06Unit3Gettingalongwithothers(讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)2)(原卷版)

Unit3Gettingalongwithothers單元寫(xiě)作深度指導(dǎo)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)（動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)2）(2021新課標(biāo)I&II卷)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.【寫(xiě)作示例】本文是一篇記敘文。講述的是Jenna和Jeff這對(duì)雙胞胎兄妹為了在母親節(jié)早上給母親驚喜而精心策劃并制作早餐的故事；他們克服困難，永不放棄，折射的是他們對(duì)母親的拳拳之愛(ài)。Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Knowingwhattheywerepreparingfor,hewasgreatlysurprised.Soimmediately,heofferedtogetinvolvedinthekids’job.Firstly,heputthepotofporridgeonagentleheat,askingJefftowatchoutforitgoingforfifteenminutes.Andthen,heaskedJennatobreakanothertwoeggsandmixthemwithmilk.Withallpreparationsdone,theystartedtofrybreadtogether.Inaflash,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.Totheirdelight,thebreakfastwasasuccessintheend.Paragraph1:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Eyesopened,thewomanheardaharmonious“HappyMother’sDay”fromhertwinkidswithhot,sweetbreakfastbeforeher.Behindthechildrenstoodtheirfather.Toshedlightonthegameofthegift,hetoldthemotherthewholestory.Afterlearningaboutwhathappened,sherosequicklytogazeattheboy’shandwithmovedtearsrollingdownhercheeks.“Thankyou,myhoney!”saidthemother.【寫(xiě)作分析】本文以母親節(jié)為線索展開(kāi)，講述了雙胞胎Jenna和Jeff為了獻(xiàn)給母親一份美味的早餐，自己動(dòng)手，做起飯餐來(lái)，但是不幸的是，他們連連失敗的故事。【要點(diǎn)詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時(shí)，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼?xiě)他們的父親指導(dǎo)幫助他們準(zhǔn)備早餐。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“這對(duì)雙胞胎把早餐端到樓上，叫醒了他們的母親?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫(xiě)母親收到孩子們的禮物早餐，非常感動(dòng)。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線索：指導(dǎo)——積極——獻(xiàn)禮——感動(dòng)

3.詞匯激活行為類①幫助：help/assist②完成：finish/plete③擁抱：hug/embrace情緒類①高興：happy/delighted②感動(dòng)：moved/touched[高分句型1].Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2].Itwasnotonlythebreakfast,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.(固定短語(yǔ)notonly…but(also)和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)高頻動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)詞匯（二）▲動(dòng)作的速度1.Itallhappenedsosuddenly.(突然地;意外地)2.Theskydarkenedabruptly.(突然地;意外地)3.Cathyworkedquicklyandmethodically.(利索地)4.Shemovedswiftlytotherescue.(迅速地;敏捷地)5.Hewalkedbrisklyalongthepathswinginghisrolledupumbrella.(輕快地;伶俐地)6.Theroadfellsharplytothesea.(急劇地)7.Unemploymentisrisingsteeply.(急劇地;大幅度地)8.Crimefiguresarerisingrapidly.(迅速地)9.Iwilldealwithitpromptlyandfairly.(迅速地;毫不遲疑)10.AlIlenquiriesweredealtwithasspeedilyaspossible.(快速地)11.Shehastilycookedupanexcuse.(匆忙地)12.Itwaslateandshewalkedhomehurriedly.(倉(cāng)促地;匆忙地)13.We'llgetthereslowlybutsurely.(穩(wěn)扎穩(wěn)打地)14.Weshouldproceedwithitmethodicallybutnottooslowly.(有步驟地;有條不紊地)▲動(dòng)作的頻率1.Ineverknewthatyouhadatwinsister.(從未)2.IveryrarelyweararaincoatbecauseIspendmostofmytimeinacar.(難得;罕有)3.Sheseldom,ifever,goestothetheatre.(不常;難得)4.Weoccasionallymeetforadrinkafterwork.(偶爾;有時(shí)候)5.Modemsportsconnectwiththeeconomyminutely.(每時(shí)每刻地)6.Wearehourlyexpectingnewsfromtheclimbers.(每小時(shí)地;隨時(shí))7.Youcanpaymonthlyorannually.(每月／年)8.Thevictimwasstabledrepeatedlyinthechest.(反復(fù)地;多次地)9.Busesrunfrequentlybetweenthecityandtheairport.(頻繁地)10.I'musuallyhomeby6o'clock.(通常地)11.Thefactorytypicallyproduces500chairsaweek.(通常;一般)12.Mothersroutinelylaybabiesontheirbackstosleep.(慣常地)13.Somanyofushabituallygossiporplain.(習(xí)慣地)14.WearemostlyoutonSundays.(通常地)15.Normallyawellbuiltman,hehadlostmorethan30pounds.(通常地)16.Igenerallygetupatsix(通常地)17.Ifhecan'thelp,thereisalwaysJohn.(總是)▲動(dòng)作的進(jìn)程1.Thecastlewasoriginallysurroundedbyatriplewall,onlyoneofwhichremains.(起初)2.Initiallythegovernmentwasunwillingtoacceptthedefeat.(最初;起初)3.Previouslyshehadverylittletimetoworkinherowngarden.(以前)4.NooneknowshowmanypeoplecurrentlysurftheNet.(目前)5.Thecrimeispresentlybeinginvestigatedbythepolice.(句中表現(xiàn)在:眼下)6.Presently,thedooropenedagainandthreemensteppedout.(句首表過(guò)去:不久)7.She'llbeherepresently.(句尾表將來(lái):馬上)8.I'llbereadyshortly.(馬上)9.Thedriverwaskilledinstantly.(立刻;當(dāng)即)10.Thepointofmyquestionmaynotbeimmediatelyapparent.(立刻;馬上)11.TellthemI'llbetheredirectly.(立刻;直接)12.Wineismadefromthejuiceoffreshlypickedgrapes.(剛剛;新近)13.Itisnotyourtalentsorabilities,butyourchoicesthatultimatelydecideyourfate.(最終)14.Thebilateralrelationshavebeendevelopinghealthilyandstablysincethetwocountriesestablisheddiplomatictiesin1992.(穩(wěn)定地)15.Itisbeingincreasinglyclearthatthisproblemwillnotbeeasilysolved.(越來(lái)越····..;日益)16.Theweathergraduallyimproved.(逐漸地)17.Thepaingotprogressivelyworse.(逐漸地)18.Theyarrivedpromptlyattwoo'clock.(準(zhǔn)時(shí)地;及時(shí)地)19.Thankheavenstheshipwaslateleaving!Haditleftpunctually,weshouldhavemissedit.(準(zhǔn)時(shí))20.Hemovedrestlesslyfromonefoottotheother.(不停地)21.Weworkedsolidlyforsixhours.(連續(xù)地)22.TheonlyquestioniswhetherIwillrelyonitconsistently.(一如既往地)23.Iadmiredhertimelesslybeautifulskin.(永恒地;永存地)24.Romanculturewasenduringlyfertilized.(耐久地;永久地)25.IbecamelastinglydevotedtowhatIcalled“adventures”concurrentlyplannedandacted.(持續(xù)地)26.HeandhisfamilyhavesettledpermanentlyintheStates.(永久地;時(shí)刻地)27.Isawhimstepforwardmomentarilybutthenhangback,nervouslymassaging(搓著)hishands.(片刻地;時(shí)刻地)28.HehadspokentoEmmaonlybriefly.(短暫地)29.ThenextroundoftalksistentativelyscheduledtobeginOctober21stinWashington.(臨時(shí)地;暫時(shí)地)30.Weregretthisserviceistemporarilyunavailable.(暫時(shí)地)31.Igojoggingfairlyregularly.(定期地)32.Wewillrefreshthisinformationperiodicallytokeepoursystemupdated.(周期性地;定期地)33.Runningoutsideispotentiallydangerous,becauserooftilesandglassmayfallonyou.(潛在地;可能地)34.Stressinitselfisnotnecessarilyinjurious.(未必;不一定)▲動(dòng)作的程度1.Iknewherslightly.(略微)2.Helookedfaintlyembarrassed.(微弱地;有點(diǎn))3.Hefeltmildlysurprisedatwhatwehaddone.(輕微地)4.Hewasonlypartlyresponsiblefortheaccident.(一定程度上;部分地)5.Someeffortshavebeenmodestlysuccessful.(適度地)6.Howmuchmoneydoyouneedtodothejobproperly?(適當(dāng)?shù)?正確地)7.Thegovernmenthasbeenaccusedofnotrespondingappropriatelytotheneedsofthehomeless.(適當(dāng)?shù)?正確地)8.Thejourneytookapproximatelysevenhours.(大約)9.Theneedforsleepvariesconsiderablyfrompersontoperson.(非常;很;相當(dāng)多地)10.Igojoggingfairlyregularly.(相當(dāng)?shù)?11.Thetwosetsoffiguresarenotsignificantlydifferent.(顯著地;有重大意義地)12.Hepaused,apparentlylostinthought.(顯然)13.Shewalkedslowlydowntheroad,evidentlyinpain.(顯然)14.Sheexplainedeverythingveryclearly.(清楚地;顯然)15.Hewasobviouslydrunk.(顯然)16.Idistinctlyremembermocking(對(duì)·····嗤之以鼻)theidea.(明顯地;清楚地)17.Ispecificallytoldyounottogonearthewater.(明確地)18.Iknowexactlyhowshefelt.(精確地;確切地)19.Themeetingstartsat2o'clockprecisely.(準(zhǔn)確地;精確地)20.Thetaskwassaidtobemostlongandtiringbutequallyrewarding.(同樣地)21.Thelecturewasnotparticularlyinteresting.(特別;尤其)22.Iwasnotfeelingespeciallyhappythatday.(特別;尤其)23.Shefounditextremelydifficulttogetajob.(極其)24.Beingtallcanmakeyoufeelincrediblyselfconfident.(極其)25.Doingthisseemstobeunbelievablydifficult.(難以置信地)26.Sheabsolutelyadoresyou.(極其)27.Theyintendedtoinvesthugelyinnewtechnology.(極其;巨大地)28.Iwasbroadlyinfavourofit.(大體上;基本上)29.I'vepletelyforgottenhername.(徹底地)30.Ientirelyagreewithyou.(完全地)31.I'mnottotallyconvincedthatheknowswhatheisdoing.(完全地)32.Ifullyunderstandyourmotives.(完全地)33.Shetookthejobpurelyandsimplyforthemoney.(僅僅地;完全地)34.Webecamethebestoffriendsandheinfluencedmedeeply.(極其;深刻地)35.Histeachersthinkveryhighlyofhim.(非常;很高地)36.Thecarisinremarkablygoodconditionforitsage.(極其;顯著地)37.Despitethepositivenews,hesaidtherateofdeforestationremainedalarminglyhighinmanycountries.(極其;讓人擔(dān)憂地)38.VeryrarelyhaveIseensuchastrikinglybeautifulwoman!(醒目地;斐然可觀地)39.Sheismadlyinlovewithhim.(極端地;瘋狂地)40.Theylaughedandsangheartily.(盡情地;極為)41.Theywantedtowinsobadly.(非常;在很大程度上)42.Weareprofoundlyaffectedbywhathappenstousinchildhood.(深刻地;徹底地)43.Hewassurprisedtofindhisroomthoroughlycleanedandeverythingarrangedinperfectorder.(徹底地;認(rèn)真仔細(xì)地)44.He'sten.He'sfantasticallyimaginative,buttoocasual.(極其)45.Iwasbeginningtofeelamazinglysleepy.(出奇地)46.Howunimaginablypalelifewithouthopewouldbe!(難以想象地)47.Myexperiencetellsmethathoweverspectacularlyyougetyourheartbroken,eventuallyit'sokay.(壯觀地;令人吃驚地)48.Ifeltastonishinglycalminmyplacebythecaptain.(令人驚訝地;驚人地)49.Theweatherwassurprisinglywarmandsunny.(驚人地;出人意外地)50.Thetheatrewaspracticallyempty.(幾乎;差不多)51.Menareridiculouslypigheaded(死腦筋)andstubborn.(可笑地;荒謬地)52.Thepaintingsweresoldforabsurdlyhighprices.(荒謬地;荒唐地)53.Istillbelievethatpeoplearefundamentallygood.(從根本上說(shuō))54.IcannotadequatelyexpresshowsorryIamforwhatIhavedone.(充分地;足夠地)55.Heisadmirablysuitedforthejob.(非常;極好地)56.I'mawfullysorryaboutthatproblemtheotherday,(非常;惡劣地)57.Heisproudofhisabilitytorememberthingsaccurately.(精確地)58.Ilistroughlymyworkasfollows,(粗略地)59.Thecausesofthephenomenonarestillinpletelyunderstood.(不完全地)60.Lifeinthecityisinparablybetterforchildrenthanlifeinthecountry.(無(wú)比地;無(wú)敵地)61.Husbandandwifeweresimilarlysuccessfulintheirchosencareers.(相似地)62.Hisanalysisofurbanuseofagriculturallandhasbeenprovedessentiallycorrect.(本質(zhì)上;大體上)63.Educationisvitallyimportantforthecountry'sfuture.(極其)64.Inarrowlymissedacyclistwhowobbledintomypath.(狹窄地;勉強(qiáng)地)65.Anotablyshort,silverhairedman,heplaysbasketballwithhisstaffseveraltimesaweek.(尤其;顯著地)66.Althoughthecarisbasicallysound,Iwasworriedaboutcertainareas.(基本上;總的說(shuō)來(lái))67.Thedifficultyliesprimarilyinthefactthatthefibercoreisrelativelysmall.(首要地;主要地)68.IliketothinkI'mrelativelyeasytogetalongwith.(相對(duì)地)69.Fortunately,theweatherthatwinterwasreasonablymild.(尚可;過(guò)得去;適度地)70.Thingsaremovingpainfullyslowly.(非常地)71.Myparentsloveme,butnotexcessively.(過(guò)分地;過(guò)度地)72.ShewasseveralinchestallerthanIwas,andunnaturallyblond.(異常地)73.Afteraweekofeffort,whenIsuccessfullyskippedforthefirsttimeIwasmorethanindescribablyhappy!(不可名狀地;難以形容地)74.Elainefeltunaccountablyshyforonce.(不可解釋地;莫名其妙地)75.Supposeyougotothebestrestaurantintownwithyourwealthyfriends.Toyou,thefoodisunimaginablygood.(超乎想像地)76.Withthehelpofhisfriendsandhisunbelievablytremendouspatienceandeffort,hemadeit.(難以置信地)77.Iamnot,Ihope,unreasonablynaive.(不合理地;離譜地)78.Hisresponsibilitiespressheavilyuponhim.(在很大程度上;沉重地)79.Iamacutelyawareofthedifficultiesweface.(極其;強(qiáng)烈地)80.Ifanything,swimmingwillappealtohermoststrongly.(強(qiáng)烈地;強(qiáng)有力地)▲動(dòng)作的角度1.Thericherwehavebeematerially,thepoorerwehavebeemorallyandspiritually.(物質(zhì)上)(道德上)(精神上)2.Wemusthealourselvesemotionallyandspiritually.(情緒上)3.PhysicallyImightnothavebeenoverseasbutmentallyandspirituallyIwaswiththem.(身體上)(心理上)4.Shewasphysicallydelicate(孱弱)andpsychologicallyunstable.(心理上)5.Hefailedtoshineacademically.(在學(xué)術(shù)方面)6.Lifeforthesuccessfuldoctorcanbeemotionallyandfinanciallyrewarding.(在經(jīng)濟(jì)上)7.Afivedayweekbenefitsmorethanindividuallyandeconomically.(在經(jīng)濟(jì)上)8.Mariabentherheadinstinctivelytoavoidbeingrecognized.(本能地)9.Todaywasmybirthday.Iwasofficiallyeighteenyearsold.(正式地;官方地)10.Theschoolislegallyresponsibleforyourchild'ssafety.(法律上;合法地)11.Thefactorywasunlawfullybuiltonapieceoflandwhichbelongstoanearbyschool.(非法地;不正當(dāng)?shù)?12.Theoretically,thepriceissupposedtobemarkedontheshelf.(理論上;照理說(shuō))13.Ithinktheydevelopedtheirideasstepbysteplogically.(邏輯上;符合邏輯地)14.Characteristically,heworkedhardattheassignment.(典型地;有代表性地)他一如既往地認(rèn)真完成分派的任務(wù).15.Hewastypicallymodestabouthisachievements.(典型地;果然)16.Youngpeopleshouldknowhowtowriteclearlyandreasonstatistically.(統(tǒng)計(jì)上地)17.Itsatisfiestheuser'srequirementsbothfunctionallyandemotionally.(功能上地)18.Technically,thetwosideshavebeeninastateofwareversince1949.(技術(shù)上;嚴(yán)格說(shuō)來(lái))19.Ifchildrencan'tthink,read,writeandpute,theycannotadapttechnologically.(技術(shù)上地;科技地)20.Iwouldpayextraformoreenvironmentallyfriendlycarsandfuel.(有關(guān)環(huán)境方面)21.Theresponsibilitynaturallyfellonourshoulders.(天然地;順理成章地)22.Notunnaturally,Iwantedtoknowwheremydaughterhadbeenallnight.(很自然)23.Thecrimewasnotpoliticallymotivated.(政治地;政黨地)24.Mywatchshowsthetimedigitally.(以數(shù)字形式地)25.Topsupermarketsaretobanmanygeneticallymodifiedfoods.(基因地;從遺傳學(xué)角度)26.YoucanpaybillsovertheInternet.Additionally,youcancheckyourbalanceororderstatements.(此外)27.Theagencywillmaketravelarrangementsforyou.Alternatively,youcanorganizeyourowntransport.(或者)28.Iwanttospeaktoeachmemberofthegroupindividually.(分別地;獨(dú)特地)29.Washthewhiteclothestogetherandtheblueoneseparately.(單獨(dú)地;分別地)30.Itakeeverythingtoopersonally.(親自地;就個(gè)人而言)31.ThereisonlyoneChinaintheworld.Thisisafactwhichisuniversallyrecognizedbytheinternationalmunity.(普遍地)32.Thesongisbeingwidelypopular.(廣泛地)33.Itisveryimportantforustoverballyplimentandencourageoneanother.(言詞上;口頭地)34.Allcandidatesmustfirstofallbeorallyexamined,(口頭地;口服地)35.We'lldiscussthemattermoreconcretelynexttime.Ihopeeveryonewouldmakesomepreparations.(具體地)36.Hedescribedhisideaabstractly,withoutanyillustrativeexamples.(抽象地;理論上地)37.Hehasspentseveralminutestellingaboutthatviewpointdetailedly.(詳細(xì)地;逐條地)讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Patwasthenewkidintown.Herdadgotanewjob,sotheyhadtomovefromtheiroldhome,school,friendsandeverythinginSouthAmericatothisnewcity.Nowtheyweretotalstrangershere.Summervacationwentbywhiletheyunpacked,arrangedfurnitureandadjustedtothenewcity.Schoolwasapproaching.Patdreadedit.Shewasnotanoutgoingperson,somakingfriendswasnoteasyforthisshyandquietgirl.Shewasfilledwithfearsandworries.Shethought,“WouldImakefriends?WouldIfitin?WouldIsurviveatallinthisstrangenewworld?”Butthereshewas,preparingforanewschoolfullofstrangers.Herecameherfirstdayinthenewschool.Shearrivedatschoolontime,foundherclassroomandseatedherself.EverythingwasgoingwelluntilthefirstclasswhenPat’steacheraskedhertointroduceherselfinfrontofthewholeclass.Shehadpreparedforitthedaybefore,sosheshouldhavedoneitwell.Butwhensheutteredthefirstsentence,thewholeclassburstoutlaughingandbegantowhisper.ItwasthenthatPatrealizedshetalkedwithaverystrangeaccentwhichwasdifferentfromthelocals.Blushingwithembarrassment,shefinishedherintroductionquicklyandsattherealldaylongwithouttalkingwithothers.Afterschool,Patcamehomecrying,“It’sanawfulday.Allofthemaredisagreeable.Ihatethem.”Afterknowingwhathadhappenedintheschool,Pat’smothergentlyhuggedherandfortedher,“Hatredcanhurtbothothersandyourself.Honey,trytobehappy.”Inordertocheerherup,Pat’smothersuggested,“HowabouthavingapartythisSaturday?Wehaven’thadanypartysincewearrivedhere.”P(pán)artyissuchanappealingeventforkidslikePat.Rightaway,shestoppedcryingandlookedathermotherexcitedly,“Ohyes!Icecream!Cake!Red,redballoons!”“Andfriends?”momaskedgently.Hearingthis,Patsobbedagain,“Ihaven’tgotanyfriendshere.Nothingbutenemies.”注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答?！癐fso,let’shaveanenemyparty.Ithinkitwouldbeinteresting,”P(pán)at’smomsmiled.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnSaturday,itwassunny,andallofPat’sclassmatescametotheparty.__________________________________________________________________________【寫(xiě)作分析】Step1獲取語(yǔ)篇信息1.故事發(fā)展線索:開(kāi)一個(gè)讓“敵人”參加的派對(duì)→帕特媽媽的建議和解釋→帕特明白媽媽的意思→帕特所有的同學(xué)都來(lái)參加聚會(huì)→關(guān)系終于融洽→感悟2.情感發(fā)展線索:茫然(剛搬新家)→糾結(jié)(不愿意開(kāi)派對(duì))→贊同(決定開(kāi)派對(duì))→高興(同學(xué)們都來(lái)參加派對(duì))Step2合理推測(cè)走向1.針對(duì)續(xù)寫(xiě)段首1:“Ifso,let’shaveanenemyparty.Ithinkitwouldbeinteresting,”P(pán)at’smomsmiled.設(shè)問(wèn):(1)WouldPataccepthermother’ssuggestion?(2)HowdidPat’smotherpersuadehertoaccepttheadvice?(3)WhatwouldPatdo?推測(cè):續(xù)寫(xiě)的第一段首句講的是帕特的媽媽的建議,讓她開(kāi)一個(gè)由她的“敵人”參加的派對(duì)。接著應(yīng)該寫(xiě)她的媽媽如何說(shuō)服她接受這一建議的,她對(duì)媽媽的建議有何想法,決定如何做。2.針對(duì)續(xù)寫(xiě)段首2:OnSaturday,itwassunny,andallofPat’sclassmatescametotheparty.設(shè)問(wèn):(1)WhatdidPatandhermotherpreparefortheparty?(2)Whathappenedduringtheparty?(3)Whatwastheresultoftheparty?推測(cè):續(xù)寫(xiě)的第二段首句講的是星期六所有同學(xué)都來(lái)帕特家參加派對(duì)。接著應(yīng)該寫(xiě)帕特和她的媽媽為派對(duì)進(jìn)行的布置和安排,派對(duì)上同學(xué)們?nèi)谇⑾嗵幍倪^(guò)程,最后寫(xiě)對(duì)此事件的感悟:朋友間應(yīng)當(dāng)相互理解。Step3打造合規(guī)詞句1.帕特困惑地看著媽媽,想知道“敵人”的聚會(huì)怎么可能有趣。Patlookedathermotherinconfusion,wonderinghowanenemypartycouldpossiblybefun.

2.帕特琢磨著媽媽的話,意識(shí)到也許有另一種方式來(lái)處理她的處境,一種關(guān)于理解和寬恕的方式。Patponderedoverhermother’swords,realizingthatmaybetherewasadifferentwaytoapproachhersituation,onethatinvolvedunderstandingandforgiveness.

3.后院裝飾著五顏六色的裝飾品,空氣中充滿了笑聲和興奮。Thebackyardwasadornedwithcolorfuldecorations,andtheairwasfilledwithlaughterandexcitement.

4.隨著時(shí)間的推移,帕特觀察到她的同學(xué)們彼此之間的互動(dòng),慢慢地意識(shí)到他們并不像她最初想象的那樣不友好。Asthedayprogressed,Patobservedherclassmatesinteractingwithoneanother,slowlyrealizingthattheywerenotasdisagreeableasshehadinitiallythought.

5.帕特媽媽關(guān)于“敵人參加的派對(duì)”的想法變成了一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn),敵人變成了熟人,熟人變成了朋友,理解的種子也播下了。Pat’smom’sideaofan“enemyparty”turnedouttobeaturningpoint,whereenemiesbecameacquaintances,acquaintancesturnedintofriends,andtheseedsofunderstandingweresown.

Step4銜接過(guò)渡成篇“Ifso,let’shaveanenemyparty.Ithinkitwouldbeinteresting,”P(pán)at’smomsmiled.Patlookedathermotherinconfusion,wonderinghowanenemypartycouldpossiblybefun.Buthermothercontinued,“Inviteyourclassmates,includingthosewholaughedatyoutoday.Maybetheyjustneedachancetogettoknowyoubetterandrealizethatyoucanbefriends.It’sanopportunitytobreakdownthewallsandbuildbridges.”P(pán)atponderedoverhermother’swords,realizingthatmaybetherewasadifferentwaytoapproachhersituation,onethatinvolvedunderstandingandforgiveness.OnSaturday,itwassunny,andallofPat’sclassmatescametotheparty.Thebackyardwasadornedwithcolorfuldecorations,andtheairwasfilledwithlaughterandexcitement.Asthedayprogressed,Patobservedherclassmatesinteractingwithoneanother,slowlyrealizingthattheywerenotasdisagreeableasshehadinitiallythought.Conversationssparked,smileswereexchanged,andbarriersbegantocrumble.Pat’smom’sideaofan“enemyparty”turnedouttobeaturningpoint,whereenemiesbecameacquaintances,acquaintancesturnedintofriends,andtheseedsofunderstandingweresown.一、語(yǔ)段描寫(xiě)根據(jù)以下情境,使用表示“驚訝、羞愧”的情緒及相關(guān)動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)詞匯和句式,寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。情境提示:你的同桌Lily期中考試成績(jī)位居班級(jí)第十名,你感到很驚訝,因?yàn)樗郧皩W(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)不好,你認(rèn)為她可能考試作弊了。同學(xué)們也驚訝地看著她。后來(lái)你了解到Lily在家熬夜學(xué)習(xí),彌補(bǔ)功課,充分利用時(shí)間復(fù)習(xí)備考。你對(duì)你的行為感到羞愧。二、讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)（2025·河南安陽(yáng)·一模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Onedayinthe1990s,Iwashelpingmybrothermovefromateachingjobaftercollege.Hewasdrivinghislittlepickuptruckpullingatrailer(拖車)andIwasdrivingmyoldlittleFordstationcar,packedwithhisthings.ItwasaSunday.Iwasdrivingalong.Allofasudden,mycarjustdied.Nowarning,nothing.IstoppedatthesideofacountryhighwayandwaitedformybrothertorealizeIwasn’tbehindhimanymoreandturnaround.Afterabout20minutes,hedidreturntofindme.However,neitherofusknewmuchaboutcars.Afterwaitingforwhatseemedtobeacentury,aman,introducinghimselfasJerry,cameoutofnowhere,tookonelookattheengineandsaid,“Timingbelt.”Wehadaskedaboutgettingthecarpulled30milestotheclosestlargetownonthephone,onlytofindthatitwasgoingtobeanexpensiverepair,eveniftheenginewasOK.Justatthismoment,Jerrysawthedifficultsituation.Hesawtwopoorkidsintheirearly20sstrugglingwithlife,andhesaid,“Well,it’sSunday.Nothing’sgoingtobeopen.ItellyouwhatIwilldo.Mynextdoorneighborisarepairman.Let’spushthecardowntohisrepairshopandwe’llseewhatwecando.”SowedidexactlyasJerrytoldus.Jerry’sneighborcalledhisfriendattheautopartsstore,whichwasclosedonSunday.Hedidafavorandgotthepartsneeded,drivingthem30milesouttotherepairshop.Andwesataround,tellingourstoriesonthewaywhilethecarwasbeingfixed.Therepairman’sson,akidofabout9or10,washangingaround.Aftersomechatting,welearnedthathewasextremelyboredasnooneplayedwithhim.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Theboybadlydesiredsomeonetohelpbuildatreehouseinthewoods.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenwewentbacktotherepairshop,thecarhadbeenallfixed.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2024·湖北·一模）閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。OnMondaymorningIworemyfavouritedresstoschoolforthefirsttimesinceIhadstartedatEdisonMiddleSchool.Isaidgoodmorningtoourheadm