獨成段）.⑦couldyoubesokindastosendmesomerelevan