北師大版高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)類型二第3講續(xù)寫門話題歷險(xiǎn)脫困課件

第三部分寫作專題突破類型二讀后續(xù)寫第3講續(xù)寫熱門話題歷險(xiǎn)脫困閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。(2024·湖北省七市聯(lián)考)EzriandOliverweresokeentoclimbthemountainthattheybeggedtojointheirdadBrandonforanotherhike．Justafter8a．m．onabeautifulSundaymorning，theysetoff．Brandon'sbackpackheldhisphone，Clifbars(能量棒)，packetsofapplesauce，apples，waterbottlesandfishinggear．Brandonhadplannedavariedrouteupthemountain．Thewindingupwardslopewasfunanduneventful．Nearthetop，thicksnowblanketedthepath．Excitedly，thekidsracedacrossthehardsurface．Theysharedthesecond-lastClifbarandrestedforanhour．Brandonlookedaround．Hisphoneshowed1:30p．m．a(chǎn)ndnosignals．Whenthekidsstarteddownthefarsideoftheslope，Brandonsaid，“Youguysreallywanttofindthosefishinglakes，don'tyou？”“Oh，yes！”Ezrisaid．Sotheytookanunfamiliarroutedowntheothersideofthemountain．BythetimeBrandonrealizedthepathhadbecomeananimaltrailalongsideastream，itmadesensetokeepfollowingit．Thestreamsangtothem，andtheykeptfollowingitdown．Midafternoon，whenthesundisappearedbehindheavygrayclouds，theysuddenlyfeltlost，coldandhungry．Forhalfanhourtheycautiouslymoveddownwarduntiltheyreachedasteepcliff(懸崖)edge．Thestreambecameanoisy，six-metrewaterfall．Mistenvelopedthemasthewaterracedoverahugerock．Brandoncursed(咒罵)himselffortakinganunknownroutedown．TheyheldhandsandincheddownuntilOliverslidonalooserockandallthreewentflying．Brandonwipedbloodfromhisforeheadandgatheredhissenses．Wasanyonehurt?Oliver，cryingandshivering，seemedokay．Ezriwasweeping，butshetooappeareduninjured．Brandonhimselfdidn'tfeelanythingworsethanthewoundonhisforehead．Thebackpackwasstuckintherockssixmetresaway．Hesawnousetryingtofinditback．Theairwascoldandgettingcolder．Theywerewetandtired．注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。Tosavethekids，Brandonrealizedhehadtolookforawayoutalone．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ahelicopterwiththefatherandmanyvolunteerssetoffimmediately．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作指導(dǎo)：Ⅰ．梳理原文細(xì)節(jié)，理清篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。Ⅱ．依據(jù)首句提示，構(gòu)思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段：由續(xù)寫第一段及續(xù)寫第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知，第一段可描寫B(tài)randon獨(dú)自離開(kāi)去尋找出路，最終聯(lián)系上911。第二段：由續(xù)寫第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知，第二段可寫B(tài)randon和志愿者成功找到孩子們，Brandon非常感動(dòng)。范文佳作：To

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alone．Afterhemadethedecision，hewrappedhiscoataroundthemandkissedeachofthemontheforehead．“Stayhere，nomatterwhat．I'llgoforhelp，”herepeatedseveraltimesinatremblingvoice．Inthefollowinghours，Brandonwalkedthroughthebushandevensufferedanotherbadfallontheway．Exhaustedandbloodied，heemergedfromtheforestandbumpedintoafamilyofhikers，whocalled911．A

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immediately．Onthereturntrip，Brandonanxiouslydescribedthegenerallocationofthechildrentotherescuers．Finally，afteralongsearch，theysuccessfullylocatedthepoorchildren．Uponthehelicopter'sarrival，Brandonjumpedoffandrantoembracehischildren，movedtoseesomanystrangersinbrightredjackets．Everytimehethinksofbrightredjackets，hewouldfeelhewasnotalone．There'salwayssomeoneouttherewhoiswillingtohelp．話題佳句：1．Whenwereacheddeepintotheforest，suddenlythesmogspreadeverywhereandwewerenotabletoseeeachotherclearlyandlostourway．當(dāng)我們到達(dá)森林深處時(shí)，煙霧突然彌漫，我們無(wú)法看清楚彼此并且迷了路。2．Theybothspentaminutecatchingtheirbreathandcalmedthemselvesdown．他們兩人都花了一分鐘時(shí)間喘了口氣，讓自己冷靜下來(lái)。3．Theicywaterpiercedmyskinlikeneedles．Iwasanxioustoclimboutbymyself，butcountlesspreviousfailuresstoppedmefromstrugglingagain．冰冷的水像針一樣刺痛我的皮膚。我渴望自己爬出去，但之前無(wú)數(shù)次的失敗阻止了我再次掙扎。4．Hebegantoshakeoffthesnow，movedsnowawaywithbarehands，andmanagedtopullhimselfout．他開(kāi)始抖落積雪，徒手把雪移開(kāi)，并設(shè)法把自己拉了出來(lái)。5．Tomwasshockedtofindthatthewaterkeptrising．Hewastrappedinhishouseandhisheartsuddenlyjumpedintohisthroat．湯姆震驚地發(fā)現(xiàn)水一直上漲。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。6．Gatheringallhisstrength，carefully，bitbybit，Simpsonclimbedoutofthesnowhole．辛普森用盡全身力氣，一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地，小心翼翼地從雪洞里爬了出來(lái)。7．Thefrontdoorwasonlyafeetaway，butthewindwassostrongthatJessicahadtofightherwayoutofthecarandstruggledintothehouse．離前門只有一英尺遠(yuǎn)，但風(fēng)太大了，杰西卡不得不奮力從車?yán)锍鰜?lái)，艱難地進(jìn)了房子。8．Hefeltweakbutotherwisefine．Hewasgladtobeoutofdangerandreunitedwithhisfamily．他感到虛弱，但其他方面還好。他很高興脫離了危險(xiǎn)，與家人團(tuán)聚了。9．MomremindedmeofhowfortunateIwasfromthejawsofthealligator．Itwasanarrowescape．媽媽提醒我，我能從短吻鱷的口中逃脫是多么幸運(yùn)。這是一次死里逃生。10．Finally，wewentoutoftheforestthattrappedus．Whatanunforgettableexperience!Itturnsoutthatthere'salwaysawayoutofanyplightaslongaswestaycalm．最后，我們走出了困住我們的森林。多么難忘的經(jīng)歷??！事實(shí)證明，只要我們保持冷靜，就總有辦法擺脫困境。11．Ourbeinglostadded