老高考舊教材適用2025版高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)35分寫(xiě)作限時(shí)滿分練四

分寫(xiě)作限時(shí)滿分練(四)Ⅰ.短文改錯(cuò)(2024四川雅安二模)Lastsummer,IwentonthetriptoQingdao,whereIstayedforsevendaysandenjoyedmyself.BeforeleaveQingdao,Iwentfishingonabeautifullake.Unlucky,Ididn’tcatchanyfish,andIgotboring.Idecidedtogoswimming.WhenIstoodup,mywalletwithallmymoneyinfellintothewater.Ijumpintothedeeplaketolookforit,soIfoundnothing.Thenextmorning,Iwasn’tabletoleavethehotelbecauseofIhadnomoneytopayforanything.Ihadnochoicebutcallmyparentsandaskedforhelp.TheysentmyselfsomemoneybyWeChat.Howanembarrassingtrip!Ⅱ.書(shū)面表達(dá)(2024四川瀘州三模)假定你是高三學(xué)生李華,在目前的英語(yǔ)學(xué)科備考過(guò)程中遇到了一些困難,感到困惑。請(qǐng)給EnglishLearning的編輯寫(xiě)一封郵件。內(nèi)容包括:1.寫(xiě)信目的;2.你的狀況;3.你的愿望。留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好。DearEditor,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua

35分寫(xiě)作限時(shí)滿分練(四)Ⅰ.第一句:the→a解析考查冠詞。依據(jù)句意,此處表達(dá)“一次旅行”,用不定冠詞a。故將the改為a。其次句:leave→leaving解析考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。介詞Before后接動(dòng)詞-ing形式作賓語(yǔ)。故將leave改為leaving。第三句:Unlucky→Unluckily解析考查副詞。依據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)分析,此處作狀語(yǔ),用副詞形式。故將Unlucky改為Unluckily。第三句:boring→bored解析考查形容詞。主語(yǔ)為I,指人用動(dòng)詞-ed形式作形容詞修飾,故將boring改為bored。第六句:jump→jumped解析考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu),此處作謂語(yǔ),結(jié)合上下文,動(dòng)詞用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。故將jump改為jumped。第六句:so→but解析考查連詞。依據(jù)句意,前后句為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,用連詞but連接。故將so改為but。第七句:刪除of解析考查介詞。依據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)分析,Ihadnomoneytopayforanything為完整的句子,應(yīng)用because引導(dǎo),作緣由狀語(yǔ)從句。故將of刪除。第八句:在but后加to解析考查不定式。havenochoicebuttodosth只能做某事,故在but后加to。第九句:myself→me解析考查代詞。依據(jù)句意,可知此處表達(dá)“寄給我一些錢(qián)”,此處用I的賓格形式作賓語(yǔ)。故將myself改為me。第十句:How→What解析考查特別疑問(wèn)詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu),此句為感嘆句,中心詞為名詞anembarrassingtrip,用what引導(dǎo),故將How改為What。Ⅱ.DearEditor,

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