專題09書面表達

專題09書面表達（解析版）目錄常州市金壇區(qū)二、常州市武進區(qū)三、淮安市洪澤區(qū)四、連云港市東?？h五、南京市鼓樓區(qū)六、南京市金陵中學(xué)集團七、蘇州張家港市八、宿遷市泗陽縣九、泰州市姜堰區(qū)十、泰州市醫(yī)藥高新區(qū)（高港區(qū)）部分學(xué)校十一、泰州興化市十二、無錫市梁溪區(qū)十三、無錫市新吳區(qū)十四、徐州市部分學(xué)校十五、徐州市沛縣第五中學(xué)十六、鹽城市亭湖區(qū)十七、鹽城市揚州市寶應(yīng)縣揚州市邗江區(qū)二十、揚州市江都區(qū)常州市金壇區(qū)七、書信作文57．假如現(xiàn)在是2092年，你是Kate，生活在火星上，你的朋友Jim現(xiàn)在在地球上，他即將來火星生活。請你寫一封100詞左右的信，向他介紹你在火星上的生活。注意事項：1.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)：2.信中必須涉及上述幾個方面的內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加相關(guān)細節(jié)，使意思表達更加完整。DearJim,Now,I’mwritingalettertoyouonMars.It’sreallywonderfultoliveonMars._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,Kate【答案】例文DearJim,Now,I’mwritingalettertoyouonMars.It’sreallywonderfultoliveonMars.IthinklifeonMarsismorefortableandmoreinterestingthanthatonearth.Wehaveonlineschoolsinsteadofrealones.Wehavelessons,doourhomework,takeexamsandtalktoteachersandclassmatesthroughtheputersconnectedtoaninterplanetarynetworkathome.It’snotsocrowdedheresowehavemorespacetolive.Mostofourhouseworkisdonebyrobotssothatwecanhavemoretimeforourhobbies.Marsisverybeautiful.Therearegreentreesandfreshflowerseverywhere,andthereisnopollutionhere.Wehavesupermarketsinourneighbourhood.Theymakeourlifemoreconvenient.Bestwishes,Kate【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文，向Jim介紹火星上的生活。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。文章開頭已給出，第二段從學(xué)校，生活，環(huán)境等方面來介紹自己在火星的生活。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。常州市武進區(qū)七、講稿57．你們班開展了一次以“TheGreatestInventioninMyEyes”為主題的英語演講比賽，請你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿，與同學(xué)分享，內(nèi)容包括：1.What’sthegreatestinventioninyoureyes?2.Whydoyouthinkitthegreatestinvention?(Atleastthreereasons)3.Whatinfluenceithastohuman?注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；2.詞數(shù)100左右。短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。TheGreatestInventioninMyEyesHello,boysandgirls!Somepeoplethinkthatthegreatestinventionintheworldiscars,whiletheothersbelievethatputersarethemostusefultoolsweneedinthemodernsociety.Butinmyeyes,thegreatestinventionis____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】例文TheGreatestInventioninMyEyesHello,boysandgirls!Somepeoplethinkthatthegreatestinventionintheworldiscars,whiletheothersbelievethatputersarethemostusefultoolsweneedinthemodernsociety.Butinmyeyes,thegreatestinventionisjustbooks.Afamouspersonhaseversaid:“Booksarethestepsofhuman’sprogress.”Exactly!That’swhatIwouldliketosayfirstly.Inthelonghistoryofhumanbeing,bookshaveplayedanimportantpartinprovidinguswithknowledge.Anditisknowledgethatchangesourlives.Secondly,thebestwaytobroadenourhorizonsisreadingbooks,becausebooksprovideuswithdifferentideas.Asaresult,wecanhaveourownopinionsdifferentfromothersinsteadofobeyinganyotherperson’s.What’smore,booksareconsideredasteacherswithoutsound.Whenwedealwithdifficulties,itisagoodchoicetoaskforhelpfrombooks.Booksarelikeapatientteacherandwillgiveusanswerswheneverweneed.SoIthinkbooksarethegreatestinventionintheworldbecausewecanlearnmanyusefulthingsandgetbenefitsfromreading.Booksmakeusafullman.That’sall.Thankyou!【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是寫一篇發(fā)言稿，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，以“TheGreatestInventioninMyEyes”為主題寫一篇發(fā)言稿，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來寫作；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；注意敘述你認(rèn)為它是最偉大的發(fā)明的原因時至少要有三點，并且注意主謂一致。該發(fā)言稿可以在第一段說明在你眼里最偉大的發(fā)明是什么；第二段、第三段以及第四段敘述你認(rèn)為它是最偉大的發(fā)明的原因（至少三點原因）；第五段總結(jié)說明它對人類的影響。全文需要敘述完整、條理清晰?；窗彩泻闈蓞^(qū)九、材料作文71．決戰(zhàn)中考的號角已經(jīng)吹響，距離中考還有不到100天的時間。100天，短，則如白駒過隙，轉(zhuǎn)瞬即逝；長，則有144000分鐘。只要努力，一切皆有可能。讓我們以夢為馬，不負韶華。你準(zhǔn)備好了嗎？請根據(jù)以下表格寫一篇題為“Let’sgetready”的文章，給出你的建議并談?wù)勀愕膲粝?。保持身心健?.堅持鍛煉，健康飲食2.向同學(xué)、師長傾訴煩惱3.……高效學(xué)習(xí)1.科學(xué)計劃，合理管理時間2.上課認(rèn)真聽講，關(guān)注每個細節(jié)3.……我的夢想……（至少兩點）注意：1.短文必須包括表格中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)：80100，短文首段已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。Let’sgetreadyTheseniorhighentranceexaminationising.Howcanweprepareforit?Herearemysuggestions.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Let’sgetreadyTheseniorhighentranceexaminationising.Howcanweprepareforit?Herearemysuggestions.Tobeginwith,remembertoexercisetobuildourbodiesandhaveabalanceddieteveryday.Keepagoodmoodanddon’tworrytoomuchnomatterwhatdifficultyweface.Goodmunicationisofgreathelp.Moretimecanbesparedwithourparentsandclassmatesifnecessary,andwecansharethehappinessandsadnesswiththem.Second,managethetimeproperlyandmakealistofthethingsweneedtodoeveryday.Don’tputoffwhatshouldbedonetodaytilltomorrow.Weshouldlistencarefullyinclassandpayattentiontoeverydetail.Lastbutnotleast,finisheveryexerciseandtakeeverytestseriously,becausepracticemakesperfect.Correctingmistakesintimecanhelpmakeitpossibletoimproveourstudy.Keepintouchwithourteachersanddon’tforgettoaskthemforhelpeverytimewehavetroublewitheitherstudyorlife.IwanttobeadoctorbecauseIamwillingtohelpsickpeople.Ithinkbringinghealthtopatientsismeaningful.Withthesedone,IdobelieveweGrade9studentswillachievesuccessintheseniorhighentranceexamination.Nothingisimpossibleaslongasweputourheartintoit.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Let’sgetready”為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容，給處建議并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。注意要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要主要以第一人稱來行文，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。作文要分別從保持身心健康和高效學(xué)習(xí)等方面給出建議，還要談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。連云港市東?？h十、材料作文85．2022年3月份，我們眾志成城，共同抗擊疫情(COVID19pandemic)。某英文網(wǎng)站以“HowtoBeaBetterPerson”為題開展征文活動，請你寫一篇英文短文，談?wù)勀愕南敕?。要點提示：健康生活適量運動；充足睡眠；……樂觀心態(tài)不怕挑戰(zhàn)；盡力解決學(xué)習(xí)、生活中的問題；文明出行公共場合佩戴口罩(mask)；……樂于助人舉例1個例子。注意：1.文章必須包含所給要點提示并適當(dāng)補充信息；2.語句通順，行文連貫詞，字?jǐn)?shù)90個左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己姓名的信息.HowtoBeaBetterPersonAsweknow,theCOVID19pandemichaschangedourlives.Weshouldtrytobeabetterpersontodefeatthepandemic.IthinkIshoulddothefollowingthings.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Asweknow,theCOVID19pandemichaschangedourlives.Weshouldtrytobeabetterpersontodefeatthepandemic.IthinkIshoulddothefollowingthings.Ontheonehand,toliveahealthylife,doremembertotakeproperexerciseeverydayandmakesurewehaveenoughsleep.Ontheotherhand,itisimportanttokeepapositiveattitudetowardseachprobleminourstudyanddailylife.Whenfacingchallenges,weshouldtryourbesttodealwiththeminsteadofbeingafraid.Also,everyoneissupposedtowearamaskwheninpublicbecausethatwillpreventusfromcatchingthevirus.Moreover,givingahelpinghandisagoodhabit.Forexample,asstudents,wecanhelpourparentsdohouseworkasoftenaspossible.Thepointsabovearemysincerethoughtsonhowtobeabetterperson.Ibelieveeachofuscanbeabetterpersonifwetakeactionfromnowon.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，在寫作時，根據(jù)表格中漢語提示的內(nèi)容，介紹在抗擊疫情期間如何做一個更好的人，內(nèi)容包括：健康生活、樂觀心態(tài)、文明出行，最后列舉一個樂于助人的事例。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱為主來介紹內(nèi)容，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語句通順，語法正確，保證提示內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰，行文連貫。南京市鼓樓區(qū)九、材料作文76．英語校刊TEENS正在進行“是否可以帶入校園”的問卷調(diào)查。請根據(jù)下列調(diào)查表的內(nèi)容做出自己的選擇，并依據(jù)你的選擇用英語寫一篇短文，表達你的想法。AsurveyonmobilephonesShouldwebringmobilephonestoschool?ChoiceYES

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￡Reasons1.contactwithparents2.…1.useinawrongway2....AdviceThoughmobilephonescanbeusedinschool,Ithink…Thoughmobilephonescan’tbeusedinschool,Ihope..注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)80左右（已給出文章開頭不計入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Shouldwebringmobilephonestoschool?AsurveyonteenagemobilephoneuseatschooliscarriedoutbyTEENS._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Shouldwebringmobilephonestoschool?AsurveyonteenagemobilephoneuseatschooliscarriedoutbyTEENS.Aremiddleschoolstudentsallowedtobringthemtoschool?Somestudentsthinkwecanbringmobilephonestoschoolbecauseit’sconvenientforparentstocontactus.Whenwehavedifficultyinstudy,mobilephonescanbeourteacherandhelpuswithourproblems.Everycoinhastwosides.Somestudentsusemobilephonesinawrongway.Theyspendalotoftimechattingonline,asaresult,theycan’tfocusonstudy.Andtoomuchtimeonscreensdoesharmtooureyes.Moreandmorestudentshavepooreyesight.Inmyopinion,Iagreetobringsmartphonestoschool.Thoughmobilephonescanbeusedinschool,IthinkIwon’tturnitonuntilclassisover.SincetherearelotsofusefulwebsitesforEnglishlearning,IwillgotheretopracticemyEnglish.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇議論文。根據(jù)表格介紹支持和反對人的原因和建議?？陀^介紹人們對學(xué)生帶這一現(xiàn)象的看法，并表達自己的觀點。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以第三人稱和第一人稱書寫，時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時為主。分成四段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹支持者的看法；第三段介紹反對者的看法；第四段介紹自己的觀點。不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀、注意行文的連貫性。南京市金陵中學(xué)集團九、材料作文76．疫情期間，同學(xué)們不得不在家上網(wǎng)課。針對網(wǎng)課，在學(xué)生調(diào)查中發(fā)現(xiàn)存在兩種不同觀點，請以IPrefertoStudyatSchool/atHome（選擇你贊同的一方面）為題寫一篇短文。一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為不用去學(xué)校理由：1.既節(jié)省路上的時間又省了交通費用；2.有更多空余時間，可以在薄弱學(xué)科多下功夫另一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為有必要去學(xué)校理由：1.面對面交流學(xué)習(xí)效果更佳；2.和同學(xué)相處，樂趣很多我……理由：……（自擬至少2點）提示詞：網(wǎng)課onlinecourse新冠疫情coronaviruspandemic注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，全文連貫通順；2.詞數(shù)90詞左右；3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。IPrefertoStudy____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：IPrefertoStudyatSchoolTobehonest,Iprefertostudyatschool.Iusedtothinkhowgreatitwouldbeifwecouldstudyathome.Wewouldn’thavetogetupsoearlyandwewouldhavemorefreetimetodoourownthings.However,thetruthisnotwhatIthought.Studyingathomeseemstobebusierthanatschool.Now,Ienjoystudyingatschool.First,Ithinkfacetofacemunicationisbetterforlearning.Second,it’sgoodforustostudywithclassmates.Wehavelotsofthingsinmonandwecansharethingswitheachotherandhelpeachother.Inaword,Ireallyhatestudyingonlineagain.Iguessmyclassmateswouldprefertostudyatschoollikeme.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)“IPrefertoStudyatSchool/atHome”來選擇一個自己贊同的一方并以此為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主。第一段選擇贊同的觀點；第二段描述過去的想法；第三段講述自己為什么選擇這種觀點的理由；第四段進行總結(jié)。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。蘇州張家港市九、看圖作文61．“雙減”政策實施以后，學(xué)?有了更多的周末空余時間。那么，他們在周末都在做些什么呢？你在陽光中學(xué)做了一項“關(guān)于學(xué)生雙休日活動的問卷調(diào)查”，請根據(jù)下列圖表中的調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)，以“WeekendActivitiesReport”為題，寫一篇英語調(diào)查報告，簡單介紹調(diào)查情況并發(fā)表你自己的看法（至少兩點）。注意：詞數(shù)100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計總詞數(shù)。WeekendActivitiesReportSincethe“doublereduction(雙減)”policywaslaunched,studentsnowhavemorefreetimeonweekends.SoIdidasurveyabouthowthestudentsspendtheirweekendsinSunshineMiddleSchool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:WeekendActivitiesReportSincethe“doublereduction(雙減)”policywaslaunched,studentsnowhavemorefreetimeonweekends.SoIdidasurveyabouthowthestudentsspendtheirweekendsinSunshineMiddleSchool.Ifindthatalmosthalfofthestudentsstudybythemselvesathome.About25%ofthemprefertowatchTVorlistentomusic.20%ofthemliketochatonlineorplayputergames,while10%ofthemhelptheirparentsdohousework.Onlyasmallnumberofthemgoinforsportsortravelling.Inmyopinion,allofusstudentsshouldhaveaproperplanforourweekends.Weshouldmakegooduseofourtime,learningmoreknowledge,developingourinterests.Weshouldalsolearntorelax,butIdon’tthinkit’sagoodideatospendtoomuchtimewatchingTV,chattingonlineorplayingputergames.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目要求根據(jù)所提供的調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)，寫一篇學(xué)生周末活動的報告。短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，我們只寫正文就可以。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：人稱以第三人稱為主，時態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時，先根據(jù)圖表所示內(nèi)容，介紹學(xué)生周末所從事的活動，最后發(fā)表自己的觀點，至少2點。注意作適當(dāng)擴展，并保證條理清晰。宿遷市泗陽縣九、講稿71．中學(xué)生要做德智體美勞全面發(fā)展的社會主義建設(shè)者和接班人。假如你是泗陽某中學(xué)一名學(xué)生李華，請你寫一篇英語演講稿，談一談如何做一個新時代合格的中學(xué)生。要點提示：1.愛國愛家，誠實善良，樂于助人；2.努力學(xué)習(xí)，增長知識，……3.健康飲食，早睡早起，多做鍛煉，保持健康；4.熱愛自然，走進田野，聞聞花香，聽聽鳥鳴；5.幫助父母，做些家務(wù)，……；注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容須包括所給要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，條理清楚、語句連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名等信息。Boysandgirls,MynameisLiHua.TodayI’mgladtosharemyideasabouthowtobegoodstudents.First,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aslongasweworkhard,wewillbequalifiedmiddleschoolstudents.【答案】例文Boysandgirls,MynameisLiHua.TodayI’mgladtosharemyideasabouthowtobeagoodstudent.First,asamiddleschoolstudent,weshouldloveourcountryaswellasourfamily.Weshouldbehonestandkind.Andweshouldalsobehelpful.Second,weshouldworkhard.Themorewestudy,themorewewillincreaseourknowledge.Third,weshouldhaveahealthydiet.Weshouldgotobedearlyandgetupearly.Weshouldtakemoreexercisetokeephealthy.Anyone,whohasn’tgotastrongbody,candonothingforhiscountry,evenifhehasmuchknowledge.Fourth,weshouldlovenatureandwalkintothefield.Wecansmelltheflowersandhearthebirdssing.Inaddition,weshouldhelpourparentswithallkindsofhousework,suchaswashingthedishes,cleaningthefloorandsoon.Aslongasweworkhard,wewillbequalifiedmiddleschoolstudents.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求寫一篇英語演講稿，談一談如何做一個新時代合格的中學(xué)生；要求包含所有的提示要點。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，采用第一人稱口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：提出主題；第二段：闡述如何做一個新時代合格的中學(xué)生；第三段：表達祝愿。泰州市姜堰區(qū)八、講稿79．2022年北京冬奧會是科技的盛會，各種高科技頻繁亮相，無論是智慧餐廳還是“獵豹”攝像機，讓外國媒體大呼驚艷。不僅如此，科技給我們的生活也帶來了巨變。假設(shè)你是九年級一班學(xué)生王華，學(xué)校正在舉辦科技節(jié)，你應(yīng)邀參加以“科技改變生活”為主題的演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖用英語寫一篇短文，介紹身邊的科技及其優(yōu)點。注意事項：1.短文須根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.省略號部分必須用適當(dāng)信息補充完整；3.詞數(shù)在100個左右，短文開頭已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；Hello,everyone!IamWangHuainClassOne,Grade9.It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyhasbroughtgreatchangestoourlife.Smartphones,robots,highspeedtrainsandelectriccarsarefourgreatinventions.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Chinaistakingtheleadinsomeways.I’mreallyproudofmycountry.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【答案】Onepossibleversion：Hello,everyone!IamWangHuainClassOne,Grade9.It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyhasbroughtgreatchangestoourlife.Smartphones,robots,highspeedtrainsandelectriccarsarefourgreatinventions.Thesmartphonebringsbothconvenienceandpleasuretoourlife.Wecanshoponline,watchmovies,andhavevideochatsthroughit.Asfortherobot,itcanhelpuswithhousework,helpourchildrenwiththeirhomeworkandsoon.Itsavesusalotoftimeandenergy.Thehighspeedtrainhasgreatlyimprovedourtravelspeed.Ittravelsathighspeed.It’sveryfastandfortable.Theelectriccarhasalsochangedourlife.Itcannotonlysaveenergybutalsoprotecttheenvironmenttoagreatextent.Itisconvenientandgreen.Chinaistakingtheleadinsomeways.I’mreallyproudofmycountry.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于演講稿寫作。要根據(jù)所給的思維導(dǎo)圖進行寫作，介紹身邊的科技及其優(yōu)點，要包含所有給出的要點，并且做出適當(dāng)?shù)难a充。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱為主來書寫；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時。短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，寫作時需要注意承接上下文，寫作過程中要包含圖中所給的全部內(nèi)容，并且補充適當(dāng)信息，在此基礎(chǔ)上，選取合適的連詞、短語和句型進行寫作，要保證條理清晰，邏輯明確，沒有語法和拼寫錯誤。泰州市醫(yī)藥高新區(qū)（高港區(qū)）部分學(xué)校十三、材料作文108．九年級的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束，在這個過程中，我們有汗水、淚水、困惑和進步的喜悅。請你以“I’minGradeNine”為題，寫一篇短文，參加?？⑽膶诘恼魑谋荣?。要點如下：1.在校情況（老師、同學(xué)……）2.周末在家情況（父母……）3.愿望要求：1.必須含有所有要點，并適當(dāng)拓展。2.不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名等相關(guān)信息。3.詞數(shù)100左右。I’minGradeNine____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：I’minGradeNineIthasbeenmorethanhalfayearsinceIbecameaGradeNinestudent.Hereiswhatmylifeislikenow.Atschool,allofourteachersworkveryhard.Mostofthemarekindhearted,strictandpatientenoughtohelpuswithallkindsofproblems.Asforus,inclasswelistentotheteachercarefullyandthinkactively.Afterclass,wearebusydoingourhomework.Weallhelpeachothertoimproveourselves.Onweekends,westillspendmuchtimedoingourhomework,sowecan’tsparetimeforourhobbiesanymore.Ifeelalittlestressed,somyparentsoftenorganizesomesportsactivitiesformetorelax.Atpresent,mybiggestdreamistobeadmittedtoagoodhighschool.SoIhopetoworkhardtomakeourdreametrue.Nopains,nogains.IbelieveIcansucceedaslongasIworkhard.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“I’minGradeNine”為題，根據(jù)題干參考信息寫一篇短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：文章時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱采用第一人稱。要求根據(jù)參考信息介紹自己的九年級生活自身情況，寫作時要有邏輯性。文章整體要通順連貫，無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。泰州興化市十三、材料作文108．你校EnglishCorner將以“綠色生活，從我做起”為主題，組織全校英語征文比賽。請你以Howtoliveagreenlife為題，從低碳生活、節(jié)約資源、保護環(huán)境等方面寫一篇英語作文。要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2.寫作要點齊全，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文章不得出現(xiàn)人名、校名或地名，否則不得分；4.詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。HowtoliveagreenlifeEveryonecanmakesmallchangesintheirlifestyleandhelpreducepollutionandwaste.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：HowtoliveagreenlifeEveryonecanmakesmallchangesintheirlifestyleandhelpreducepollutionandwaste.First,wecanridebikesorwalktoschoolratherthangoingbycar,asthiscanhelpreduceairpollution.Second,weshouldturnoffthelightswhengoingoutaswellasturnoffthetapwhenwebrushourteeth.Besides,weshouldn’tuseplasticbagswhenwegoshopping,becauseplasticisharmfultotheenvironment.Lastbutnotleast,weneedtoplantmoretreesandflowerstomaketheenvironmentgreener.Ifwekeepdoingthis,Ibelievetheenvironmentwillbebetterandbetter.Let’sdoeverythingwecantoliveagreenlifeandprotectourplanet.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以Howtoliveagreenlife為題進行寫作，文章開頭已給出，寫作時注意銜接，寫作內(nèi)容不僅要包含寫作要點，還要做到適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要用第一人稱進行寫作，時態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時?？煞譃槿问剑旱谝欢我鲋黝}；第二段根據(jù)低碳生活、節(jié)約資源、保護環(huán)境三個寫作要點，提出自己的意見，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；第三段提出倡議。寫作時要保持主謂一致，邏輯性要強，無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。無錫市梁溪區(qū)八、電子郵件65．假設(shè)你是梁華，你的英國網(wǎng)友Jim在網(wǎng)上瀏覽到試卷第六部分的閱讀填空材料，并寫郵件推薦給你。請再仔細閱讀材料，用英語給Jim回信，提醒他在暑期旅行中注意安全。DearLiangHua,Howiseverythinggoing?Ireadanarticleaboutwatchingmeteors.Fromthearticle,whichiscopiedattheendoftheemail,Ilearntweshouldkeepourselvessafewhenwegoout.Whatsafetytipsdoyoulearnfromthearticle?Canyoutellme?Doyouhaveanypastexperienceinwhichyoukeptyourselfsafefromdanger?YouknowI’mgoingtotravelinChinainthesummerholiday.CanyouoffermesomeadviceonsafetytipsinChina?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Jim注意事項：1.回信內(nèi)容必須涵蓋所給郵件中所有問題，要求意思連貫，符合題意；2.試卷第六部分閱讀材料僅供參考，可作合理想象、適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)在100個左右，回信的首尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4.回信必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上，不得使用真實的個人及學(xué)校信息。DearJim,Gladtohearfromyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LovefromLiangHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearJim,Gladtohearfromyou.Everythingisgoingfinethesedays.First,thankyouforsharingthearticlewithmebecauseI’malsointerestedinwatchingmeteors.Afterreadingit,Iagreewithyouthatweshouldprotectourselveswhenwegooutsidealone.Askaparenttogowithusifpossible.OnceIlostmywayinthecitycentreandhadnomoneywithme.Iaskedthepoliceforhelpandtheytookmehome.Sinceyou’reing,you’dbetterlearnaboutsomesafetytipshere.Rememberthattrafficgoesontheright.That’stheoppositeoftheUK.MakesureyoutakeamapwithyouoruseBaiduMapinChina.Alsoit’simportantnottoletstrangersknowyourpersonalinformationwhentravelling.Ofcourse,ifyouetoWuxi,Iamexcitedtobeyourguidetoshowyouaroundmyhometown.Hopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.LovefromLiangHua【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題目屬于電子郵件寫作。要求用英語給Jim回信，提醒他在暑期旅行中注意安全。寫作的時候要注意根據(jù)來信的內(nèi)容進行答復(fù)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)用第一人稱和第二人稱進行敘述；時態(tài)上采用一般現(xiàn)在時，但是要注意，在回憶以前的危險經(jīng)歷時要用一般過去時。注意語言連貫，可合理想象，提出的安全建議要合情合理，不要有語法和拼寫的錯誤。無錫市新吳區(qū)八、講稿65．2022年立春，北京冬奧會如約而至。在這個世界共襄的冰雪盛會，有人成功了也有人失敗了。勝敗乃兵家常事，體育競技場亦是如此。那么，對于你來說，成長過程中是成功更能鼓舞士氣還是失敗更能激勵斗志？請你選擇一方面，寫一篇發(fā)言稿，陳述你的觀點并給出你的理由。以下信息為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考。注意事項：1.發(fā)言稿須自擬，要求觀點明確、語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.詞數(shù)在100個左右，發(fā)言稿的首尾已在答卷紙上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.發(fā)言稿中不得使用真實的個人及學(xué)校信息；4.發(fā)言稿必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。___________________________________________________________________________________