2024年高考英語沖刺模擬試卷5（全國卷含解析）

2024年高考英語沖刺模擬試卷（五）

其次部分閱讀理解（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）

第一節(jié)（共15小題；每小題2分，滿分30分）

閱讀下列短文，從每題所給的A、B、C和D四個選項中，選出最佳選項。

A

Oncethereweretwomice.Theywerefriends.Onemouselivedinthecountry;theothermouse

livedinthecity.AftermanyyearstheCountrymousesawtheCitymouse;hesaid,〃Docomeand

seemeatmyhouseinthecountry./zSotheCitymousewent.TheCitymousesaid,“Thisfoodis

notgood,andyourhouseisnotgood.Whydoyouliveinaholeinthefield?Youshouldcome

andliveinthecity.Youwouldliveinanicehousemadeofstone.Youwouldhavenicefoodto

eat.Youmustcomeandseemeatmyhouseinthecity.z/TheCountrymousewenttothehouseof

theCitymouse.Itwasaverygoodhouse.Nicefoodwassetreadyforthemtoeat.Butjustas

theybegantoeattheyheardagreatnoise.TheCitymousecried,〃Run!Run!Thecatiscoming!/z

Theyranawayquicklyandhid.Aftersometimetheycameout.Whentheycameout,theCountry

mousesaid,〃Idonotlikelivinginthecity.Ilikelivinginmyholeinthefield.Foritis

nicertobepoorandhappy,thantoberichandafraid.z/

21.Fromthepassage,weknowthat.

A.TheCitymouseandtheCountrymousefinallylivingtogether.

B.TheCountrymousewouldliveinhisCountryfield.

C.ThecathadeatentheCountrymouse.

D.TheCitycathavearichandsafeliving.

【答案】B

【解析】依據最終一段的"Ilikelivinginmyholeinthefield.Foritisnicertobepoorand

happy,thantoberichandafraid.，z可知鄉(xiāng)村里的老鼠最終仍會生活在它的田里。

22.WhydoestheCountrymousewanttogobacktohisfield.

A.BecausehedislikelivingwiththeCitymouse.

B.Becausehedislikethefoodinthecity.

C.Becausehepreferapoorbuthappylife.

D.Becausehewanttoavoidthecat.

【答案】D

【解析】文章沒提及它不寵愛和城里老鼠生活在一起也沒說它不寵愛cityfood,沒說它是為了躲避貓。只

是因為它preferapoorbuthappylife.

23.Whichofthefollowingwouldbethebesttitleofthepassage?

A.Twomousesandacat.

B.Thedifferenceofcityandcountry.

C.Twomouses,twochoices.

D.Mousesandcatscannotlivetogether.

【答案】C

【解析】citymouse寵愛richandafraidlife而countrymouse寵愛poorandhappylife兩種不同

的老鼠選擇兩種不同的生活方式,故選Co

B

Althoughit'sgreattospendvacationsseeingtheworldwithfamily,friends,oralover,

travelingalonecanalsobecompletelyincredible.Asoloadventurehasthepotentialtobe

life-changing.Herearesomereasonsyoushouldtravelaloneatleastonce.

Ifyouenjoymeetingnewfriends,here'syourchance;youwilllikelyfindsomewhentraveling

alone.Sinceyouwon'tbefocusedontalkingtoanyoneyouknow,you'11bemorelikelytostrike

upconversationswithstrangers.Meetingpeoplefromdifferentbackgroundsopensourminds,

expandsourworld,andcaninspireusalot.Youmaymeetsomeamazinglocalsorotheradventurers

likeyourself;eitherwayyou'reboundtomakesomenewfriendsduringyourjourney.

Atripalonecanigniteyourcreativity.Spendingtimealonewithanopenmindcanbeexactly

whatyouneedforyourimaginationtosoar.Yourenthusiasmandpassionforlifemaysky-rocket

fromyourawesomeadventure.

Whentravelingwithapartneroragroup,everyideacanbebouncedoffsomeoneelse.Whenyou

travelalone,youwilllearntobedecisive;youwillbemakingeverydecisionalone.Fromwhere

toeat,towhattimetowakeup,towhatsightstosee,andwhichairlinetouse,travelingsolo

forcesyoutorelyonyourstruly.Asyourealizeyoucanmakegoodchoiceswithouthelpfrom

others,youwilllikelytrustyourinstinctsmore,andthisnewfoundself-assuranceandconfidence

willbehelpfulinmanyareasofyourlife.

24.Whichofthefollowingisnotmentionsinthepassage.

A.Youwillmeetnewpeople.

B.Youlightyourlifefire.

C.Youwilllearntoenjoybeingalone.

D.Youwilllearntobedecisive.

【答案】C

【解析】文中沒有段落提及"Youwilllearntoenjoybeingalone."其次段說了能相識更多的摯友,

第三段說了能點燃生活的熱忱，第四段說了會使我們變得更堅決。

25.Fromthepassage,weknowthat.

A.Travelingaloneyoucandoanythingyouwantto.

B.Travelingalone,wewouldlearnmorething.

C.You'11learntothriveoutsideyourcomfortzone

D.Thestrangerswhowemeetareallkind.

【答案】B

【解析】從文章中我們可以得知一個人旅行能學到收獲許多東西，suchasmakingnewfriends,being

decisive.

26.Whichofthefollowingissimilartotheunderlinedphraseinparagraphfour.

A.hesitateB.independent

C.fearlessD.determined

【答案】D

【解析】"decisive"意為"確定性的，堅決的，堅決的”故“determined”和它意思相近。

27.Whichofthefollowingwouldbethebesttitleofthepassage?

A.Howtotravelalone.

B.Youshouldtravelaloneatleastonceinyourlife.

C.Travelingwillmakeyouhavemorefriends.

D.Letusenjoyingvacationstrip.

【答案】B

【解析】全文都圍圍著一個人旅行的好處來綻開，故最合適的題目應當是

“Youshouldtravelaloneatleastonceinyourlife”

C

Consumerelectronicsonceagaintoppedthelistofthemostwantedgiftsthisholidayseason.

“Seventy-sixpercentofconsumerswhoplantobuyholidaygiftssaythattheywillspend

moneyorbuyatleastonetechnologyproduct;definitelyasolidvoteofconfidencefor

technology.”

SteveKoenigiswiththeConsumerElectronicsAssociation.Hesaysthegroup?slatestresearch

alsoshowsthatAmericansthisyeararespendingmoreontechnologyproducts."Herein2012,

$252onaveragethetechnologyspendforconsumersthisyear.”

Fromtabletcomputerstosmartphones,Americanshoppershavebeenlininguptogetthenewest

andcoolestelectronicdevicesonthemarket.Therearemorechoicestodaythaneverbefore.〃It's

kindofhardtomakeadecision.〃

Tabletcomputersareoneofthebest-sellingproductsthisyear.BrianTongisSeniorEditor

ofCNET.Thewebsitereportsontechnewsandexaminesthelatestelectronicproducts.He

saystheAppleiPadMiniisoneofthemostpopulartablets.Itsstartingpriceis$329.Oneof

Apple'sbiggestcompetitorsistheGoogleNexus7.Itstartsat$199.

“Itshardwareismorepowerfulthanwhat'sintheiPadMini,butalsoitoffersyoualot

ofthingslikemapsthatworkbetterthanApple'smaps.

ButBrianTongsaysthereisonereasonwhypeoplemayliketheiPadMinimorethantheNexus

7.“IfyoujustwanttoreadbooksandsurftheInternet,youdon'treallyneedtogetaniPad

Mini,butifyouwantthelargestrobustgroupofapps（應用軟件）that,swheretheiPadandApple's

ecosystemshinesthemost.”

ElmanChaconiswiththeelectronicsstoreBestBuy.Hesaysanotherhotproductthisseason

issmartcameras.TheyconnecttotheInternetthroughWiFi.Thismakesiteasyforuserstoemail

oruploadphotographsdirectlyfromthecamera.

“YoucanliterallytakeapictureanduploaditintoyourFacebookinamatterofseconds.

Thesethingsareprettycoolbecausetheydoalotofthings.”

StreamingmediaboxesalsoconnecttotheInternet.Peopleareabletowatchwebcontentsuch

asmoviesandYouTubevideosontheirtelevisions.Anotherpopularitemiswirelessspeakersystems.

ThenewestonesworkwithanydevicethathasBluetoothtechnology,includingsmartphones,laptops

andtablets.

28.AccordingtoBrianTong,whymaypeopleprefertheiPadMinitotheGoogleNexus7?

A.Becauseitischeaper.

B.Becauseithasmorefunctions.

C.BecauseyoucanreadbooksandsurftheInternetwithit.

D.BecauseitoffersyoualotofthingslikemapsthatworkbetterthanApple,smaps.

【答案】B

【角軍析】細微環(huán)節(jié)理角星題?！癰utifyouwantthelargestrobustgroupofapps（應用軟件）that's

wheretheiPadandApple，secosystemshinesthemost.”說明強大的應用軟件才是蘋果系統(tǒng)的最大

亮點。所以人們更寵愛蘋果平板電腦，是因為它有更多功能。

29.Whatdoes“Itshardware“inParagraph6referto?

A.Thehardwareoftabletcomputers.

B.ThehardwareoftheAppleiPad.

C.ThehardwareoftheGoogleNexus7.

D.ThehardwareoftheiPadMini.

【答案】c

【解析】細微環(huán)節(jié)理解題。上一段“OneofApple'sbiggestcompetitorsistheGoogleNexus7.”

說明作者在把GoogleNexus7和AppleiPad進行比較。故選作

30.Whichofthefollowingistrueaccordingtothepassage?

A.Peoplewillspendmostoftheirmoneyonelectronics.

B.Photoscanbeuploadedfromthecamerawhenconnectedtoacomputer.

C.AstreamingmediaboxisaboxwhichcancontainCD.

D.Mostpeoplewouldliketobuyelectronicsasgifts.

【答案】D

【解析】推理推斷題。文章第一句"Consumerelectronicsonceagaintoppedthelistofthemost

wantedgiftsthisholidayseason.”就說明大多數人想買電子產品作為禮物。故D正確。

31.Whichofthefollowingwouldbethebesttitleofthepassage?

A.Electronics:People'sMostFavoriteGiftsthisyear

B.WhichisMorePopular,theAppleiPadMiniortheGoogleNexus7?

C.LatestTechnologyProducts

D.MoreElectronicstoChoosefrom

【答案】A

【解析】標題歸納題。本文主要講了今年人們最寵愛的禮物一一電子產品。故選A。

D

Batteriescanpoweranythingfromsmallsensorstolargesystems.Whilescientistsarefinding

waystomakethemsmallerbutevenmorepowerful,problemscanarisewhenthesebatteriesare

muchlargerandheavierthanthedevicesthemselves.UniversityofMissouri（MU）researchersare

developinganuclearenergysourcethatissmaller,lighterandmoreefficient.

“Toprovideenoughpower,weneedcertainmethodswithhighenergydensity（密度）”,said

JaeKwon,assistantprofessorofelectricalandcomputerengineeringatMU."Theradioisotope（放

射性同位素）batterycanprovidepowerdensitythatismuchhigherthanchemicalbatteries.”

Kwonandhisresearchteamhavebeenworkingonbuildingasmallnuclearbattery,presently

thesizeandthicknessofapenny,intendedtopowervariousmicrosystems（M/NEMS）.Although

nuclearbatteriescancauseconcerns,Kwonsaidtheyaresafe.

^Peopleheartheword'nuclear'andthinkofsomethingverydangerous,hesaid,“However,

nuclearpowersourceshavealreadybeensafelypoweringavarietyofdevices,suchaspace-makers,

spacesatellitesandunderwatersystems.”

Hisnewideaisnotonlyinthebattery'ssize,butalsoinitssemiconductor（半導體）.Kwon's

batteryusesaliquidsemiconductorratherthanasolidsemiconductor.

“Thekeypartofusingaradioactivebatteryisthatwhenyouharvesttheenergy,partof

theradiationenergycandamagethelatticestructure（晶體結構）ofthesolidsemiconductor,“

Kwonsaid,“Byusingaliquidsemiconductor,webelievewecanminimizethatproblem.”

TogetherwithJ.DavidRobertson,chemistryprofessorandassociatedirectoroftheMUResearch

Reactor,Kwonisworkingtobuildandtestthebattery.Inthefuture,theyhopetoincreasethe

battery,spower,shrinkitssizeandtrywithvariousothermaterials.Kwonsaidthatbattery

couldbethinnerthanthethicknessofhumanhair.

32.WhichofthefollowingistrueofJaeKwon?

A.HeteacheschemistryatMU.

B.Hedevelopedachemicalbattery.

C.Heisworkingonanuclearenergysource.

D.Hemadeabreakthroughincomputerengineering.

【答案】C

【解析】細微環(huán)節(jié)理解題。依據第一段的UniversityofMissouri(MU)researchersaredevelopinga

nuclearenergysourcethatissmaller,lighterandmoreefficient及第三段的敘述可知，Kwon在

探討一種核能電池，所以C項正確。

33.JaeKwongaveexamplesinParagraph4.

A.toshowchemicalbatteriesarewidelyapplied.

B.tointroducenuclearbatteriescanbesafelyused.

C.todescribeanuclear-poweredsystem.

D.tointroducevariousenergysources.

【答案】B

【解析】細微環(huán)節(jié)理解題。依據文章第四段可知Kwon舉例的目的是為了說明核能電池是平安性。

34.Liquidsemiconductorisusedto.

A.getridoftheradioactivewaste

B.testthepowerofnuclearbatteries.

C.decreasethesizeofnuclearbatteries

D.reducethedamagetolatticestructure.

【答案】D

【解析】細微環(huán)節(jié)理解題。依據partoftheradiationenergycandamagethelatticestructure(晶

體結構)ofthesolidsemiconductor,"及“Byusingaliquidsemiconductor,webelievewecan

minimizethatproblem.可知，通過運用液態(tài)半導體材料，可削減對晶體結構的破壞。

35.Thetextismostprobablya.

A.sciencenewsreportB.bookreview

C.newspaperadD.sciencefictionstory

【答案】A

【解析】推理推斷題。本文講解并描述了Kwon的原子能電池的有關狀況，文章體裁應屬于科普文章，所

以A項正確。

其次節(jié)（共5小題；每小題2分，滿分10分）

依據短文內容，從短文后的選項中選出能填入空白處的最佳選項。選項中有兩項為多余選項。

Growingupiremembermyweekly〃career"announcements.Anchorwoman,flightattendantand

teacher,amongmany,manyothers.Eachweekiheard〃youcandothat.Youwillbegoodatthat”.

36.

Throughoutlife,Ilearnedthatnoteveryonebelievedinmethewaymymomanddadbelieved

inme.37.Idugdeepandgainsuccess.Ihave2childrenofmyownnowandIechothose

wordsofencouragementtothemeveryday.Ioftentellmyniecesandnephews,38.

39,asIlistentootherfamilymemberstelltheirchildrenandevenmyboystelling

thattoeachother.

Mostoftenwhenwethinkofwhatpassesfromonegenerationtothenextitconsistsofartifacts

andgenes.

IwillpassthesewordsonandIknowtheywillcarryonforeachgenerationtocome.40

A.ItwasduringthosetimesIwouldhearthosewordstheloudest

B.Thesewordswillbepassedalongfromgenerationtogeneration

C.Withmanythingstoworryabout

D.itiscommontoloseyourthingsontheway

E.Afterall〃iCANdothat!

F.Thatwasmymomanddad

G.aswellasmyco-workersthatsamemessage

【答案】36.F37.A38.G39.B40.E

【語篇解讀】在父母的幫助下建立自信念是人生必備的課題。

36.【解析】從下文^Throughoutlife,Ilearnedthatnoteveryonebelievedinmethewaymymom

anddadbelievedinme”可知，這句話應當是自己的父母曾經激勵自己的。

【答案】F

37【解析】從下文“Idugdeepandgainsuccess.可知，在艱難的時刻，父母曾經的那些話不斷激勵

著我，使我最終取得成就。

【答案】A

38.【解析】從前文“Ioftentellmyniecesandnephews,,可知，我把這些激勵的話告知了我的侄子

侄女，以及我身邊的同事。

【答案】G

39.【角軍析】從下文“asIlistentootherfamilymemberstelltheirchildrenandevenmyboystelling

thattoeachother.”可知，這些激勵的話一代一代傳承了下去。

【答案】B

40.【解析】從今空的位置可知，它處于全文最終一句，須要總結全文并點明主旨“信任自己”。

【答案】E

第三部分英語學問運用（共兩節(jié)，滿分45）

第一節(jié)（共20小題；每小題1.5分，滿分30分）

閱讀下面短文，從短文后各題所給的A、B、C和D四個選項中，選出可以填入空白處的最佳選項。

Amancamehomefromwork_41_,tiredand_42__,tofindhis5-yearoldson___43_forhim

atthedoor.

“Daddy,mayIaskyouaquestion?

“Yeahsure,whatisit?”repliedtheman.

“Daddy,howmuchdoyoumakeanhour?”

“That'snoneofyour_44___.Whydoyouasksuchathing?”themansaid_45___.

“Ijustwanttoknow.Pleasetellme,howmuchdoyoumakeanhour?”pleadedthelittleboy.

“Ifyou_46_know,Imake$20anhour.”

“Oh,"thelittleboyreplied,withhisheaddown.Lookingup,hesaid,“Daddy,mayIplease

__47一$10?”

Thefatherwasfurious,“Ifthe_48____reasonyouaskedthatissoyoucanborrowsomemoney

tobuyasillytoyorsomeother_49,thenyoumarchyourselfstraighttoyourroomandgo

tobed.Thinkaboutwhyyouarebeingso_50.Iworkhardeverydayforsuch_51behavior.”

Thelittleboyquietlywenttohisroomandshutthedoor.Themansatdownandstartedtoget

evenangrieraboutthelittleboy's_52.Howdareheasksuchquestionsonlytogetsome

money?Afteraboutanhourorso,themanhad_53___down,andstartedtothink:Maybethere

wassomethinghereallyneededtobuywiththat$10andhereallydidn'taskformoneyveryoften.

Themanwenttothedoorofthelittleboy'sroomandopenedthedoor.

“Areyouasleep,son?”Heasked.

“Nodaddy,I'mawake,“repliedtheboy.

"I'vebeenthinking,maybeIwastoohardonyouearlier,“saidtheman,"It'sbeenalong

dayandItookoutmy_54onyou.Here'sthe$10youaskedfor.”

Thelittleboysatstraightup,_55.“Oh,thankyoudaddy!”Heyelled.Then,reachingunder

hispillowhe_56outsomecrumpledupbills.Theman,seeingthattheboyalreadyhadmoney,

startedtogetangryagain.Thelittleboyslowly57_outhismoney,thenlookedupathis

father.

“Whydoyouwantmoremoneyifyou_58_havesome?”thefathergrumbled（埋怨）.

“BecauseIdidn'thaveenough,butnowIdo,“thelittleboyreplied."Daddy,Ihave$20now.

CanIbuyanhourofyourtime?Pleasecomehome_59tomorrow.Iwouldliketohave_60

withyou.”

41A.lateB.earlyC.quicklyD.slowly

42A.gladB.sadC.worriedD.irritated

43A.lookingB.sayingC.waitingD.watching

44A.businessB.thingC.assignmentD.burden

45A.happilyB.naturallyC.awkwardlyD.angrily

46A.couldB.mustC.mayD.need

47A.borrowB.lendC.askD.use

48A.oneB.bestC.onlyD.necessary

49A.thingB.nonsenseC.foodD.candy

50A.boringB.naughtyC.selfishD.foolish

51A.childishB.matureC.considerateD.carelessly

52A.questionsB.wordsC.suggestionD.behavior

53A.satB.brokeClookedD.calmed

54A.courageB.aggravationC.conceptionD.thought

55A.cryingB.dancingC.sayingD.smiling

56A.tookB.pushedC.threwD.pulled

57A.madeB.putC.countedD.sent

58A.neverB.alreadyC.alwaysD.may

59A.lateB.safelyC.earlyD.calmly

60A.breakfastB.lunchC.brunchD.dinner

41.【答案】A

【解析］依據后文“tired”可知父親工作回來已經很晚了，故選late.

42.【答案】D

【解析】：irritated意為憤怒的，急躁的。和前文工作很晚回到家很累是有聯系的。

43.【答案】C

【解析】："Waitingforsomebody"正在等某人，依據前文父親很晚回家可知兒子正在等爸爸回家。故選

C

44.【答案】A

【解析】:"noneofyourbusiness”固定短語，意為不關你的事。由后文“Whydoyouasksuchathing?"

可知父親覺得這種事小孩不應當操勞。

45.【答案】D

【解析】：依據對話的語氣可知此時父親是很生氣的，故選angrily。

46.【答案】B

【解析】：must,必需的，句意為“假如你必需知道，那我是每小時20美元?！?/p>

47.【答案】A

【解析】："borrow”借，句意為“爸爸，我可以向你借10美元嗎？”依據后文爸爸很生氣可知兒子是向

爸爸借錢而不是借給爸爸錢，故選A

48.【答案】C

【解析】：句意為假如你向我借錢唯一的緣由就是為了買那些愚蠢的玩具，可知。nly唯一的，最合適。

49.【答案】B

【解析】：依據前文父親所說的“sillytoy”可知后文接著的是“nonsense”無用的東西。

50.【答案】C

【解析工"selfish”自私的，依據前文父親工作那么累兒子還向父親借錢可知父親覺得兒子很自私。

51.【答案】A

【解析】“childish”孩子氣的，無趣的。依據前文可知父親覺得兒子的行為很不懂事很無趣。句意為“我

工作那么辛苦還要面對你那么無趣的行為?！?/p>

52.【答案】A

【解析】：依據后文“Howdareheasksuchquestions"可知父親是在想兒子的問題。

53.【答案】D

【解析】："calmeddown”冷靜下來，為固定搭配。由后文知過后父親冷靜下來再次找兒子。

54.【答案】B

【解析】："aggravation"怒氣，句意為我工作了一成天，把怒氣都釋放給了你。

55.【答案】D

【解析】:依據后文“Oh,thankyoudaddy!"Heyelled.可看出兒子很興奮，故選smile,微笑。

56.【答案】D

【解析工"pulledout”拉出來?？芍獌鹤影逊旁谡眍^下的錢拉出來。

57.【答案】C

【解析工"countedoutmoney"數錢，依據后文兒子要買父親的一個小時可知兒子在數錢。

58.【答案】B

【解析】：句意為：為什么你已經有一些錢了還想要更多錢。故選already。

59.【答案】C

【解析工依據后文兒子想買父親的一個小時可知兒子希望父親明天工作后早一點回家，故選early。

60.【答案】D

【解析】：結合全文可知父親工作都是很晚回家，所以兒子只是想與爸爸吃一個晚餐，故選dinner。

其次節(jié)(共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分)

閱讀下面短文，在空白處填入1個適當的單詞或括號內單詞的正確形式。

Onemorningafoxsawacock.He_61(think),“Thisismybreakfast.Hecame_62tothe

cockandsaid,“Iknowyoucansingvery_63_(good).Canyousingforme?Thecockwasglad.

Hecloseshiseyesandbegantosing.Thefoxsaw_64andcaughthiminhismouthandcarried

him_65.Thepeoplein_66fieldsawthefox.Theycried,“Look,look!Thefoxis67_

(carry)thecockaway.''Thecocksaidtothefox,“MrFox,doyouunderstand?Thepeoplesayyou

arecarrying（theircockaway.Tellthemitis_68（you）.Nottheirs.‘'Thefoxopened_69

mouthandsaid,“Thecockismine,notyours.Justthenthecockranawayfromthefoxand

fled_70_thetree.

61.【答案】：thought

【解析】：考察時態(tài)，由前文saw可知用的是過去式，故填thought.

62.【答案】：up

【解析】："comeup”走上來。可知這時是狐貍靠近了雞。

63.【答案】：well

【解析】：考察詞性，副詞well修飾前面的動詞sing.

64.【答案】：that

【解析】：that指代狐貍所看到的"Hecloseshiseyesandbegantosing.”

65.【答案】：away

【解析】："carryaway”把帶走，句意為狐貍把雞叼在嘴里然后帶走了。

66.【答案】：the

【解析】：考察冠詞the。特指那片田。

67.【答案】：carrying

【解析】：考察時態(tài)，正在進行時isdoing,所以carry加ing

68.【答案】：yours

【解析】：依據后文“Nottheirs.w可知此處應填“yours”

69.【答案】：his

【解析】：依據后文狐貍要說話所以張開的是它自己的嘴，故填his.

70.【答案】：into

【解析】："fledinto”躲進，句意為雞從狐貍的口中逃脫然后躲到樹叢中。

第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分）

第一節(jié)短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯

誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

留意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多