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IrememberLookingbackatthesepastthreeyearsIremembermanythings....ThenslowlyImadesomenewfriendstorememberforeverAndnowit'stimetograduateWonderfulmemoriesofours初中生活即將結(jié)束,回憶三年讓你難忘的人,以“MyUnforgettable(難忘的)Person”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

真情流露Writeaboutapersonyouwillneverforget.MyUnforgettableperson目標(biāo):根據(jù)寫作技巧完成寫作任務(wù)。書面表達(dá)五步法審題意1作文三審：審人稱審時(shí)態(tài)審內(nèi)容書面表達(dá)五步法

初中生活即將結(jié)束,回憶三年讓你難忘的人,以“MyUnforgettable(難忘的)Person”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練作文三審:審人稱:______________審時(shí)態(tài):______________審內(nèi)容:______________第一人稱+第三人稱人+事一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)+一般過(guò)去時(shí)審題意1抓要點(diǎn)2書面表達(dá)五步法

Whoisyourunforgettableperson?

Whywillyouneverforgethimorher?PointsofthisarticlePersonalinformation個(gè)人信息name

Appearance(外貌)Personality性格age...hobbies常用詞匯:Appearance(外貌)tall,short,heavy,thin,beautiful,ugly,strong,long/brown/straight/curlyhair,ofmediumheight/build…技巧:Brainstorm（頭腦風(fēng)暴）功能句型:Appearance(外貌)He/Sheis______________________.longhair,bigeyes,...short,heavy,beautiful,ugly,...He/Shehas____________________.outgoing

Personality(性格)常用詞匯:,funny,quiet,serious,friendly,kind,clever,smart,cute功能句型:He/Sheis______________________.

funny,quiet,serious,friendly,kind,clever,smart,cute...Personality(性格)①Name:DaiJunliang②Age:28③Appearance(外貌):tall,thin,curlyhair④Persationality(性格）:kind,outgoing⑤Hobby:swimmimg,playingtheguitarWhathappenedbetweenhimandme?WhenIwasinuniversity,myEnglishpronunciationwasverypoor.Manystudentsalwayslaughedatme.Buthegaveuphisfreetimetohelpmepracticepronunciation.Thankstohishelp,Iimprovedmypronunciationgreatlyatlast.Tip:描述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情常用__________（時(shí)態(tài)）一般過(guò)去時(shí)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________resulthowwhen_______________________________描述發(fā)生的事情要包含哪些信息？

pastexperience

When（時(shí)間）How（方式）Why（原因）Where（地點(diǎn)）Who（人物）What（經(jīng)過(guò)）審題意1抓要點(diǎn)2

定句型3書面表達(dá)五步法描述人的基本句型:He/Sheistall/friendly...He/Shehaslong/curlyhair...He/Shelikessinging/dancing...描述事件的基本句型:Manystudentsalwayslaughedatme.Buthegaveuphisfreetimetohelpmepracticepronunciation.

定句型3技巧一:合并句式Sheisofmediumheight.Shehaslongstrighthair.Sheisofmediumheight_____longstraighthair.Heisgoodatplayingbasketball.Hecanplaytheguitarwell.句型升華Heis__________goodatplayingbasketball,____________canplaytheguitarwell.notonly

butalso

巧用連詞with巧用介詞技巧二:擴(kuò)展句式Mr.Xuismyteacher.Mr.Xuismyteacher___________________.______________________________________________________,Mr.Xuwasmyteacher_____________________.whoteachesusmathWhenIwasinjuniormiddleschool巧用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句巧用定語(yǔ)從句whotaughtusmath審題意1抓要點(diǎn)2定句型3書面表達(dá)五步法連成篇4

Who,What

Ending

BeginningTherearealotofpeoplewhowewillneverforgetinourlife.

Althoughweliveindifferentplacesnow,Iwillneverforgethim.MyUnforgettablePerson

【注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)】

BodyTherearealotofpeoplewhowewillneverforgetinourlife.Myunforgettablepersonismycollegeclassmate.Heisverytall.Hehascurlyhair.WhenIwasinuniversity,myEnglishpronunciationwasverypoor.Manystudentsalwayslaughedatme.Buthegaveuphisfreetimetohelpmepracticepronunciation.Thankstohishelp,Ihaveimprovedmypronunciationgreatly.Iwillneverforgethiskindness.Hiskindnesswillencouragemetohelpotherswhoareintrouble.BodyBeginningEnding審題意1抓要點(diǎn)2定句型3書面表達(dá)五步法連成文4細(xì)檢查5檢查時(shí)態(tài)

檢查人稱

檢查語(yǔ)法

檢查詞數(shù)

細(xì)檢查5注意書寫一定要工整！卷面整潔不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！抓要點(diǎn)2定句型3連成文4細(xì)檢查5時(shí)間…地點(diǎn)…人物…原因…合并句式擴(kuò)展句式注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu)添首尾句/段查時(shí)態(tài)查人稱查語(yǔ)法查詞數(shù)書面表達(dá)五步法審題意1審時(shí)態(tài)審人稱審內(nèi)容開心收獲初中生活即將結(jié)束，回憶三年讓你難忘的人，以“MyUnforgettable(難忘的)Person”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。書寫要求:1.詞數(shù)為100詞左右。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）2.可根據(jù)具體要求和參考詞語(yǔ)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。

MyUnforgettablePersonTherearealotofpeoplewhowewillneverforgetinourlife._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

小試牛刀Icandoit!注意人稱

注意時(shí)態(tài)

注意句法

注意詞數(shù)

貼心提示:評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1.（13－15分）符合題目要求,內(nèi)容完整,層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)言無(wú)誤。2.（9－12分）基本符合題目要求,內(nèi)容較完整,層次結(jié)構(gòu)較清晰,表達(dá)較清楚,語(yǔ)言有少量錯(cuò)誤。3.（4－8分）部分符合題目要求,內(nèi)容不夠完整,層次結(jié)構(gòu)不夠清晰,表達(dá)不夠清楚,語(yǔ)言有較多錯(cuò)誤。4.（0－3分）不符合題目要求,整篇表達(dá)不清楚或只照抄、拼湊幾個(gè)提示詞語(yǔ)。佳作賞析

Ican'tforgethimbecauseheimpressedmealot.WhenIwasinhighschool,therewasateacherwhotaughtmemorethanthatinclass.Hewasaverykindmanandtaughtusgeography.Wealllikedtotakehisclass,thoughgeographywasnotourmajorcourse.Whatimpressedmealotwashisgrace.Youcouldseehimalwayssmiling.Hegotangryonlywhenweweretoonoisyinclass.Afterclass,heoftenplayedsoccerwithus.Heusedtobeaverybelievabledefenderandneverfouledonanyofus.Wealllikedtocallhim"TeacherMiao"andhewasjustlikeafriend,notateacher.HispersonalityinspiredmetobekindtoeveryoneImet.Thatwasmywell-beloved"TeacherMiao".An