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202406衢州高二期末閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

MyfourthofJulyvacationbeganwithascream.“Tara!”Ijumped,myeyelidssnappingopen.Irealizedthatmyfour-year-oldsister,Tammy,wasstaringdownatme.Istruggledtopushheroffmeasshebouncedonmylegs,shescreamed,andthenranoutofmyroom.ItwasasifTammyneverdidanythingwrong.IfTammygotangry,Momwouldsayshewastryingtogetherpointacross.WhenTammybrokeaplate,Dadsaidshewasjust“helping”meemptythedishwasher.WhenTammyscribbled(亂涂亂畫)

alloverthewall,insteadofscoldingher,myparentschuckledandsaid,“She’sturningintoanartistjustlikeyou,Tara.”WewereflyingtoUtahtovisitmygrandmafortheFourthofJuly.EveryyearIdrawGrandmaapictureforherbirthday,butIsighedasIconsideredaboutwhatpictureIshoulddrawthistime.Whenwewalkedofftheplane,Iwasrelievedtoseethesmilingfaceofmygrandma.Weracedovertoher.“Hi,sweetheart.”GrandmagotdownononekneetohugTammyandthenswungherintheair.Tammyscreamed

with

laughter.ThenGrandmahuggedme.“It’ssogoodtoseeyou

too,

Tara.”Aftersixhoursofflight,Iwasexhausted—sixhoursoflisteningtoTammyscreamwithdelightagainandagainandagain.Iwantedtobealone,soIwentoutsidewithmysketchbookandcoloredpencils.Lookingatthescenery,IfeltinspiredtoworkonGrandma’sdrawing.AsIadmiredtheshadingonthemountainsandtheswirlsofthesunset,Ismiledtomyselfandthought,thisisthebestpictureIhaveevermade.BeforeIfinishedmypicture,Momwascallingmeinsidefordinner.WhenIwalkedbackintotheroom,andmyheartstopped.Tammywaslyingonthebed,scribblingonapieceof

paper.Tammysawmefrozeninthedoorway,shejumpedfromthebed.Sheranovertomeandgrinned.“Idrewyouapicture.”sheshouted.“Out!”Iscreamedangrily,andsheranoutoftheroom.Iranovertothebed.Ipickedupthepaper,anditwasjustasI’dfeared.Mydrawinghadblackscribblesalloverit.

注意:1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。MomappearedinthedoorwaywithTammybyherside._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IgatheredupthecouragetowalkovertoGrandma.————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————文章大意7月4日假期,“我”被4歲妹妹Tammy吵醒。在家里Tammy犯錯總是被父母包容。一家人坐飛機去猶他州看望奶奶,“我”每年都會為奶奶畫畫作生日禮物,這次在欣賞風景時獲得靈感開始畫畫。但在吃飯前,“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)Tammy在“我”畫的紙上亂涂亂畫,“我”很生氣。五要素分析人物:“我”、妹妹Tammy、父母和奶奶。時間:7月4日假期,包括飛行途中和到達奶奶家后。地點:從家出發(fā),在飛機上,最后到奶奶家。起因:Tammy總是搗蛋,這次毀了“我”給奶奶畫的畫。經(jīng)過:假期旅程、“我”畫畫、Tammy搞破壞。結(jié)果:“我”的畫被破壞,“我”很憤怒。幾處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應伏筆:父母對Tammy的過度包容?;貞簨寢尶赡茉诤罄m(xù)繼續(xù)偏袒Tammy,也可能理解“我”。伏筆:“我”為奶奶畫畫?;貞旱谝欢卫m(xù)寫中要處理畫被破壞后如何向奶奶交代,第二段續(xù)寫“我”走向奶奶可能是去解釋或者重新準備禮物。續(xù)寫要點第一段情感線:憤怒、委屈,對媽媽和Tammy的不滿。故事線:描述媽媽看到被破壞的畫后的反應,可能會責備“我”對Tammy發(fā)脾氣,“我”試圖解釋但不被理解。第二段情感線:忐忑、愧疚,對奶奶的愛與不知如何面對的糾結(jié)。故事線:“我”走向奶奶,可能會鼓起勇氣向奶奶說明畫被破壞的情況,或者拿出被破壞的畫,向奶奶道歉。主旨升華句Loveshouldbefair,notblind,especiallywhendealingwiththeconflictsbetweensiblings.Truepatienceisunderstandingthefeelingsofallchildren,notjustindulgingone.Siblingconflictscanbeatestoffamilyloveandhowwehandlethemrevealsourtruenature.Forgivenessisabridgethatcanconnecttheheartsofsiblingstornapartbymisunderstandings.Inafamily,everychild'sfeelingsarepreciousandshouldberespectedandprotected.寫作示范第一篇MomappearedinthedoorwaywithTammybyherside.Mom'sfacewasfullofanger."Tara,howcouldyoushoutatyoursister?Shejustwantedtogiveyouapresent."Ifeltalumpinmythroat."ButsheruinedmydrawingforGrandma."Ichoked.Momjustshookherhead.Irantomycorner,tearsstreamingdown.

IgatheredupthecouragetowalkovertoGrandma.Iheldthescribbledpapertightly.Withatremblingvoice,ItoldGrandmawhathappened.Grandmasmiledgently,huggedmeandsaid,"Yourloveinthedrawingcan'tbescribbledover,dear."Iburstintotearsinherarms.第二篇MomappearedinthedoorwaywithTammybyherside.MomscoldedmeforbeingmeantoTammy.ItriedtoexplainthatshehadruinedmyhardworkforGrandma,butMomwouldn'tlisten.TammyhidbehindMom,lookingatmewithasmugface.IwassofrustratedthatIstormedoutoftheroom.

IgatheredupthecouragetowalkovertoGrandma.Ishowedhertheruineddrawingwithtearsinmyeyes.Iapologizedfornothavingaperfectgift.Grandmatookmyhandandsaid,"Sweetheart,themostimportantthingisyourlove.YoucanmakeanotheronewithTammy."Inodded,realizingthetruemeaningoffamily.參考范文:MomappearedinthedoorwaywithTammybyherside.Tammywassniffling,tearsrollingdownherchubbycheeks.Mom’sgazeshiftedtomypicture,whichIheldwithshakinghands.ShegentlypushedTammyoutoftheroom.Sheshutthedoorandsatdownnexttome,“Tara,”shewhispered,“I’msosorry.Iknowyouworkedhardonthat.Tammyischallengingsometimes.Butyouyellingatherdoesn’tsolveanything.”Itfeltasifadaminsideofmebroke.Isighedandglaredatmymom.Darknessfellquickly.Momlaidoutsomeblanketsintheyardforustositontowatchthefireworks.Tammywasstrangely

quiet,sittingonthegrassandstaringupatthenightsky,andIfelttornhowtopresentthepicturetograndma.Igatheredupt

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