浙江省稽陽(yáng)聯(lián)誼學(xué)校高三上學(xué)期聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)試題讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)偷竊行為的懊悔講義

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：表達(dá)后悔的好詞好句積累形容詞/副詞

guilty,regretful,guiltily名詞/動(dòng)詞

guilt,regretmuchtoone’sregret/toone’sgreatregret

令某人深感遺憾的是withdeep/greatregret

很遺憾地befullofguilt/beconsumedwithguilt

滿心愧疚afeelingofguilt

內(nèi)疚感shedtearsofregret.

流下后悔的淚水regretdoing…后悔做某事feelsorryfor…后悔做某事feelregretfulabout...后悔做某事beashamedof...后悔做某事beguiltyabout/at/for/over....

后悔做某事1

With/Holdingthelittledogstatueinhishand,theoldmanfelt

afloodofregretwelledupinhim.

2

Jane

regretover

whatshehaddone.3“IfonlyIhadn’tactedsowillfully.”shethought

regretfully,withteaswellingupinhereyes.

4

Staringatallthemess,Ifelt

bitterlyregretful

thatIwasn'tcarefulenough.

5

HowIregretted

thatIwasn'tcarefulenough.Thecoffeespoiledmynewdress！6

Oops!Ispilledthecoffeeonmynewdress!

IfonlyIhadbeenmorecareful.7

“IfIhadn’tquarreledwithTom,Iwouldn’thavetobehere.”Janethought

regretfully,withtearswellingupinhereyes.8

Shewantedto

saysorryto

Tomforlosinghertemper.

9Iwasfeeling

astrangesenseofguilt.10

Iwasoverebyawaveofguiltand

wordsfailedtoexpressmyregret.

11

Isuddenly

feltguiltgrowinginsideme.

12

Filledwithguilt,

IrushedouttoapologizetoTom.13LookingatTom’sfacewetwithtears,

Ibegantofeelguilty.

Istayedthere

withtearsofregretinmyeyes.IfonlyIhadn'tquarreledwithTom!

I

regret

that

I

am

unable

to

accept

your

kind

invitation.

HadInotmisunderstoodhimthen,everythingwouldbedifferentnow!續(xù)寫(xiě)實(shí)戰(zhàn)：2024年11月稽陽(yáng)聯(lián)誼學(xué)校高三聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)——偷竊行為的懊悔Isat.Heglaredatme.“YoucangiveittomeorIcantakeit,yourchoice.Whatwillitbe?”Ipulledthepackageofhairribbonsoutofthepocketofmyjeans,handedittohimandbegged,“You’renotgoingtocallmydad,areyou?”“I’mcallingthepolice.Theywillcallyourfather.”MyheaddroppedontomyhandsandIsobbed,“No,please!Can’tyoujustletmego?Icanpayyou.Ihavemoneyinmypocket.I’monlyfourteenyearsold.Please,Iwon’tevershopliftagain!”“Saveyourtears.Theywon’tworkonme.I’msickofyoubadkidsstealing,justforthethrillofit.”Isatthere,tremblinguncontrollably.Thepreviousexcitementbroughtbystealinglipstick,teenmagazineandallthatstuff...nowgavewaytoimmensefearandshame.Thepolicearrived,andthepolicemenwalkedmetotheirblackandwhitecarandopenedthebackdoor.Igotin,andtheydrovemethroughthemiddleofoursmalltown.IsloucheddownintotheseatsonoonecouldseemeasIlookedoutthewindowattheeveningsky.ThenIsawthesteeple(尖塔)ofmyfamily’schurch,andtheguiltpiercedmelikeadagger.“HowcouldIhavebeensostupid?I’vebrokenmyfather’sheart...andGod’s,”thoughtI.Wearrivedatthestation,andaroundwomanwithasquarefaceaskedmequestionsuntilIranoutofanswers.Shepointedtothedoorofalargeopencellandsaid,“Sit.Wait.”Iwalkedin,andmyfootstepsmadeanechothatbouncedoffthebars.ThetearsstartedagainasIsatdownonahardbenchandheardherdialthetelephoneandsay,“Ihaveyourdaughterinacellatthepolicestation.No,she’snothurt.Shewascaughtshoplifting.Canyoueandgether?Okay.You’rewele,goodbye.”Sheyelled,“Heykid,yourfather’sonhisway.”1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Aboutonehundredyearslater,Iheardhisvoicesaymyname.Paragraph2:

Afterwearrivedhome,Dadfinallyaskedme,“Why?”結(jié)合標(biāo)黃部分，講解重點(diǎn)詞匯詞組和句型，同時(shí)讓學(xué)生注意人物心理變化和情節(jié)伏筆。思路分析：1.

第一段：悔惱與羞愧的情感表現(xiàn)情節(jié)發(fā)展：這一段要展示主人公從偷竊到被抓的心理轉(zhuǎn)變，以及面對(duì)父親的失望和責(zé)問(wèn)時(shí)的自責(zé)。通過(guò)心理描寫(xiě)和細(xì)節(jié)刻畫(huà)（如眼中的淚水、無(wú)法直視父親的目光等）展示她的內(nèi)心痛苦。寫(xiě)作技巧：運(yùn)用動(dòng)作鏈和心理描寫(xiě)來(lái)表達(dá)人物內(nèi)心的變化。例如，“她低下頭，眼淚滑過(guò)臉頰”或者“她的手指不停地?fù)崦陆恰钡燃?xì)節(jié)，可以更好地展示人物的焦慮和無(wú)助。

第二段：父親的寬容與理解情節(jié)發(fā)展：當(dāng)父親最終表達(dá)出理解和寬容時(shí)，主人公從內(nèi)疚中走出來(lái)，得到父親的安慰。通過(guò)父親溫暖的話語(yǔ)和肢體語(yǔ)言的描寫(xiě)（如安慰的手勢(shì)、輕拍肩膀等），展現(xiàn)父愛(ài)的力量。寫(xiě)作技巧：此段的重點(diǎn)是情感的轉(zhuǎn)折?？梢酝ㄟ^(guò)動(dòng)作鏈和溫暖的語(yǔ)言展現(xiàn)父親的寬容，“父親撫摸著她的頭，聲音溫柔卻充滿力量”就是一個(gè)典型的寫(xiě)作手法。通過(guò)直接引語(yǔ)和間接引語(yǔ)來(lái)增強(qiáng)人物對(duì)話的真實(shí)性，表現(xiàn)情感的層次。官方范文：Aboutonehundredyearslater,Iheardhisvoicesaymyname.Itwassoft,yetfilledwithamixofdisappointmentandconcern.Thenthewomancalledmeuptothedeskatthreetimesthenecessaryvolume.IkeptmyeyesonthefloorasIwalkedtowardthem.Isawmydad’sshoes,butIdidn’tspeaktohimorlookathim.Hesignedsomepapersandwewereallowedtoleave.Theairwasdarkandcoldaswewalkedtothecarinheavysilence.Thenhewhisperedinasadandfarawayvoice,“Mydaughter...athief...”Imeltedintoregretfultears.Themileshomefeltlikeforever.

Afterwearrivedhome,Dadfinallyaskedme,“Why?”ItoldhimaboutthefirsttimeIstoleatubeoflipstickandhowIfeltequalamountsofthrillandguilt.Then,gradually,theguiltfadedasthethrillgrew.HottearsbitmyfaceasIsaid,“Pleaseforgiveme.I’llneverdoitagain.”DadrequiredmetomakealistofalltheplacesIstolefromandgotorepaytheowners.Thenextmorning,Ididexactlyasheasked.Itwasimpossiblyhard,butIdidit.Thankstohiscourage,Ineverstoleagain.研究范文1Aboutonehundredyearslater,Iheardhisvoicesaymyname.Myheartsankatthesound,steadyyetheavywithunspokendisappointment.Slowly,Ilookedupandsawmyfatherstandingatthecelldoor,hiseyesshadowedwithemotionsIcouldn’tquiteread—disbelief,sadness,perhapsevenhurt.Istoodfrozenashegesturedformetofollowhim.Thewalkoutofthepolicestationfeltlikeaneternity,withmyfather’ssilencelouderthananywordshecouldhavespoken.MyhandstrembledasIclutchedmyjacket,theweightofguiltpressingdownonme.Iwantedtoapologize,toexplain,butthelumpinmythroatsilencedme.Hisexpressionremainedcalmbutdistant,andIdreadedwhatwouldenextaswedrovehomeinpletesilence.Afterwearrivedhome,Dadfinallyaskedme,“Why?”Hisvoicewasfirm,yettingedwithsadnessthatmademychesttighten.Strugglingtomeethisgaze,Istammered,“I...Ijustwantedtofitin,tofeellikeeveryoneelse.”Hiseyessoftened,andforthefirsttimethatnight,hishandrestedgentlyonmyshoulder.“Mistakeshappen,”hesaidquietly,“butwhatmattersiswhatyoulearnfromthem.”Hesharedastoryfromhisyouth—howhe,too,hadmadeafoolishchoiceonceandhurtsomeoneheloved,buthowhe’dworkedhardtoearntheirtrustagain.Hiswordscutthroughmyguilt,plantingaseedofdetermination.Asheleftmetoreflect,Irealizedthismistakedidn’tdefineme—itwasthebeginningofajourneytomakebetterchoicesandrebuildtrust.研究范文2Aboutonehundredyearslater,Iheardhisvoicesaymyname.AsIwalkedthroughthefrontdoor,Ifeltmyheartpoundinmychest.Myfatherwassittinginthelivingroom,hiseyesmeetingminewithamixtureofdisappointmentandconcern.Hedidn’tsayaword,buthisgazespokevolumes.MyfeetseemedtomoveoftheirownaccordasIslowlyapproachedhim.Ifelttheweightofhisdisappointmentpressingdownonme.“Whydidyoudoit?”heasked,hisvoicelowbutfirm.Iopenedmymouth,butnowordscameout.Instead,tearsstartedtowellupinmyeyes.Icollapsedontothecouchbesidehim,myhandstrembling.“I’msorry,Dad,”Iwhispered,barelyabletospeakthroughmysobs.Theguiltsurgedwithinmelikeanoverwhelmingwave,andIburiedmyfaceinmyhands,wishingIcouldtakebackeverything.Afterwearrivedhome,Dadfinallyaskedme,“Why?”Afteralongsilence,myfatherfinallyspoke,hisvoicesofterthistime.“Idon’tknowwhyyoudidit,butIknowthatyou’renotabadperson.Youmadeamistake,butthatdoesn’tdefinewhoyouare.”Hiswordspiercedthroughthethickfogofguiltinmymind.Ilookedupathim,andforthefirsttimeinhours,Ifeltaflickerofhope.“ButI’msosorry,Dad.I’vedisappointedyou,”Isaid,myvoiceshaking.Hesmiledgentlyandplacedahandonmyshoulder.“Everyonemakesmistakes,butit’showwelearnfromthemthatmatters.I’mnotangry,butyouneedtolearnfromthis.”Awaveofreliefwashedoverme,andforthefirsttimethatday,Ifeltaweightliftoffmychest.研究范文3Aboutonehundredyearslater,Iheardhisvoicesaymyname.Itjoltedmeoutofmyhazeofshameandfear.Myfatherstoodatthecelldoor,hisfigureoutlinedbytheharshlight.Hisexpressionwasn’tangry—justtiredandheavywithdisappointment.“Let’sgo,Emily,”hesaidquietly,hisvoicecalmbutfirm.Theofficerhandedhimaclipboard,andtheyexchangedafewbriefwordsbeforeunlockingthedoor.Ishuffledwithmyheaddown,tooashamedtolookathim.Thewalktothecarfeltendless.Onceinside,thesilencewrappedarounduslikeaweight.ThehumoftheenginewastheonlysoundasDadgrippedthesteeringwheel,hisknuckles