高考總復(fù)習(xí)之應(yīng)用文建議信中秋節(jié)去北京游玩課件

Practicalwriting—應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信

1.TounderstandthestructureandfeaturesofagoodletterofAdvice;2.TomastersomeusefulexpressionsandsentencepatternsforAdvice;3.TopracticethebasicstepsofletterofAdvice.Learningobjectives李煜Step1LearnaboutthestructureandfeaturesofagoodletterofAdvice李煜Step1

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1.ThestructureofaletterofAdvice:①Beginning:statingthetruth(background)writing_______________ ②Mainbody:specific_____________Supportingreasons③Ending: ________________ofmainpoint Expresswishespurposeadvicesummary李煜Step1

LearnaboutthestructureandfeaturesofagoodletterofAdvice

2.ThefeaturesofagoodletterofAdvice:specificcontentconvincinglanguagerelevanttopic李煜Step2Masterhowtowritethebeginningandending

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Part1WritethebeginningandendingUsefulexpressionsforthebeginning: 1.givesbsomeadvice(on)給某人提建議2.asfollows如下3.havedifficulty/troubleindoingsth在做某事時(shí)遇到困難4.makefulluseof/makethemostof充分利用5.asksbforadvice/suggestions向某人征求意見6.find..helpful/useful/beneficial認(rèn)為……有用李煜7.takepartin/participation參加8.follow/takeone'sadvice聽從某人的建議9.getimproved得到改善10.changeforthebetter有所好轉(zhuǎn)11.inmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofview依我看來12.Ihavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyou.我已收到你的來信，得知你….…13.Iwouldliketosuggestthat../Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat./Iamwritingtoadviseyou../IfIwereyou,Iwould.../MayIsuggestthat.Iwouldliketoputforwardthesuggestionthat.我建議......李煜Sentencepatternsfortheintroduction:①I’mmorethangladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...我很高興收到你的來信，問我關(guān)于……的問題。②I’mverydelightedtoreceiveyourletterandit'sapleasuretotellyousomethingabout...我很高興收到你的來信，我很榮幸告訴你關(guān)于……的問題。李煜Sentencepatternsfortheintroduction:③However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou/Hereareafewsuggestions./Thefollowingaremysuggestions/Mysuggestionsareasfollows.然而，如果你采取我的意見，這個(gè)情形很容易改變，這是給你的一些建議。④Inmypersonalopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingaction.我個(gè)人認(rèn)為，如果你能采取以下措施，將是一種明智的選擇。李煜Sentencepatternsfortheending:

①Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.我相信你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議的。②Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.如果這方面有所改善我會(huì)非常開心的。③Iwillbehappyifyoucantakemyadvice/ideasintoconsideration。如果你能考慮我的建議/想法，我會(huì)很開心。李煜Sentencepatternsfortheending: ④Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionshelpful/useful/practical/Ihopemysuggestionswillbeofbenefittoyou.我希望你會(huì)認(rèn)為這些建議由幫助/有用/可行。/我希望我的建議將對(duì)你有益。⑤HopefullythesesuggestionswillbeofgreathelptoyouI’msureyoucansolveyourproblembeforelong.希望這些建議對(duì)你有幫助并相信你不久就能解決你的問題。李煜Part2FindsomeusefulexpressionsandlinkingwordsUsefulphrasesandexpressions:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Linkingwords:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________李煜Step3Masterhowtowritethebodypart李煜(2024·廣東江門聯(lián)考)假定你是李華,你校外教Smith準(zhǔn)備利用即將到來的中秋節(jié)假期去北京游玩,想征詢你的建議。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封英文郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.旅行建議(景點(diǎn)、美食、交通等);2.表達(dá)祝愿。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;2.格式已給出,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。DearMrSmith，______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________李煜Part1ListthemainpointsTouristattractionsThePalaceMuseum

（theForbiddenCity）

TheGreatWall

Hutongs(traditionalalleyways)Stunningarchitecture;Bedecoratedwithdelicatecarvings,goldentiles(瓦片)andbrilliantwalls;VisuallyappealingStretchesacrossthenorthernChinaLikeadragonShowcase/display/demonstratethewisdomoftheancientChinesepeople

AtypeofnarrowstreetoralleyFeelpeaceful/ateaseWell-preservedKeepthetraditionsandhistoryofBeijingalive李煜Part1ListthemainpointsDelicaciesBeijingroastduck

Friedsaucenoodles(zhajiangmian)

DouzhiRepresent/standforChinesecuisineTemptingcolor/crispyskin/juicyandtendermeat

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UniqueirresistibleTransportationBusesTaxisSubwaysConvenientHaveaneasyaccessto李煜Part2Translateandpolishthesentences(1)說到旅游目的地，強(qiáng)烈建議你參觀故宮、長城和胡同，這樣你就可以深入了解中國豐富的歷史和文化遺產(chǎn)。Speakingofthetouristdestinations,Iadviseyou

tovisitthe

ForbiddenCity,

theGreatWallandhutongs,becauseyoucanhaveadeepunderstandingofChina'srichhistoryandculturalheritage.Whenitcomesto

thetouristdestinations,it'sstronglyrecommendedthatyoupayavisitto

the

ForbiddenCity,

theGreatWallandhutongs,fromwhichyoucan

harvestadeepinsightinto

China'srichhistoryandculturalheritage.李煜Part2Translateandpolishthesentences(2)至于當(dāng)?shù)氐拿朗?，建議你品嘗著名的北京烤鴨，它以其酥脆的表皮和多汁的肉而聞名。Aboutthelocalfood,IsuggestthatyoutastethefamousBeijingroastduck.Itisknownforitscrispyskinandjuicymeat.Asforthelocaldelicacies,

it's

advisableforyoutogetatasteofthewell-receivedBeijingroastduck,whichisknownforitscrispyskinandjuicymeat.李煜Part2Translateandpolishthesentences(3)關(guān)于交通，如果我是你，我會(huì)乘坐地鐵去大部分景點(diǎn)，因?yàn)榈罔F系統(tǒng)效率很高，并且北京是一個(gè)交通擁堵的城市。Withregardto

thetransportation,ifIwereyou,Iwouldtakethesubwaytogetaccessto

mostoftheattractions