期末復(fù)習(xí)寫作專訓(xùn)Module46課件九年級英語下冊（合肥地區(qū)）

模塊寫作專訓(xùn)Module4Rulesandsuggestions?

?本模塊的核心話題是“規(guī)則及建議”，此類話題旨在訓(xùn)練學(xué)生如何描述注意事項(xiàng)和提出建議，學(xué)會(huì)表達(dá)應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的事項(xiàng)，學(xué)會(huì)使用表示責(zé)任、義務(wù)、禁止等的句型。寫作時(shí)學(xué)生應(yīng)注意情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的使用。?

?[經(jīng)典例題]當(dāng)前，許多學(xué)生在課外沉溺于智能手機(jī)。針對這一現(xiàn)象，學(xué)校將組織開展一次“拒絕手機(jī)誘惑，收獲健康生活”的演講活動(dòng)。請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇80～100詞的演講稿。弊端：1.花大量時(shí)間玩游戲，不按時(shí)完成作業(yè)；2.傷害眼睛，不利于健康。建議：1.遠(yuǎn)離智能手機(jī)，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)；2.多花時(shí)間與家人、朋友交流；3.積極參加各種活動(dòng)，如打籃球、唱歌……[思路點(diǎn)撥]①

要點(diǎn)提示：根據(jù)寫作提示，介紹沉迷智能手機(jī)的弊端，并提出建議，建議使用表示順序的詞。②

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。③

人稱：以第一、三人稱為主。[寫作提綱][高分范文]Girlsandboys，WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet，manystudentshavesmartphones.Thestudentsoftenspendsomuchtimeinplayinggamesthattheyfeelverytired.Somestudentsdon’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.Besides，smartphonesdoharmtoourhealth.Somestudents’eyesightisbecomingpoorerandpoorer.Toavoidthesedisadvantages，Ithinkweshouldmakesomechanges.First，weshouldkeepawayfromsmartphonesandworkhard.Second，spendmoretimestayingwithourfamilyorfriendsandtalkingwiththemaboutourdailylifeandfeelings.Third，

takeanactivepartinallkindsofactivities，suchasplayingbasketballandsingingsongs.That’sall.Thankyou！

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?（2023·蚌埠蚌山區(qū)模擬）你校將舉行英語征文比賽，請你以“Staysafeatschool”為題寫一篇文章，內(nèi)容包括：1.校園安全的意義；2.對如何加強(qiáng)校園安全提出建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80～100；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Staysafeatschool

It’simportantforustostaysafeatschoolanditwillhelpusstudybetterandlivemorehappily.Inordertostaysafeatschool，wemustdoasfollows.

First，beinorderwhenwearegoingupstairsordownstairs.Second，makesuretobesafewhenwearedoingsports.Trynottobehurt.Moreimportantly，it’snecessaryforustolearnsomeknowledgeofsafety，whichwillhelpkeepusawayfromaccidents.

Ifwefollowtheadviceabove，we’llmakeourselvessafeatschool.

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It’simportantforustostaysafeatschoolanditwillhelpusstudybetterandlivemorehappily.Inordertostaysafeatschool，wemustdoasfollows.

First，beinorderwhenwearegoingupstairsordownstairs.Second，makesuretobesafewhenwearedoingsports.Trynottobehurt.Moreimportantly，it’snecessaryforustolearnsomeknowledgeofsafety，whichwillhelpkeepusawayfromaccidents.

Ifwefollowtheadviceabove，we’llmakeourselvessafeatschool.

Module5Lookafteryourself?

?本模塊圍繞“照顧好自己”這一話題設(shè)計(jì)了一些語言實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，如談?wù)撘粓鲆馔獾氖鹿?，描寫自己在日常生活中的健康飲食與運(yùn)動(dòng)等，要求學(xué)生能夠描述交通事故發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和事故發(fā)生的過程，以及列出健康生活的指南等。?

?[經(jīng)典例題]生命只有一次，我們要珍愛生命。發(fā)生事故時(shí)我們該怎樣安全自救？請以“Howtoprotectourselves”為題寫一篇演講稿，80～100詞。[思路點(diǎn)撥]①

要點(diǎn)提示：根據(jù)內(nèi)容寫作，并適當(dāng)進(jìn)行拓展。在寫作過程中，要注意分段，可從兩方面進(jìn)行闡述。②

時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。③

人稱：以第一人稱為主。[寫作提綱][高分范文]HowtoprotectourselvesDearfriends，Everyonehasonlyonelife.Weshouldtreasureourlives.Howcanweprotectourselves？Ontheonehand，weshouldrealisetheimportanceofsafetyandknowwhattodo.First，whenwegoout，wemustfollowthetrafficrules.Second，whenweplaysportsorgames，

becarefulnottohurtourselves.Third，weshoulddevelophealthyeatinghabits.Eathealthymealsandtrynottoeattoomuch.Ontheotherhand，weshouldlearnhowtosaveourselves.Ifwehappentohavetrouble，weshouldkeepcalmandremembertoaskourparents，teachersorthepoliceforhelp.Inaword，weshouldtryourbesttoprotectourselvesandvalueourlives.

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?在日常生活中，人們會(huì)遇到交友、飲食和交通等方面的安全問題。請以“Self-protection”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。要求：1.結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，談?wù)勛晕冶Ｗo(hù)的重要性；2.列舉生活中的安全問題

（至少寫兩個(gè)問題），并分別提出合理化建議；3.發(fā)出自我保護(hù)的號召；4.詞數(shù)80～100。Self-protectionNowadayspeoplepaymoreattentiontosafetyproblems.

Forexample，asstudents，wehavetogotoschooleveryweekday.Onthewaytoschoolweneedtogoacrosstheroadsometimes.Ifwearenotcarefulenough，wemaybehitbyacar.Sowehavetolearntoprotectourselves.

Forexample，asstudents，wehavetogotoschooleveryweekday.Onthewaytoschoolweneedtogoacrosstheroadsometimes.Ifwearenotcarefulenough，wemaybehitbyacar.Sowehavetolearntoprotectourselves.

Buthowcanweprotectourselves？First，weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends，especiallyonline.Second，don’tcrossthestreetwhenthelightsarered.Third，weshouldeathealthily.Thesesuggestionsaregoodforus.Weshouldfollowthemtoprotectourselvesbetter.

?Inshort，self-protectionisimportanttous.Wisheveryoneasafelife！

Buthowcanweprotectourselves？First，weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends，especiallyonline.Second，don’tcrossthestreetwhenthelightsarered.Third，weshouldeathealthily.Thesesuggestionsaregoodforus.Weshouldfollowthemtoprotectourselvesbetter.

?Module6Eatingtogether?

?本模塊的核心話題是“飲食”。此類話題旨在訓(xùn)練學(xué)生從飲食習(xí)慣、方式、禮儀等方面對“飲食習(xí)俗”進(jìn)行簡單描述，進(jìn)而加深對東西方飲食文化的認(rèn)識與理解。?

?[經(jīng)典例題]請向你的同學(xué)介紹西方的餐桌禮儀以及注意事項(xiàng)，比如開始用餐前的行為舉止、刀叉的使用方式和就餐時(shí)的行為規(guī)范，包括喝湯時(shí)應(yīng)該怎么做，如果別人夾給你不喜歡的食物應(yīng)該怎么辦，以及用餐結(jié)束時(shí)應(yīng)該怎么做等。80～100詞。[思路點(diǎn)撥]①

要點(diǎn)提示：根據(jù)題目內(nèi)容寫作，并適當(dāng)進(jìn)行拓展。在寫作過程中，要注意時(shí)間順序。②

時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。③

人稱：以第二人稱為主。[寫作提綱][高分范文]

WesterntablemannersaredifferentfromChinesetablemanners.Herearesomepoints.First，beforeyouarereadytoeat，don’tputyourelbowsonthetable.Theforkisheldinyourlefthandandtheknifeinyourrighthand.Then，duringthemeal，youcantellthehostifyouaregiventhefoodyoudon’tlike.Don’tmakeanynoisewhenyouhavethesoup.Remember，it’simpolitetospeakwhenyourmouthisfulloffood.Lastly，don’tforgettosaythatyouhaveenjoyedthefoodverymuchattheendofthemeal.Inaword，watchothersanddoastheydo.

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?假設(shè)你是李梅，你的筆友Lucy今年暑假要來中國做客，她想了解中國的餐桌禮儀，請你給她寫信簡單介紹一下。介紹時(shí)最好分用餐前、用餐中、用餐后三個(gè)時(shí)間段應(yīng)注意的禮儀。注意：1.內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，書寫規(guī)范；2.詞數(shù)80～100，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearLucy，I’mgladtohearthatyouwillcometovisitChina.TheremaybesomethingdifferentfromWesterncountriesattable.

WhenyoucometoaChinesefamily，you’dbettertakesomegiftswithyou，suchassomefruitorflowers.Attable，youareexpectedtoeatlotsoffoodthatthehostsorthehostessesofferyou.Inthisway，theymaythinkthefoodtheyprepareforyouiswhatyoulike.Attheendofthemeal，theywillbegladif