大學(xué)生英語競賽C類的作文范文

2009年大學(xué)生英語競賽C類的作文范文初賽TaskI

DearTbm,

Asyouknow,1'morganizingatwo—daydebatingcontestwhichistobeheldonMay1-2,1amworkingonaschedulefor

itnowandIwillhavetosenditbyE-mailtomorrow.Ineedsomenewideasurgently.Pleasehelpmeoutandgivemesome

freshideasbytomorrowmorning.Meanwhile,wouldyoupleasecontactsomeofourteachersandinvitethemtobejudge?Let

meknowtheirnamesbyFriday.Thankyou.

TaskII

ReportontheChangesofFashionforYoungPeopleinRecentYearsinChinaIntroduction

ThisreportsetsouttopresenthowfashionsforyoungpeoplehavechangedinrecentyearsinChina.Findings

Accordingtomysurvey,Ihavefoundthefollowingthreepoints:

1、Nowadays,theyoungareseekingforindividualityinsteadofuniformityintheolddaysandtheywant(heclothestobe

unique.

2、Thankstothemassdata,(heyoungpeoplearedeeplyinfluencedbythefashiontrendthroughouttheword.TheNorth

Koreanstyleinhugelypopularamongtheminrecentfiveorsixyears.

3、Thegeneraltrendistobecasualandsimple.Conclusion

Therefore,itcanbeconcludedthattheyoungpeopleinChinanowarelookingforindividuality,casualnessandtheywould

liketofollowthefashionabroad.

決賽TaskI

To:thePersonnelDirectorandtheTrainingManagerFrom:assistanttotheCustomerServiceDirectorDate:23June2009

Subject:decreasingsales

AsrequestedbytheCustomersServiceDirector,Ihavedoneasurveyconcerningourdecreasingsales.Thissurveyshowsthat

ourstaffarcnotinterestedinhelpingcustomersandtheyarcunhappyintheirjobs.Therefore,oursaleshavebeendecreasing

fbrseveralmonths.

Ithinkweshouldgivebonusestothebestsellereverymonthtoimproveourstaff'senthusiasm.What'smore,weshouldhave

somespecialoffereverydaytoattractmorecustomers.

TaskII

TakeMyAdviceonHowtoControlStress

Asthecompetitionbetweenstudentsincreases,moreandmorestudentsfeelstressfulabouttheircourse.AsfarasVm

concerned,wecantaketheinitiativetoreducethestress.

Firstly,makeaplanforeverydaystudy.Forinstance,youkeeplearningEnglishfbrtwohourseveryday,andwithinthetwo

hours,youwilllearn10newwordsandread2articles.Thiswayyoucanlearnmorethan1000wordsthreemonthlaterand

yourreadingabilitywillimproveaswell.Therefore,youdon'thavetostayuplatebeforetheEnglishexamination.Aslongas

youkeeplearningeveryday,youwillfindyouarewellpreparedfortheexamsalready.

Secondly,dosomethingelsetodivertyourmindbeforeexams.Forexample,ifyoucanplaypiano,playyourfavoritesongs

fbroneortwohoursandyouwillfeelrelaxed.

Toconclude,keeplearningregularlyandcultivateahobbyandyouwillfindyourselfrelaxedaboutyourcourse

2008年大學(xué)生?英語初賽

TaskINOTICE

TheAnti-AddictionSystem

NowinChina,theadoptionoftheanti-addictionsystemanda“realnamecheckingvsysteminnetbarshasledtoaheated

debateamongstudents.

Somesaythatstudents'self-disciplineisverylimitedandnowatleast14percentoftheurbanteenageplayersareaddictedto

theInternetandsomechildrenevenrepeatedlydisappearfromhometospendtheirnightsatlocalInternetcafes,andplaytruant

fromschoolalso.Therefore,theyhavefailedquiteafewschoolexams.Inthissense,thenewpolicycanpreventminors

developingonlineaddiction.

Othersclaimthattheanti-addictionsystemisonlyameanstoanendandcannotremovetherootoftheonlineaddiction

completelyandtheybelievethekeyistoguidetheminorstoimprovetheirself-controlandbalancetheirworkandplay.

Inmyopinion,thelacierpointhiishomefbrmebecauseiicuisiothechase.However,educationisalongprocessandtakes

time,whichmeansbeforeeducationproduceseffectsonchildren,somesupplementarymeasuresshouldalsobetakentospeed

uptheprocessandtheanti-addictionsystemisoneofthem

全國大學(xué)生英語競賽小作文寫作指導(dǎo)一【報(bào)告】寫作指導(dǎo)

例1

Directions:Youarepreparingfbrafieldreport,pleasewriteitinabout1OOwordswithsuchitemsasfollowing:?the

currentsituationoftheequipments②yourreasonandsuggestion

Subject:Buyingcomputersandvideotaperecorders.

*.這是一份實(shí)地考察報(bào)告，要求將所看到的狀況實(shí)事求是的反映出來。upontherequest表示在,“，的要求下，以

request表示要求一般比較正式。postgraduates即研究生

例2

2)detailedinformationsuchasdates,relatedpersonsandnumbersWORK-IN-PROGRESSREPORTFORTHE

MONTHOFMARCH,2002

From:Annylee,Head,AcademicDepartment

To:MrNgsik-hung,ChairmanShangHaiEvergreenAssociationRef:0091963Date:2April2002

I.ShangHaiSecondarySchool

II.Academicexchange

*.這是一份工作報(bào)告，這類報(bào)告應(yīng)注意言之有序，無論是說一件事的始未，或多項(xiàng)事的情況，都必須有條不紊，思

路清晰，并且言之有據(jù)，引用的數(shù)據(jù)要準(zhǔn)確，事實(shí)的真相要客觀地陳述。

例3

l)thecauseoftheaccident2)theresults

3)theresponseofauthority

ToLiMingFromLiuHua

Fortunately,therewerenocasualtiesamongthecrewsorpassengers,butbothshipssufferedbadlydamages.

Aspokesmanfortheportauthoritiessaidthatacommitteewouldbesetuptodeterminethecauseofthecollision.

*這是一份非正式報(bào)告，有幾點(diǎn)必須注意：開頭就交待清楚寫報(bào)告書的目的。詳細(xì)闡述調(diào)查經(jīng)過，盡量做到客觀公

正。

全國大學(xué)生英語競賽小作文寫作指導(dǎo)一一【海報(bào)】寫作指導(dǎo)

二、海報(bào)

海報(bào)是人們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪袠O為常見的一種招貼形式，多用于電影、戲曲、比賽、文藝演出等活動。海報(bào)中通常要寫

清楚活動的性質(zhì)，活動的主辦單位、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等內(nèi)容。海報(bào)的語言要求簡明扼要，形式要做到機(jī)關(guān)報(bào)穎美觀。

海報(bào)的格式，通常有三部分組成，即標(biāo)題、正文與落款。

海報(bào)的標(biāo)題對于海報(bào)的宣傳極為重要。因比標(biāo)題的撰寫晝做到簡潔明快，新穎醒目，抓住讀者的注意力，海報(bào)的

標(biāo)題形式通常有兩種：一是直接使用“海報(bào)”(Poster)一詞；另一種則是根據(jù)海報(bào)的內(nèi)容，撰寫標(biāo)題。

海報(bào)正文是海報(bào)的核心部分，它是對海報(bào)標(biāo)題的具體描述。語言要求形象生動，簡明扼要。做到既有鼓動性，又

不夸大其辭。正文的常見表現(xiàn)形式有：簡介說明式，文學(xué)描述式，

美術(shù)設(shè)計(jì)式。

例1

Directions:YouarepreparingfbrafriendlyBasketballMatch.Writeaposterwhichasksfbr:

1)therightformofastandardposter2)writetheplaceandtimeclearlyYbushouldwriteabout100words.

POSTER

FriendlyBasketballGame

ThereisgoingtobeafriendlyandwonderfulbasketballmatchbetweenBeijingForestryUniversityBasketballTeamand

oursundertheauspicesoftheRecreationalandPhysicalCultureDepartmentofthestudents*unionofthecollege.Ithasbeen

decidedthatthisbasketballmatchwillbeheldatthestudents*activitycenterwhichcouldcontainatleast200peopleon

Saturday,Aug.23rd,2(X)4,at5:00p.m.Itisexpectedthatthecompetitionbetweenthetwoteamswillbekeenandsevere.All

ofyouarecordiallywelcometopresentthematch.TheRecreationalandPhysicalCultureDepartmentofthe

Students*Unionofthecollege.Thursday.Aug.21st.2004

由,,”舉辦”可以用詞組“undertheauspicesof,,”，另外，注意中英文通知中落款時(shí)間書寫位置的差別，中文一

般寫在右下角，英文寫在左下角。

例2

Directions:YouaregoingtowriteannoticeforanEnglish-speakingcontest.l)therightformofastandardnotice

2)tellthepurposeandcontentofthiscontestclearlyYoushouldwritenolessthan100words

English-SpeakingContest

Inordertocarryoutsomeafter-classoralEnglishpracticeactivitiesandimprovethestudents*abilityofspeakingEnglish,

theStudents'UnionoftheEnglishdepartmenthasdecidedtoholdadepartmentwideEnglishspeakingcontestatthe

students,activitycenteronSaturdaynextweek,i.eAug.23rd.2004.Everyonewhoiswillingtojoininmaytellyourname

andyourtopicofthespeechtoyourmonitor.WewillinvitefiveEnglishteacherstoworkasjudges.Thefirstsixwinnerswill

gettheawardsasanencouragement.Warmlywisheveryonetoattendandyourpresencewillcertainlyencourageandcheerthe

contestants.TheStudents,UnionofEnglishDepartment

*課外活動在英語里可表達(dá)為afterdassactivities,“inorderto,,”是表達(dá)“為了,,“”的一種常用句型。另外，書寫

通知的語言應(yīng)注意做到言簡意賅。

例3

Directions:Youarepreparingfbrapostertointroduceagreatplaceofinterest-GoldCoastofAustralia.Pleasewriteitin

about100words.WELCOMEtoGOLDCOASTofAUSTRALIA

TheGeldCoastistheundisputedtouristcapitalofAustralia.Eachyearaboutthreemillionpeoplevisittheholidaycity

thatrivalsthemostfamousworldresorts.Andwecanalmostpromisesunshine,threehundredsundrencheddaysayear.

Ayearlyaverageof25degreesVelsiusandawinteraverageof21degreesCelsiusarenaturersguaranteefbrafabulousholiday.

ThereisnothingwecannotdoontheGoldCoast.WorldclassattractionsincludeSeaWorld,Dreamworld,WildlifeSanctuary,

andthesurfingbeaches.

HOTLINE:(075)921655MOBLIE:(018)754211FAX:(075)921472

*這是一張澳大利亞“黃金海岸”張貼的公告，供大家參考使用。請著重注意一下有關(guān)聯(lián)系方式的書寫格式

全國大學(xué)生英語競賽小作文寫作指導(dǎo)——【通知】寫作指導(dǎo)

全國大學(xué)生英語競賽小作文寫作指導(dǎo)一一通知寫作指導(dǎo)

一、通知

通知是上級對下級、團(tuán)體對個(gè)人部署工作、傳達(dá)事情或召開會議時(shí)所用的一種文體。同級單位有事情要進(jìn)行討論

或協(xié)商，也可以互發(fā)通知。通知分兩種：一種是以布告形式，把事情通知有關(guān)人員；另一種是以書信形式，把相關(guān)事

情傳達(dá)給有關(guān)人員。一般說來，通知正文上面正中的地方往往有Notice或NOTICE一詞作為題目，正文的下面是發(fā)

出通知的單位名稱。有時(shí)，發(fā)出通知單位的名稱也可寫在正文之前。發(fā)出通知的E期一般寫在左下角；發(fā)出通知的人

或單位的名稱，可以寫在右下角。這兩項(xiàng)有時(shí)也可以省略。發(fā)出通知的單位和通知對象一般都用第三人稱，但若正文

前用了稱呼語，則應(yīng)用第二人稱表示被通知的對象。

例1

Directions:Ifyouaretheorganizerofatourandyoushouldgiveanoticetotellthetouristssomethingaboutit.It

shouldinclude:1)Whereisthedestinationofthetour.2)Whatshouldthetouristspayattentionto.Youshouldwriteno

lessthan100words.

NOTICETOTOURISTS

Accordingtotheschedule,thetouringpartywillvisittheSummerPalaceandTianAnmenSquaretoday.Youcan

leaveyourbaggageintheLeftBaggageOfficeandpickituplaterthisafternoonifitistooheavytocarrywithyou.Thereceipt

ofthebaggageshouldbekeptcarefullybecauseyouwillneedit.WewillcometotheSummerPalacefirstandfinishthetourat

2pm.ThenwearegoingtothedestinationofTianAnmenSquarewithoutparking.Sopleasedon'tgetoffthesightseeingbus

duringthejourneyuntilthedriversaysthatitistimeforfoodanddrinksortoilets.Pleasebeontime!

*這是一張旅行團(tuán)張貼的布告，告知游客當(dāng)天的活動以及注意事項(xiàng)?！靶欣罴拇嫣帯苯蠰eftBaggageOffice,這

是美國英語。英國人管行李叫l(wèi)uggage,與此相對的，行李寄存處便是LeftLuggageOffice。領(lǐng)取行李，美語toclaimbaggage,

英國人說toreclaimluggage0旅游車是sightseeingbus或coach.

例2

Dircctions:Thcrearesomethingimportanttotellthepassengersoftheplane.Writenoticeabout:

1)Reconfirmationthereservation

2)What'sthevalidityofanormalfareticket.3)Abouttherefund.

Youshouldwriteabout100words

ImportantNotice

RECONFIRMATIONIfyoubreakyourjourneyformore(han35hoursatanypointandholdacontinuingorreturn

reservation,pleasereconfirmyourintentionofusingthereservation.

VALIDITYAnormalfareticketisvalidfbroneandahalfyearsfromthedateofissueifnoneofanyportionofithas

beenused,orfromthedateofcommencementifthecarriageiscommenced.Whenindoubt,pleasecheckwiththecarrier's

officeconcerned.

REFUNDTherefundshouldbemadenotlaterthan19daysafterexpirydateoftheticketandonlyrefundedinthe

samecountry.

*以上是乘坐飛機(jī)的注意事項(xiàng)，包括來回票機(jī)座的確認(rèn)問題(reconfirmation)、機(jī)票的有效期問題(validity)

以及退票事項(xiàng)(refund)。在飛行前應(yīng)著重注意這些瑣碎的問題。

Youshouldwriteabout100words

NOTICE

JontlysponsoredbytheStudents,UnionandtheYouthLeagueCommittee,aprofessionallecturenaming“Howthe

TariffschangedafterChinaenteredintoWTO“'sunionandTheYouthLeagueCommittee

*在表示聯(lián)合發(fā)起時(shí)，用Jointlysponsors加合作單位名稱

例4

Directions:YouareasecretaryoftheDean'sOffice.ProfessorWangTingisabsentforhealthreasons.Writea

bulletintotellthestudents.Afewofdetailsshouldbeclear:

I)whyprofessorWangTingcan'tcometowork.2)whowillsubstituteforher3)howlongthesituationwillbekept

Itshouldbenolessthan100words.

BULLETIN

ProfessorWangTing,EnglishteacherofGradeThree,istemporarilypreventedfromcomingtoclassforhealth

reasons.ProfessorXuZhiyuanwillsubstituteforhertoinstructListeningEnglishfortwoweeks.Thefirstweek,amoviewill

begiventopractisethelisteningEnglish,andthesecondweek,therewillbeaclass

discussion.ProfessorLiChaoshanwillsubstituteforhertoinstruct

ConversationalEnglishforthreeweeks.Thelastweekisfbrthefinalexamination.Thetopicofthisweekwillbe”The

SocietyandTheHumanrightsw.Youshouldcollectsomematerialsandprepareenoughbeforetheclass.Pleasetelleachother

aboutthemessageandgototheclassontime.Dean'sOffice

*“代課”用substitute表示。substilute可用做名詞,例如hisorhersubstitute。Substitute也可用做動詞,有兩

種表示法：tosubstituteBwithA或tosubstituteAforB.“上課”，大學(xué)里一般用instructo

例5

Directions:TheResidentsJCommitteeneedstoholdameetingtodiscussthesecurityintheresidentialarea,writea

noticetotelltheresidentsthat:1)whythemeetingisnecessary.

2)Thelimeandplaceofthissecuritymeeting

Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2

NOTICE

Itisreportedbyseveralinhabitantsfromthisresidentialareathatsomestrangerswithdirtyclothes(oneofthemhasa

scarontheface)havelatelyhauntedthisarea.Somestealingshavehappenedfromlimeiotime.Sothe

Residents''tforgettotakethenotebookswithyou.TheResidents'Committee

*“居民區(qū)"用residentialarea或resideniialquarters來表示，“居委會”有兩種譯法，一是theResidents,Committee,

另一個(gè)是theNeighborhoodCommittee,兩者皆可。

例6

Directions:Youaretheleaderof(henewPublicSecurityTeam,youshouldtelltheresidentsaboutthesecurity

situationoftheresidentialarea.Thedetailsincluding:

1)thepurposeofthisnewPublicSecurityTeam.2)Howtocontactwiththeteam.Youshouldwriteabout100words

BULLETIN.

Recently,therehavebeenseveralburglariesinourresidentialquarters.Afewofmuggingshavebeenreportedbythe

inhabitants(oo.Apublicsecurityteamhasbeensetupinordertomaintaintheorderandsecurityofthisresidentialarea.

Everyoneandeachhouse

*城市尤其是大城市人員流動頻繁，犯罪率比較高，“撬門”是burglary,“偷盜”是theft,“攔路搶劫”是mugging,

"掏包”是pickpocket,警衛(wèi)或保安人員，是security“萬一”的含義。Shouldyoubeintrouble,pleasecall110.

例7

Directions:YouareaguardoftheGuardroomResidentialArea.Youwanttonoticesomethingtotheinhabitantsof

thisarea.Thefollowingsshouldbeclear:1)What'sthepurposeofthisnotice?

2)Whatshouldtheinhabitantsdoifthesituationmentionedhappens?Youshoaldwriteabout100words

NOTICE

Itisreportedfromtheinhabitantsandresidentsinourresidentialareathatafewpersonscametohouseholdstosell

gasfromlimetolime.TheypretendedtobetheworkersoftheGasCompanyandenteredintotheinhabitants,homeonthe

pretextofexaminationofthegasline.Thiskindofsituationshavehappenedseveraltimes.Thisactivityisillegitimateand

shouldbeforbidden.TheGasCompanydidn'tsendanyonetocheckthegasorgaslinelately.Shouldsuchpeoplecomeagain,

pleaseimmediatelycontactthesecurityguards.Wewillcomeoverandinterfere.Theemergencynumberis64492889.Youcan

callatanytimeyouneed.Guardroom.PlesidentialArea

*小區(qū)居民，是residents或inhabitantSotopretend冒充,onthepretextof。

例8

Directions:SupposeyouareoneoftheorganizersofEnglishevening.Writeanoticeaboutit,whichshouldinclude

sponsorplaceandtheprogram.

Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2

NOTICE

TheafterclassActivitiesGrouptakespleasureinannouncingthatundertheauspicesofthestudents'unionof

EnglishDepartment,annualEnglisheveningistobeheldinthestudents*activitycenteronSaturday,Aug,23rd,at7:00p.m.

Theprogramincludessongs,dances,recitations,storytelling,skitsandplayswhichareplayedallbystudents.Admission

ticketsmaybeobtainedonapplicationtotheafterclassActivitesGroup,Room205,OfficeBuildingforfree.Itmustbea

goodtimetoenjoyandrelaxyourselves.Allarecordiallywelcometogiveyourencouragementtotheplayersandcheerthem.

*Skepleasureindoingsth.很高興做杲導(dǎo)，underiheauspices(復(fù)數(shù))of”由”舉辦，of后跟主辦、贊助的人或單位。

例9

Directions:YouarearesidentinHongKongandneedalargerflat.Writeabulletinincludingfollowingdetails:1)

yourreasonforthelargerflat.2)yourcontactinformation

Youshouldwritenolessthan100words.

DearSir/Madam,

IamapermanentresidentinHongKongandmypresentresidenceisRm206Block8,KaiManEstate.Ihavebeen

livingwithmymother,wife,youngerbrotherandnytwochildrenintheaboveflat.

Notlongago,mybrotherdiedinantrafficaccident.Becauseofthis,hiswifeandhistwochildrenwereallowedto

cometoHongKongfromMainlandChinatolivewithus.Thechangefroma6-memberfamilytoa8-memberonehascreated

averycrowdylivingenvironment.Ithereforewouldliketoapplyforamovetoalargerflatinaccordancewiththehousing

regulationsconcerned.Belowaremypersonalparticularsforyourreference:

IDCardNo.:A306955(1)ContactTelephoneNo.:3568496CorrespondenceAddress:

Yourconsiderationoverthiscasewillbehighlyappreciated.Yoursfaithfully,[signature]

*permanentresident長久公民，inaccordancewith符合，CorrespondenceAddress通訊地址。

三、常用句式

常用的起首語有：

3)AthousandthanksforyourkindletterofJune5,1997.

4)YourkindletterofNovember22tharrivedthismorning.

5)Yourletterwhicharrivedthismominggavemegreatcomfort.

6)Inreplytoyourletterdated4thJuly,!wanttosay”

7)ThankyouverymuchforyourletterofAugust2andthegiftyousentmeonChristmasEve.

8)WhatatreattoreceiveyourkindletterofMay5th!

9)Itisalwaysathrilltoseeyournicehandwriting.

10)FirstofallImustthankyouforyourkindassistanceandhighattentiontome.

11)WithgreatdelightIlearnfromyourletterofthisSundaythat”

14)1amverymuchpleasedtoinformyouthatmyvisittoyourcountryhasbeenapproved.

15)1wishtoapplyforteachingpositionyouareoffering.

16)1amtooexcitedanddelightedatyourgoodnews.

17)1amveryobligedtoyouforyourwarmcongratulations.,,

常用的結(jié)束語有：

1)Awaitingyourgoodnews,

2)Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply,3)Hopingtohearfromyousoon,4)Weawaityourgoodnews.

5)1hopetohearfromyouverysoon.

6)Welookforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.

7)1lookforwardtoournextmeetingthereinLosAngeles.

8)Yourearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.

9)Anyotherparticularswantedweshallbepleasedtosendyou.

10)Thehelpyougivemeissincerelyvalued.

11)1hopeeverythingwillbewellwithyou.

12)Pleaseletusknowifyouwantmoreinformation.

13)1hopeyoualwaysenjoyyourself.

14)1wishyouverysuccessinthecomingyear.

15)Pleaseremembermetoyourfamily.

16)16)Withbestregardstoyourfamily.

17)A11thebest.

18)Withloveandgoodwishes.

5.結(jié)束語(ComplimentaryClose)

結(jié)束語是寫信人表示自己對收信人的一種謙稱，只占一行，低于正文一二行，從信紙的中間或偏右的地方開始寫。

第一個(gè)詞的開頭字母要大寫，末尾用逗號。結(jié)束語視寫信人與收信人的關(guān)系而定例如寫給機(jī)關(guān)、團(tuán)體或不相識的人的

信，一般用：

Yours(very)truly,Yours(very)faithfully,Yours(very)sincerely,等等。

寫給上級和長者的信一般可用：

Yours(very)respectfully,Yours(very)obediently,Ybursgratefully,Yoursappreciatively,Yourobedientservant,等等。

寫給同志或同事的信一般可用：

Fraternallyyours,Comradelyyours,等等。

寫給熟人或朋友的信可用：

Yours,Everyours,Yoursaffectionately,Asever,YourssincerelyYoursdevotedly,(Most)Fondlyyours,Yoursexcitedly,

Intimatelyyours,等等。

寫給親屬或摯友的信一般用：

Yours,Everyours,Yoursasever,Asever,Yoursaffectionately,Lovinglyyours,(Much)Love,WithLove,Lovingly,Your

lovingson,Yourmostaffectionate,Yourdevotedfriend,Devotedly,等等，意即："您的永遠(yuǎn)是您的“、“您的親愛的”、

“您的愛子(孩子、姐妹、侄、侄女、祖母)”、“您的摯友”等。寫給摯友的信有時(shí)也可用：

Yourshurriedly,Yourshastily,Yoursinhaste,等等。

寫信給摯友，表示歉意時(shí)，可用：

Contritelyyours,Regretfullyyours,Yoursin(with)regret,Yoursin(with)deepremorse等。

在歐洲一些國家里，多把Yours放在sincerely等詞的前面。在美國和加拿大等國，則多用，把yours放在Sincerely

等詞之后。Yours一詞有時(shí)也可省略。

例4

IgotthenewsfromMikethatyouhavereceivedaDoctorateinliteraturefromTsinghuaUniversity.Icongratulateyoufbr

this.Tbhavereachedthismilestoneinyourscholarshipatayoungageisreallygreat.Itmeans,Ibelieve,yearsofassiduous

studyandhardworkonyourpart.Anditisanachievementyoucanbewellproudof.Asyourbestfriend,Ihopeyoucanreach

higherlevelinyourstudyanddomorecontributiontothesociety.Mybestwishestoyou!

Sincerely,XXX

*朋友年輕有為，獲得博士學(xué)位，應(yīng)該祝賀。正如信中所說，這一成就是“多年來刻苦學(xué)習(xí)和努力工作的結(jié)果”(years

ofassiduousstudyandhardwork)(＞英文有一句成語：Nosweetnosweat.世界上不勞有獲的事情是沒有的。

四、短語優(yōu)先原則

寫作時(shí)，尤其是在考試時(shí)，如果使用短語，有兩個(gè)好處：其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點(diǎn)，

如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單，看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識的短語，必然會看你低一等。相反，

如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)一精彩的短語，那么你的文章定會得高分了。其二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維矩路，只有湊字?jǐn)?shù)，怎么辦？用短語

是一個(gè)辦法！比如：

Icannotbearit.

可以用短語表達(dá)：

Icannotputupwithit.

Iwantit.

可以用短語表達(dá)：

Iamlookingforwardtoit.

這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加，表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。

五、多實(shí)少虛原則

原因很簡單，寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實(shí)際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)

詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候，不應(yīng)該之說nice這樣空洞的

詞，應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospital

之類的形象詞。再比如：走出房間，general的詞是：

walkoutoftheroom

但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說：

slipoutoftheroom

小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說：

sailoutoftheroom

小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說：

danceoutoftheroom

老人走出房間應(yīng)該說：

staggeroutoftheroom

所以多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞，文章將會大放異彩！

六、多變句式原則

1）加法（串聯(lián)）

都希望寫下很長的句子，像個(gè)老外似的，可就是怕寫錯(cuò)，怎么辦，最保險(xiǎn)的寫長句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子

之間加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。

比如說：

Ienjormusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.

如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個(gè)超級句式：

Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.

其它的短語可以用：

besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover

2）轉(zhuǎn)折（拐彎抹角）

批評某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題，再說缺點(diǎn)，這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn)，可

畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說話的時(shí)候，只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來點(diǎn)廢話，注意二者之間用個(gè)專這次就夠了。

Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.

Thecoatwasthin,butitwaswarm.

更多的短語：despitethat,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,notwithstanding

3）因果（so,so,so）

昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩，然后我主動搭訕，然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d，然后我們認(rèn)識了，

然后我們成為了朋友,,可見，講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序，先什么，后什么，所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見了。

其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系！

Thesnowbegantofall,sowewenthome.

更多短語：then,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,asaresult,forthisreason,

sothat

4）失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）

有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長成這個(gè)樣子，可

如果真的是這樣了，也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子，就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不

同。其實(shí)就是主語從句，表語從句，賓語從句的變形。

舉例：

This