專題09高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題講解課件6月浙江卷

讀后續(xù)寫真題2018浙江卷:度假騎馬迷路1試題再現(xiàn)2試題分析3寫作思路4范文賞析目錄CONTENTS2021試題再現(xiàn)歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析01Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1：Suddenlyalittlerabbitraninfrontofmyhorse.

Paragraph2：Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。2021試題分析歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析02 Itwassummer,andmy

dad

wantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.

UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.原文分析我和父親開始一場從未有過的旅行。 HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthe

farmhouse

listeningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdownthe

river

nearby.Veryearlyinthemorning.UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTina

feed

thechickens,

whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethe

sheep

outtograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.原文分析我在叔叔家愉快的度假生活。 Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbe

late

forsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothe

track

sothatyoudon’t

getlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutof

sight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelate

afternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.原文分析我和父親騎馬上山，注意環(huán)境描寫2021寫作思路歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析03回答下面幾個問題，檢測一下你是否讀懂了原材料。Q2:Whatdidthewriterwanttodothenextafternoon?Why?Q1:WheredidthewriterandhisfatherstayinAlbuquerque?Q3:Didthewriterridebyhimself?Q4:WhatdidUnclePaulremindthembeforetheysetout?Q5:Howdidthewriterfeelonthehorseback?Verypleased/satisfied.OnUnclePaul’sfarm.Totakeahorseride.Becausehewantedtobecoolaswell.No,hedidn’t.Hisfatherwentwithhim.Keepingtothetracktoavoidgettinglostandreturningontimeforsupper.(Para3)MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.

(Para4)So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.研讀以下句子，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索？Therewasarivernearby.Thewriterandhisfatherwereondifferenthorses.閱讀完材料，試著完成下面的故事山吧！WhatdidIdo?1.

OpeningMydadtookmetoUnclePaul’sfarmtoexperiencethefarmlife.SeeingDadandUncleridinghorses,Iwantedtotryhorseridingmyself.Alittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse…Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark…2.

Build-up3.

Climax4.

Resolution5.

Ending研讀兩段給出句，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索？Para.1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitraninfrontofmyhorse..Para.2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.AccordingtoPara.2,thewriterandhisfathermusthavegotlost;ifthiswasthecase,howdidtheygetlost?Wheredidthehorsescarrythem?Howdidtheyfeelaboutanddealwiththesituation?Didtheyeventuallymakeitbacktothefarmhouse?How?Paragraph1：

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

_______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

_______________________________________________________________________原文分析路上遇到一只兔子表明上一段我們應(yīng)該是追兔子然后迷路了。本段應(yīng)該續(xù)寫如何找到回去的路。根據(jù)括號中的提示，補出范文缺失的部分，并關(guān)注哪些語言回答了“首句精研”的問題。Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse._________________________

_____________________________________（我的馬受到驚嚇跑了起來，速度之快超出了我的想象。so…that…倒裝句型）IwasholdingonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepupwithme.Myhorsegotoffthetrack,keptrunning,andstoppedwhenitreachedtheriver,abeautifulspot._______________

_____________________________________（我爸爸說太陽要落山了，我們得離開了，因為他不想我們迷路。并列賓語從句，注意時態(tài)）Weturnedaroundtostartbackbutthetrackwasnowhereinsight.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Mydadhadagreatideatofollowthestarsbacktothefarmhouse.IrememberedthattheNorthStarwasrightaboveUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.Wesetoffonthelongjourneyhome._________________________________________________（我腦中充滿了懷疑的想法，希望不會遇見餓狼。介詞短語作狀語）Werodealongthedirt.____________________（我們騎得像風一樣。like做介詞）Atlastwewereatthefarmhouse.Ihuggedmyuncletightly.Afterdinner,Iwasrelievedtobesafeinmybed.Paragraph1Paragraph1：

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

Theyweresocute,sowehorsedafterit.

Therabbitrunquickly.WelostourwayTherabbitrunaway.Paragraph2Paragraph2：

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

WecalleduncleforhelpButcannotgetthrough,wetriedtoseekasolutionwefoundtherightdirectionmemorabledeedsofrabbithunting.句子潤色1.它毛茸茸的，有一身漂亮的棕色頭發(fā)。Itwasfurryandithadbrownhair.Itwasfurrywithacoatofgorgeousbrownhair.furryWith結(jié)構(gòu)替換句子潤色2.它用它的一對紅眼睛看著我，然后開始在前面疾馳。It

looked

atmewithitsredeyes,andtherunquickly.Afterlookingupatmewithitspairofredbulbs,itbegantoscurry

ahead.句式詞匯升級句子潤色3.“為什么不把它抓回來交給保羅叔叔呢？他們一定很高興。”想到這一點，我拼命地騎著馬去尋找它?！癢hynotcatchitandbringitbacktoUnclePaul?Theymustbeveryhappy.”WhenIthoughtthis,Irodehardtohuntforit.“Whynotcatchitandbringitbackto

UnclePaul?Theymustbeveryhappy.”Withthisthought,Irodehardtohuntforit.

rodehardtohuntforWith結(jié)構(gòu)替換句子潤色4.爸爸看到了，只好跟著我。兔子非常敏捷，很快就進入了一片山林。Dad

sawitandhadtofollowme.Therabbitwasveryagile,soonenteringamountainforest.wasveryagileamountainforest句子潤色5.我們不得不下馬，繼續(xù)追趕，完全忘記了后面的賽道。Wehadtogetdownthehorses,continuedtochaseandtotallyforgettingthetrackback.Wehadtogetdownthehorses,continuingthechaseandtotallyforgettingthe

track

back.getdownthehorsesthetrackback非謂語動詞替換句子潤色6.盡管我們拼命嘗試，但兔子最終還是看不見了。Eventhoughwetrieddesperately,therabbitwasoutof

sight

intheend.trieddesperatelywasoutofsight句子潤色7.然后我們意識到我們在森林深處。Thenwerealizedwewereinthedeeppartofaforest.inthedeeppartofaforest句子潤色8.烏云似乎在天空聚集。Anddarkcloudsseemedtobegatheringinthesky.

gatherinthesky句子潤色9.拿出手機，我們很快就發(fā)現(xiàn)出了問題：沒有信號。沒有指南針。Takingoutthecellphone,wesoonfoundsomethingwaswrong:nosignal.Andnocompass.nosignal句子潤色10.我嚇壞了，盯著爸爸，試圖從他那里尋求解決問題的辦法。Iamscared,andIstaredatDad,tryingtoseekasolutionforthetroublefromhim.Frightened,IstaredatDad,tryingtoseekasolutionforthetroublefromhim.asolutionforthetrouble長短句的使用dadUnclePaulfarmhouseriverfeedsheeplatetrackgotlostsightWho

WhenWhereWhat

10keywords

dad;UnclePaul;sheepfeed;gotlost;sightfarmhouse;river;tracklatePredictthedevelopment第五檔

(21-25)與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開頭語銜接合理。

內(nèi)容豐富，應(yīng)用了5個以上短文中標出的關(guān)鍵詞語。

所使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富、準確，可能有些錯誤，但完全不影響意義表達。有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。keywords

logicalplotrich,accurate,coherent(連貫的)languageRequirementsforwriting

Para.1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.What:feed;gotlost;sightWhere:farmhouse;river;track10keywordsWhen:lateFinishthestoryWho:dad;UnclePaul;sheep≥5keywordsLogicalplot3.Appropriatetransitionalwords4.Richandaccuratelanguage5.Neathandwriting.RequirementsThelanguageofthegiventextis

A.plainandsimpleB.complicatedC.beautifulD.detailed2018范文賞析歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析04Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

SostartledwasmyhorsethatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.IwasholdingonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepupwithme.Myhorsegotoffthetrack,keptrunning,andstoppedwhenitreachedtheriver,abeautifulspot.Mydadsaidthesunwassettingandthatwehadtoleavebecausehedidnotwantustogetlost.Weturnedaroundtostartbackbutthetrackwasnowhereinsight.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Mydadhadagreatideatofollowthestarsbacktothefarmhouse.IrememberedthattheNorthStarwasrightaboveUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.Wesetoffonthelongjourneyhome.Withdoubtfulthoughtsgoingthroughmyhead,Ihopedthatwewouldn’tseehungrywolves.Werodealongthedirt.Werodelikethewind.Atlastwewereatthefarmhouse.Ihuggedmyuncletightly.Afterdinner,Iwasrelievedtobesafeinmybed.閱讀以下參考范文，學習范文的精彩表達和亮點表述。SostartledwasmyhorsethatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.IwasholdingonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepupwithme.Myhorsegotoffthetrack,keptrunning,andstoppedwhenitreachedtheriver,abeautifulspot.Mydadsaidthesunwassettingandthatwehadtoleavebecausehedidnotwantustogetlost.Weturnedaroundtostartbackbutthetrackwasnowhereinsight.

Para1:

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

Mydadhadagreatideatofollowthestarsbacktothefarmhouse.IrememberedthattheNorthStarwasrightaboveUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.Wesetoffonthelongjourneyhome.Withdoubtfulthoughtsgoingthroughmyhead,Ihopedthatwewouldn’tseehungrywolves.Werodealongthedirt.Werodelikethewind.Atlastwewereatthefarmhouse.Ihuggedmyuncletightly.Afterdinner,Iwasrelievedtobesafeinmybed.2018年6月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫——邏輯連貫重復、指代等Para2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

So

startledwasmyhorsethatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.IwasholdingonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepupwith

me.Myhorsegotoffthetrack,keptrunning,andstoppedwhenitreachedtheriver,abeautifulspot.Mydadsaidthesunwassettingandthatwehadtoleavebecausehedidnotwantustogetlost.Weturnedaroundtostartbackbutthetrackwasnowhereinsight.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Mydadhadagreatideatofollowthestarsbacktothefarmhouse.IrememberedthattheNorthStarwasrightaboveUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.Weset