熱點(diǎn) 02 家規(guī) 2020-2021學(xué)年中考英語(yǔ)最具熱度話題作文（教師版）

熱點(diǎn)02家規(guī)家規(guī)無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來(lái)了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：家規(guī)?！绢A(yù)測(cè)題目】（一）假設(shè)你是李林，你的你父母為你制定了許多家規(guī)，對(duì)此你感到很不滿。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的家規(guī)，發(fā)郵件給你的筆友Mike，向他傾訴你的煩惱。要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意連貫；2.郵件要包括表中的所有信息；3.郵件的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.詞數(shù)70詞左右。DearMike,I’mnothappybecauseIhavemanyrulesinmyhouse._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiLin【答案】DearMike,I’mnothappybecauseIhavemanyrulesinmyhouse.Ihavetogetupat6:00inthemorning.Ihavetofinishmyhomeworkfirstafterschool,andthenhavetopracticeplayingtheguitar.AndIcan'twatchTVonschoolnights.OnSaturdayafternoonIhavetogototheEnglishclubtolearnEnglish.Onweekends,Iamalsoverybusy.Ihavetocleanmyroomandwashmyclothes.WhatshouldIdo?Pleasewritetomesoon.Yours,LiLin【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給提示和要求比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀提示中的內(nèi)容，使用Do.../Don’t..;must/haveto;can/can’t句型描述，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)、搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連接詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹I’mnothappybecauseIhavemanyrulesinmyhouse..然后運(yùn)用不同的句式，運(yùn)用Don’t;must/haveto;can/can’t句型進(jìn)行描述，豐富了文章的內(nèi)容。最后一句的WhatshouldIdo?Pleasewritetomesoon.與文章開(kāi)頭那句遙相呼應(yīng)。（二）假如你是Tommy，你的朋友Jack給你來(lái)信，抱怨他的父母對(duì)他管得太嚴(yán)格了，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己家庭的情況，給他寫(xiě)一封回信，讓Jack明白每個(gè)家庭都有家規(guī)，家規(guī)其實(shí)是父母對(duì)子女的愛(ài)護(hù)。寫(xiě)作提示：你家里有哪些家規(guī)（至少三點(diǎn)）。你對(duì)這些家規(guī)的看法。你對(duì)Jack的建議。要求：1.必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)：80左右（文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。DearJack,Inyourlastletteryoucomplainedthatyourparentsweretoostrictwithyou.Actuallyeveryfamilyhasitsrules_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Tommy【答案】DearJack,Inyourlastletteryoucomplainedthatyourparentsweretoostrictwithyou.Actuallyeveryfamilyhasitsrules.Sodoesmine.Letmetellyousomerulesofmyfamily.First,myparentsstopmefromwatchingTVonweekdays.Itallowmehavemoretimetodowithmystudyaswellastodosomeoutdooractivities.Second,theyonlyallowmetoplaycomputergamesfortwohoursatweekends.Iagreethatplayingtoomuchcomputergamesisbadforusbecauseweareeasilyaddictedtoit.Third,theyaskmetodosomehouseworkathome,suchascleaningthefloor,washingdishesaftermeals.InfactIagreethatitisgoodtosharehouseworkwithourparentsandIenjoydoinghousework.Ithinkyoucoulddiscussyourfamilyruleswithyourparentsandmakethefamilyrulestogetherwiththem.Asthesayinggoes:nothingcanbeaccomplishedwithoutnormsandstandards.Asachild,weshouldobeytherulesinschoolsaswellasathome.Ibelievethattheruleswillleadustohaveahealthyandmeaningfullife.Yours,Tommy【解析】試題分析:這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封回信。本題給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，寫(xiě)作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫?？键c(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。（一）家規(guī)是一個(gè)比較傳統(tǒng)的字眼，就現(xiàn)代社會(huì)來(lái)講，所講述到的家規(guī)信息并不多。古代大家族一般都會(huì)對(duì)家規(guī)有深刻的認(rèn)知。一個(gè)家庭所規(guī)定的行為規(guī)范，一般是由一個(gè)家族所遺傳下來(lái)的教育規(guī)范后代子孫的準(zhǔn)則也叫家法。一個(gè)家庭有一個(gè)家庭的規(guī)矩，這個(gè)規(guī)矩就相當(dāng)于國(guó)家的法律。家規(guī)指家庭的規(guī)矩，做任何事都要懂得講規(guī)矩。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示以“Myfamilyrules”為題寫(xiě)一篇文章。寫(xiě)作要求：語(yǔ)句連貫，80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出、不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MyfamilyrulesMyparentsareverystrictandIhavesomanyfamilyrules.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyfamilyrulesMyparentsareverystrictandIhavesomanyfamilyrules.Iamnotallowedtoplaycomputergamesbecauseplayingcomputergamesisbadformystudyandhealth.HoweverIamallowedtoplayPing-Pong,sweeptheflooranddosomereading.WeallthinkplayingPing-Pongcanmakemerelaxedandstrong.Ihavetocleanmyroomeveryday.Readingaloudisgoodformystudy.IamnotallowedtowatchTVonschoolnightsbecausemyparentsbelievestudentsshouldpaymoreattentiontostudies.Ithinkit’sreasonableforourparentstomakesomerulestomakesurethatIgrowhealthily,buttoomuchrulescanmakemestressedout.Ishouldcommunicatewithmyparentswell.【解析】本文屬于材料，介紹自家的家規(guī)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如beallowedto,isbadfor,however,makemerelaxed,payattentionto以及reasonable等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（二）假如你是李明，你的美國(guó)筆友Jim想了解一下中國(guó)家庭的家規(guī)(familyrules)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)你家的情況給他寫(xiě)一封回信，給Jim介紹一下你家的家規(guī)和你對(duì)家規(guī)的看法。要求：語(yǔ)言合理、語(yǔ)句通順；60詞左右；信的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,Thankyouforyourletter.Youwanttoknowmyfamilyrules.Well,therearetoomanyrulesinmyfamily._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing【答案】DearJim,Thankyouforyourletter.Youwanttoknowmyfamilyrules.Well,therearetoomanyrulesinmyfamily.Myparentsareverystrictwithme.Forexample,Ican'tgooutwithmyfriendsonschoolnights.Onweekends,Ihavetogohomebeforeninep.m.It'sstrict,butIthinkit'snecessary.AndImustfinishmyhomeworkintime.Ican'tplaycomputergames.Ihavetowashclothesbymyself.Ihavetogetupatsixo'clockeverymorning.AndIhavetobeinbedbyteno'clock.Thankstotheserules.Icankeephealthy.ButIthinkitisunfairtobeinbedbyteno'clock!Studentsneedninehourssleep!AndIthinkplayingsomecomputergamesisnotgoodforuschildren.SoIthinkthefamilyrulescanmakesomechanges.Yours,LiMing【解析】試題分析：本文是一封回信，要符合信的格式，因?yàn)檫@是給Jim一封回信介紹一下自己家的家規(guī)和自己對(duì)家規(guī)的看法，所以注意使用正確的主語(yǔ)。要注意主謂一致及動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。最后要寫(xiě)出對(duì)家規(guī)的看法。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順，本文使用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如:Ican'tgooutwithmyfriendsonschoolnights.AndImustfinishmyhomeworkintime.Ithinkitisunfairtobeinbedbyteno'clock等，特別使用了一些連詞如：but，because和and等。使上下文更加連貫。（三）俗話說(shuō)，國(guó)有國(guó)法，家有家規(guī)。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。我們的國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點(diǎn)提示，并結(jié)合你的家庭實(shí)際情況，給你的英國(guó)筆友Sam寫(xiě)一封信，向他介紹一下你的家規(guī)，并向他展示一個(gè)溫情智慧的中國(guó)家庭。要點(diǎn)提示：三條家規(guī)尊老愛(ài)幼，禮貌待人誠(chéng)實(shí)守信，不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時(shí)作息，杜絕熬夜你對(duì)你家家規(guī)的看法......簡(jiǎn)單闡述你是如何受益的......寫(xiě)作要求:1.文章須包括所給內(nèi)容要求，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文流暢、通順；2.省略號(hào)部分請(qǐng)各用2-3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)90左右。文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSam,Haven’twrittentoyouforalongtime!Asyouknow,familyrulesareanimportantpartofourChinesetraditionalculture.TodayI’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyfamilyrules.Therearemanyrulesthatwehavetofollow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whataboutyou?Doyouhaveanyfamilyrules?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSam,Haven’twrittentoyouforalongtime!Asyouknow,familyrulesareanimportantpartofyouChinesetraditionalculture.TodayI’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyfamilyrules.Therearemanyrulesthatwehavetofollow.First,youshouldrespecttheoldandlovetheyoung.Youarealsosupposedtobekindtoother.Next,it’sagoodhabittobehonestandkeepyourwords.What’smore,youshouldkeepstudying,gotobedandgetupontime.Youmustn’tstayuptoolate.Inmyopinion,everyfamilymustkeeprulesandchildrenshouldn’tdevelopbadhabits,liketellingliesandberudetoothers.Weshouldbestrictwithourselves.Thefamilyrulesalsomakeagreatdifferencetome.Ilearntothinkaboutothers’feelingsandChinesetraditionalculture.Whataboutyou?Doyouhaveanyfamilyrules?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon!Yours,LiHua【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國(guó)家庭。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如besupposedto,bekindto,keepyourwords,what’smore,inone’sopinion,developbadhabits,berudeto,bestrictwith,makeadifferenceto以及itisagoodhabittobehonest中it作形式主語(yǔ)。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（四）HanLei想要給筆友Jim發(fā)一封電子郵件，訴說(shuō)自己有諸多家規(guī)，他很苦惱，假如你是HanLei，你替HanLei完成這封電子郵件。要求：1.需要簡(jiǎn)單介紹家規(guī)，2.對(duì)于大多數(shù)家規(guī)表示理解并贊同。3可就以下一或兩項(xiàng)家規(guī)提出不同看法，闡明反對(duì)原因，并寫(xiě)出改善方法。2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思完整，不要逐句翻譯。詞數(shù)：90詞-110詞。提示：1.不許留長(zhǎng)發(fā)，打耳洞2．上課日晚上不允許出去3.整理自己的房間4.每天不允許玩手機(jī)或電腦游戲參考短語(yǔ)：IthinkIshouldbeallowedtodo…Idon’tagreewith…Iwouldliketo…Icould…ifI…DearJim，I’msorrytotellyouthatI’mworryingaboutsomething.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，HanLei【答案】DearJim,I’msorrytotellyouthatI’mworryingaboutsomething.First,myparentsdon’tallowmetohavelonghairandgetmyearspierced.IthinkIwouldlookmorebeautifulifIwereallowedtodothat.Then,Iamnotallowedtohangoutonschoolnightswithmyfriends.Next,Ihavetocleanupmyroomeveryday.What’smore,I'mnotallowedtoplaymobilephonesorcomputergameseveryday.TheysaiditwouldwastetimeifIdidthat.ButIthinkIcouldrelaxmyselfafteralongperiodofstudyifIdidthat.Ifeelverydistressed.IneedyourhelpandnowIcan’tgotosleep.Writesoon.Yourssincerely,HanLei【詳解】本文是一封電子郵件，要符合書(shū)信的格式，因?yàn)槭强忌鍴anLei完成這封電子郵件。因此人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。所給出的材料非常詳細(xì)，以要點(diǎn)提示作為寫(xiě)作的主線。我們需要做的就是用正確的語(yǔ)言把它們表達(dá)出來(lái)，可以主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)與被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)相結(jié)合，參考短語(yǔ)盡量使用上，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)一定不要遺漏，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。恰當(dāng)使用連詞，使上下文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。（一）假如你是李津,Tom是一名要來(lái)中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)的英國(guó)留學(xué)生。在留學(xué)期間,他將要住在你家,因此他發(fā)郵件向你詢(xún)問(wèn)你家的家規(guī)（familyrules)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容,給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件。提示內(nèi)容：(1)早上六點(diǎn)半起床,晚上九點(diǎn)半前必須回家。(2)周末需要打掃臥室。(3)飯前必須洗手。(4)吃飯的時(shí)候不能說(shuō)話。(5)自擬一條家規(guī)。要求：(1)語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、語(yǔ)法正確。(2)包含所有提示要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(3)80詞左右（郵件的格式及結(jié)尾己給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearTom,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyou'llenjoyyourlifehere.Yours,LiJin【答案】DearTom,I'mgladyou'llstaywithuswhenyoustudyinChina.Youaskedmeaboutmyfamilyrules.Herearesomeofthem.Youneedtogetupat6:30am.Youmustn'tstayoutafter9:30pm.Youneedtocleanupyourbedroomatweekends.Youmustwashhandsbeforedinner.Andyoucan'tspeakwhenyouareeating.You'dbettergotobedbefore10pm.Althoughtherearemanyfamilyrulesinmyfamily,theyaregoodforus.Hopeyou'llenjoyyourlifehere.Yours,LiJin【詳解】1.題干解讀：此篇作文主要介紹家規(guī)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫(xiě)。根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，給英國(guó)留學(xué)生Tom敘述一些規(guī)則要求。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式，用第二人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行敘述，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。第二段是重點(diǎn)，主要介紹規(guī)則要求。在敘述時(shí)，避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞、句型等，句意敘述完整且條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)義連貫。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：familyrules；getup；stayout；cleanup；atweekends；washhands；gotobed。句型：①Youaskedmeaboutmyfamilyrules.②Herearesomeofthem.③Youneedtogetupat6:30am.④Youmustn'tstayoutafter9:30pm.⑤You'dbettergotobedbefore10pm.⑥Althoughtherearemanyfamilyrulesinmyfamily,theyaregoodforus.【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作六步驟：1.審題：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)。2.抓住要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。3.擴(kuò)充句子：通過(guò)增加狀語(yǔ)，定語(yǔ)，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。4.連句成文，合理使用連詞。5.改正錯(cuò)誤：拼寫(xiě)是否錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取?.謄寫(xiě)作文：注意書(shū)寫(xiě)工整美觀整潔。（二）你校的英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部將開(kāi)辟專(zhuān)欄討論“中學(xué)生贊同和不贊同的一些家規(guī)”。假如你叫王婷，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文向該欄目投稿。要點(diǎn)提示：1.列出你贊同的一條家規(guī)并陳述觀點(diǎn)；2.列出你不贊同的一條家規(guī)并陳述觀點(diǎn)。要求：2.內(nèi)容須包括所有的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2.詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MynameisWangTing.Asthesayinggoes，“Nothingcanbeaccomplishedwithoutnormsorstandards.”Sotherearemanyrulesinmyfamily._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MynameisWangTing.Asthesayinggoes，“Nothingcanbeaccomplishedwithoutnormsorstandards.”Sotherearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Ihavetocleanmybedroomeveryday.Ithinkit'sagoodrule.Ontheonehand，Ishouldlearntolookaftermyselffromayoungage.Ontheotherhand，itiscomfortableandrelaxingformetosleepinacleanbedroom.I'mnotallowedtohavemyownhobbies-singinganddrawing.Idon'tagreewithit.Ithinkmyparentsshouldsupportmydreams.That'sbecausedreamscanmakemestudyhardandbefullofenergy.Ireallyhopemyparentscanunderstandmeandgivememorefreedom.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是對(duì)一些家規(guī)的看法，重點(diǎn)就是要分別具體闡述自己贊同的家規(guī)以及不贊同的家規(guī)，并且把自己的觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)的清楚透徹，為什么贊同，為什么不贊同。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章采用先總后分的結(jié)構(gòu)把意思表達(dá)的很明確。先以諺語(yǔ)“無(wú)規(guī)矩不成方圓”總體概括文章大意，然后分別描寫(xiě)自己贊同的觀點(diǎn)及為什么贊同的原因，然后再闡述自己不贊同的觀點(diǎn)及為什么不贊同的原因，文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)層次感較強(qiáng)，語(yǔ)言表述準(zhǔn)確清晰。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：haveto；ontheonehand；ontheotherhand；lookafter；agreewith；fromayoungage。句型：Ithink＋賓語(yǔ)從句；itisadj.forsb.todosth.。（三）俗話說(shuō)“沒(méi)有規(guī)矩不成方圓”,相信同學(xué)們家中也都有一些具體的家規(guī)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示內(nèi)容及要求，以MyFamilyRules為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，在英語(yǔ)課上與同學(xué)們交流。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：（1）按時(shí)完成作業(yè)。（2）不能玩游戲。（3）幫助做家務(wù)（例如：打掃房間,……）。（4）對(duì)家規(guī)的感受。注意：（1）短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫。（2）詞數(shù)：80左右（開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。MyFamilyRulesMyparentsareverystrictwithme,andtheyhavemadesomefamilyrules.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyFamilyRulesMyparentsareverystrictwithme,andtheyhavemadesomefamilyrules.Firstly,Imustfinishmyhomeworkintime.Secondly,Icannotplaycomputergames,eveninmysparetimeoratweekends.Thirdly,Ihavetodosomehousework,suchasmakingthebedandtidyingmybedroomandsoon.IfIfollowtheserules,Iusuallygetsomepresentsfrommyparents.Ithinkthefirstandthirdrulesaregood,butIdon’tlikethesecondone.Infact,IhopesometimesIcanplaycomputergames.Itwillmakemerelaxed.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇話題作文，結(jié)合所給提示和自己的實(shí)際情況介紹家規(guī)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，第一段承接開(kāi)頭，把家規(guī)的具體內(nèi)容一一列出并加以說(shuō)明；第二段直接發(fā)表自己的看法并提出合理化的建議。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)介紹，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第一段介紹具體家規(guī)，用序數(shù)詞作為過(guò)渡詞進(jìn)行銜接，條理分明且清晰；其中第二點(diǎn)和第三點(diǎn)聯(lián)合實(shí)際，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)豐富。第二段提出自己的看法，有肯定有建議，合理