英語外研復習教案：專題技能突破寫作之記敘文

學必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精學必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精學必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精專題技能突破(36）寫作之記敘文【技能講解】記敘文一般有以寫人為主和寫事為主兩種。寫作過程中要注意：1.所寫內容要包括所給的全部信息點，既不能遺漏，也不能隨意添加；2。注意時態(tài)的正確使用.描寫人物的外貌、性格、興趣愛好等常用一般現(xiàn)在時，描寫人物的出生、教育背景、經(jīng)歷或事跡常用過去時。記述發(fā)生過的一件事常用過去時。典例剖析假定你是李華。下面的圖畫描述了教師節(jié)那天你們班組織的一次活動，請根據(jù)寫作要點并參考圖畫內容,為?？坝⒄Z角”版面寫一篇短文。寫作要點:1．活動的策劃；2。教室的布置；3．活動的內容;4.你的感想。注意：1．短文詞數(shù)不少于100;2．開頭部分已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù);3．可根據(jù)情況增減細節(jié),詳略得當；4．不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。MsLi，ourEnglishteacher，musthavefounditstrangeonTeachers’Day：shedidnotreceiveasinglegreetingcardfromusstudents.Shewouldhaveneverthoughtacompletesurprisewaswaitingforher.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________［范文]Ms_Li，_our_English_teacher，_must_have_found_it_strange_on_Teachers'_Day:_she_did_not_receive_a_single_greeting_card_from_us_students._She_would_have_never_thought_a_complete_surprise_was_waiting_for_her。AsTeachers’Daywasapproaching，ourclassdecidedtoholdapartytocelebratetheimportantdayforachangethisyear.OntheafternoonofSeptember10，someofusdecoratedourclassroomwithpaperflowersandballoons,andotherswenttobuycakes,drinksandfruits。①Theblackboardwasdecoratedwithbeautifulwords，whichread“HappyTeachers’Day！"Enteringtheclassroom,MsLiwassurprisedtofindwewerestandinginline,clappinghandsandsayingloudly“HappyTeachers'Day！"②WangHua,ourmonitor,presentedherwiththepreparedflowers.SomeofthegirlssangsongsforMsLi，andthreeboysshowedtheirKungfutalent。Beforeweleft,weenjoyedanewEnglishsongbyMsLi.MsLispentawonderfultimewithus，butweknowthatwecannotthankherenoughforallherhardworkandguidance。③［解析］①and連接并列句，“someofus.。.,andothers。。."有一些人用剪紙和氣球裝飾教室，另一些人去買蛋糕、飲料和水果.②entering作狀語，比whensheentered更顯高級，clapping和saying又一次使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語,使句子簡潔但生動。③“cannotthankherenough”怎么感謝她都不為過，表達了對老師的感激。技能演練Sunday，January12SnowyThismorning，whenIlookedoutofthewindow,Iexcitedlyfounditwassnowingheavily。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:Sunday,_January_12SnowyThis_morning,_when_I_looked_out_of_the_window，_I_excitedly_found_it_was_snowing_heavily.Attractedbythebeautifulsight,Idecidedtogoouttotakesomephotos.Thesnowfinallystoppedatnoon，andIcouldn’twaittogooutsidewithmycamera.AsIwalkedonthepathinfrontofourbuilding,Isawaboysuddenlysliponthesnow。coveredground。ItwasatthatmomentthatIrealizedwhatIshoulddo.Immediately,Iranbackhometogetabroomandstartedtosweepthepath.IworkedsohardthatIsweatedalot.Anhourlater,thethicksn