讀后續(xù)寫+行動鑄就英雄+講義 高三上學期9月月考英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasacold,snowyevening.Tommywasrunningasfastashecould,focusedonnothingbuthisdestination—theshoponthestreetcorner.Twoweeksago,hesawfigurinesofMarvelsuperheroesontheshelvesandfelthehadtohaveone.He'sbeenwalkingtheneighbor'sdogeversincethentoearnmoneytorealizehislittledream.Hewassoexcitedandhardlynoticingtheworldaroundhim.Maybethat'swhyhetrippedoverthelegsofahomelesswoman,whowassittingonthesidewalk,herbackagainstthewall.Hemurmured“sorry”andmovedontohisdestination.Onceheenteredtheshop,hewentstraighttotheshelveswithfigurines.Hulk,Thor,CaptainAmerica,IronMan,andmanymore—allofhisadmiredheroes.Withhisheartpoundinglikecrazy,hereachedforSpiderman.“Youlikethese,truebeliever?”Tommyturnedaround.Anoldmanwasstandingbehindhimwithawidesmileonhisface.“Y-yes…Yes,they'reawesome”answeredTommy.“They'restrongandfastandhelpotherpeoplealot…”theboylookedatfigurinesinadmiration.“IwishIcouldbeasuperherotoo.”“Thenbecomeone!”saidtheoldman.“How?”Tommyaskedinsurprise.“Idon'thaveanysuperpowers.”“Andwhywouldyouneedthem?”theoldmansmiled.Seeingtheconfusionontheboy'sface,hesquatted（蹲下）andputhishandsonTommy'sarms.“Didyouknow,thatshopkeeperladyovertherehasadisabledhusband?She'sbeenworkinghardandtakingcareofhimforyears.I'veneverheardawordofcomplaintfromher.Andthisperson—”hepointedataredheadman,whojustenteredtheshop.“He'safirefighter;he'ssavedcountlesslives.Henevergivesup,nomatterhowdangerousthesituationseemstobe.”TheoldmanlookedTommyintheeyesandsmiled.“Youdon'tneedasuperpowertobeaheroforsomeoneelse.Thepathofasuperherostartsnotinthemind,notinthemuscles,butintheheart”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para1:Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.Para2:Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.文章大意在一個寒冷的雪夜，小男孩湯米為了實現(xiàn)擁有一個漫威超級英雄玩偶的夢想，努力賺錢并興奮地前往街角的商店。途中，他不小心絆倒了一個坐在人行道上的無家可歸的婦女，匆忙道歉后繼續(xù)前行。在商店里，他被一位老先生的話啟發(fā)，意識到成為英雄并不需要超能力，而是需要勇氣和善心。老先生講述了商店里其他人的故事，比如辛勤工作的店主女士和勇敢的消防員，他們都是普通人，但都在以自己的方式成為英雄。湯米深受感動，決定用他辛苦賺來的錢幫助那位無家可歸的婦女，而不是買玩偶。他的行為證明了，真正的英雄主義來自于內(nèi)心的善良和對他人的關(guān)懷，而不僅僅是擁有超能力。在原文中，有幾處伏筆為續(xù)寫提供了基礎(chǔ)和方向：1.伏筆一：湯米對超級英雄的崇拜和渴望擁有一個超級英雄玩偶。這為續(xù)寫中湯米的內(nèi)心沖突和最終的選擇提供了背景。2.伏筆二：湯米在前往商店的路上絆倒了一位無家可歸的婦女，但他只是匆忙道歉后繼續(xù)前行。這個事件為續(xù)寫中湯米可能的反思和行動提供了契機。3.伏筆三：老先生與湯米的對話，特別是關(guān)于成為英雄不需要超能力的觀點。這為續(xù)寫中湯米如何理解英雄主義和采取行動提供了指導(dǎo)。在續(xù)寫中，這些伏筆得到了回應(yīng)：1.回應(yīng)一：湯米在商店里選擇了不購買玩偶，而是用錢幫助無家可歸的婦女，這反映了他對超級英雄的崇拜轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)榱藢嶋H行動，體現(xiàn)了他內(nèi)心成長和價值觀的轉(zhuǎn)變。2.回應(yīng)二：湯米在續(xù)寫中回到無家可歸的婦女那里，用他辛苦賺來的錢為她買食物和毯子，這不僅是對之前匆忙離開的反思，也是他將老先生的話付諸實踐的具體表現(xiàn)。3.回應(yīng)三：通過湯米的行為，續(xù)寫強調(diào)了老先生關(guān)于英雄主義的觀點，即英雄主義來自于內(nèi)心的善良和對他人的關(guān)懷，而不僅僅是擁有超能力。湯米的行動展示了他如何理解和接受這一觀點，并將其內(nèi)化為個人行為?？偟膩碚f，續(xù)寫通過湯米的行為和選擇，回應(yīng)了原文中的伏筆，展現(xiàn)了他的成長和對英雄主義的深刻理解。主旨升華句1."Trueheroismisnotabouttheabsenceoffear,butthetriumphoverittohelpothersinneed."2."Aheroisnotdefinedbytheirpowers,butbytheiractionsandthepositiveimpacttheyhaveonthelivesofothers."3."Theessenceofbeingasuperheroliesinthecouragetomakeadifference,nomatterhowsmall,intheworldaroundus."4."Compassionandkindnessaretherealsuperpowersthatcanchangelivesandinspirehopeintheheartsofmany."5."Thepathtoheroismispavedwithselflessnessandthewillingnesstostandupforwhatisright,evenwhenitrequirespersonalsacrifice."OnePossibleVersionPara1:Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.Finally,heraisedhishead.“SoIamsupposedto…”hestoppedmid-sentencewhenherealizedthathewasalone.Heturnedhisheadleftandright,buttheoldmanwasnowheretobeseen.Tommysighedheavily—healreadyhadanideaofwhatheshoulddo.Helookedatfigurinesforthelasttimeandmovedtowardsthecounter.“Twosandwichesandacupofteaplease,”hesaid.Para2:Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.Tommycamecloserandcarefullygavethewomanhisbuys.Hereyesopenedwideinsurprise,thenfilledwithtears.“Thankyou,”shewhispered.Tommybowedhishead,turnedaroundandwentbackhome.Hewasmovingfasterandfasterandfinallyhestartedtorun.Strangeenergyfillinghisbodymadehimfeellikehecouldfly.Whenhefinallystopped,hewasbreathingheavily,buthedidn'tfeeltired.Hesmiledhappily—itwasawonderfulfeeling.Andnothingcouldstopit.下水文1Para1:Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.Theoldman'swordsresonatedwithhim,echoinginhismindlikeaprofoundrevelation.Herealizedthatbeingaherowasn'tabouthavingextraordinaryabilitiesorwearingacape;itwasaboutthechoicesonemadeandthekindnessoneshowed.Hethoughtaboutthehomelesswomanhehadencounteredearlier,shiveringinthecold,andhowasimpleactofkindnesscouldmakeadifferenceinherlife.Hiseyeswelledupwithanewfounddetermination,andheknewwhathehadtodo.Para2:Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.Thistime,Tommyapproachedherwithadifferentperspective.Hereachedintohispocketandpulledoutthemoneyhehadearned,theverymoneyhehadplannedtospendontheSpidermanfigurine.Withagentlesmile,hehandedittoher,saying,"Ma'am,Ihopethiscanhelpyoustaywarmtonight."Thewomanlookedup,hereyesfilledwithgratitudeassheacceptedtheoffering.Inthatmoment,Tommyfeltasurgeofwarmthandpridethatnotoycouldeverreplicate.Hehadbecomeahero,notbypossessingsuperpowers,butbychoosingtohelpsomeoneinneed,justliketheoldmanhadsaid.Ashewalkedaway,heknewthatthefigurineofSpidermanwouldalwaysbethereontheshelf,butthefigurineofaherohadjustbeenetchedinhisheart.下水文2Para1:Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.Theoldman'swordshadsparkedarealizationwithinhim,ignitingaflameofempathyandunderstanding.Heponderedonthetrueessenceofheroism,whichwasnotaboutphysicalprowessorsupernaturalgifts,butaboutthestrengthofcharacterandthewillingnesstohelpothers.Hisminddriftedbacktothehomelesswomanhehadinadvertentlybrushedpastearlier,andhefeltapangofguiltfornotofferingherthekindnessshedeserved.Withanewfoundsenseofpurpose,Tommydecidedtoturnhisdreamofbeingaherointoatangibleactofcompassion.Para2:Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.Thistime,however,Tommy'sapproachwasmarkedbyasenseofpurposeandaheartfullofgene