讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-賽場(chǎng)跌倒處兄妹情深處Ali的堅(jiān)持與愛(ài)的續(xù)航講義-山東省淄博市淄博十一中淄博一中聯(lián)考2024-2025學(xué)年高一上學(xué)期期中考試英語(yǔ)試卷

閱讀短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)續(xù)寫(xiě)一個(gè)段落，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事、Aliandhisyoungersister,Zahra,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks(盯著他們).Oneday,AlitookZahra’sshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasn’tuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.ZahraagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareAli’srunningshoes.Zahra’sschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoAli.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Alioftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.Aliheardaboutalongdistanceracethatwasheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.Thedayofracearrived.Alihadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.GettingmoreandmoretiredhethoughtonlyofZahraandhispromisetoher.Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrengthandhestayedrightbehindthetwofastestrunners,determinedtofinishthird.Suddenly,asthefinishlinedrewnear,anotherrunnercollided(碰撞)withAlifrombehindandhecrashedtotheground.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)為100左右；2.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分一段，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)己為你寫(xiě)好：請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五要素分析：主題：家庭困境下兄妹間的相互關(guān)愛(ài)與為希望努力拼搏，通過(guò)Ali為給妹妹贏鞋參加比賽的經(jīng)歷，展現(xiàn)親情的力量和在艱難處境中堅(jiān)守承諾、勇往直前的精神。情節(jié)：家庭貧困，母親生病，父親失業(yè)，房租未付。Ali弄丟妹妹鞋子后兩人共穿一雙，Ali為贏鞋參賽，比賽中雖遇困難仍堅(jiān)持，卻被撞摔倒，續(xù)寫(xiě)部分為摔倒后的情節(jié)發(fā)展。人物：主要人物有Ali、Zahra兄妹以及他們的父母。Ali有責(zé)任感、疼愛(ài)妹妹，努力彌補(bǔ)自己的過(guò)錯(cuò)；Zahra理解哥哥，與哥哥相互扶持；父母雖未直接參與主要情節(jié)，但家庭的困境是故事背景的重要部分，側(cè)面反映出兄妹行為的動(dòng)機(jī)。背景：貧困的街區(qū)，家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)極度困難，面臨房租壓力和生活物資匱乏，這種背景推動(dòng)了故事中Ali弄丟鞋子后的一系列情節(jié)發(fā)展，也凸顯了一雙鞋對(duì)于兄妹的重要性。情感：開(kāi)始有Ali弄丟鞋子后的害怕、擔(dān)憂，與妹妹相互體諒的溫暖；接著是Ali決定參賽為妹妹贏鞋的堅(jiān)定；比賽中是疲憊與為妹妹堅(jiān)持的信念交織；續(xù)寫(xiě)部分則是摔倒后的失落、不甘以及后續(xù)可能產(chǎn)生的復(fù)雜情感變化。文章大意：Ali和Zahra生活在貧困家庭，母親重病，父親失業(yè)。Ali弄丟了Zahra拿去修的鞋，兩人只能共穿Ali的跑鞋。Ali得知長(zhǎng)跑比賽三等獎(jiǎng)是雙新鞋后決定參賽，比賽中他雖疲憊但為了對(duì)妹妹的承諾堅(jiān)持，臨近終點(diǎn)卻被撞倒在地。伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng)：伏筆：家庭貧困，一雙鞋對(duì)他們意義重大。續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng)：摔倒后的Ali極度渴望站起來(lái)完成比賽贏得鞋子，凸顯鞋子在貧困家庭中的珍貴。伏筆：Ali承諾要為妹妹贏得新鞋。續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng)：即使摔倒，他也會(huì)克服困難重新站起，體現(xiàn)他對(duì)承諾的重視和對(duì)妹妹的愛(ài)。伏筆：Ali比賽中雖累但因?qū)γ妹玫乃寄詈统兄Z而堅(jiān)持。續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng)：摔倒后這份信念會(huì)支撐他繼續(xù)努力，回應(yīng)他之前的堅(jiān)持和決心。伏筆：另一個(gè)選手從后面碰撞Ali導(dǎo)致他摔倒。續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng)：可能會(huì)引發(fā)后續(xù)與該選手的互動(dòng)或?qū)Ρ荣惤Y(jié)果判定的影響，增加故事波折。伏筆：Ali經(jīng)常因共穿鞋子上學(xué)遲到被學(xué)校警告。續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng)：這次比賽的結(jié)果不管如何，都可能改變他之后的上學(xué)狀態(tài)，比如若贏得鞋子就不再遲到，若未贏得可能會(huì)有其他轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：描述Ali摔倒后的心理活動(dòng)，如對(duì)贏得鞋子的渴望、對(duì)妹妹的愧疚等。講述他如何克服困難重新站起來(lái)繼續(xù)比賽，以及最終比賽的結(jié)果和他的感受。情感線：從最初弄丟鞋子的害怕，到參賽時(shí)的堅(jiān)定，摔倒后的失落與不甘，再到重新站起時(shí)的頑強(qiáng)，最后無(wú)論比賽結(jié)果如何都有對(duì)妹妹深深的愛(ài)與愧疚交織，情感豐富且有起伏變化，始終圍繞著兄妹情展開(kāi)。故事線：Ali摔倒后，望著前面的選手，內(nèi)心掙扎后重新站起，忍著傷痛繼續(xù)比賽，最終完成比賽，雖未得到第三名，但他的堅(jiān)持贏得了大家的尊重，也讓他更加深刻地體會(huì)到兄妹間的情誼和在困境中堅(jiān)守的意義。主旨升華句：Inthefaceofadversity,thepowerofloveandmitmentcanbethedrivingforcethatpushesusbeyondourlimits.（在逆境面前，愛(ài)與承諾的力量可以成為推動(dòng)我們超越極限的動(dòng)力。）Trueheroesarenotthosewhoneverfall,butthosewhoriseeverytimetheystumble,drivenbythelovefortheirdearones.（真正的英雄不是那些從不跌倒的人，而是那些每次跌倒都因?qū)τH人的愛(ài)而重新站起的人。）Thebondbetweensiblingsisathreadthatweavesthroughthetoughestoftimes,strongerthananyobstacle.（兄妹之間的情誼是一根線，在最艱難的時(shí)刻穿梭，比任何障礙都強(qiáng)大。）Whenhopeseemsdistantandtheroadisrough,thelovewithinafamilycanlightthewayandgiveusthecouragetopersevere.（當(dāng)希望似乎遙遠(yuǎn)且道路崎嶇時(shí)，家庭中的愛(ài)可以照亮道路并給予我們堅(jiān)持的勇氣。）Inthepursuitofapromise,wediscoverthedepthsofourcharacterandtheunwaveringstrengthofourhearts.（在追求一個(gè)承諾的過(guò)程中，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己品格的深度和內(nèi)心堅(jiān)定不移的力量。）寫(xiě)作示范一：Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Disappointmentandguiltwashedoverhim.ButthethoughtofZahra'sdisappointedfacespurredhimon.Withapainfulgrunt,hepushedhimselfup,ignoringthestabbingpaininhisknee.Helimpedforward,determinedtofinishtherace.Ashecrossedthefinishline,farbehindtheothers,thecrowdcheeredforhisperseverance.Aliknewhehadn'twontheshoes,buthehadkepthispromisetoZahrainhisownway.Hereturnedhome,readytofacehissisterwithaheartfullofloveanddeterminationtofindanotherwaytogethernewshoes.寫(xiě)作示范二：Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Hisheartsank,butthenherememberedZahra'strustingeyes.Hecouldn'tletherdown.Summoningallhisstrength,hestaggeredtohisfeet.Hisanklethrobbed,buthegrittedhisteethandresumedrunning.Thelastfewmeterswereablurofpainanddetermination.Finally,hecrossedthefinishline.Althoughhedidn'twinthethirdprize,hisspiritofnevergivingupearnedhimtherespectoftheonlookers.Alirealizedthatthejourneywasasimportantasthedestination.HewouldsharethisexperiencewithZahraandtogethertheywouldfacethechallengesof