讀后續(xù)寫遇險(xiǎn)類+森林迷途與求生 講義 高三第一次模擬考試英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Lastyear,duringthesummerbreak,myfriendsandIdecidedtogoforawalkintheforest.Theforesthadpaths,andwedecidedthatwewouldhikealongthepathsandmeetatacentralpointtohaveadrinklater.Thewholeteamhadseveralgroupsandwehadplannedonmeetingwiththerestoftheteamafterthreehours.Ihadalighter,apartiallychargedphone,andabottleofwater.Wecontinuedonourwaytowardsthedeeperpartoftheforestuntilwewerefarfromanyrecognizabletrail.Aftertwohours,wewereinthedeepestpartoftheforest,andwecouldnottraceourotherfriends.Allofasudden,abearcamerushingalongourpath,andweallrunindifferentdirections.Afterrunningforaboutfiveminutes,Istoodaloneinabush.IhadnoclueaboutmysurroundingsasIhadneverbeen.therebefore.Ishoutedatmyfriends’namesloudly,butallwasinvain:therewasnoreply,andthewholeplacewassilent.IwasconfusedandfeltlikecryingasIrealizedIwasalonewithnothingtoprotectmyself.Withalotoffear,ItriedtotracethepartwhereIhadcomefrom,butallwasuseless:lwaslost.AsIwalkedalongthepathtryingtolocatemyfriends,IrealizedthatIwastired,andnothingwaslookingfamiliar.Iwasoutoffood,water,andbarelyhadanybatteryinmyphone.Idecidedtowalkthroughthebushesasthetreeshadgrownsoclosetogether.Isqueezedmyselfbetweenthelittletrees.Aftersomethirtyminutes,itstartedrainingheavily.ThoughIhadheavyclothing,IwasrainedonuntilIwassoakedup.IstartedfreezingandprayingtotheGodforprotectionanddirectionoutoftheforest.注意;1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好;Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.-______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意去年暑假，“我”和朋友們?nèi)ド稚⒉?，?jì)劃分組行動(dòng)后在中心點(diǎn)會(huì)合?！拔摇睅е恍┗疚锲飞钊肷?，兩小時(shí)后與朋友走散，遇到熊后各自逃跑?！拔摇鄙硖幠吧h(huán)境，呼喊無果后迷路，食物和水耗盡，手機(jī)電量不足，還遭遇大雨，處境艱難。二、伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)（一）伏筆攜帶物品：“我”有打火機(jī)、部分充電的手機(jī)和一瓶水，為后續(xù)可能的生火、求救等情節(jié)提供了基礎(chǔ)，續(xù)寫中可利用這些物品展開求生行動(dòng)。與朋友走散且環(huán)境陌生：增加了故事的緊張感和孤獨(dú)感，續(xù)寫可圍繞“我”如何尋找朋友或設(shè)法讓朋友找到自己展開。下雨：使“我”的處境更加惡劣，可在續(xù)寫中體現(xiàn)“我”如何應(yīng)對(duì)惡劣天氣以及這對(duì)“我”心理和身體的影響。（二）續(xù)寫回應(yīng)第一段：可寫“我”利用現(xiàn)有物品嘗試向同事發(fā)出信號(hào)的方法，如生火、用手機(jī)燈光等，以及在此過程中的心理活動(dòng)和期待。第二段：寫聽到遠(yuǎn)處噪音后的反應(yīng)，可能是朋友的聲音或者其他未知情況，“我”如何進(jìn)一步采取行動(dòng)以及最終可能的結(jié)果，如是否成功與朋友會(huì)合等。三、續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（一）第一段描述“我”嘗試制作信號(hào)的具體方式和過程，如火堆的搭建、手機(jī)的使用等。“我”的心理狀態(tài)，如希望與絕望交織、對(duì)朋友出現(xiàn)的期待等。周圍環(huán)境的變化對(duì)“我”行動(dòng)的影響，比如風(fēng)雨是否影響生火等。（二）第二段聽到噪音時(shí)“我”的第一反應(yīng)和后續(xù)行動(dòng)，如大聲呼喊回應(yīng)、尋找聲音來源等。對(duì)噪音來源的猜測(cè)和內(nèi)心的擔(dān)憂或喜悅。故事的結(jié)局走向，是否成功與朋友會(huì)合或發(fā)現(xiàn)其他情況。四、故事線進(jìn)入森林-與朋友走散-迷路遇雨-嘗試發(fā)信號(hào)-聽到噪音-可能的結(jié)果（找到朋友或其他情況）五、感情線從最初的興奮和好奇，到遇到危險(xiǎn)后的恐懼和孤獨(dú)，再到嘗試求生時(shí)的希望與絕望交織，最后到聽到噪音時(shí)的緊張和期待。六、主旨升華句Inthefaceoftheunknownforestandthetrialsofbeinglost,courageandresourcefulnessbecomethebeaconsthatguideusthroughthedarknessofdespair.（面對(duì)未知的森林和迷路的考驗(yàn)，勇氣和機(jī)智成為引導(dǎo)我們穿過絕望黑暗的燈塔。）Whenlostinthewild,everyefforttosurviveandconnectisatestamenttothehumanspirit'sresilienceandthepowerofhopethatkeepsusgoing.（當(dāng)在野外迷路時(shí)，每一次求生和聯(lián)系的努力都是人類精神韌性和支撐我們前進(jìn)的希望力量的證明。）Amidstthesolitudeoftheforestandtheperilsofbeinglost,thedeterminationtofindawayoutandthelongingforconnectionfuelthejourneyofsurvivalandself-discovery.（在森林的孤獨(dú)和迷路的危險(xiǎn)中，找到出路的決心和對(duì)聯(lián)系的渴望推動(dòng)著生存和自我發(fā)現(xiàn)的旅程。）Lostintheforest,welearnthateveninthemostdesperatesituations,ourinnerstrengthandthewilltoreachoutcanleadustothelightofsafetyandthewarmthofcompanionship.（在森林中迷路時(shí)，我們了解到即使在最絕望的情況下，我們的內(nèi)在力量和尋求聯(lián)系的意愿也能帶領(lǐng)我們走向安全的光明和同伴的溫暖。）Intheheartoftheforest'smysteryandtheturmoilofbeinglost,thestruggletosignalforhelpandthehopeofhearingaresponsearethethreadsthatweavethestoryofsurvivalandthediscoveryofourowncapabilities.（在森林神秘的中心和迷路的混亂中，發(fā)出求救信號(hào)的努力和聽到回應(yīng)的希望是編織生存故事和發(fā)現(xiàn)我們自身能力的線索。）七、寫作范文范文一第一段Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.Iusedthelightertostartafire,hopingthesmokewouldcatchtheirattention.Thewetbranchesmadeitdifficult,butIpersisted,carefullyblowingonthesmallflames.IalsotookoutmyphoneandsetittoflashthebrightestlightIcould,wavingitaroundintheairperiodically.AsIworked,Ikeptprayingthatmyfriendswouldseeorsensemysignals.Thedarknesswasclosingin,andthefearofspendingthenightaloneintheforestwasoverwhelming,butIforcedmyselftostaycalmandfocusedonmyattemptstomakecontact.第二段Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.Myheartleaptwithhope.IimmediatelystoodupandshoutedasloudlyasIcould,"I'mhere!I'moverhere!"Ilistenedintently,tryingtodeterminethedirectionofthesound.Itseemedtobegettingcloser.Istartedrunningtowardsit,stillshouting,myvoicehoarsefromtheeffort.AsIgotcloser,Irecognizedthevoicesofmyfriends.Finally,wereunited,exhaustedbutrelieved.Wehuggedeachothertightly,gratefultobebacktogether.Thisexperiencetaughtmetheimportanceofstayingcalmandresourcefulindifficultsituationsandthevalueofthebondwithmyfriends.范文二第一段Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.Igatheredsomedryleavesandsmallbranchestobuildabiggerfire,hopingthebrightflameswouldbevisiblefromadistance.Ikeptthelighterclose,carefullynurturingthefire.Ialsousedmywaterbottletoreflectthelightofthefire,creatingaflashingeffect.Asthedarknessdeepened,myanxietygrew,butIrefusedtogiveup.Ikeptthinkingaboutmyfriendsandhowtheymustbelookingformetoo.Istaredintotheforest,willingsomeonetoseemysignalsandcometomyrescue.第二段Whilesittingdownandwarmingmyselfaroundthefire,Iheardsomedistantnoise.Ifrozeforamoment,thenquicklygotup,myheartpounding.Ilistenedcarefully,anditsoundedlikevoices.Ishoutedbackwithallmystrength,"I'mhere!Help!"Iwaited,holdingmybreath.Thenoisegrewlouder,andsoonIcouldseetheflashlightbeamsofmyfriendsthroughthetrees.Iwasovercomewithreliefandjoy.Whentheyfinallyreachedme,wewereallemotional.Werealizedhowimportantitwastosticktogetherandbemorecarefulinthefuture.Thisadventuremadeusstrongerandmoreawareoftherisksandrewardsofexploringtheunknown.【答案】Withdarknessapproaching,Itriedtofigureoutvariouswaysofmakingasignaltomycolleagues.Aftermanyvaintrials,itoccurredtomethatIhadalighterwithme.Iwaswildwithjoyanddecidedtobuildasignalfirebycollectingleavesandlightingthemupformyfriendstos